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In this fan fiction, Savio looks for his brother Tsuki. His rival "unofficially" is Bonnie.
Chapter 1
WARNING: Dumb sex jokes ahead.
Savio is 21. Tsuki is 15.
Savio Tsuki
This was something I worked on and then quit. I was on the pokemopolis forums, back when I was still there, and while reading something, I had an idea that if Pokemon always tries to copy Harley for future rivals, why not another one? This was supposed to be a parody of that.
Training. Talk about training.
Pikachu jumps on Ash's shoulder. They leave.
Then our heroes are walking through the forest. Soon they hear someone huffing and puffing, then they see a large man running through the forest. He stops, with wide eyes and a gaping mouth on his face, like he was surprised or scared of something, while still breathing heavily. Between his huffs he says "Excuse me huff c- huff can you huff huff show me wher- huff where the city… huff Laverre City is huff...?"
"Well," Clemont speaks up "I believe it's 2 miles that way," he points to the left, 2 o'clock direction "then a half mile right."
"Thanks!" he says, then notice Bonnie and stares at her with an angry eyes face, crinkled forehead and such, but still putting his attention on the others.
"We could go with you if you like. What do you guys think? We are heading the same place."
"Sure." says Serena.
"I'd be fine with it." said Ash.
Bonnie whispered "I don't know..." she was wary of him after he gave her that look.
The man shook his head "I'm afraid I can't. I have a very important job to do and I can't-"
"De-denne?" said Dedenne, as it poked its head out of Bonnie's small clutch bag. It stared at the man with an innocent, naïve smile.
"...Is that a Pokémon?" said the man, with a slightly anger mixed with an anxious tone.
"Yes." said Bonnie.
The man reached for a pokéball. "I'd really like to have a battle with you! Please? I have a Bagon that needs the training!" he said, suddenly uncharacteristically cheerful.
"Well... I guess so..."
"Bonnie!" Clemont interrupts "You're not a trainer yet, you don't even know how to battle with Dedenne! And you don't even know this man!"
"..." The man stayed silent.
"Oh hush, Clemont, he challenged me! I need to make good on my honor, don't I?"
"But you can't..."
But Bonnie wouldn't listen to him. "Ready to battle Dedenne?" she said, as she let the mini electric mouse out of its pouch. It hopped out.
"Dedenne!" said Dedenne, making a boasting call.
"But Bonnie we're out in the middle of nowhere and you still don't know-"
While he was talking, the man stepped back and got ready for battle. "Alright!" said the man "Come on out, Bagon!"
And out came a small Bagon. "Bagon!" it cried, itself making a self-boasting call.
"Bagon, Rage!" Bagon tackles the Pokémon with its head. It hit. "Now, use ember!" It shoots embers.
"Why didn't she dodge?" Ash spoke absentmindedly.
"She is only a child. Let her be." said Serena, who took the comment seriously.
"Dedenne, are you okay?!"
"De-den!" it shouted triumphantly.
"Okay, then use thundershock!"
"Dedendenden..." it said as shocks flew from its body to the opponent Pokemon.
"Bagon?! Can you make it out of that?!"
It couldn't, but the small rodents body couldn't release the electricity any longer, leaving Bagon to regain its mobility again.
The man took the chance "Alright, rage!" It tackled again.
"Dodge Dedenne!"
"De-den!" it jumped in the air.
"Now thundershock again!"
The Pokémon shocked the Bagon. It couldn't move again, and this time it fainted.
"How... how could you have such a powerful move like that?" the man couldn't believe it. He returned the small Pokémon to its ball."
"See, Clemont? I didn't do bad! I won my first battle!" said Bonnie, proud of herself."
"Perhaps." he said, and moved back to the man "Sir, is that you're first Pokémon?"
"Yes."
"Ah, that explains it. It owned moves that a young hatchling would normally have."
"Well... I have only just started... my brother is better at this stuff than me... Speaking of which, I think I'll take your offer on going with you guys. Because... I don't have a good sense of direction..."
"I'm Clemont."
"My name's Serena."
"I'm Bonnie."
"Ash."
"Dedenne!"
