GAME: The Review Game

[chaos_Leader]

Got you all reviewed up and done! Enjoy!

As always when I stumble my way into this place, a review for A Sine of Things to Come would be excellent, being my only story and all. Ideally, getting to the most recent chapter would be awesome, since that was published recently, but I will take a well-thought-out response from as far as you can make it without wearing yourself out.

I'll see you all around!

 

[Beth Pavell]

Moving things on, here is your review, @chaos_Leader

Anyway, I would like a review for Chapter Nineteen - Moonlight, Electric Night

 

[System Error]

How about a complete review, of which Chapter 19 would naturally be included in~?

And to play this game myself, I'd like a review on Chapter 3-2 of my own fic, The Story of Fritz Westmyn: The Turning World. My first chapter in over a year, and a bit of a unique one. Wondering if I'm not rusty and I did a good job with how I wanted it to turn out.

 

[chaos_Leader]

It's Aliiive! I sat down and read the entire story start to finish in one sitting! And left a review to boot!

As for myself, I once again submit my own story, for which I'd greatly appreciate feedback that includes the most up-to-date content. Thanks!

 

[kintsugi]

Things fall straight into my lap that I was going to review eventually/anyway! Hurray!

I would greatly appreciate some feedback on {some rise by sin}. The Violet Arc is kicking into gear and stuff is finally hitting the fan after chapters and chapters of me promising for it to do so, so it'd be nice to get some opinions on how that was executed, but anything goes!

 

[AceTrainer14]

@kintsugi, here you go girlfriend: pleased I finally had an opportunity to catch up.

I would appreciate reviews for either the most recent chapter of Eight Easy Steps, or alternatively (or both if you are a long time reader) I'd love to know what people think of the revisions made to the first arc, which begins with Blog One and carries on through to Interlude One. In particular, I'd like to know what people think of the two brand new scenes in Chapter Five and Interlude One, and their views on the changes to the setting and Alaska's personality. For the most recent chapter(s), a standard review with a focus on Alaska's development would do. Please and thank you!

 

[Jaypom]

@AceTrainer14 , I've left a review for Eight Easy Steps

I realized I hadn't read how the thread works and deserved the deletion of my last comment But I hope I have done this correctly. Anywho, I'd love a review for my story Pokemon: Accelia Heroes, mainly on Chapter 12,13, or 14 which are the most recent. I realize I also don't have the best writing style so any suggestions on improvements are also appreciated. I mainly would like to know if I need to grow characters more, if my battle scenes are on par with my overall writing, and if the story itself is readable/enjoyable

 

[Beth Pavell]

@JayGaymes, here is your review

I'm actually going to ask for one myself again. I'd like a review for Chapter Twenty Two - Evelina of Victory, with especial focus on the battles

 

[0bs1d1an_kn1ght]

@Beth Pavell I've left a review on your story, hope you like it.

I'm looking for a reviewer for TEEN: - Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Destruction, Specifically for chapters 9.1 and 9.2 reviewed.

 

[Bloodstained]

@0bs1d1an_kn1ght Here is a review I wrote for Explorers of Destruction. It's a little more than I though I'd get in just two chapters.

If possible, may I have a review for Pokémon XCD? Review what you wish. General advice or specific details are both welcome.

 

[AetherX]

@Bloodstained Here is your review! Thank you for being so patient!

I recently rewrote (recently as in a couple months ago) Chapter 5 of Unpredictable, so I'd like some kind of feedback on that. It's not very long, so I wouldn't say no to a review of the rest of the fic up until that point either, but Chapter 5 is the most important part. Thanks!

 

[lucarioknight56]

Here's the review for AetherX. Hope you like it!

Alright, so I would like a review for my story, Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: The Mysteries of Reflexon. I would appreciate anything at all, although I would like a more detailed review if able. Thanks!

EDIT: Side note, I only ask for the reviewer to read up to Chapter 3 or 4, but reading all that is currently there would be fine as well; the chapters are quite short.

 

[Dorothy]

@lucarioknight56 Here's your review!

I'd like a review for my story, The Scales of Astrea, at least for the most recent chapter but obviously a comprehensive review would be great (there's only four chapters so far, so there's not much to read). Thanks a bundle!

 

[Lugion]

@Jabberwocky hear ya go, neighbor!

In return, I'd like a review for the eleventh chapter of Stainless Steel! If you're all caught up, I'd appreciate a general overview. If you're not a reader at all, I'll accept a review for any part of the story.

 

[AceTrainer14]

@Lugion: Here is a review of the last two chapters. I focused more on the tenth chapter, but that was mostly because the eleventh was too perfect!

I would like a review for either the most recent chapter of Eight Easy Steps if you are a long time reader (if you haven't reviewed for a while, I'd appreciate any feedback on the most recent arc), or, if you've never read my stuff before, any sort of review for The First Warriors would be appreciated as I will be working on it again soon.

 

[AetherX]

@AceTrainer14 THE GOD OF REVIEWS SHINES HIS HOLY LIGHT DOWN UPON THEE. I AM BUT A VESSEL.

I don't have anything to offer myself, so I'll request a review for the first chapter or two of Pokemon AquaBlue.

 

[Legacy]

Here's my review of the first few chapters of Pokemon Aquablue.

I'd like one for the first few chapters or the latest chapter of The Power Inside.

 

[Beth Pavell]

And here is mine for Chapter Two and Three

I'd like a review for either Chapter Twenty Three - Summer is i'comin In or Twenty Three - Into the Wild of The Long Walk

 

[kintsugi]

Done!

Things fall apart in Chapter Thirteen of srbs, apparently both in a literal sense and in a "how do I write characters" sense. Would appreciate some feedback on this unluckiest of chapters!

 

[AceTrainer14]

For you, Queen @kintsugi

Once again, I'm here to force someone to provide some feedback on the latest chapters of 8ES. They are qutie lengthy read together but are two-parters and for long time readers I would appreciate it. If you are new to the story, than thoughts on the first chapter/s would always be appreciated, but would prefer thoughts on the gym battle from people who have read the rest of the story.