Crysta Blade
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Re: Travels of the Trifecta! (Anime, PG-13)
I'm baaaack!
Yeah, yep. Failure's a good word for that day.
When it comes to shelter, what's better than a flying pyramid?
Not very homely and a mite awkward since what went down earlier is probably gonna come up over dinner. Ah, here it is now. Brandon won't be seen the same way again by some.
Uh, Brandon? Don't think destiny will cut it as an excuse. In Paul's eyes, at least.
I'd be more concerned about the Battle Frontier committee believing that whole story. Then again, if Brandon can capture three legendary Pokémon, protecting another one doesn't seem as farfetched.
Oh, hello! Someone is having doubts about beating Ash like he's done before on multiple occasions. Though if he saw how the last Ash vs. Brandon match played out, I wonder if he'd see things differently.
And with that, a scene change! Hmm... so Conway's attempting to confront his fear head-on? This'll be interesting. Provided that Fantina stops by on a whim.
A Rollout Lickitung... I see where this is going. Pity Barry doesn't.
Now I gotta wonder: what does Barry consider a normal wake-up time?
Barry's stomping the ground now? A bit like his gameverse counterpart's Platinum animation, perhaps?
Rollout as throwing a large rock in the air... that's an interesting take on the move. That wouldn't have occurred to me.
Ahaha! Always funny to hit Barry with a dose of reality.
Barry's whole fining schtick makes me wonder, if he managed to actually fine someone, what would he do with the money?
Ohhh, I see why you did what you did with Rollout earlier. Always good to have variations on the same move.
Barry will be looking quite the fool in three, two, one...
Ouch. It's sort of like extreme pinball what Lickitung was doing. Ah, the mental pictures. And ooh, scary shiny glasses moment!
Considering what just happened, yeah, Barry, I'd say Conway doesn't mind using you as target practice.
Lickilicky time! If its... uh, performance in the Sinnoh League is any indication, poor Fantina won't know what hit her.
Conway's really throwing his parents' money around, huh? I wonder if they'll notice.
Now, what's Paul up to? Sharing a bed with his brother? Aww, so cute! I wish I had a camera! Speaking of which, the possibilities for blackmail... =P
Looking at the scenery out of a window is amazing, isn't it? Great to just lose yourself in the view and let your normal thoughts wash away. I love it!
That's a good point there: natural talent means nothing without passion.
Another good point: Brandon's locked into his position now.
Sounds like Brandon's catching onto the fact that Paul's hiding something. And knowing him, he will find out eventually.
Heh heh, Paul's acting like Brandon won't be a challenge without the statue trio. Considering the guy's been a Trainer for over three decades...
Brandon's getting some ideas, eh? I wonder what he's planning...
I pity Reggie's future wife. Paul'd be the brother-in-law from hell.
The Battle Pyramid has one of those healing machines now? Coolio! Have we seen those machines in canon, though? I can't remember.
Oho, Brandon's picking Paul's lineup for the upcoming battle? Most interesting. Makes me wonder how the battle against Ash in the Sinnoh Conference would've went down if Paul had used those same six. Ah, what could've been...
Mm, fighting against a type disadvantage and working around it is always a valuable skill. Of course, you need to know when that's not an option.
Now then, back to Hearthome. You'd think Fantina would at least put up a timetable or something to let challengers know when she's available. Irresponsibility at its finest.
Who needs television when you have Barry for entertainment? =P
Well, you would need a happy place if you had to deal with Barry.
Tactical lie, or just being economical with the truth.
Ahaha, oh, I can imagine Conway's tone during all of this. Like he's talking to a small puppy. Considering he's talking to Barry, that isn't too far from the truth. =P
Speak of the devil. Conway really is treating Barry like a puppy!
The stars must be in alignment because Fantina's actually at her Gym! Haha, oh, her timing could not be any better.
I just wanna take a moment to say I really love your narrative style. It's like you sorta make comments on what's happening. Okay, that doesn't make much sense, so I'll pick some examples.
