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Chapter Two: Spirits Rebellious
Down the long, spiral staircase Kyle and Joshua descended. Each step brought them further down, the steps lit by small torches on the sides of the walls. The farther they went, the more anxiety filled Joshua's mind. He was so sure of this just moments before, but the instant he entered, his worries began to return. What if he wasn't cut out for this? What if he didn't even make it in at all?
Joshua shook his head. He was doing it again, letting his anxiety get the better of him. He pressed onward, moving down the stairs more quickly. He had Kyle by his side, too. As much as he was doubting himself, having a friend beside him helped ease his worries, if only slightly.
As the two finally made it to the bottom, the hollowed-out room of the guild headquarters came into view. The entire interior of the guild was carved into the earth; inside were doorways and rooms of all shapes and sizes, underground and safe from inclement weather and disasters. The tent above was the only part of the guild visible from the surface. As soon as they entered the main area, they were greeted by the tall figure of a servine, a small clipboard in his hands.
"Greetings," the servine said cordially, turning to Joshua and giving a friendly smile. “When the sentry told me you were here, Joshua, I almost didn’t believe it!” He chuckled lightly, happy to see the swadloon at the guild. “How is your sister doing?”
Joshua gave a modest wave back, forcing a smile out of etiquette. “Sh-she’s doing well, sir… for her condition, that is.”
“Please, call me Matthew,” the servine replied with a smile. “And that’s a shame, really. You let her know that there’s always room for her back at the guild when she recovers.” He cleared his throat, assuming a more professional posture once more. “But enough of that! How may I help you two? Is there a request you’d like to make of the explorer teams?”
“A-actually…” Joshua started, finding it increasingly difficult to vocalize his thoughts. “I was… I mean, we were here to… er… we were here-”
“We’re here to join the guild, sir!” Kyle interrupted, giving a small salute to the servine. Matthew seemed surprised, raising his eyebrows at the elgyem.
“We?” Matthew asked, bewildered. “As in, the both of you?” He turned to Joshua once more, turning his head in confusion. “Am I hearing this correctly, Joshua?”
“Y-yes sir…” Joshua said.
Matthew almost seemed concerned for the swadloon. He could clearly see Joshua was ridden with anxiety at this moment, and he knew the boy to be a scholar; a lover of knowledge and education, certainly not the type to become an explorer. “Joshua, are you sure about that? You don’t have to-”
“P-please, Matthew,” Joshua interjected. “Kyle already tried to talk me out of it. I’m joining the guild, and that’s final.”
“It’s dangerous work,” Matthew added, shaking his head lightly. He almost couldn’t believe what he was hearing. This wasn’t like the swadloon at all. “I just want to make you aware of that.”
“I am aware, and I don’t care,” Joshua said, almost defensively. “I-I mean, I do care, b-believe me, I wrestled with this all week, and I thought ab-bout it long and hard, b-but I mean…”
“He means he’s going to do it,” Kyle added for his friend. “And besides, he’s got me to help him!”
Matthew looked unconvinced. Kyle being there to help Joshua didn’t build confidence. They were both cut from the same cloth, more inclined to intellectual pursuits than adventures full of danger and mystery. Regardless, it seemed they were both here to become part of the guild; if that’s what they wanted, Matthew was not going to turn them away. “Very well,” he said finally, nodding once. “Come with me. We’ll have to get your applications in right away, then.”
The servine began to walk down the main gathering area towards a long hallway at the end of the room, with Kyle and Joshua following closely behind him. They passed by several other rooms on their way there, with Matthew making small gestures to each doorway as they passed.
"As members of the guild, you'll have near-unrestricted access to any facilities we provide, minus the personal chambers of your fellow guildmates." It was clear the servine has gone through this routine before, sounding as if he was reading from a script. “Make use of them as you see fit.” They continued onward, passing by a training dojo, a dining hall, and even a lounge area. Eventually, they reached the residential rooms, seeing several empty spaces with nothing but small, hay cots and drawers for storage. It seemed most of them were unoccupied.
