Im a huge pokeshipper may i join?
Like everyone said, no need to ask, but welcome netherless ^_^
Hmm, thanks Jczala, I'll correct that ASAP and maybe write some more!
Im a huge pokeshipper may i join?
Sure, no problem.Like everyone said, no need to ask, but welcome netherless ^_^
Hmm, thanks Jczala, I'll correct that ASAP and maybe write some more!
As much as I hate saying it, Eragon. Ash was young and inexperienced and quickly learned how to be strong. Misty was always just good.
Eragon and Arya.
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I'm afraid I didn't see enough romantic movies to answer that one ^_^
I wrote another little piece of the Fan Fiction...I still don't feel confident enough to write more than 20 lines, but soon enough I'll try to!
Anyway, there's the new part:
“Misty!”, cried Ash while he was running towards the red haired girl with shorts and her back turned to him.
Ash was running on a green field, but other than that the boy couldn’t distinguish the landscape. He was running for minutes, and he finally was a few steps away from the girl... Ash clenched his arm, trying to reach her... she turned her head, and, instead of her usual pretty face, he saw a tanned face with shut eyes.
“Brock, what are ya doing here?!”, Ash screamed.
“Genius, stop dreaming, it’s time to wake up!”, Brock shout back.
Ash opened his eyes. He was in the bed, with a dressed up Brock and sleepy May staring him. As the breeder looked at his friend’s surprised face, he couldn’t hold the laughter.
“Oh, Ash, ya should’ve saw your face!”, said Brock, between a laugh, “I was going to wake ya, but ya clenched your arm like ya wanted to hug me! Then ya began to scream!”
May wasn’t able to hold the laugh, as she assisted to the scene too. Soon, Max, who had been dressing up, joined them and the three laughed hysterically.
Ash didn’t find it very funny, so he got up and went to the bathroom prepare himself for another day. Perhaps, it would be the day he’d see his good friend Misty again, and, depending on her mood, laugh with her like his friend were doing at that moment.
Note: Just in case you're undering, the first part is in italics because it's a dream...
As much as I hate saying it, Eragon. Ash was young and inexperienced and quickly learned how to be strong. Misty was always just good.
Eragon and Arya.
Writing stories is all about ideas. Write stories in your own special pace. That's what I always do.Thanks, glad someone is liking it! And yeah, Brock ruined and will most likely ruin more scenes like that because I want things to go smooth and not in rush, after all Ash was about 12/13 in AG!
I agree, but Misty got a bit of Eragon and Ash a bit of Arya. Eragon was the one who got interested first, which happened to Misty in a way. Ash, although in a different way compared to Arya, doesn't want to go further in their relashionship. However, Ash does that because he's very dense, while Arya did that for another reasons.
Question for Raichu: does your fnafic take place during the Hoenn Saga, or do May and Max return after Diamond & Pearl in your world?
Yeah, I know, I can't really write anything without ideas, I hate when I have to write compositions in tests in under 30 mins :dumb:
Anyway, where's a very nice comic, not THAT pokéshipper but funny netherless:
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Artist: CarinaT
So hum, I made another part. Myself, I think it's more boring than the others because it covers the daily basis I think I should add. I tried to keep the characters IC and well, I tried to put a joke here and there, so this part wasn't that boring. Again, I appreciate grammar correction. This is also by far my longest chapter so I could easily let slide some errors. Anyway, where's it:
Dressed up and with empty belly, Ash’s excitement wasn’t enough to full him up. So, he went to the Pokécenter canteen along with Brock, who still had a big grin on his face, May, who was whining about her empty belly, and Max, who was arguing with his older sister.
“You’re always hungry! I wonder if you’re descendant from the Snorlax specie!”, threw Max, jokingly.
“Oh yeah?”, it was May’s turn to strike back, “Then if I am you’re too, little bugger! We’re brothers, remember?!”