You're busting out the ol' French, eh? I haven't studied that since I was like fifteen. I am gonna be so very lost!
Uh, Conway? This is Barry we're talkin' here. He's impossible to forget. Unless you use some sort of memory drug, I guess.
That's right, Conway, suck up to Fantina so Barry looks like an idiot... well, moreso.
Good thing Barry can't understand a lick of French, or Conway would really be in for it.
Feeling a little awkward there, Conway? Now now, save any freakouts until after the battle, please. It could be worse: the place could be like the Old Chateau!
Yeah, the carnival attraction comparison's a good one for Drifblim.
Well, each Gym's got to something to stand out; to give a unique challenge. And since this canon doesn't keep the games' puzzles/apprentice Trainers...
This whole scene makes me think of how it was a shame we didn't see more of Conway, the whole panicky, neurotic side to him especially.
With Barry, the crash part of 'crash course' is especially apt.
Oh I bet Paul's absolutely thrilled with idea of his training starting with helping one of the people he hates the most. Also, it's nice to see unconventional forms of training like this. If only the games did stuff like this...
Yeah, Paul's health issues aren't going to remain a secret for too long, will they? The truth will come out at some stage.
Anyway, back to the Fantina battle! And the reason for Gengar's popularity is true in competitive game circles, too. It's possibly popular with the Ghost Leader/Elite 4 because there's not many options in the the type, but I digress.
'Scout' Gengar's moves? Weird word choice, it's more of term fitting to the aforementioned competitive gaming circles.
You gotta wonder how high the damage bills for Pokémon Gyms would be with all the explosions and slamming into walls and so on.
Dontcha just hate Hypnosis?
Oh. Oh. That explains the 'scouting Gengar's moves' thing. Four move limit, huh?
Mm, Conway needs to come up with workarounds for Hypnosis pretty darn quick. But I don't think it's impossible. It's times like these when you don't mind Gengar's Psychic weakness, huh?
Ah, Protect. Don't you just hate when this gets in your way? And I'm totally not giggling immaturely at the 'naughty, naughty boy' remark, I promise!
Why such a drama queen, Fantina?
Essentially, Barry's calling hax here, isn't he?
Nice reference to the TM Crasher Wake gives out in the games.
Back to the brothers and ah, Paul's getting sloppy. Oh dear. He's got so much to think about, though. It really says something when he's concerned he'll lose to Ash, despite the track record.
...The rest of this battle isn't going to end well for Paul, is it?
There's no easy way out of this for Paul, is there? Even if he's successful as a Trainer, how long will that last before his condition worsens and ends that? The only certainty is a bleak future.
Nice transition with Dark Pulse, there.
If Conway has to deal with Barry's yapping for the rest of his Gym Battles, I think he ought to invest in a muzzle.
Hm... the ol' do-I-save-my-last-fresh-Pokémon dilemma.
Barry, just stop pestering Conway lest you the victim of nerd rage. And that ain't pretty.
I doubt Mismagius is getting back up after Outrage of all things. Yeowch.
Barry's quieting down now? That's new.
On that note, strange how Fantina's ballgown design incorporates Drifloon/Drifblim's cross thingo, yet her highest-leveled Pokémon in the games is Mismagius (Gengar in Platinum's rematch). Odd.
All going downhill for Paul now, huh?
That'd be right: when Paul finally gets the criticism he asked for, he doesn't take it well.
Now that's better. The purple jerk we know doesn't let forgone conclusions stop him!
It must be frustrating for Paul, knowing that a Trainer who he considers inferior is able to something that he can't (draw out Chimchar's Blaze). Pride would be the only reason that he's not able to say 'you know what? That idiot might actually be onto something after all.'
Now then, back to that Gym Battle. Barry, take a chill pill, will ya? Save your energy for your next battle against Fantina.
Ominous Wind? Against a Normal-type? Uh-oh, I think I can guess what Fantina's banking on... And it will work. What can go wrong (for Conway at least) will go wrong and all.
And of course Conway took that possibility into account. Wouldn't have it any other way!
