pokechamp116
THE ULTIMATE PSYCHO
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My first ever fanfic! please tell me how I did! your thoughts,views,and opinions are very important to me. there will be some stupid, crazy, or just plain weird fact before each chapter. I will update daily for the first few chapters, but it may get slower as the story progresses. You may recognize me from Fanfiction.net. Anyway, enough talk! Here's your Feature Presentation!
If the pen is mightier than the sword, then my fingernail must be a god!
Prologue
Little Jimmy Jackson was playing in the back yard. The harmless little fellow was bouncing his favorite rubber ball very high. In fact, he was so proud of himself that he didn’t even notice the glaring red eyes in the underbrush. Jimmy’s back yard was the nicest garden in the world. Many different types of flowering bushes lined the brown fence bordering the garden. It had many berry trees that attracted all kinds of pokemon, each of which were his playmates. Except for one.
KA-CHOW!!! suddenly a large, black scaled, snake like figure whipped across the garden with extreme speed. Seviper was the only pokemon that actually didn’t like Jimmy in any way. In fact, this one particular pokemon was not allowed in the garden at all. Not allowed to even be near the sweet smelling Mago Berries. As Jimmy turned to see Seviper lash at him, he was truly terrified. So terrified, as a matter of fact, that poor Jimmy would be scarred for life. As the snake lashed at Jimmy, everything seemed to slow. The long body of Seviper was fully stretched out, not two feet away from Jimmy’s face. He stood there, his playful smile quickly disappeared into a heart wrenching scream.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, a white and blue blur bulleted over the fence and past Jimmy, and gave Seviper a super-strong Crush Claw Attack. It wasn’t enough to stop Seviper, though, for he lashed around quicker than a blink. (Yes, quicker than a blink) But, the hero had great fighting experience. Scarlet claws at the ready, the blue Zangoose dodged any attack the Seviper tried to land on him. The poor boy watched in awe as Zangoose dodged every attack and landed twice as many. After one last slash attack, the poison pokemon fled, having a large scar on his face. As Jimmy watched the obvious loser leave, the Zangoose slowly approached him. “Zangoo?” inquired the Zangoose, checking if Jimmy was okay.
“Tanks you fwend! Wats yor name?” the small child managed to ask, holding a friendly smile on his face.
“Zango!”
“Wanna pway bawl, Zango?” managed Jimmy.
“Zangs!” exclaimed Zango, holding a cute smile on his face.
If the pen is mightier than the sword, then my fingernail must be a god!
Prologue
Little Jimmy Jackson was playing in the back yard. The harmless little fellow was bouncing his favorite rubber ball very high. In fact, he was so proud of himself that he didn’t even notice the glaring red eyes in the underbrush. Jimmy’s back yard was the nicest garden in the world. Many different types of flowering bushes lined the brown fence bordering the garden. It had many berry trees that attracted all kinds of pokemon, each of which were his playmates. Except for one.
KA-CHOW!!! suddenly a large, black scaled, snake like figure whipped across the garden with extreme speed. Seviper was the only pokemon that actually didn’t like Jimmy in any way. In fact, this one particular pokemon was not allowed in the garden at all. Not allowed to even be near the sweet smelling Mago Berries. As Jimmy turned to see Seviper lash at him, he was truly terrified. So terrified, as a matter of fact, that poor Jimmy would be scarred for life. As the snake lashed at Jimmy, everything seemed to slow. The long body of Seviper was fully stretched out, not two feet away from Jimmy’s face. He stood there, his playful smile quickly disappeared into a heart wrenching scream.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, a white and blue blur bulleted over the fence and past Jimmy, and gave Seviper a super-strong Crush Claw Attack. It wasn’t enough to stop Seviper, though, for he lashed around quicker than a blink. (Yes, quicker than a blink) But, the hero had great fighting experience. Scarlet claws at the ready, the blue Zangoose dodged any attack the Seviper tried to land on him. The poor boy watched in awe as Zangoose dodged every attack and landed twice as many. After one last slash attack, the poison pokemon fled, having a large scar on his face. As Jimmy watched the obvious loser leave, the Zangoose slowly approached him. “Zangoo?” inquired the Zangoose, checking if Jimmy was okay.
“Tanks you fwend! Wats yor name?” the small child managed to ask, holding a friendly smile on his face.
“Zango!”
“Wanna pway bawl, Zango?” managed Jimmy.
“Zangs!” exclaimed Zango, holding a cute smile on his face.