"Oh, Dedenne, you should go back in your pack." she said, picking the small mouse up and putting it back.
"We should get that up at the Pokémon Center." said Clemont.
"Right," said Savio. "My Bagon could use a rest too." which was an understatement because his Bagon was fainted.
And so they went to Laverre City.
Pokémon Character Idea. I'll just call him Frank for now. (Savio. His brother was named Tsuki or something.)
Okay, since Harley has been such a big hit in Japan and globally, Pokémon has been constantly trying to make copies of him to milk off that popularity, such as Conway, Ursula, and Burgundy. But none of them have yet met his popularity or his top-notch personality. What we need is someone who exaggerates his stereotypical qualities while adding a few quirks of his own.
What we need is a man who has black, long hair, is 6' 9" (180.34 cm) tall, with the build/width of… uh…
wiki/Drake
Drake. He must wear men's casual or some other casual clothing. He speaks with masculine pronouns but also with a high-pitched whiny voice. He occasionally pretends to be different characters, like how Joey from Full House or Team Rocket do, but his acts only vaguely match the situation or not at all. And he sometimes dances like Michael Jackson. (Or, if you are serious about making him evil, downplay the flamboyance and dancing.)
His rival is Bonnie. In his debut episode, he comes across the twerps in an open field. He says hello only to see Bonnie. He quips about how some girl like her pushed him down at school (on accident). He would have just left, angry at her sight, but then Dedenne comes out of her pack. He sees it and then challenges her to a battle. Clemont declines, but the other guy thinks it's because they're afraid of him. He pulls out a Pokémon and it turns out to be a Bagon, and a young one at that. Bonnie accepts his challenge, against what the others say, then gets ready to "defend her honor," looking like an anime action hero. After a (rather quick) battle, he loses. He starts to leave again, but then they find out that he has something to do with the plot of the episode, so he stays with them. At the end of the episode he runs off, saying "Bye Bonnie-boo!", even though he doesn't like her. Then he shows up again sometime when Ash is in the Kalos League. Unlike Harley, he only shows up for 2-3 episodes.
(I have to admit, I've been laughing the whole time I've been typing this.)
He is supposed to be as annoying as possible (but not too annoying, there's only so much I or others as well can take). He should have an IQ of less than Harley, and less than average too, let's see… maybe the same as when Ash grows up? Maybe not that stupid… unless Ash gains 50 IQ points between now and when he grows up... Let's just say that he's below average intelligence. Also I want his only driving force to be that he just hates Bonnie for the way she looks, but doesn't show it much and only battles her once or twice. I think it would be funny to see a tall man rival a 5 year-old girl. I was thinking he might have some angst over his Bagon too, that he's a new trainer wanting his Bagon to be stronger, and someday being a Salamence, but at this moment he's a grown man who lost to a 5 year old.
This was made mainly as a joke. I honestly don't want them to make a character like this as it would hinder their good writing and might stop them from having better ideas than that, unless of course they can't come up with anything better in which case they might as well.
The following is a what-if scenario: where Ash's Kalos gang runs into Team Rocket, and only the work of a professional Stylist and his brother can stop them. Some guy gets arrested, claiming he didn't do whatever it was. And then another guy gets arrested. And so on and so forth. The twerps... eh-hem, I mean Ash, Serena, Clemont, and Bonnie, find themselves in a forest. Then suddenly the police are involved. And then the heroes, or, rather just the dweebs that we watch every so often just to see if something new or original happens, run into a man (of about 15 years of age, casual clothing consisting of tee-shirt and hiking shorts, well-combed black hair, and violet eyes.) He is working on an important case of impersonations, and he really doesn't have the time to talk... unless they're willing to be volunteers? You know what's coming. Some time pasts and we meet a man who... who is strangely... well... have you ever heard of the Coordinator Harley? Think him, but slightly more masculine. And somewhat child-like, and instantly hates Bonnie. He only finds time to battle, after-which he has to hurry off and get to his brother to deliver an important document. The dweebs hear this, tell him of his brother, and he takes them on their invitation to go with them. The following, is described as Savio acting scenes that go nowhere and trying to act out characters that don't have anything to do with the plot, until finally they get a lead.
