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Hello and welcome to an anime based fanfiction. I've been writing for a few years but this is was my first time sharing anything with someone who's not a Language Arts teacher. Thank you for taking your time to come here.
I feel as if I should explain what a Darkness is. The year was 2010. I was in fourth grade and had not too long ago entered the Pokémon fandom. One day at school, my cousin, the one who got my brother, and as a result me, into Pokémon came with a Meowth card depicting it sitting on a pile of gold coins. Eventually it led to my cousin telling me of an episode where a Pokémon called the Darkness nearly killed Pikachu only for this Pokémon to be defeated by Team Rocket with Meowth running into the cave and scratching the Darkness while Jessie and James kicked it from behind. This episode captured my interest almost immediately and the search began. With little access to the internet at this point in my life, I pulled out a Pokémon handbook when I got home and there was nothing in it called the Darkness. My cousin had told me it looked like a large black swirling circle with two glowing red eyes but the only thing close to that is Spiritomb and Giratina in the Platinum opening. I knew my cousin had stopped watching the anime at this point (and I hadn't yet learned to take what my cousin says with a grain of salt) so I assumed it must've been an older episode and the Darkness was so terrifying it had to be taken out of the Pokédex and Game Freak just reused the design. My imagination couldn't be held back. What did (and could) this Pokémon do? Did it have any other forms? Was there a reason it was gone from the Pokédex? Eventually I accepted that the Darkness never existed and most likely neither did this episode. This story asks what if it did.
Rated T just in case for a few non graphic deaths, a little bit of blood, and themes of living with autism and discrimination.
Edit: It's been a while but I'm finally back and I've heavily revised this with the edits reviewers have suggested. Aside from an overall improvement in the writing quality, the biggest changes are 1. Edmond is the focus right from the beginning, and 2. A new chapter has been added exactly in the middle of the fic. I'm still sticking with the anime elements since this was always meant to be animeverse but if some elements still aren't working, I'll try to cut them out. For all of you that have been waiting, thank you for your patience. For those who are new, welcome. Please enjoy.
Chapter 1: Ghost Valley
Chapter 2: Squadrons
Chapter 3: A Dance of Treachery
Chapter 4: Prisoner in his Cell
Chapter 5: The Journey to the Cave
Chapter 6: Entering a Persian Den Part 1
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
I feel as if I should explain what a Darkness is. The year was 2010. I was in fourth grade and had not too long ago entered the Pokémon fandom. One day at school, my cousin, the one who got my brother, and as a result me, into Pokémon came with a Meowth card depicting it sitting on a pile of gold coins. Eventually it led to my cousin telling me of an episode where a Pokémon called the Darkness nearly killed Pikachu only for this Pokémon to be defeated by Team Rocket with Meowth running into the cave and scratching the Darkness while Jessie and James kicked it from behind. This episode captured my interest almost immediately and the search began. With little access to the internet at this point in my life, I pulled out a Pokémon handbook when I got home and there was nothing in it called the Darkness. My cousin had told me it looked like a large black swirling circle with two glowing red eyes but the only thing close to that is Spiritomb and Giratina in the Platinum opening. I knew my cousin had stopped watching the anime at this point (and I hadn't yet learned to take what my cousin says with a grain of salt) so I assumed it must've been an older episode and the Darkness was so terrifying it had to be taken out of the Pokédex and Game Freak just reused the design. My imagination couldn't be held back. What did (and could) this Pokémon do? Did it have any other forms? Was there a reason it was gone from the Pokédex? Eventually I accepted that the Darkness never existed and most likely neither did this episode. This story asks what if it did.
Rated T just in case for a few non graphic deaths, a little bit of blood, and themes of living with autism and discrimination.
Edit: It's been a while but I'm finally back and I've heavily revised this with the edits reviewers have suggested. Aside from an overall improvement in the writing quality, the biggest changes are 1. Edmond is the focus right from the beginning, and 2. A new chapter has been added exactly in the middle of the fic. I'm still sticking with the anime elements since this was always meant to be animeverse but if some elements still aren't working, I'll try to cut them out. For all of you that have been waiting, thank you for your patience. For those who are new, welcome. Please enjoy.
Chapter 1: Ghost Valley
Chapter 2: Squadrons
Chapter 3: A Dance of Treachery
Chapter 4: Prisoner in his Cell
Chapter 5: The Journey to the Cave
Chapter 6: Entering a Persian Den Part 1
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
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