Oh, nice one! Unusual strategies such as that are always welcome.
That poor Drifblim. If being on the receiving end of Lickilicky's Lick was anything like what happened to Ash's Gible in the league...
Where would a Pokémon battle be without explosions, am I right?
Whoa! What a close battle!
Ooh, a Team Galactic interlude! Coolio!
But you will let down your boss, Jupiter. Uxie would've already made a connection to Brock before you get there.
Haha, sucks to be you, Mars!
If a week with the troll that is Commander Pluto isn't enough to drive Saturn mental, nothing will.
And the battle between the brothers is nearly done, I see. And bloody hell, that's one powerful Blast Burn!
It has all come crashing down now? Damn.
Well, if Paul's broken up about Torterra being hurt, then we can't say there's absolutely no connection. There is one, despite being very faint.
It's sort of sad that it takes a bad situation to bring this family together.
Oh, Brandon and Reggie wouldn't be able to begin to imagine what Paul's hiding. When that day arrives... misery all around.
Is that the 'unfamiliar feeling' I spy? I think it is!
All in all, this part was very well done. It does a great job setting up for a change in Paul's character, unlike canon which felt the 'okay, I kinda-sorta respect you now' thing made sense. I felt that it did not, so this a real treat.
You're just jealous, Barry. =P And you lost to Fantina again? So not surprised.
Come to think of it, Barry would likely faced off against some of Fantina's other Pokémon, right? Her main Pokémon took quite a beating earlier that day, after all.
I'm... not exactly sure what Conway could hope to learn from Barry.
Yes, Barry. This is the part where he he tells you he's evil. Honest to god...
Ooh, drama! Though I gotta wonder how long it'll take for Conway to realise Dawn can be oblivious, too.
I just realised: Barry's essentially giving Conway advice about his love life. Surreal or what?
Barry with a credit card. There are so many reasons why this is a bad idea...
Hm, the last paragraph or so does stand out, being a departure from the story's usual style, but I can't say I blame you for that. I would've done the same thing if I was in that position.
In the end, another wonderous addition! It took me some time to get through it, but I don't regret a single second! Two thumbs up!
I'm baaaack!
Yeah, yep. Failure's a good word for that day.
When it comes to shelter, what's better than a flying pyramid?
Four words come to mind here: accident waiting to happen.Brandon was not very used to working with the oven.
That's a nice touch. I can totally picture him doing something like that.Reggie was a natural at cooking, having won regional fairs with his talents.
Not very homely and a mite awkward since what went down earlier is probably gonna come up over dinner. Ah, here it is now. Brandon won't be seen the same way again by some.
Uh, Brandon? Don't think destiny will cut it as an excuse. In Paul's eyes, at least.
Yeah, it's a situation with no perfect solution. Either way, someone loses."And it's amazing that you bonded with it, but... this whole quest was just a double-edged sword from the beginning. Helping Regigigas endangers us, while helping us would have endangered Regigigas."
I'd be more concerned about the Battle Frontier committee believing that whole story. Then again, if Brandon can capture three legendary Pokémon, protecting another one doesn't seem as farfetched.
Now I'm picturing some builders going 'steady, steady... *loud crash* Bugger. There goes the rest of the temple.'This is a precious piece of Sinnoh's history, barely hanging by a thread. Ordinary construction workers won't understand that...
Here's the problem, Brandon: this whole rebuilding the temple problem could go wrong and cause more problems, thus making it your sons' problem. But maybe some sleep will help make things seem less problematic ...Okay, clearly my brain's favourite word today is 'problem'."You leave worrying about the temple to me and Maria," Brandon assured. "Because you two have more important things to do than worry about my problems."
Oh, hello! Someone is having doubts about beating Ash like he's done before on multiple occasions. Though if he saw how the last Ash vs. Brandon match played out, I wonder if he'd see things differently.
This line made me smile. I pity everyone who had to deal with Paul when he was little. Am totally picturing a hellraiser here.No matter how old he got, there were childish moments Paul would continue having for years to come.
