Re: Pocket Monsters
Well, to be honest, there's not much to review when there's not much that can be improved.
What I liked best is the intro. You really pulled off that World of Pokémon segment in a great way. There are a few minor mistakes here and there but they can easily be overlooked. And the world you are building certainly looks interesting. We rarely see Pokémon battling as a team sport.
I'm curious how you'll handle the trio. Well, considering that both boys are going to, msot certainly, participat ein the sort-of gym challenge I don't think they can journey together for the most of it. I mean, seeing a gym battle twice in a row wold be quite boring, no? Btw, I,too, did sense quite a lot of HP vibes coming from the trio. Izzy's similarities to a certian bushy-haired bookworm aside, Andy's buff, sport-obssessed atitude does mirror Ron's. Plus, Andy's treatment of Bowers is jsut like Ron's treatment of Krum.
And I kinda saw that sorta gym-challenge from a mile away. True, I expected skipping directly to the 'league' part but still...
Well, to be honest, there's not much to review when there's not much that can be improved.
What I liked best is the intro. You really pulled off that World of Pokémon segment in a great way. There are a few minor mistakes here and there but they can easily be overlooked. And the world you are building certainly looks interesting. We rarely see Pokémon battling as a team sport.
I'm curious how you'll handle the trio. Well, considering that both boys are going to, msot certainly, participat ein the sort-of gym challenge I don't think they can journey together for the most of it. I mean, seeing a gym battle twice in a row wold be quite boring, no? Btw, I,too, did sense quite a lot of HP vibes coming from the trio. Izzy's similarities to a certian bushy-haired bookworm aside, Andy's buff, sport-obssessed atitude does mirror Ron's. Plus, Andy's treatment of Bowers is jsut like Ron's treatment of Krum.
And I kinda saw that sorta gym-challenge from a mile away. True, I expected skipping directly to the 'league' part but still...