"This is where you’ll be staying," Matthew explained. "To rest and recuperate after each mission. As these are being loaned to you and not given, I expect you to have good stewardship and housekeeping." He continued walking forward, not giving the two a chance to inspect the rooms, the both of them hurrying behind him to keep up with his pace. Finally, they reached a large doorway, ornately decorated with a bright floral pattern, in likeness of a Meganium. Matthew stood next to the entrance, pulling out a small key from his clipboard and unlocking the door.
"This is my office and residence. If you have any questions about anything, or you need to find me for any reason at all, this is where I'll be." With a small push, the door opened effortlessly, as the servine led Kyle and Joshua inside. All within the office was incredibly well kept and decorated, looking more like the room of a dignitary than a place of work. Awards and ornate pictures were spread about, along with cushions of all colors and sizes. At the end was a small desk, where dozens of books and tomes were kept in neat order on top. Matthew walked to the desk, pulling out a drawer with applications to the guild. "Now then, read over these, if you will."
Both Joshua and Kyle took the papers handed to them, reading them over intently as Matthew gave them a synopsis. "By signing these applications, you are accepting all the rules and guidelines of our guild, as well as pledging your services to us as needed. In return, the guild provides you with benefits and rewards as compensation."
As Joshua and Kyle looked over the papers, Matthew cleared his throat, holding his hands behind his back and leaning forward to look at the two recruits intently. “Remember, this is a serious commitment.” He turned to Joshua, not saying a word; his eyes speaking clearly what he was thinking.
“No one will think less of you if you back out. Are you sure this is what you want to do?”
Joshua returned the look, freezing in place as he thought of the ramifications of his actions. Once he signed these papers, there was no going back. After a moment of consideration, he gave a determined nod, signing his name along the bottom of the application. Kyle did the same, the two turning in their applications to Matthew, the servine taking them and placing them neatly on his clipboard for later.
“Excellent. Right this way, please.”
Matthew led the two boys to the far side of the room, towards a large, brilliantly designed chest adorned with the colors of gold and silver. With a flick of the latches, Matthew lifted the top over and reached inside, producing two colored sashes along with explorer badges. “Now then, as I’m sure you’re aware, these are your guild sashes and badges,” he explained. “They identify you as members of our guild. The badges in particular have the unique ability of transporting you from a dungeon back to the headquarters here, so don’t lose them.”
Joshua and Kyle took their new gifts, Kyle looking over them with excitement. The elgyem quickly donned his new identifier, a shining, bright pink sash, pinning his badge on the front and puffing his chest with pride. “I feel like an explorer already!” He said confidently, placing his hands on his hips.
Joshua silently wished he could share that confidence. He took his pink sash and wrapped it around the side of his leafy coat, likewise pinning the badge on the front. For a moment, he simply stared at the marker, the small, pink pin reflecting the lights inside the room. Faintly, Joshua could see his own reflection in the badge, his expressionless face looking back at him.
“I guess this is it. I’m an explorer now…”
“You certainly look the part,” Matthew said to them, smiling. “Now then, there is one last thing to do before you can officially be called apprentices. The matter of your entrance exam.”
“Exam?” Kyle asked, tilting his head. “We have to take a test?”
“All new apprentices have to pass a practical exam,” Joshua replied. Despite his reluctance, the swadloon was well-acquainted with the guilds methods.
Matthew nodded, grinning lightly at Joshua’s answer. “Correct,” he said simply. He glanced idly at the clock on the wall, before turning back to the recruits. “But, seeing as it’s a bit late, the exam will have to begin tomorrow morning. For now, you two may sleep here at the guild, in the rooms provided. I expect you to be up first thing in the morning, and we can begin your test.”
8/13/16: Fixed inconsistent capitalization to bring in line with the rest of the story.
8/23/16: Changed the beginner explorer sashes from red to pink.
8/29/16: This chapter has been reworked. The original ending has been relocated to the beginning of chapter one.