And that's the prologue for this fanfiction.
Chapter 1
WARNING: Dumb sex jokes ahead.
Savio is 21. Tsuki is 15.
Savio Tsuki
This was something I worked on and then quit. I was on the pokemopolis forums, back when I was still there, and while reading something, I had an idea that if Pokemon always tries to copy Harley for future rivals, why not another one? This was supposed to be a parody of that.
Training. Talk about training.
Pikachu jumps on Ash's shoulder. They leave.
Then our heroes are walking through the forest. Soon they hear someone huffing and puffing, then they see a large man running through the forest. He stops, with wide eyes and a gaping mouth on his face, like he was surprised or scared of something, while still breathing heavily. Between his huffs he says "Excuse me huff c- huff can you huff huff show me wher- huff where the city… huff Laverre City is huff...?"
"Well," Clemont speaks up "I believe it's 2 miles that way," he points to the left, 2 o'clock direction "then a half mile right."
"Thanks!" he says, then notice Bonnie and stares at her with an angry eyes face, crinkled forehead and such, but still putting his attention on the others.
"We could go with you if you like. What do you guys think? We are heading the same place."
"Sure." says Serena.
"I'd be fine with it." said Ash.
Bonnie whispered "I don't know..." she was wary of him after he gave her that look.
The man shook his head "I'm afraid I can't. I have a very important job to do and I can't-"
"De-denne?" said Dedenne, as it poked its head out of Bonnie's small clutch bag. It stared at the man with an innocent, naïve smile.
"...Is that a Pokémon?" said the man, with a slightly anger mixed with an anxious tone.
"Yes." said Bonnie.
The man reached for a pokéball. "I'd really like to have a battle with you! Please? I have a Bagon that needs the training!" he said, suddenly uncharacteristically cheerful.
"Well... I guess so..."
"Bonnie!" Clemont interrupts "You're not a trainer yet, you don't even know how to battle with Dedenne! And you don't even know this man!"
"..." The man stayed silent.
"Oh hush, Clemont, he challenged me! I need to make good on my honor, don't I?"
"But you can't..."
But Bonnie wouldn't listen to him. "Ready to battle Dedenne?" she said, as she let the mini electric mouse out of its pouch. It hopped out.
"Dedenne!" said Dedenne, making a boasting call.
"But Bonnie we're out in the middle of nowhere and you still don't know-"
While he was talking, the man stepped back and got ready for battle. "Alright!" said the man "Come on out, Bagon!"
And out came a small Bagon. "Bagon!" it cried, itself making a self-boasting call.
"Bagon, Rage!" Bagon tackles the Pokémon with its head. It hit. "Now, use ember!" It shoots embers.
"Why didn't she dodge?" Ash spoke absentmindedly.
"She is only a child. Let her be." said Serena, who took the comment seriously.
"Dedenne, are you okay?!"
"De-den!" it shouted triumphantly.
"Okay, then use thundershock!"
"Dedendenden..." it said as shocks flew from its body to the opponent Pokemon.
"Bagon?! Can you make it out of that?!"
It couldn't, but the small rodents body couldn't release the electricity any longer, leaving Bagon to regain its mobility again.
The man took the chance "Alright, rage!" It tackled again.
"Dodge Dedenne!"
"De-den!" it jumped in the air.
"Now thundershock again!"
The Pokémon shocked the Bagon. It couldn't move again, and this time it fainted.
"How... how could you have such a powerful move like that?" the man couldn't believe it. He returned the small Pokémon to its ball."
"See, Clemont? I didn't do bad! I won my first battle!" said Bonnie, proud of herself."
"Perhaps." he said, and moved back to the man "Sir, is that you're first Pokémon?"
"Yes."
"Ah, that explains it. It owned moves that a young hatchling would normally have."
"Well... I have only just started... my brother is better at this stuff than me... Speaking of which, I think I'll take your offer on going with you guys. Because... I don't have a good sense of direction..."
"I'm Clemont."
"My name's Serena."
"I'm Bonnie."
"Ash."
"Dedenne!"
"Oh, Dedenne, you should go back in your pack." she said, picking the small mouse up and putting it back.
