Sardonicus
Good news everyone...
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I like these a lot. You capture the essence of the characters quite well. It feels a lot like the original episodes (like seasons 1 and 2) with some more mature themes added. A little more emotional description would be nice, but that's really just nitpicking. Overall you've done a very good job and your improvement over the course of writing these is evident. I hope you continue them, because I'm looking forward to the next one!