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Sign Ups Seekers (Non-Pokemon RP)

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The world can be an interesting place; people interact with one another without really knowing what goes around. Sometimes the world is a lot more alluring and mysterious, while other times it’s simpler than we believe it to be.

In this world people with abilities are abound, while they are not the majority they are still able to accomplish great feats, so much so that some have even come to be considered heroes who have saved the world countless times whether from other people with abilities or monsters that normal humans can’t even dream of. Of course, this isn’t a story about those people.

Bahia de la Luz, simply known as “Bahia” to its inhabitants, is a small city resting on the edge of the South Continent in the country of Parede. This country is special as it is surrounded by a large barrier that keeps its inhabitants away from all magical creatures and or magical influences, how this barrier came to be is unknown to anyone but because of this Parede as well as all the cities that comprise it have become a peaceful spot run by mostly humans.

However, all of that is about to change. Magical creatures have been crossing the barrier as of late and the people of Parede and Bahia have become confused and concerned about what this entail for them. This is where our story begins.

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Hello everyone! Sorry for the ominous sounding intro, but I had to get in character. I have once more come back with an RP set in a kind of familiar world. While the intro for this RP is different to all the previous RPs of this series, this RP is set in a sort of similar universe to the Bounty Hunters RPs and SCB RP that I’ve done with the past (though lore has been changed and some things have been ironed out), I couldn’t really figure out how to explain it in the intro so I’ll just do it here.

This RP is set in a world where magical creatures roam around and a part of the population (around 35%) has special abilities known as Skills. Skills can be divided into three categories:

Life Energy: Relies on the energy from the world and the living things around you and is centered around the power of the body.

Magic: The most mysterious type of skill, using magical energy to perform feats from practically out of nowhere, spells, seals, summoning and other stuff, you name it.

PSI: Psychic powers, to put it simply. This type of Skill relies on the power of the mind, from levitation to mind-reading or even materializing objects, it covers a wide array of feats.

All three of the skills also have similar applications (all three cover elemental abilities that function in different ways) but also have some that are unique to their own particular skill.

Now, unlike previous RPs I’ve made of this type, this one isn’t about a group of people with superpowers going on missions around the world to take out bad guys…per se. The story takes place in the city of Bahia de la Luz, a small beach city in a country where Magical Creatures (and Magic Skill Users) can’t go in through normal means. At least this is how it originally was.

Recently creatures have been popping up and going through the barrier that surrounds the country of Parede and it’s also been said that Magic Users are taking this chance to walk in. The RP will be around a group of people living in Bahia trying to uncover the reason for the barrier weakening while also dealing with the Magical Creatures that pop in, especially since they’re people who have never interacted with them before.

THE WORLD

As stated previously this RP takes place in a world where Magical Creatures and people with abilities exist. At the same time the continents of the world have been shuffled around. There are four main Continents:

Kita: Inspired by North American, Asian and some European Culture, this continent is known for having the most forest life and a wide array of cities and towns that have helped revolutionize the world from technological to economic aspects. Its name comes from the Japanese word for North

Surea: Inspired by South American and some African Cultures, it houses a variety of climates from tall and freezing mountains to hot desolate deserts. It also stands as the continent that’s the most divided, with the different cities and countries in it operating on their own. Its name is based on the Spanish word for South.

Al Gharb: Inspired by Asian, African and Middle Eastern culture. The majority of this continent is desert but is also known for having some of the largest valleys and diverse cultures. It’s also a continent riddled with wars that have been going on for decades or even centuries, particularly against other continents who keep trying to colonize parts of it. Its name comes from the Arabic word for East

West Continent: Inspired by European and North American Culture. The West Continent has the smallest output of Magical Creatures and stands as a hub of entertainment and tourism. From large sprawling cities to beautiful, tourist-friendly landscapes it is the most economically affluent Continent of the world working under one big government that controls it all.

There’s also different religions around the world, the main one being Yatsurism, which focuses on praising the goddess Yatsuri who saved the world from a tyrannical overlord centuries earlier.

This RP will take place in the Surea as stated in the intro. You are not obligated to have your characters be from Bahia or Surea, but foreigners aren’t exactly common in Parede or Bahia itself so…do tread carefully with how you make your characters.