8/23/16: Changed the beginner explorer sashes from red to pink.
8/29/16: This chapter has been reworked. The original ending has been relocated to the beginning of chapter one.
Chapter Two: Spirits Rebellious
Down the long, spiral staircase Kyle and Joshua descended. Each step brought them further down, the steps lit by small torches on the sides of the walls. The farther they went, the more anxiety filled Joshua's mind. He was so sure of this just moments before, but the instant he entered, his worries began to return. What if he wasn't cut out for this? What if he didn't even make it in at all?
Joshua shook his head. He was doing it again, letting his anxiety get the better of him. He pressed onward, moving down the stairs more quickly. He had Kyle by his side, too. As much as he was doubting himself, having a friend beside him helped ease his worries, if only slightly.
As the two finally made it to the bottom, the hollowed-out room of the guild headquarters came into view. The entire interior of the guild was carved into the earth; inside were doorways and rooms of all shapes and sizes, underground and safe from inclement weather and disasters. The tent above was the only part of the guild visible from the surface. As soon as they entered the main area, they were greeted by the tall figure of a servine, a small clipboard in his hands.
"Greetings," the servine said cordially, turning to Joshua and giving a friendly smile. “When the sentry told me you were here, Joshua, I almost didn’t believe it!” He chuckled lightly, happy to see the swadloon at the guild. “How is your sister doing?”
Joshua gave a modest wave back, forcing a smile out of etiquette. “Sh-she’s doing well, sir… for her condition, that is.”
“Please, call me Matthew,” the servine replied with a smile. “And that’s a shame, really. You let her know that there’s always room for her back at the guild when she recovers.” He cleared his throat, assuming a more professional posture once more. “But enough of that! How may I help you two? Is there a request you’d like to make of the explorer teams?”
“A-actually…” Joshua started, finding it increasingly difficult to vocalize his thoughts. “I was… I mean, we were here to… er… we were here-”
“We’re here to join the guild, sir!” Kyle interrupted, giving a small salute to the servine. Matthew seemed surprised, raising his eyebrows at the elgyem.
“We?” Matthew asked, bewildered. “As in, the both of you?” He turned to Joshua once more, turning his head in confusion. “Am I hearing this correctly, Joshua?”
“Y-yes sir…” Joshua said.
Matthew almost seemed concerned for the swadloon. He could clearly see Joshua was ridden with anxiety at this moment, and he knew the boy to be a scholar; a lover of knowledge and education, certainly not the type to become an explorer. “Joshua, are you sure about that? You don’t have to-”
“P-please, Matthew,” Joshua interjected. “Kyle already tried to talk me out of it. I’m joining the guild, and that’s final.”
“It’s dangerous work,” Matthew added, shaking his head lightly. He almost couldn’t believe what he was hearing. This wasn’t like the swadloon at all. “I just want to make you aware of that.”
“I am aware, and I don’t care,” Joshua said, almost defensively. “I-I mean, I do care, b-believe me, I wrestled with this all week, and I thought ab-bout it long and hard, b-but I mean…”
“He means he’s going to do it,” Kyle added for his friend. “And besides, he’s got me to help him!”
Matthew looked unconvinced. Kyle being there to help Joshua didn’t build confidence. They were both cut from the same cloth, more inclined to intellectual pursuits than adventures full of danger and mystery. Regardless, it seemed they were both here to become part of the guild; if that’s what they wanted, Matthew was not going to turn them away. “Very well,” he said finally, nodding once. “Come with me. We’ll have to get your applications in right away, then.”
The servine began to walk down the main gathering area towards a long hallway at the end of the room, with Kyle and Joshua following closely behind him. They passed by several other rooms on their way there, with Matthew making small gestures to each doorway as they passed.
