Agreed. This story is seriously lacking, and I'm not quite sure how or why it has so many fans.
Gastly's Mama, feel free to PM and I can give you some pointers.
You just gave away that Blue wins. Either that or Agatha battles him after he loses.Haha, thanks for all the support everyone. For the record, I don't take issue with him disliking Rival's Story, he is well within his right to do so, I just don't like the way he's acting. Anyway, just so you know, I'm going away from the 24th July - 7th August and will not be posting in that time. I'm gonna post today and on the 24th, then the drought begins! So you'll get the Bruno battle and you'll have to wait for Agatha.
Yeah, to be perfectly honest, I was disappointed with it myself. The reasons for my laziness were:I have to say though, I was a tad disapointed with the last part of the battle with lorelei. I loved the jynx and lapras part it's the slowbro and cloyster battle I didn't like.
I just think that you could have shown slowbro using some attacks and maybe having a deeper phycic vs phycic battle. Also I thought maybe slowbro could use withdraw to counter shockwave.
The same with cloyster. But other than that I think the elite four battles are awesome and honestly can't wait for the next chapter
Other than that error - that's great! Thank you very much! And I understand that my username makes this matter confusing =P For an explanation, see my first blog entry which is entitled 'On the Origin of the Species: Gastly's Mama'You have earned another reader,
I will attempt an estimation. Blue's battle with Bruno may or may not come to an end in the next chapter, if it doesn't, it will by the chapter after that, so that's 2-3 chapters, I'd say about 2-3 for Agatha too. Then you've got 3-4 for Lance. I'd say 3-5 for Red. Then, I won't say anything about the post-Pokemon League chapters other than an estimation of numbers, which will be something like 5-6 chapters.Very good part I am looking forward to see what this Onix does to Pidgeot! How many more chapters do you predict there'll be?