Brock and Ash sighed heavily. They were hungry too, and arguing was something they couldn’t properly handle without a good breakfast. They were amazed by the ease May and Max had to argue. Ash remarked, with yearning, his long, yet fun, argues with Misty. He remembered the time they fought for Totodile and a happy smile crossed his face for a few seconds before he hid his feelings, afraid Brock could sense them.
Finally, they arrived at the canteen. It had plenty of windows, giving it good illumination, at least during the day. There were ten tables, all with two chair, each for a pair of people. The canteen was practically empty, with the exception of two boys who were eating toasts at one of the tables.
Following the suggestion of Brock, they sit at a table nearby the door that should lead to the kitchen. May, despite the arguing, sited with Max, and Ash sited with Brock.
A short while passed before a Chancey with a nurse hat gave them the breakfast. She served them a basket of plain bread, four plates, each with two toasts, butter and jam. She went to the kitchen in a sprint and brought them the drinks: milk and orange juice.
May licked her lips and attacked the food. She opted to eat her toasts with jam and she drank two glasses of milk. She also ate bread with butter. Ash as well ate a lot, his two toasts with plenty of butter, two chunks of bread with jam and he drank almost all orange juice. Max and Brock ate less: both ate their toasts and drank a bit of their preferred drink.
Satisfied, both Ash and May burped, making Max to cover his face with his hand and Brock to giggle. Ash had already enough joking about him.
“Shut up Brock, ya don’t do better anyway!”, exclaimed Ash, inventing something to defend himself. “I wish Misty wa-“.
It was too late. When Ash cut the phrase, May and Max were already looking at him without getting it. They didn’t know Misty yet. Brock, on the other hand, exploded with laughter.
“Oh Ash”, said him, while trying to recover his breath, “Ya shouldn’t take things so serious. I know you’re nervous because you’re seeing an old friend, but chill out!”
Ash couldn’t retain a little blushing, which made Brock smile inside. Poor Ash, always so dense! He could help his best friend with love someday. The older boy wasn’t that successful with girls, but he always thought they were intimidated by his presence, since they didn't know him long enough. Misty already knew Ash, so what could go wrong?
“Well, we’re going or not?”, asked Brock, sounding patient, despite the sense of the phrase.
“Whenever you’re ready!”, said Max excitedly. He couldn’t wait to meet Misty, as he’d like to compare his sister with someone not that older than her. Also, Ash told him some tales of Misty, a fierce water trainer who was running Cerulean Gym. Since that day, Max worshipped her for being a strong trainer like he wanted to be.
After Ash and May both said they were ready, the four friends packed their stuff, thanked nurse Joy for the food and rooms, and made their way to the road.
It would still take them a few days to reach New Bark Town if nothing happened on the way. They wouldn’t make all the way on foot, because Tracey offered to go get them with his car at New Bark Town. With that thought, the four friends walked hurriedly to their destination.
I remember that I watched that movie when I was little and thought that Misty and Ash were a couple.Yeah, Movie 2000... made me like this ship before I knew it.
For some reason I loved the part where Ash was saved by Misty, and I didn't know why. I basically liked every moment that turned out being called "shippy" later.
I was such a clueless kid :XD:
like so?They should just share a sleeping bag...one less thing to carry.![]()
like so?
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I remember that I watched that movie when I was little and thought that Misty and Ash were a couple.
I stopped watching pokemon for while(the shame) and when I came back Dawn was there instead of Misty. I started to flip out wondering what happened to Misty :XD:
Grammar check:
Dressed up with an empty belly.
Replace "we're brothers" with "we're siblings"
Spelling is worshiped
> I see they're finally going to meet Misty. Oh, Ash is excited! I'm glad Max is too. Really interesting.
I've always wanted them to be a couple ever since the first episode. I was like "Oh, Misty and Ash have chemistry... They could really work out..." and I was like ten at that time.
And my mom used to tell me "the more you hate, the more you love." I always see Misty and Ash fight, and as a child I've always thought that since they appear to hate each other it must mean that deep down they really like each other.I know. As oblivious as I was at that age, I could still tell there was definitely something between Ash and Misty, even if it did take me several years to fall in love with the pairing itself.