"As members of the guild, you'll have near-unrestricted access to any facilities we provide, minus the personal chambers of your fellow guildmates." It was clear the servine has gone through this routine before, sounding as if he was reading from a script. “Make use of them as you see fit.” They continued onward, passing by a training dojo, a dining hall, and even a lounge area. Eventually, they reached the residential rooms, seeing several empty spaces with nothing but small, hay cots and drawers for storage. It seemed most of them were unoccupied.
"This is where you’ll be staying," Matthew explained. "To rest and recuperate after each mission. As these are being loaned to you and not given, I expect you to have good stewardship and housekeeping." He continued walking forward, not giving the two a chance to inspect the rooms, the both of them hurrying behind him to keep up with his pace. Finally, they reached a large doorway, ornately decorated with a bright floral pattern, in likeness of a Meganium. Matthew stood next to the entrance, pulling out a small key from his clipboard and unlocking the door.
"This is my office and residence. If you have any questions about anything, or you need to find me for any reason at all, this is where I'll be." With a small push, the door opened effortlessly, as the servine led Kyle and Joshua inside. All within the office was incredibly well kept and decorated, looking more like the room of a dignitary than a place of work. Awards and ornate pictures were spread about, along with cushions of all colors and sizes. At the end was a small desk, where dozens of books and tomes were kept in neat order on top. Matthew walked to the desk, pulling out a drawer with applications to the guild. "Now then, read over these, if you will."
Both Joshua and Kyle took the papers handed to them, reading them over intently as Matthew gave them a synopsis. "By signing these applications, you are accepting all the rules and guidelines of our guild, as well as pledging your services to us as needed. In return, the guild provides you with benefits and rewards as compensation."
As Joshua and Kyle looked over the papers, Matthew cleared his throat, holding his hands behind his back and leaning forward to look at the two recruits intently. “Remember, this is a serious commitment.” He turned to Joshua, not saying a word; his eyes speaking clearly what he was thinking.
“No one will think less of you if you back out. Are you sure this is what you want to do?”
Joshua returned the look, freezing in place as he thought of the ramifications of his actions. Once he signed these papers, there was no going back. After a moment of consideration, he gave a determined nod, signing his name along the bottom of the application. Kyle did the same, the two turning in their applications to Matthew, the servine taking them and placing them neatly on his clipboard for later.
“Excellent. Right this way, please.”
Matthew led the two boys to the far side of the room, towards a large, brilliantly designed chest adorned with the colors of gold and silver. With a flick of the latches, Matthew lifted the top over and reached inside, producing two colored sashes along with explorer badges. “Now then, as I’m sure you’re aware, these are your guild sashes and badges,” he explained. “They identify you as members of our guild. The badges in particular have the unique ability of transporting you from a dungeon back to the headquarters here, so don’t lose them.”
Joshua and Kyle took their new gifts, Kyle looking over them with excitement. The elgyem quickly donned his new identifier, a shining, bright pink sash, pinning his badge on the front and puffing his chest with pride. “I feel like an explorer already!” He said confidently, placing his hands on his hips.
Joshua silently wished he could share that confidence. He took his pink sash and wrapped it around the side of his leafy coat, likewise pinning the badge on the front. For a moment, he simply stared at the marker, the small, pink pin reflecting the lights inside the room. Faintly, Joshua could see his own reflection in the badge, his expressionless face looking back at him.
“I guess this is it. I’m an explorer now…”
“You certainly look the part,” Matthew said to them, smiling. “Now then, there is one last thing to do before you can officially be called apprentices. The matter of your entrance exam.”
“Exam?” Kyle asked, tilting his head. “We have to take a test?”
“All new apprentices have to pass a practical exam,” Joshua replied. Despite his reluctance, the swadloon was well-acquainted with the guilds methods.
Matthew nodded, grinning lightly at Joshua’s answer. “Correct,” he said simply. He glanced idly at the clock on the wall, before turning back to the recruits. “But, seeing as it’s a bit late, the exam will have to begin tomorrow morning. For now, you two may sleep here at the guild, in the rooms provided. I expect you to be up first thing in the morning, and we can begin your test.”
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