RULES

1.BMGf rules always apply.
2. No godmodding of any kind; this includes auto-hitting.
3. Do not attempt to overlap a character's abilities.
5. The GM's word is law, and the Moderator's law is even higher. If one of these two tell you to do something, please don't make a fuss.

6. For the powers itself, since the RP takes place in a country inhabited mostly by humans I do want a good balance between normal humans and Skill Users, as thus I’ll only be allowing up to four Skill User character, all first, first serve.

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Name:

Gender:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality (optional):

Backstory (optional):

Skills (if any, it can be either Life Energy, Magic or PSI):

Ability: What your character’s skill allows them to do

Talents:

Quirks:

Other:

Name: Lorenzo Bonaccorso

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Appearance: Lorenzo has short, well kempt brown hair, to the point where he’ll actively get annoy if it’s messed up due to how long it takes him to set it up. He has slightly olive skin and an athletic, though not particularly muscular, frame and a handsome face. He generally wears more stylish clothing, taking great care of match what he’s going to be wearing for the day and to always look his best in front of others. Of course, this is to hide how much of a slob he can be when he’s on his own.

Personality: Lorenzo’s very calm and down to earth, preferring to not show his true feelings about anything and to always keep his composure. He generally likes to get along with everyone and tries to keep things peaceful, though only because he finds it troublesome to have to deal with conflict. He can be very astute though and is always working to try and figure out how others work. At the same time he can be a little disinterested unless there’s something for him and it’s easy for him to come off as arrogant and snobby to others due to his background.

However, beyond all that he can also be quite rebellious and driven, while he does prefer to stay out of conflict he’s not below fighting for what he wants and usually puts himself above others.

Background: to be revealed in the RP

Skills: None

Talents: Lorenzo can speak multiple languages and is great at playing piano, even though he doesn’t particularly like it. He’s also good with different instruments and is an avid soccer player.

Quirks: As an avid book reader Lorenzo tends to overthink everything that happens around him, even if he doesn’t usually show it, its cause of this that he has developed his instinct to try and figure everything out. He also has a habit of leaving a mess anywhere, while he likes to keep his appearance in check that doesn’t exactly carries over to everything else.

Other: Lorenzo dreams of becoming a composer and a writer.


Name: Alejandra (Lexa) Miraflores

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Appearance: Lexa has short black hair with a bob that falls over her forehead. She has dark skin and brown eyes to match. She stands at 5’7 along with a strong frame. Lexa prefers to wear loose clothing; usually wearing tops in different designs, some a bit more unusual than others. This is particularly weird in that she actually gets really easily and is usually seen rubbing at her arms when she gets cold.

Personality: Lexa is curious to a fault with an interest on the supernatural. Ever since she was young she always had an obsession with learning more about Skills and Creatures, what they were and how they worked. Because of this she used to get into a lot of trouble with her parents as she would venture out into the wild or go off on her own to investigate.

She can be kind of a coward however and is severely afraid of the dark, because of this Lexa tends to have her fight or flight instinct on flight and switches gears as soon as she feels that she’s in any direct danger, which, matched with her undying curiosity, is usually a lot later than most people would realize. She’s quiet but not unapproachable and will usually become very talkative and open to people as soon as they show any interest in her.

She can also be stuck in her beliefs however, not letting anyone get the better of her in an argument that she feels she should win.

Backstory: To be revealed in the RP

Skills: PSI

Ability: Lexa’s ability isn’t anything too complicated. While something that many PSI users would have to spend years of training to accomplish Lexa is able to teleport instantly whenever she feels that, all she needs is to imagine the place she’s going. She also has minor telekinesis abilities but she has trouble controlling them and, like with her teleporting, if she uses it too much she ends up becoming nauseous or even falls unconscious.

Talents: Lexa considers herself a great photographer, she always carries her phone or her dad’s camera with her and usually goes out to take pictures on the weekends. She’s also very knowledgeable in geography. Beyond her obsession with skills and creatures she’s also an avid baseball and tennis fan and tends to put great weight on being able to watch games with her dad, even putting off going out searching for more pictures to take.

Quirks: Lexa can be very absent minded at times and becomes a little hard to deal with once she starts talking about something that interests her, she herself doesn’t notice any of this.

Other: She has an unnatural love for ice cream and birds.

