still occasionally here
- Aug 18, 2016
- Reaction score
Another blast of concentrated light carved a line out of the ground, leaving molten marble in its place. These beams are coming from every direction! Surely he can’t Teleport and use Hyper Beam at the same time!”
Missing quote in here.
But I’ve seen this strategy before….
Four periods instead of three.
The entrance was a crumbling stone palace
Anam panted, tiny arms on the ground.
Sentence, possibly paragraph, cut off.
403 - Forbidden! Access to the back rooms is not allowed!
you better drop that attitude, pardner *cracks knuckles* or that's gonna turn into a 503
wait none of them have knuckles tho
who bushed and giggled.
*Blushed, unless Anam "spread out into a thick clump". Which... is possible, to be fair.
Anam counted on his gooey fingers.
three thousand nine hundred and seventy-six, three thousand nine hundred and seventy-seven, three thousand nine hundred and seventy-eight,
“Jus’ feels like…” Gahi said. “I’unno. Fighting with’m feels… right, y’know? Th’ four o’ us as a team. Yeah….”
Gahi, here's ten bucks. Go buy yourself some vowels.
The three scrambled to separate spots Mispy sat down with her rear down, but her front legs propping the rest of her up, and closed her eyes.
Missing period? Also, how Mispy sits is pretty much how I'd imagine a quadruped would sit by default, not sure if the description is needed.
The Trapinch rested his head on the ground, splayed his stubs for legs outward, and remained still.
s p l o o t
Dunno if it's just an after effect of reading the Special Episode or the large amount of dialogue, but this chapter felt pretty short. It's not a bad thing, just felt somewhat odd. Hm.
Anyway, evolutions! I suppose it won't be that big a change for Demitri and Mispy as their body stays roughly the same