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Wow, the latest chapter was really interesting and engaging. Andrea's fear of the noises made sense but I didn't understood why she went and shouted at that Pokémon. Hiding from it seems like a better idea. And poor Kimberley fainted, but I think that would happen to most people after seeing such a Pokémon.
Also, I couldn't recognize that Pokémon. Is it an already exiting one or did you made it up? Anyways, I am eager to find out more about this mysterious Pokémon.
Overall, it was a very solid and well-written chapter. And the interactions between Andrea and Kimberley were great! I am loving their friendship so far. Hoping to read more soon.
Also, I couldn't recognize that Pokémon. Is it an already exiting one or did you made it up? Anyways, I am eager to find out more about this mysterious Pokémon.
Overall, it was a very solid and well-written chapter. And the interactions between Andrea and Kimberley were great! I am loving their friendship so far. Hoping to read more soon.