Also @Prez is my Co-GM
 
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Name: Rui Kaminari

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Appearance: Rui has an athletic build, lean and fit, with chestnut-brown hair that doesn't go far past her shoulders. She typically dresses like a boy and tends to wear her hair in a ponytail; thus she's often mistaken as a male, which sometimes annoys her. She has dark amber irises and thin features.

Personality (optional): Rui tends to come off as brash and rude, and her bull-headed stubbornness often gets her into trouble. Nothing about her seems girly whatsoever, and she doesn't bother trying to fit in with the crowd most of the time. However, she has a very strong sense of justice, and her heart's in the right place. She wears her heart on her sleeve, and won't stand for the suffering of others.

Backstory (optional): To be revealed

Skills: PSI

Ability: Rui is an electromaster, and a well-practiced one at that - her control over electricity and electromagnetism labels her as a prodigy of sorts. Rui can use metallic projectiles and her control over electricity to create a 'railgun' of sorts, and can even manipulate iron sand to a degree - however, she is not without weakness. Using her railgun takes an immense amount of energy. Also, rubber still serves to completely negate her electricity, which can quickly turn a fight on its head.

Talents: She's quite skilled at playing violin.

Quirks: Rui has a knack for getting into dangerous situations on a daily basis.

Other: N/A

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Name: Rock

Gender: Female

Age: 20

Appearance: A tall, lithe girl with unnaturally pale skin. She has black hair tied into uneven pigtails, and dark blue irises. She tends to wear a lock black jacket with a broken zipper, and a bundle of gauze over her chest, rather than an actual top. This shows off a variety of stitched scars that mar her abdomen. She also wears black jeans and tall black boots, and a choker at the base of her neck.

Personality (optional): There's not a whole lot to Rock's personality - she's about as emotional as a rock. Her morality is questionable at best, and there's not a lot that's known about her. Oddly enough, she tends to have a soft spot for animals.

Backstory (optional): To be revealed

Skills: None

Talents: Rock is extremely adept with firearms. Her lance arm isn't too shabby, either. Her marksmanship is phenomenal, and she very rarely misses a target without the need for a scope. Surprisingly good at cooking and singing - not that she'd let anyone hear, of course.

Quirks: She tends to get trigger happy when faced with the enemy.

Other: N/A

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Tell me if anything needs to be changed, as always~
 
Name: Nix

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Appearance:
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Personality (optional): Don't feel like typing this out :p

Backstory (optional): Nix comes from an aristocrat family in the West continent. Due to being albino his family shunned him as a defect. He spent most of his life locked in his room passing the time with drawing. Eventually he discovered his drawings could come to life, and he had control over them. When he was old enough he left home abandoning his family name. He travels for a while until ending up in Bahia.

Skills (if any, it can be either LifeEnergy, Magic or PSI): Magic

Ability: Anything he draws or paints can come to life. The strength depends on how much magic he puts into the particular thing as well as detail. The more of something there is, the weaker it is due to having to spread out the magic. The size is not relevant to its size on paper but rathe this thoughts and magic.

Talents: He can draw and paint detailed things fairly quick and make them look life like. He's agile and strangely good at tree climbing.

Quirks: He loves to just stare at stuff and watch it as well as draw it. Applies sunscreen often.

Other: He albino.
 
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Here ya go:

Name: Nicolas (Nico) Beautel

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Appearance: Short in height, Nico stands at around 5'7" and has an athletic, muscular build. He has short, dark brown hair, and tanned skin. His eyes are also brown in color, and on his chin is a trimmed beard. He is seen as quite attractive. As for clothing, Nico tends to dress casually, wearing whatever is comfortable. This includes t-shirts, basketball shorts, and sneakers. He has no qualms about dressing up, however. He's nonchalant about his fashion choices.

Personality: Nico is a fairly laid back young man. He is a huge advocate for fitness, and for healthy living. He works as Bahia's local nutritionist. Nico does have his flaws, however. He tends to prefer action over thought, and can cause trouble for those around him. Likewise, he is self conscious about his lack of a Skill, especially in comparison to the rest of his family.

Backstory: He used to live in Neo Vegas, but following the death of his mother, he moved to Bahia in order to live a more quiet life. He never really liked the big city.

Skills: None.

Ability: None.

