Kayumi's scratches ( New marill scratch!)

[Kayumi]

So while I've been making Pokèmon eggs and pokèballs for my shop, I've been doing small scratch features of the pokèmon, for animations I'd make edits to the arms and legs or wings and sometimes scratched a completely new one, but I'd never done a complete 100% scratch. This is my first and I think its pretty good.

My scratch Mijumaru!

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#1

My second scratch! I thought that if I was going to do Mijumaru I would also do my other favourite Pokèmon!

My scratch Manaphy!

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#2

The newest Dratini scratch!

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EDIT:

fixed!

Marill!

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[EdelsteinBraginski_]

Re: Kayumi's first scratch EVER!!!!!

That's really good!

 

[BuizelBoy]

Re: Kayumi's first scratch EVER!!!!!

The pose is a little awkward and there isn't much shading, but its pretty good for a first attempt, keep it up!

 

[Sapphire]

Re: Kayumi's first scratch EVER!!!!!

That's so cute! I love it! :3

 

[Kayumi]

Re: Kayumi's first scratch EVER!!!!!

The pose is a little awkward and there isn't much shading, but its pretty good for a first attempt, keep it up!

Yeah, I should probably give Miju a but more shading so he looks more realistic.

That's so cute! I love it! :3

Thanks

That's really good!

Thank you too!

 

[Magmortar123]

Re: Kayumi's first scratch EVER!!!!!

It looks awesome

 

[The Miniryu]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

I <3 Dratini!!!!

 

[BuizelBoy]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

Try and make your sprites face the bottom left corner, as if it was in battle and facing your Pokemon, it makes them look a lot more authentic, rather than having them face forwards.

 

[Kayumi]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

Try and make your sprites face the bottom left corner, as if it was in battle and facing your Pokemon, it makes them look a lot more authentic, rather than having them face forwards.

Ok, I'll try that. Thanks for the advice!

 

[SaintJimmy]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

I like the mijumaru.
(he's my fave pokemon.. xD)

But honestly, i'm not that much of a critiquer, unless your sprite is in Jpeg. xD

 

[Kayumi]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

I like the mijumaru.
(he's my fave pokemon.. xD)

HECK YA MIJUMARU XD

I like the Mijumaru the best too

Though I dont like my Dratini, much.

 

[SaintJimmy]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

HECK YA MIJUMARU XD

I like the Mijumaru the best too

Though I dont like my Dratini, much.

Yay! xD

Yeah the dratini seems a bit skinny and the head's a bit round and smallish, don't you think?

 

[Magmortar123]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

Dratini looks cute!

 

[BuizelBoy]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

Heh, glad I'm helping you... also, the shading on the Dratini (the darkest blue) is a bit too heavy looking and blocky... try and use a little less of it maybe? The best way to get a great sprite is to tweak it until it's perfect, so don't give up on it, just fix the errors. ;D

 

[Kayumi]

Re: Kayumi's scratches ( New Dratini scratch =D)

Yay! xD

Yeah the dratini seems a bit skinny and the head's a bit round and smallish, don't you think?

Yeah, I think I'm going to need to bring Dratini into plastic surgery XD lol

Dratini looks cute!

But ya cant deny the cuteness XD

Heh, glad I'm helping you... also, the shading on the Dratini (the darkest blue) is a bit too heavy looking and blocky... try and use a little less of it maybe? The best way to get a great sprite is to tweak it until it's perfect, so don't give up on it, just fix the errors. ;D

Yeah, thanks for the advice, all of you! I am now going to give Dratini plastic surgery.

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Though he needs to look more like he's in battle

Gaahhh! More plastic surgery!

EDIT2: Marill!

Seriously think I need to fix Marill's body shape though.

EDIT4THEEDIT:

Well, I fixed the shading. BUT WHY IS THE WHITE BACKROUND SO BIG????