Brandon does have trouble with not insulting others when he gives a rare compliment to someone, doesn't he?Something about that statement rubbed Reggie the wrong way, even if it was a compliment.
Understatement of the century, this is. And didn't she only find out about the connection that night?"The connection with those three... seems a tad rigid."
And with that, a scene change! Hmm... so Conway's attempting to confront his fear head-on? This'll be interesting. Provided that Fantina stops by on a whim.
A Rollout Lickitung... I see where this is going. Pity Barry doesn't.
Listen, Conway. You're asking Barry to pay attention? I admire your optimism.Just pay attention and you'll learn how important it is to be precise in your move execution.
Pfft. Oh, Barry. Your strange brand of logic never ceases to amuse me."Sloppy, huh?" Barry never was that good with taking criticism. "This coming from a guy who won't even throw a real punch. You're one to talk!"
Bahaha! Nice one!"Just look behind me: I'm teaching Lickitung physical attacks. Remember what I said about paying attention?"
Now I gotta wonder: what does Barry consider a normal wake-up time?
Or something shiny. I daresay some practical application is in order.Conway rolled his eyes and sighed, silently scolding himself for not realizing earlier that Barry needed constant activity in order to learn.
Barry's stomping the ground now? A bit like his gameverse counterpart's Platinum animation, perhaps?
Ha! Famous last words! And the whole dramatic pointing canon brings never gets old.Barry pointed at Conway in dramatic fashion. "You're gonna lose even worse than I did with an attitude like that!"
Rollout as throwing a large rock in the air... that's an interesting take on the move. That wouldn't have occurred to me.
Ahaha! Always funny to hit Barry with a dose of reality.
Barry's whole fining schtick makes me wonder, if he managed to actually fine someone, what would he do with the money?
Oh man, that would be a sight to see. What could possibly go wrong? Well, moreso than usual."Pray no one ever battles you in the morning," he teased. "It would be a train wreck.
Ohhh, I see why you did what you did with Rollout earlier. Always good to have variations on the same move.
Sweetie, you're asking if Barry paid attention. What do you think the answer's going to be?"If you paid attention to how she dresses and if you've ever seen her in a Contest, odds are she's going to battle with a Pokémon she's blatantly a fan of.
Oh, how nice. That reminds of that saying that goes something like 'any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic'. I suppose the same applies for any well-planned out strategy."You're certain you're not a witch? Because... wow."
Barry will be looking quite the fool in three, two, one...
Laughing at how cheesy this sounds. Go beyond and reach the heavens! Anyway, now I'm wondering if there's some sort of magic-esque property to faith and trust in the Pokémon world. Hmm...Lickitung, I truly believe the sky is the limit for you! Never give up; you can do this!"
Ouch. It's sort of like extreme pinball what Lickitung was doing. Ah, the mental pictures. And ooh, scary shiny glasses moment!
Considering what just happened, yeah, Barry, I'd say Conway doesn't mind using you as target practice.
Lickilicky time! If its... uh, performance in the Sinnoh League is any indication, poor Fantina won't know what hit her.
Conway's really throwing his parents' money around, huh? I wonder if they'll notice.
Now, what's Paul up to? Sharing a bed with his brother? Aww, so cute! I wish I had a camera! Speaking of which, the possibilities for blackmail... =P
Hm, now that you mention it, you'd get some wonderful views from it, wouldn't you?The way the Battle Pyramid landed was perfect for watching the sunrise.
Apart from the revenge motivation, what else has he got? And revenge alone wouldn't explain him becoming a Trainer in the first place. Like I said in an earlier review, was it because he wanted to be like his brother until that incident? Gosh, I wish canon covered this.On top of all that, Paul didn't know what drove him to become a Pokémon Trainer. There was revenge, but nothing else apparent.
Looking at the scenery out of a window is amazing, isn't it? Great to just lose yourself in the view and let your normal thoughts wash away. I love it!
That's a good point there: natural talent means nothing without passion.
Another good point: Brandon's locked into his position now.
