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And the usual few comments. The use of "I" early in the entry strikes me as being rather ... what's the word? Out of style? My brain isn't behaving today, no doubt the word will be painfully obvious when I look at this again.
I can tell you were having trouble writing this entry. I'm kind of surprised that you went for the bright light and energy method of evolution for metapod, instead of butterfree moulting off the cocoon. I wonder if you came across the same irritants I have in the official pokédex entries - namely, treating pollen, nectar, and honey as being interchangeable terms
I can tell you were having trouble writing this entry. I'm kind of surprised that you went for the bright light and energy method of evolution for metapod, instead of butterfree moulting off the cocoon. I wonder if you came across the same irritants I have in the official pokédex entries - namely, treating pollen, nectar, and honey as being interchangeable terms