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Curiously enough chapter 2 was supposed to be the introduction and the battle but things got a little bit too long when I started to write them and I had to split it up.
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That should be sought.Chigon holds a great power that is seek by many a power that could destroy the world and Reggie has to protect it along with his friends.
The first thing Fin says doesn’t sound right, It show be "So there you are" or So that’s where you went"“So there you went. Don’t run off like that man.” Reggie and Stacy turned around to look at another teenager that was walking out to the deck.
Actually I already have someone that beta reads the fic but if anything happens you can do it if you want.
I actually give the battles that level of the description so that the readers can imagine the rest themselves I give them a touch of actions but I noticed that when you try to describe a battle too much it tends to get long and the point is eventually lost. Of course I also think it should have description for people to actually know what's happening.