Sounds like Brandon's catching onto the fact that Paul's hiding something. And knowing him, he will find out eventually.
Heh heh, Paul's acting like Brandon won't be a challenge without the statue trio. Considering the guy's been a Trainer for over three decades...
Okay, I'm foreseeing a trollish answer to this."You'll find out," Brandon said with a grin. Of course he was going to keep Paul in the dark, as he knew how shocked his son would be once the mystery was finally solved.
Brandon's getting some ideas, eh? I wonder what he's planning...
I know that the truth can hurt, but still... Ouch."You're loyal to your work... it's a shame Reggie and I never see this kind of effort from you when it comes to our family."
And thank the gods for that! It'd be the equivalent of pressing the apocalypse button despite a large sign stating 'do not touch: this button triggers the end of the world'.Because Brandon had a strong doubt of Paul being the one to bring about the next generation...
I pity Reggie's future wife. Paul'd be the brother-in-law from hell.
I get the feeling that will happen in the next few years for Paul."What I hope for more than anything is that you defeat me before you enter that rite of passage,"
The Battle Pyramid has one of those healing machines now? Coolio! Have we seen those machines in canon, though? I can't remember.
Oho, Brandon's picking Paul's lineup for the upcoming battle? Most interesting. Makes me wonder how the battle against Ash in the Sinnoh Conference would've went down if Paul had used those same six. Ah, what could've been...
Mm, fighting against a type disadvantage and working around it is always a valuable skill. Of course, you need to know when that's not an option.
Now then, back to Hearthome. You'd think Fantina would at least put up a timetable or something to let challengers know when she's available. Irresponsibility at its finest.
Who needs television when you have Barry for entertainment? =P
Hahaha! A good idea!He took a mental note there and then: never take Barry along on any stealth missions.
There's a joke to be had here about Fantina's serious case of man-face, but I won't be making it. =P"Now come out of there and fight like a man! I'm gonna beat you this time!"
Well, you would need a happy place if you had to deal with Barry.
Tactical lie, or just being economical with the truth.
Ahaha, oh, I can imagine Conway's tone during all of this. Like he's talking to a small puppy. Considering he's talking to Barry, that isn't too far from the truth. =P
Speak of the devil. Conway really is treating Barry like a puppy!
The stars must be in alignment because Fantina's actually at her Gym! Haha, oh, her timing could not be any better.
I just wanna take a moment to say I really love your narrative style. It's like you sorta make comments on what's happening. Okay, that doesn't make much sense, so I'll pick some examples.
Sure, Barry wasn't the brightest crayon in the box,
One of Conway's favorite things about being with Barry? The fact that the Twinleaf Town trainer made it too easy.
Yes, Conway actually threw the chocolate piece several feet away from him.
See what I mean? Does that make any sense or am I just talking nonsense?Fantina was fully dressed for the day in her usual gown with her hair done up in its usual style... something that must have taken well over an hour to do each day.
You're busting out the ol' French, eh? I haven't studied that since I was like fifteen. I am gonna be so very lost!
Uh, Conway? This is Barry we're talkin' here. He's impossible to forget. Unless you use some sort of memory drug, I guess.
*snerk*"Of course she remembers me!" Barry proudly affirmed. "I left the biggest impression on her than any other challenger; isn't that obvious?"
Fantina wisely chose not to make a remark to Barry's obvious overstatement.
That's right, Conway, suck up to Fantina so Barry looks like an idiot... well, moreso.
Good thing Barry can't understand a lick of French, or Conway would really be in for it.
Again, *snerk*"Now wait a second here!!" Conway never thought he'd hear such words in that order spill out of that boy's mouth.
Feeling a little awkward there, Conway? Now now, save any freakouts until after the battle, please. It could be worse: the place could be like the Old Chateau!
Yeah, the carnival attraction comparison's a good one for Drifblim.
Well, each Gym's got to something to stand out; to give a unique challenge. And since this canon doesn't keep the games' puzzles/apprentice Trainers...