Talents: Well accomplished in his studies of food science, Nico is also a fairly skilled fighter. Ever since he was little, his mother forced him to attend mixed martial art classes in order to learn how to protect himself. This is especially true when forced to fend himself against creatures or Skill Users.

Quirks: He loves chocolate and fish. He also loves the ocean, and enjoys his life in Bahia.

Other: you'll have to pry this family from my cold, dead hands
 
Name: Daphne Asher

Gender: Female

Age: 23

Appearance:

Haze knows the drill by now. Blonde hair, blue / violet eyes (depending on her mental state), beautiful in a clearly dangerous way. Always dressed like she's at Fashion Week in Milan.

Personality (optional):

Daphne comes across as charming, mischievous, gregarious and extremely generous. And she is all of these things, when she's in a good mood. But there's a violent side to her, an uncontrolled side. When the switch is flipped, she becomes violent, cruel and frankly sadistic. Her intellect which is usually used for good becomes something that allows her to inflict incredible amounts of pain.

Backstory (optional):

Will come out in the RP

Skills (if any, it can be either Life Energy, Magic or PSI): PSI (because come on it wouldn't be a proper RP in this world without me playing a blonde psychic with anger issues)

Ability: What your character’s skill allows them to do

Daphne can do the following with her skill:

- Cryokinesis (aka summon, use and manipulate ice)
- Telepathy and various other mind altering goodness
- Telekinesis
- Astral projection


Talents:

She's a card shark and gambler (mostly because she can use her abilities to cheat) among other things

Quirks:

She's a fairly skilled sketch artist but her art is really the only thing she's self-conscious about

Other:

Since I couldn't make another Winchester...







Name: Xavier Cantarus

Gender: 24

Age: Male

Appearance:

Xavier had messy brown hair, light brown eyes and a muscular frame. He carries numerous scars from his fights over the years, as he has spent a long time on the battlefield.

Personality (optional):

Xavier is very much what one would picture as a knight in shining armor. He's honorable, kind, chivalrous and brave. However he also struggles with his words and is nervous in most social settings.

Backstory (optional):

Skills (if any, it can be either Life Energy, Magic or PSI):

Life Energy

Ability:

Xavier's skill allows him to summon various weapons and armors at will. These include firearms, bladed weapons and even explosives. His armors vary from bulky defensive armors that boost his defensive skills to sleek armors that increase his speed.

Talents:

His skill gives him the required proficiency to use the weapons and armors he summons skillfully.

Quirks:

Xavier is a quiet loner who prefers quiet meditation, contemplation and books to most things.

Other:
 
Name: Freya Elise Sherwood
Age: 23
Gender: Female

Appearance: Freya stands around 5'5. She has medium length, navy blue hair that fades into a purple hue. She has fair skin with blue-green eyes. Her natural features are enhanced by using makeup, so she does wear bold pigmented lipstick as well as eyeliner. She has a small, sterling silver nose ring in her right nostril. Freya chooses to wear whatever makes her comfortable, as long as it makes her look good too.

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Personality: To be revealed

Backstory: To be revealed

Skill: Life Energy

Ability: Shapeshifting. She can change into animals, and prefers to shift into them. She can also partially shift, obtaining some of the characteristics of the animal, while still remaining human. She still hasn't fully mastered her skill yet in the terms of the humanoid shifts, but she has nailed the basic animal shifts. Depending on which animal she changes into (or gains features from), she will have different strengths and weaknesses.

Talents: She can cook somewhat. She can also camouflage or hide easily due to being able to shift into very small animals. This method is used to avoid obnoxious social situations. She has a degree in Zoology and Biology.

Quirks: Freya likes cold temperatures, and sleeping. She likes to be alone more than she likes being in a group.

Other: She loves music, hot chocolate, and food as well.
 
Name: Alicia Beautel
Gender: Female
Age: 24

Appearance
Tanned skin, standing at a height of 5'9", with brown eyes eyes. She has long, dark brown hair typically put into a ponytail or braid.

Personality
Calm, collected, and generally quite friendly and personable. While she isn't completely silent, she's one to definitely think before acting. It's gotten her a great deal of scores in the past. Because she doesn't have a Skill, she's hesitant to trust those who use them frivolously, as they could pose a danger to herself and her brother.

