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Finished it, and it is phenomenal! 9.9/10, only because the grammar wasn't that great in some areas.
Time for my detailed review.
So I feel that the last few chapters are lacking. Not in plot- no, they have the best plot of the entire story. What they're lacking in is action. Rival's Story has had some absolutely amazing battles throughout its run- why are they missing from the climax of what can best be described as a jouney fic, something that's main focus is battling?
Then there's Blue's simple trading away of Charizard- I'm sorry, I just can't see Blue, of all people, trade away anything he had developed a connection with, especially to Red, even if they have become friends. Blue's motivation, this entire time, has been to best Red, and giving Red one of his strongest Pokemon, 'tactical advantage' or not, is not something he would do.
I also feel like there's such a major part missing from the last chapter- Mewtwo. Okay, it was let free. But since you've finally started deviating from the games (or adding to them), why was Mewtwo made into a plot point if he was to never show? I personally make it a point to put extra effort into Legendaries' entrances, battles, and personalities, all of which you can do a beautiful job of, Gama. Thus, to me, the last few chapters seem a bit empty of point. It seems like the real climax was Red vs. Blue.
All in all, though, this was an okay end to a great story. It didn't have any major flaws (besides the Charizard thing, to me), but I felt like you could have done it in a truly spectacular way; these last few chapters don't seem to hold your usual brilliance.
All Bow before the mighty author Gastly's Mama! :unworthy:
While You yourself have denied a sequel, is there any truth to the rumour that Your next fic wuill be even better?