Incorrect information on the Pokémon BOX page

[TeraDyne]

I hope I'm putting this in the right place. I don't have a Wiki account (I don't even know how to edit a wiki yet), but I did notice a small problem with the info on the Pokemon BOX: Ruby & Sapphire page. It's this part here:

The game also comes with a GameCube-to-Game Boy Advance link cable, which allows Trainers to deposit Pokémon from their GBA game to Box without the need to trade. However, certain conditions in each game must be met before depositing Pokémon can begin. For example, the cartridge must have at least 100 Pokémon in the Pokédex and, in the case of Pokémon FireRed and Pokémon LeafGreen, Trainers must have the National Pokédex as well.

That's incorrect. I'd like to offer a corrected version:

The game also comes with a GameCube-to-Game Boy Advance link cable, which allows Trainers to deposit Pokémon from their GBA game to Box without the need to trade. However, certain conditions in each game must be met before Pokemon BOX can be fully utilized.

Pokemon Ruby, Sapphire, Emerald
*For Depositing Pokémon - You must have obtained the Pokédex from Professor Birch
*For Withdrawing Pokémon - You must have 100 Pokémon listed as CAUGHT in your Pokédex

Pokémon FireRed and LeafGreen
*For Depositing and Withdrawing Pokémon- You must complete the Pokémon Net Center quest in the Sevii Islands.

I would have more to offer, but I haven't typed it up yet, and it's mostly additions rather than corrections.

I hope I've been at least a little helpful.

 

[Naya Rivera]

i suggest getting an account or telling an admin here

 

[evkl]

Just make an account and click the "edit this page" tab, then scroll to where you want and put in the info. A quick guideline to wikicode is here.

 

[TeraDyne]

Just make an account and click the "edit this page" tab, then scroll to where you want and put in the info. A quick guideline to wikicode is here.

Thanks. I'll take a look at it and, hopefully, edit it right the first time.

 

[TTEchidna]

We promise we won't bite your head off if you do it wrong.

 

[Politoed666]

We promise we won't bite your head off if you do it wrong.

I will.

 

[TeraDyne]

I will.

You'd need a pretty big mouth to get around my head. XD

Thanks for fixing my mistakes, TTEchidna. I learn a bit more from corrections than I do just reading a rules page. That, and I'm still horrified by the markup.

 

[TTEchidna]

Wiki's easy. It's HTML that kills.

 

[MAGNEDETH]

dont forget the Manual of Style!