GastlyGibus
World's worst critic
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- Oct 27, 2013
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Hey! Just stopping by to say hi. I figured I might as well take a look at a different PMD story while I'm here, finally getting around to it.
I read only the first two chapters, but so far, I'm really enjoying it. I love the interaction between Pecha and Oran. Growing up with five siblings myself, it definitely feels reminiscent of my own little spats with my siblings. It just really struck a chord with me, it's very well done and their constant fights intermingled with their moments of cooperation make them a joy to read.
I'll edit this post later when I get home and I've had time to do a proper reading. For now, I just wanted to say something while it's on my mind, and so far, it's good stuff. Your writing style is pretty spot-on, the characters so far are fun, and I'm finding myself impatient to clock off work tonight so I can read the rest. Good job!
I read only the first two chapters, but so far, I'm really enjoying it. I love the interaction between Pecha and Oran. Growing up with five siblings myself, it definitely feels reminiscent of my own little spats with my siblings. It just really struck a chord with me, it's very well done and their constant fights intermingled with their moments of cooperation make them a joy to read.
I'll edit this post later when I get home and I've had time to do a proper reading. For now, I just wanted to say something while it's on my mind, and so far, it's good stuff. Your writing style is pretty spot-on, the characters so far are fun, and I'm finding myself impatient to clock off work tonight so I can read the rest. Good job!