Steel_Justice
Forged in Combat
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It's personally been years in development hell for me but I've started writing the fanfic that I've always wanted to write. I haven't wrote much but I have the blue prints for all important characters (so far) as well as all the world building in my personal notes.
I'm having a lot of fun writing dialogue, making characters, plotting the chapters and choreographing the (if somewhat lengthy) action scenes.
My problem though is that I feel like my chapters are lacking in description for scenes when it's not action based. Prose isn't my strong suit and I do have a lot of characters just talking in conversation without a graceful way to change who is talking to who. It kinda feels like how Nasu writes scenes in his Visual Novels but I don't have nice illustrations or soothing music.
For more experienced writers how do you describe your scenes and your worlds without it being too short, long or reusing certain words too many times? And how much detail is too much when it's not particularly important? Are there any references (like other fan fics) you use for writing?
For the general idea of the plot and setting it's a crime drama that's a mix of Criminal Minds, Daredevil, The Punisher, Fire Emblem 3 Houses and with a little bit of Power Rangers thrown into the mix so it can be rather dark but I'm not gonna make it darker than it being mildly gorey with some mature themes. The story is about a group of people who are trying to be the successors of a team of vigilantes that protected their region several years ago after that team got destroyed. Since then the atmosphere of the region has changed and the 5 main characters have their own troubled pasts to move on from.
I'm having a lot of fun writing dialogue, making characters, plotting the chapters and choreographing the (if somewhat lengthy) action scenes.
My problem though is that I feel like my chapters are lacking in description for scenes when it's not action based. Prose isn't my strong suit and I do have a lot of characters just talking in conversation without a graceful way to change who is talking to who. It kinda feels like how Nasu writes scenes in his Visual Novels but I don't have nice illustrations or soothing music.
For more experienced writers how do you describe your scenes and your worlds without it being too short, long or reusing certain words too many times? And how much detail is too much when it's not particularly important? Are there any references (like other fan fics) you use for writing?
For the general idea of the plot and setting it's a crime drama that's a mix of Criminal Minds, Daredevil, The Punisher, Fire Emblem 3 Houses and with a little bit of Power Rangers thrown into the mix so it can be rather dark but I'm not gonna make it darker than it being mildly gorey with some mature themes. The story is about a group of people who are trying to be the successors of a team of vigilantes that protected their region several years ago after that team got destroyed. Since then the atmosphere of the region has changed and the 5 main characters have their own troubled pasts to move on from.