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Well right now I'm reviewing for the sake of the Review Game, though I have to say I was quite interested by this fic, so I might add it to my reading list.
Anyways, this review is based on the first three chapters of the fic. Now while I find the idea of a fic focusing on Brock alone and exploring a new region interesting I was a bit confused due to the lack of description in some parts, though the first chapter was even more so. While Brock is a character that everyone knows it's still useful to give a description of his appearance as well as the people around him, plus I also felt some more description to the scenery could've helped out.
There's not much to comment on since the first three chapters were pretty much uneventful and served as an introduction, I did notice that the description seemed to increase along as the third chapter went but I'll have to keep reading to know more.
Anyways, this review is based on the first three chapters of the fic. Now while I find the idea of a fic focusing on Brock alone and exploring a new region interesting I was a bit confused due to the lack of description in some parts, though the first chapter was even more so. While Brock is a character that everyone knows it's still useful to give a description of his appearance as well as the people around him, plus I also felt some more description to the scenery could've helped out.
There's not much to comment on since the first three chapters were pretty much uneventful and served as an introduction, I did notice that the description seemed to increase along as the third chapter went but I'll have to keep reading to know more.