She speaks very highly of Nico.

Backstory
The death of hers and Nico's mother hit her hard, making her bury herself in her work. She wanted to amass wealth quickly to help provide for her and her brother. While he took to a very stable, very honest method of work, she took to a life of grifting and trying to get quick cash. It helped her get her hands on The Sword - a magic blade that she still has no name for, but has helped her in the past.

Ability
While she has no abilities of her own, the blade that she found is what she uses as her primary weapon. Its overall powers are unknown, but all Alicia understands is that it lets her bring down targets that would normally be impossible for a regular human.

Talents
Physically, she's exceedingly agile and possesses a good deal of physical strength. Outside of combat, however, she finds her true calling in things like cooking.

Quirks
Has a tendency to bob her head side to side when she's in the groove of things, as if she's following some sort of unseen rhythm.

Other: Nice bod.
 
Would a human who has been altered/mutated by a skill user and thus has similar powers without being an actual skill user be acceptable?

Alternatively, if I were to sign up as a normal human, would it be alright for them to acquire powers later?
 
Name: Mike Oxlong

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Appearance:
Plainclothes: http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/11111/111113706/5071165-3017734154-d4njC.png
In battle gear: http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net...earance.png/revision/latest?cb=20151224230818
Mike is fairly tall, at 6'1, and he has a slender, but toned figure. That said, he's also very pretty. He has clear skin, and big grey eyes. His raven colored hair grows fast enough that it's simply not practical to keep it cut short, so he usually wears it in a sort of ponytail.

Personality:

Backstory: His family used to be rich, but a magical beast blew up the boat that had all their riches so he became a ninja and started stealing stuff to help them survive.

Skills:

Ability: Mike has no Skills, but he does have equipment. He calls them his Ninja⋆Tools.
-Grapple Gauntlet: This gauntlet allows Mike to fire a harpoon on the end of a cable at high velocity, then reel it in just as fast. If whatever it's hooked into is lighter than he is, it will be pulled to him. If he's heavier than it, he'll be pulled towards it. He can use it to do crazy stuff like zipline around or swing around like Tarzan.
-Ninja Armor: Tactical, lightweight armor. It's mostly just very tight leather that can fit under most disguises, with a few strategically placed plates over particularly vital areas. It won't really stop a bullet or anything, but it can stop them from penetrating deep enough to seriously injure him.
-Smoke Bombs: Each one is about the size of a ping-pong ball. When squeezed, they release a massive amount of brightly colored smoke. It's very pretty and impossible to see in.
-Throwing Stars: Mike usually carries around a few of them. He's got decent aim, but he's not amazing with them. Just enough to hit a moving target with some reliability.

Talents:
-He did voice acting on YouTube as a hobby during much of high school. He's very, very adept at disguising his voice. He's especially good at MILF voices, but he can sound like pretty much anyone he wants to if given a little time to rehearse.
-He's done theater from an early age, and thus is adept at disguising himself. He's good at makeup, and he has a lot of costumes to wear, too. With a little research, he could successfully impersonate someone's own mother!
-He's a thief. He calls himself a ninja, but a lot of his ninja capers entail stealing stuff. So he's adept at all forms of larceny. He can pick locks, sneak around, and hide from the 5-0.
-He's also a ninja. He's in excellent physical condition, and if he's got his ninja tools on hand, he can probably go toe-to-toe with a Skill User. He's capable of all sorts of physical feats, such as running on walls, ziplining, etc.

Quirks: Enjoys JRPGs like Dragon Quest. Is obsessed with ninjas and gets very mad if anyone insults ninjas. Also kinda a drama sometimes queen tbh. He acts edgy, but actually has a deep respect for the sanctity of life and would never kill another human.

Other:
 
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I was debating whether to join this one or not, but I decided to. Let's hope this works.


Name: Crimson Black

Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, blue eyes, black hair, and a X shaped scar on his right eye. Is usually seen with a black hooded cloak with something like this on the back.
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Personality:Though despite his looks and stature, Crimson is actually a very caring individual. But it some cases because of this he has the tendency to push some others away for their own safety. He also is quite naive, and tries to act more mature than others even when his colleagues says he already more mature than most people.