This whole scene makes me think of how it was a shame we didn't see more of Conway, the whole panicky, neurotic side to him especially.
With Barry, the crash part of 'crash course' is especially apt.
Oh I bet Paul's absolutely thrilled with idea of his training starting with helping one of the people he hates the most. Also, it's nice to see unconventional forms of training like this. If only the games did stuff like this...
Yeah, Paul's health issues aren't going to remain a secret for too long, will they? The truth will come out at some stage.
Anyway, back to the Fantina battle! And the reason for Gengar's popularity is true in competitive game circles, too. It's possibly popular with the Ghost Leader/Elite 4 because there's not many options in the the type, but I digress.
'Scout' Gengar's moves? Weird word choice, it's more of term fitting to the aforementioned competitive gaming circles.
Ah. Now I like this line. It describes the effect of the move well for this continuity. I mean, how confusing would 'damage equal to user's level' be?Night Shade's power was directly connected to the inner strength of its user.
Hmm... now I'm wondering about how that'd work. If the move is used within a certain timeframe after the user's been hit, it's more powerful, maybe?with Payback, its power doubled if the opponent struck first.
You gotta wonder how high the damage bills for Pokémon Gyms would be with all the explosions and slamming into walls and so on.
Dontcha just hate Hypnosis?
Oh. Oh. That explains the 'scouting Gengar's moves' thing. Four move limit, huh?
So about 95% of what he has to say, then?While the intellectual one of the duo did try to filter out Barry's nonsense
Mm, Conway needs to come up with workarounds for Hypnosis pretty darn quick. But I don't think it's impossible. It's times like these when you don't mind Gengar's Psychic weakness, huh?
Ah, Protect. Don't you just hate when this gets in your way? And I'm totally not giggling immaturely at the 'naughty, naughty boy' remark, I promise!
A very welcome touch. It's a shame we haven't a Psychic type on the main cast (there was Starmie, but...); I love the idea of communicating that way with a Psychic type and I'd like to see this more often in canon.His strong mental connection with Slowking allowed him to silently signal his Pokémon to wait for Night Shade to hit first;
Why such a drama queen, Fantina?
Essentially, Barry's calling hax here, isn't he?
Nice reference to the TM Crasher Wake gives out in the games.
This begs the question: where would she keep her Poké Balls on her person? On second thought, maybe I don't wanna know.After tucking the Pokéball away, Fantina looked to her opponent.
Back to the brothers and ah, Paul's getting sloppy. Oh dear. He's got so much to think about, though. It really says something when he's concerned he'll lose to Ash, despite the track record.
Uh, Paul? You know as well as I do that your brother's not the critical type. Besides, you seem to be doing a good job criticising yourself anyway."That is what you need to be saying to me right now," Paul criticized,
...The rest of this battle isn't going to end well for Paul, is it?
He would, wouldn't he? Oh, the mental images I'm getting!and carry on the legacy as he wished to do - in the most disrespectful way he could, of course,
There's no easy way out of this for Paul, is there? Even if he's successful as a Trainer, how long will that last before his condition worsens and ends that? The only certainty is a bleak future.
Nice transition with Dark Pulse, there.
Pfft. Overdramatically is the only way she knows how to do things!Being a foreigner, she was not completely familiar with a Pokémon like Slowking and was overdramatically horrified when she found that she would be unable to confuse it.
If Conway has to deal with Barry's yapping for the rest of his Gym Battles, I think he ought to invest in a muzzle.
Hm... the ol' do-I-save-my-last-fresh-Pokémon dilemma.
Barry, just stop pestering Conway lest you the victim of nerd rage. And that ain't pretty.
I doubt Mismagius is getting back up after Outrage of all things. Yeowch.
Barry's quieting down now? That's new.
On that note, strange how Fantina's ballgown design incorporates Drifloon/Drifblim's cross thingo, yet her highest-leveled Pokémon in the games is Mismagius (Gengar in Platinum's rematch). Odd.
All going downhill for Paul now, huh?
That'd be right: when Paul finally gets the criticism he asked for, he doesn't take it well.
