Re: Son of Earth- A Rival's Tale (CH. 15 IS UP)
The thing people need to realize is that you aren't exactly that far into the story yet. You're still now revealing new things about the way his character truly is through his actons. You've just gotten to the town with the SECOND gym. He has to be a big douchebag at first so when the minor changes begin to occur the reader will understand how meaningful it really is.
And about the spoiler, meeting Morty, I really like the direction I think you are gonna go with that.
Now, for those of you who do want Dante's character to be more sympathetic and don't mind a minor spoiler, keep reading.
Morty will have a strong effect on Dante's personality. So very soon we're going to be really working on his character development.
The thing people need to realize is that you aren't exactly that far into the story yet. You're still now revealing new things about the way his character truly is through his actons. You've just gotten to the town with the SECOND gym. He has to be a big douchebag at first so when the minor changes begin to occur the reader will understand how meaningful it really is.
And about the spoiler, meeting Morty, I really like the direction I think you are gonna go with that.