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Eve reached back and ran her fingers through her hair. It was indeed silky smooth. “Thank you, sweetling.”
OH NO, THE ADORABLE HAIRBRUSH SCENE AGAIN! THIS TIME WITH ADDITIONAL TERMS OF ENDEARMENT!
“Pics or it didn't happen.”
“Alright, wise guy. Log in to the wi-fi on that ridiculous smartphone of yours,” Josh challenged.
That pics line though... Always one of my favorites.
Seems weird for Josh to call her a "wise guy," but I definitely see him hating on smartphones like that.
"Those oval frames look great on you,” Eve commented. Those rectangular frames are too harsh for his face.
Heh, but rectangular frames are the "in" thing these days, Eve!
“We used power tools every day and we were still geeks,” Josh commented.
Don't insult people who use power tools. It's just not a good idea!
“I like the way they always smell like sawdust,” a third girl said shyly.
“Becky!”
“Sorry!”
Not sure why, but this was particularly funny.
“That was one of the best pieces of metalwork I ever did,” Josh said wistfully. He stared at the photo ruefully for a moment. “She ended up with an artist, in the end.”
“Then she obviously didn't see the value of what was in front of her,” Eve said matter-of-factly.
“… do you really mean that?”
“You gave her something beautiful that you'd made for her, and only her. With love, actually. If my ex-boyfriend had ever done anything like that I'd have melted.”
NO! TOO CUTE! I CAN'T STAND IT!
If my comments are anything to go by, I enjoyed the short little scene and I can tell you enjoyed writing it. Makes me jealous, really - I want a friendship like this. Josh and Eve are my inspirations. My favorite character interactions from fanfic come from them, I think it's safe to say, now.
10/10 would support future side chapters