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Thanks for the feedback gang. I think you are right @canisaries that people are more forgiving early on, but I also think there are those who if they don't like things straight away will just as quickly declare their hatred.
@diamondpearl876 I know you are reading one of my stories at the moment so I will wait for that review for your specific comments on that point. I was talking more about introductions and how much is too much to put into a first chapter/prologue that sets the scene but is also engaging, but I see your point. I think a lot of description is a personal style thing that people either like or dislike, and I definitely feel my creative side comes out better when I am describing things and do all that world building. Are a lot of them necessary? Not to the grand scheme of things, but there are certain things such as Giovanni judging the town on Knot Island that I feel adds to the character and feel.
In this particular chapter, I think I will apply your 'ask yourself' question and read over the churches description again.
@diamondpearl876 I know you are reading one of my stories at the moment so I will wait for that review for your specific comments on that point. I was talking more about introductions and how much is too much to put into a first chapter/prologue that sets the scene but is also engaging, but I see your point. I think a lot of description is a personal style thing that people either like or dislike, and I definitely feel my creative side comes out better when I am describing things and do all that world building. Are a lot of them necessary? Not to the grand scheme of things, but there are certain things such as Giovanni judging the town on Knot Island that I feel adds to the character and feel.
In this particular chapter, I think I will apply your 'ask yourself' question and read over the churches description again.