Now that's better. The purple jerk we know doesn't let forgone conclusions stop him!
It must be frustrating for Paul, knowing that a Trainer who he considers inferior is able to something that he can't (draw out Chimchar's Blaze). Pride would be the only reason that he's not able to say 'you know what? That idiot might actually be onto something after all.'
Why do get the feeling the other kids weren't the ones to start the fight?and during an incident where the young Paul had gotten himself in a scuffle with a few rowdy kids
Now then, back to that Gym Battle. Barry, take a chill pill, will ya? Save your energy for your next battle against Fantina.
Ominous Wind? Against a Normal-type? Uh-oh, I think I can guess what Fantina's banking on... And it will work. What can go wrong (for Conway at least) will go wrong and all.
And of course Conway took that possibility into account. Wouldn't have it any other way!
I gotta wonder: how would a Pokémon dodge something like Psychic, that can get you from any range?That was going to be nearly impossible to dodge, especially since Lickilicky was a huge target that had just finished copying all of Drifblim's enhancements to itself.
Oh, nice one! Unusual strategies such as that are always welcome.
...Oh, Barry. XD"Unbelievable. He's using his nerd powers and he's succeeding?! Something is so not right here."
That poor Drifblim. If being on the receiving end of Lickilicky's Lick was anything like what happened to Ash's Gible in the league...
Famous last words!"T'at Lickilicky shall never reach you no matter 'ow 'ard it tries!
Eheheh, that sounds like me!He loved having an excuse to prattle on about the things he knew that not many others his age (and in this case, his elders) did.
Where would a Pokémon battle be without explosions, am I right?
Whoa! What a close battle!
Ooh, a Team Galactic interlude! Coolio!
But you will let down your boss, Jupiter. Uxie would've already made a connection to Brock before you get there.
Haha, sucks to be you, Mars!
If a week with the troll that is Commander Pluto isn't enough to drive Saturn mental, nothing will.
And the battle between the brothers is nearly done, I see. And bloody hell, that's one powerful Blast Burn!
It has all come crashing down now? Damn.
Well, if Paul's broken up about Torterra being hurt, then we can't say there's absolutely no connection. There is one, despite being very faint.
Oho! Most interesting..."Sounds like you've been down this road before,"
It's sort of sad that it takes a bad situation to bring this family together.
Oh, Brandon and Reggie wouldn't be able to begin to imagine what Paul's hiding. When that day arrives... misery all around.
Is that the 'unfamiliar feeling' I spy? I think it is!
All in all, this part was very well done. It does a great job setting up for a change in Paul's character, unlike canon which felt the 'okay, I kinda-sorta respect you now' thing made sense. I felt that it did not, so this a real treat.
You're just jealous, Barry. =P And you lost to Fantina again? So not surprised.
Oh, now he gets it."It's true I wanna get out of here... I really want to beat Fantina, but if I've lost to her this many times, I gotta be doing something wrong, right?"
Come to think of it, Barry would likely faced off against some of Fantina's other Pokémon, right? Her main Pokémon took quite a beating earlier that day, after all.
I'm... not exactly sure what Conway could hope to learn from Barry.
No, really? For a guy who's always in a rush, he can still be so slow. And putting a Post-It on Barry's head? Yes please!"By the way, you looked really mad at me during that Gym Battle, you know?"
Explanations: wasted on the stupid."So you're kinda like a spy, is that what you're saying?"
"... Yes, let's go with that,"
Yes, Barry. This is the part where he he tells you he's evil. Honest to god...
Ooh, drama! Though I gotta wonder how long it'll take for Conway to realise Dawn can be oblivious, too.
I just realised: Barry's essentially giving Conway advice about his love life. Surreal or what?
Barry with a credit card. There are so many reasons why this is a bad idea...
Hm, the last paragraph or so does stand out, being a departure from the story's usual style, but I can't say I blame you for that. I would've done the same thing if I was in that position.
In the end, another wonderous addition! It took me some time to get through it, but I don't regret a single second! Two thumbs up!