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- Hm, I guess in your fic's universe, or at least by coincidence with the kids, they don't see a lot of well-traveled trainers or ones from other regions.
- Time not to scale.
- Insert joke here in regards to Ethan holding onto Caiseal, although it seems the latter is bothered even by contact with another guy.
- You know it did feel a bit awkward that the battle-crazy Pidgeotto never evolved over the course of the fic, but I guess it never got used as much.
- SHE CAN SEE HER HOUSE FROM HERE!!
- Something that felt a bit awkward yet is also in-character and fitting: Julia does not ask if she can hug Mao, but Mao does ask later on. It makes perfect sense given ages, it just stood out as amusing.
- But what movie did they watch?
- Hm, subconscious stuff? Or a retcon?
- Wow, took Mao that long to notice the Pikachu was shiny? Heh.
- Man, fkn facetime...
- It doesn't seem there was that much mention of it
- You know, I was always under the impression you were using the Japanese school system from certain context clues. But you're using the American school system? Did you forget or just change something? Like the biggest thing is mentioning transfer to a "a different school in Cherrygrove". In fact in your AO3 exclusive edits, it's just one school in Cherrygrove. So it's a bit odd calling it a middle school unless that's an edit too.
- Also I assume her parents handled things off-screen since that wasn't mentioned before, or it was something you hadn't thought of at the time.
- Man the remedial unit is reminding me of this room in my middle school called PASS. It was a common joke you could be sent there for any reason.
- But what is she going to do with all these Pokemon?
- Oh hey it's her
- And the ex-not-really-bully apologizes. Nice,
- Yet another person with an autistic relative...
- Man Kirsten is so over-the-top as a bully that it's hard to take her seriously sometimes, heh. Unless that's kind of by design. She's definitely coming across as someone who makes fun of others to feel better about herself, though.
- Excellent. And now the only thing to make her destruction complete is whats-her-face crapping on her. Paisley? Whoever she was sucking up to.
- Wait I guess you are using the Japanese school system if it ends in March. So in that case, Julia should only still be in Elementary - since sixth grade is elementary there.
- Oh no a sentai show. Apparently here, there's just one long series
- Well so much for Amara popping up again anytime soon. Is she like going to be stuck there for years?
- Ah I guess it does have different seasons. They're just all based in Hoenn, all of them.
- Well I was not expecting a Ranger convention to be the motivation for the next one. Also, I imagine there's mixups with Styler Rangers and Park-style Rangers.
- No badges, no contests, merch only, Final Destination
- I have this scary mental image of needing unanimous approval and there being a douchebag teacher on board that always votes no for everyone ever and there's nothing that can be done about it.
- Wait hold up, did Julia skip a grade? She's 11 going on 12 when entering seventh grade. Seventh is 12 going on 13. Going by age, she should only be entering sixth grade.
- Starting in Slateport technically, huh? I dig it, like nonstandard starting positions.
- Oh dear, it's Lyra and Not-Silver.
- With how fast driving seems to get you around the regions, makes me wonder how fast an adult with a car can complete a journey.
- Hm, a little curious to see a bit of a religious side from Julia. I wonder if there's more to it?
- It did occur to me, there was little mention of Perrine and Caiseal after the timeskip.
- And title drop times two!
It'll take a bit to get my overall thoughts out, that said. But I'll post this here for now.
- Time not to scale.
- Insert joke here in regards to Ethan holding onto Caiseal, although it seems the latter is bothered even by contact with another guy.
- You know it did feel a bit awkward that the battle-crazy Pidgeotto never evolved over the course of the fic, but I guess it never got used as much.
- SHE CAN SEE HER HOUSE FROM HERE!!
- Something that felt a bit awkward yet is also in-character and fitting: Julia does not ask if she can hug Mao, but Mao does ask later on. It makes perfect sense given ages, it just stood out as amusing.
- But what movie did they watch?
- Hm, subconscious stuff? Or a retcon?
- Wow, took Mao that long to notice the Pikachu was shiny? Heh.
- Man, fkn facetime...
- It doesn't seem there was that much mention of it
- You know, I was always under the impression you were using the Japanese school system from certain context clues. But you're using the American school system? Did you forget or just change something? Like the biggest thing is mentioning transfer to a "a different school in Cherrygrove". In fact in your AO3 exclusive edits, it's just one school in Cherrygrove. So it's a bit odd calling it a middle school unless that's an edit too.
- Also I assume her parents handled things off-screen since that wasn't mentioned before, or it was something you hadn't thought of at the time.
- Man the remedial unit is reminding me of this room in my middle school called PASS. It was a common joke you could be sent there for any reason.
- But what is she going to do with all these Pokemon?
- Oh hey it's her
- And the ex-not-really-bully apologizes. Nice,
- Yet another person with an autistic relative...
- Man Kirsten is so over-the-top as a bully that it's hard to take her seriously sometimes, heh. Unless that's kind of by design. She's definitely coming across as someone who makes fun of others to feel better about herself, though.
- Excellent. And now the only thing to make her destruction complete is whats-her-face crapping on her. Paisley? Whoever she was sucking up to.
- Wait I guess you are using the Japanese school system if it ends in March. So in that case, Julia should only still be in Elementary - since sixth grade is elementary there.
- Oh no a sentai show. Apparently here, there's just one long series
- Well so much for Amara popping up again anytime soon. Is she like going to be stuck there for years?
- Ah I guess it does have different seasons. They're just all based in Hoenn, all of them.
- Well I was not expecting a Ranger convention to be the motivation for the next one. Also, I imagine there's mixups with Styler Rangers and Park-style Rangers.
- No badges, no contests, merch only, Final Destination
- I have this scary mental image of needing unanimous approval and there being a douchebag teacher on board that always votes no for everyone ever and there's nothing that can be done about it.
- Wait hold up, did Julia skip a grade? She's 11 going on 12 when entering seventh grade. Seventh is 12 going on 13. Going by age, she should only be entering sixth grade.
- Starting in Slateport technically, huh? I dig it, like nonstandard starting positions.
- Oh dear, it's Lyra and Not-Silver.
- With how fast driving seems to get you around the regions, makes me wonder how fast an adult with a car can complete a journey.
- Hm, a little curious to see a bit of a religious side from Julia. I wonder if there's more to it?
- It did occur to me, there was little mention of Perrine and Caiseal after the timeskip.
- And title drop times two!
It'll take a bit to get my overall thoughts out, that said. But I'll post this here for now.