"We should get that up at the Pokémon Center." said Clemont.
"Right," said Savio. "My Bagon could use a rest too." which was an understatement because his Bagon was fainted.
And so they went to Laverre City.
Pokémon Character Idea. I'll just call him Frank for now. (Savio. His brother was named Tsuki or something.)
Okay, since Harley has been such a big hit in Japan and globally, Pokémon has been constantly trying to make copies of him to milk off that popularity, such as Conway, Ursula, and Burgundy. But none of them have yet met his popularity or his top-notch personality. What we need is someone who exaggerates his stereotypical qualities while adding a few quirks of his own.
What we need is a man who has black, long hair, is 6' 9" (180.34 cm) tall, with the build/width of… uh…
wiki/Drake
Drake. He must wear men's casual or some other casual clothing. He speaks with masculine pronouns but also with a high-pitched whiny voice. He occasionally pretends to be different characters, like how Joey from Full House or Team Rocket do, but his acts only vaguely match the situation or not at all. And he sometimes dances like Michael Jackson. (Or, if you are serious about making him evil, downplay the flamboyance and dancing.)
His rival is Bonnie. In his debut episode, he comes across the twerps in an open field. He says hello only to see Bonnie. He quips about how some girl like her pushed him down at school (on accident). He would have just left, angry at her sight, but then Dedenne comes out of her pack. He sees it and then challenges her to a battle. Clemont declines, but the other guy thinks it's because they're afraid of him. He pulls out a Pokémon and it turns out to be a Bagon, and a young one at that. Bonnie accepts his challenge, against what the others say, then gets ready to "defend her honor," looking like an anime action hero. After a (rather quick) battle, he loses. He starts to leave again, but then they find out that he has something to do with the plot of the episode, so he stays with them. At the end of the episode he runs off, saying "Bye Bonnie-boo!", even though he doesn't like her. Then he shows up again sometime when Ash is in the Kalos League. Unlike Harley, he only shows up for 2-3 episodes.
(I have to admit, I've been laughing the whole time I've been typing this.)
He is supposed to be as annoying as possible (but not too annoying, there's only so much I or others as well can take). He should have an IQ of less than Harley, and less than average too, let's see… maybe the same as when Ash grows up? Maybe not that stupid… unless Ash gains 50 IQ points between now and when he grows up... Let's just say that he's below average intelligence. Also I want his only driving force to be that he just hates Bonnie for the way she looks, but doesn't show it much and only battles her once or twice. I think it would be funny to see a tall man rival a 5 year-old girl. I was thinking he might have some angst over his Bagon too, that he's a new trainer wanting his Bagon to be stronger, and someday being a Salamence, but at this moment he's a grown man who lost to a 5 year old.
This was made mainly as a joke. I honestly don't want them to make a character like this as it would hinder their good writing and might stop them from having better ideas than that, unless of course they can't come up with anything better in which case they might as well.
The following is a what-if scenario: where Ash's Kalos gang runs into Team Rocket, and only the work of a professional Stylist and his brother can stop them. Some guy gets arrested, claiming he didn't do whatever it was. And then another guy gets arrested. And so on and so forth. The twerps... eh-hem, I mean Ash, Serena, Clemont, and Bonnie, find themselves in a forest. Then suddenly the police are involved. And then the heroes, or, rather just the dweebs that we watch every so often just to see if something new or original happens, run into a man (of about 15 years of age, casual clothing consisting of tee-shirt and hiking shorts, well-combed black hair, and violet eyes.) He is working on an important case of impersonations, and he really doesn't have the time to talk... unless they're willing to be volunteers? You know what's coming. Some time pasts and we meet a man who... who is strangely... well... have you ever heard of the Coordinator Harley? Think him, but slightly more masculine. And somewhat child-like, and instantly hates Bonnie. He only finds time to battle, after-which he has to hurry off and get to his brother to deliver an important document. The dweebs hear this, tell him of his brother, and he takes them on their invitation to go with them. The following, is described as Savio acting scenes that go nowhere and trying to act out characters that don't have anything to do with the plot, until finally they get a lead.
And that's the prologue for this fanfiction.
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