Good spelling and grammar is important. "Over hear" jumped out at me too. People do notice.
This is more funny than the first two, though...for a moment I had a horrible thought that she might pick Mew! Heh, Cleffy Weffy.
But I don't get why did Kelly walked up there? Seeing her fall down would have been nice, too.
This is a good comic, but you just need to accept the critisism to improve.
This is more funny than the first two, though...for a moment I had a horrible thought that she might pick Mew! Heh, Cleffy Weffy.
But I don't get why did Kelly walked up there? Seeing her fall down would have been nice, too.
This is a good comic, but you just need to accept the critisism to improve.
