OrionTheAbsol
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Write the scene up anyway. There's really no way to "prevent" it. See if you can reach the end. Then read the scene over to yourself to see if it feels like it "skips" or feels like everything is happening too fast. Or if it feels like it's dragging its butt across the carpet. Imagine the scene happening in real time as you read it.Sometimes I worry that I mess up on pacing and rush through a scene. How do I keep myself from doing that?
If something feels "off", try adding or cutting words. You can also ask someone to read a paragraph for you to see if they think it needs changing.
Alright, so what part of that are you struggling with?It is what happens in the story that is difficult to write. A violent death.
If it's the actual death itself you're struggling with, then it's usually effective to describe that death in detail (2 - 5 sentences) to convey that shock and horror. It's also effective to show the reactions of other characters witnessing the death taking place.
If you're looking something for more specific, ask about which part(s) you need help with. Otherwise, the best alternative advice I can give is to, "Just write." Some level of progress will get you somewhere, even if it doesn't meet your expectations.