Background:Running away from home at age 8 for reasons he never explains. Ditching his birth name and last name, in favor of the name Crimson Black wanting to cut all connections with his previous life. Crimson live on the streets in a town near Bahia for two years before being found by a private Detective named Luna and her agency. Being taken in by them and being treated like an actual family. Crimson help out at the agency as an assistant in some of their cases and around the headquarters. Heading to Bahia in request of Luna to meet up with an acquaintance and figure out why the barrier was weaken.

Skills: Life Energy-Blood Manipulation; Able to control his blood like a magnet connected to his body, he can shape and solidify his blood any way he wants. Spawning weapons from it such. Like covering his hands in gauntlets, and even making the blood leave his body and harden. The blood returns to his body once he is finished using it. Though using the ability too much can harm his body and health, using it too much can even make Crimson fall unconscious to a special form of Circulatory Collapse.

Talents:Only learning some self taught martial arts and some from Luna when he was sixteen, he isn’t the greatest of martial artist. He also have some minimal thief and detective skills. As for anything else he carries a pocket knife, and messenger bag with some simple medical supplies. He can also cook but doesn’t have a wide array of meals he can make.

Quirks: He is a tad absent minded and believes he has some form of Asperger's Syndrome.

Other:He hates nicknames, despite the name he is using is essentially a nickname. So don't call him Crim or something.
 
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Name: Yuki Kurosawa

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Appearance: Yuki stands at 5,8 is fairly slender with an ever so slight muscular tone. Yuki has dark black hair which is kind of messy and he usually cut it so his bangs make it hard to see his bright brown eyes. He typically wears darker blues and blacks, and pretty casual clothing. He doesn't really care for formal wear. When its cold out, he usually wears a dark black double breasted cardigan with a black and grey striped scarf. When its warmer, he usually wears shorts and short sleeved t shirts.

Personality (optional): Yuki is slightly apathetic. He tends to just go through the motions, and doesn't have many friends. He likes reading horror and ghost stories. He yearns to find his place in the world, and has no idea what he's doing with his life. Despite all this, he's at his core an idealist. While quiet, he can be quite weird, funny, and loyal to the people he warms up to. When angered, he usually tries to distance himself from what's bugging him. If he's not aloud to distance himself for any reason. He will lose his temper. He doesn't get violent, but you can expect to tear someone a new one. He also has a nasty habit of holding grudges when people betray his trust. He also loves animals, and at times finds it easier to deal with animals then people.

Backstory (optional): Just your typical ordinary family life as an only child.

Skills N/A

Talents: Yuki is still trying to learn what he's good at, but one thing many people take into account is he has good intuition. He's pretty good at putting two pieces of the puzzle together so to speak. He's also pretty good with animals, being able to befriend dogs, cats, horses, etc. Even certain wild animals such as squirrels, birds, or deer seem to warm up to him quickly.

Quirks: As stated earlier, Yuki is prone to holding grudges. Yuki also has trouble relating to people, and can be a little inept at handling delicate social issues, and he can't really sugar coat anything without being brutally honest. He also gets some weird amusement scaring people and telling ghost stories.

Other: N/A
 
@Ryoma Maser; hey, as Co-GM I get to do the rough stuff. Your SU looks good except for a few things--

1. Due to the nature of the RP, we would much rather your OC not be so skilled right off the bat. He's a skill user and has all of these separate talents. If you could simplify the Talents section, that'd be awesome.

2. His skill, while good, needs a slight tweak. Your OC is human, and draining that much blood from his body would kill the poor guy.

Fix these few points, and you should be set!
 
I was debating whether to join this one or not, but I decided to. Let's hope this works.

Name: Crimson Black

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Appearance: Tall, blue eyes, black hair, and a X shape scar on his right eye. Is usually seen with a black hooded cloak with something like this on the back.
moon.jpg

Personality:Though despite his looks and stature, Crimson is actually a very caring individual. But it some cases because of this he has the tendency to push some others away for their own safety. He also is quite naive, and tries to act more mature than others even when his colleagues says he already more mature than most people.

Background:Running away from home at age 8 for reasons he never explains. He join a gang who works well with the Surea Police departments for criminals they cannot catch, or help in specific cases outside of the law and or solve. As well as their moral code, and family like pack(I haven't thought a name for them yet, you can come up with something if you like). Ditching his birth name and last name, in favor of the name Crimson Black after wanting give himself a new direction in life. He gave himself the name Crimson Black after his Life Energy based skill.

