Sweet Veil
Bright Days
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I'm not one for romance in general but I did like this chapter as well as the relationship between Miko and Reggie. Also, you might wanna proofread a tad more since I caught some typos in the mix. It was interesting to see Aileen and Roger, Reggie's parents and learning their personalities as well as giving a tad more depth to Roger and Reggie's father-son relationship and you really bring out the feeling of Reggie somewhat feeling inferior as well as unknowing in a way which was nice since I find that relatable in a few accounts since I haven't seen my own father in years.
I'm not sure who the cryptic characters in the end were but, it will be interesting to see where things head from this point on with what has happened. Not to mention Azure, Martin, Thomas, Reggie, Miko, The Enforcers, and the Memento Mori organization. If there's one thing for certain, everything can go wrong.
I'm not sure who the cryptic characters in the end were but, it will be interesting to see where things head from this point on with what has happened. Not to mention Azure, Martin, Thomas, Reggie, Miko, The Enforcers, and the Memento Mori organization. If there's one thing for certain, everything can go wrong.