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Hello stranger, thank you for sneaking a peek. This work of fiction was first posted in another forum I joined, but since the forum wasn't Pokemon oriented I decided to post it here. I'm very open to criticism, so if you see a typo or something wrong with the sentence structure, PLEASE tell/show me. I need all the help I can get.
Here's the summary.
What do you guys think of the premise?
Here's the summary.
The year is 20xx and the Pokémon franchise has evolved to the point where nothing can sate the hungry fans anymore. GameFreak has long abandoned the 2 version followed by a third version formula in hopes of introducing a new and more risky one. A MMORPG. No one outside of the Pokémon Company or Nintendo knew of this risky venture, for any leaks of this online game would result in fandom chaos.
To keep things under the wraps, The Pokemon Company created a group consisting of developers, programmers and directors under the name "Professors", or Profs. for short. Their duties involved creating and developing the massive online game that was soon dubbed Gen 0. In hopes of staying true to the main series, the Profs. downloaded the data of all the main series game unto one single disc which they affectionately called The Source. With it they would mold the data into what the online game would soon become, Pokémon Legacy.
Gen 0 was soon taking shape, everything was in place from the servers to the battle system. The game was almost flawless, almost. It seemed that the Profs. forgot that all data from main games was transferred to Gen 0, and that included the faults within Red and Green; Glitches. Upon further developing and research testing, the Profs. noticed that Glitches behaved differently on Gen 0 than they did on their original installments. Rather than acting like a faulty programming, they acted like a program instead. They had their own corrupted coding that allowed them to behave like other programs within the Servers; they became their own entities. The reason for this unprecedented error was because the new system would incorporate Advanced Artificial Intelligence and since the data within The Source was compacted together, some coding was mixed. The Profs. tried to locate the Glitches and delete them but they proved to be very sneaky and calculating, so they decided to fight data with data.
After careful staging and coding, the first Artificial Trainer Intelligence was created. Under the code name Red, he wore the same trademark clothing his Gen 3 counterpart did, but unlike his silent counterpart, Red was able to speak. The mission of the A.T.I. Program was to seek out and "fix" the errors and faults within the Legacy System, and that included Glitches. Red was seeking a very infamous Glitch from the Gen 1 Era that had been corrupting other AI's and system actions within the Region Servers. He was able to encounter the Glitch in the Cinnabar Sector, but the encounter resorted with Red's disappearance. The Profs. did not know what occurred, but they knew a battle took place because the Battle System was activated and the events were logged into Battle Records.
>Battle System Activated<
<>-Location: Cinnabar Sector 0.1
<Battle System Online>
<Identifying Players>
->Red Vs ?-?-?<-
<Red Sends Out [Charizard]>
?-?-? Sends Out ''?"
>Charizard was defeated...
>Red was defeated...
>Victor is- Missing...
<Battle System Offline>
<Locating A.T.I. Red...
>Location Unknown...
...
To keep things under the wraps, The Pokemon Company created a group consisting of developers, programmers and directors under the name "Professors", or Profs. for short. Their duties involved creating and developing the massive online game that was soon dubbed Gen 0. In hopes of staying true to the main series, the Profs. downloaded the data of all the main series game unto one single disc which they affectionately called The Source. With it they would mold the data into what the online game would soon become, Pokémon Legacy.
Gen 0 was soon taking shape, everything was in place from the servers to the battle system. The game was almost flawless, almost. It seemed that the Profs. forgot that all data from main games was transferred to Gen 0, and that included the faults within Red and Green; Glitches. Upon further developing and research testing, the Profs. noticed that Glitches behaved differently on Gen 0 than they did on their original installments. Rather than acting like a faulty programming, they acted like a program instead. They had their own corrupted coding that allowed them to behave like other programs within the Servers; they became their own entities. The reason for this unprecedented error was because the new system would incorporate Advanced Artificial Intelligence and since the data within The Source was compacted together, some coding was mixed. The Profs. tried to locate the Glitches and delete them but they proved to be very sneaky and calculating, so they decided to fight data with data.
After careful staging and coding, the first Artificial Trainer Intelligence was created. Under the code name Red, he wore the same trademark clothing his Gen 3 counterpart did, but unlike his silent counterpart, Red was able to speak. The mission of the A.T.I. Program was to seek out and "fix" the errors and faults within the Legacy System, and that included Glitches. Red was seeking a very infamous Glitch from the Gen 1 Era that had been corrupting other AI's and system actions within the Region Servers. He was able to encounter the Glitch in the Cinnabar Sector, but the encounter resorted with Red's disappearance. The Profs. did not know what occurred, but they knew a battle took place because the Battle System was activated and the events were logged into Battle Records.
>Battle System Activated<
<>-Location: Cinnabar Sector 0.1
<Battle System Online>
<Identifying Players>
->Red Vs ?-?-?<-
<Red Sends Out [Charizard]>
?-?-? Sends Out ''?"
>Charizard was defeated...
>Red was defeated...
>Victor is- Missing...
<Battle System Offline>
<Locating A.T.I. Red...
>Location Unknown...
...
What do you guys think of the premise?