Skills: Life Energy-Blood Manipulation; Able to control his blood like a magnet connected to his body, he can shape and solidify his blood any way he wants. He can even use this to create a full body protection suit made out of his own blood. Though creating the body suit, and or using the ability too much can harm his body and health. The blood returns to his body once he is finished using it

Talents: Being raise in the gang like environment for ten years Crimson has picked some skills over the years. Studying in taekwondo, the martial art of mixing attacks with self defense. He has little use with actually weapons and firearms. Only carrying a pocket knife, and a stun gun.

Quirks: He is a tad absent minded and believes he has some form of Asperger's Syndrome.

Other:He hates nicknames, despite the name he is using is essentially a nickname. So don't call him Crim or something.
@Ryoma Maser; hey, as Co-GM I get to do the rough stuff. Your SU looks good except for a few things--

1. Due to the nature of the RP, we would much rather your OC not be so skilled right off the bat. He's a skill user and has all of these separate talents. If you could simplify the Talents section, that'd be awesome.

2. His skill, while good, needs a slight tweak. Your OC is human, and draining that much blood from his body would kill the poor guy.

Fix these few points, and you should be set!

I knew something had to be changed, so I was waiting for someone to point what needed to be. I couldn't really think of a way to fix the problem; the only solution I thought of was to say "because of this skill, he has a lot more blood than a regular human being." But I didn't think it would work.

Just recommend anything that could help the profile, since I honestly cannot think of anything. And also anyone can recommend a name for that gang he is a part of, still cannot come up with a name for that either.
 
The gang doesn't really need to have a name for it. Though in that regard, could you also up the age in which he joined it? it just seems weird that a gang would let an 8 year old do actual jobs for them. They can have him in training or something. And I think what Prez meant to say about the talents is just, decrease the amount of talents he has cause like he's good with a ton of weapons but we don't really want a story that relies too much on action and I honestly can't think of a reason for why a guy like him would be in a town like Bahia.

As for the power. You can lower it by putting more limitations to him. Him being able to make an armor out of blood is...well it requires too much blood, more than any normal human has anyway. So just make it so that he can make smaller constructs or weapons at most but it still takes a toll on him or something like that.

@Naoto; Accepted
 
I was debating whether to join this one or not, but I decided to. Let's hope this works.


Name: Crimson Black

Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, blue eyes, black hair, and a X shaped scar on his right eye. Is usually seen with a black hooded cloak with something like this on the back.
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Personality:Though despite his looks and stature, Crimson is actually a very caring individual. But it some cases because of this he has the tendency to push some others away for their own safety. He also is quite naive, and tries to act more mature than others even when his colleagues says he already more mature than most people.

Background:Running away from home at age 8 for reasons he never explains. Ditching his birth name and last name, in favor of the name Crimson Black wanting to cut all connections with his previous life. Crimson live on the streets in a town near Bahia for two years before being found by a private Detective named Luna and her agency. Being taken in by them and being treated like an actual family. Crimson help out at the agency as an assistant in some of their cases and around the headquarters. Heading to Bahia in request of Luna to meet up with an acquaintance and figure out why the barrier was weaken.

Skills: Life Energy-Blood Manipulation; Able to control his blood like a magnet connected to his body, he can shape and solidify his blood any way he wants. Spawning weapons from it such. Like covering his hands in gauntlets, and even making the blood leave his body and harden. The blood returns to his body once he is finished using it. Though using the ability too much can harm his body and health, using it too much can even make Crimson fall unconscious to a special form of Circulatory Collapse.

Talents:Only learning some self taught martial arts and some from Luna when he was sixteen, he isn’t the greatest of martial artist. He also have some minimal thief and detective skills. As for anything else he carries a pocket knife, and messenger bag with some simple medical supplies. He can also cook but doesn’t have a wide array of meals he can make.


Quirks: He is a tad absent minded and believes he has some form of Asperger's Syndrome.

Other:He hates nicknames, despite the name he is using is essentially a nickname. So don't call him Crim or something.

@Flaze and @Prez Anything I had bolded in that reply is what I changed. I also change the original post with what was change about Crimson. Anything that you want me change please tell.
 
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