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Reviews wanted for an idea!

Kantomasta

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Okay, this is a basic summary:

The pokemon craze has been sweeping the world. Most kids are into it, but not Damian, he hates it. He thinks all these kids are complete idiots for liking this. Now, after a fatal crash, he somehow survived. Then, Pokemon began to appear in this world. And Damian finds out Arceus gave him a second chance. Now can this mean, bad bully how to care for pokemon and save the world?


What do you think? any critisism accepted.
 
Hmm... thats a good one. I would probably have it be serious with a few jokes now and then.
 
If you can make it a very scary story, it might be very different to what is usually done.

My opinion, of course, based on what I could interpret from your idea and my own preconceptions.

That is, I understood that Damian is a bully from the real world that suddenly, after he suffers a horrible accident and survives, begins encountering Pokemon. However, since Arceus is the one that helps him live, I began doubting Arceus's motive as being good at all: it seems pretty odd to help someone who doesn't like Pokemon to begin with, so Damian might have actually been cursed, making him a link between the Pokemon world and the real one (hence why Pokemon begin appearing)

...gosh, I think I'm crazy.
 
Thats what I would do.
It seems like it would be a serious, and dramatic fic, not a non-serious one that relies heavily on humor.
 
Thank you both. Any more like this and i might have to start typing here in the next week. :ksmile::ksmile:
 
Sounds like a great idea to me. I'll be excited to read this.
 
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