jasonwolf
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I've maybe sat here an hour trying to put together thoughts that aren't "wait til chapter X" and really they aren't coming together without being contrived and roundabout. What I can say is a lot of these things are things I have thought about and are developed more later. A lot of the first arc is all Jaklo developing his confidence so then he can be a leader in arc 2. I have a bunch of abridged versions of characters here that are meant to show their surface details maybe drop a hint or two of possible future things and then let Jaklo move on. Arc 2 is gonna be way more constant dynamics with a lot of issues happening one after the other instead of a lot of separate down times.
As for other things I'd never say there was a strain on Jaklo and Alice's relationship so much as a strain on them. Both characters have been relying on each other, it just happens that Alice has been able to handle her stress better and faster than Jaklo. TBH just as an author I never wanted that to be a part of this story. If anything they're gonna end up with a Romeo and Juliet ending rather than their relationship breaking apart (but what sick and twisted author would kill their leads at the end of a story? I wouldn't. or would I? No, I wouldn't.)
And Jaklo's the cook. Alice is like physically capable of cooking, but she hates it which is related to story stuff that hasn't managed to get in to the actual writing in any direct way, but there's a hint to why in chapter 6.
I've maybe sat here an hour trying to put together thoughts that aren't "wait til chapter X" and really they aren't coming together without being contrived and roundabout. What I can say is a lot of these things are things I have thought about and are developed more later. A lot of the first arc is all Jaklo developing his confidence so then he can be a leader in arc 2. I have a bunch of abridged versions of characters here that are meant to show their surface details maybe drop a hint or two of possible future things and then let Jaklo move on. Arc 2 is gonna be way more constant dynamics with a lot of issues happening one after the other instead of a lot of separate down times.
As for other things I'd never say there was a strain on Jaklo and Alice's relationship so much as a strain on them. Both characters have been relying on each other, it just happens that Alice has been able to handle her stress better and faster than Jaklo. TBH just as an author I never wanted that to be a part of this story. If anything they're gonna end up with a Romeo and Juliet ending rather than their relationship breaking apart (but what sick and twisted author would kill their leads at the end of a story? I wouldn't. or would I? No, I wouldn't.)
And Jaklo's the cook. Alice is like physically capable of cooking, but she hates it which is related to story stuff that hasn't managed to get in to the actual writing in any direct way, but there's a hint to why in chapter 6.