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EVERYONE: Walking with Gods

Chapter One
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When a boy met a wounded Arceus and nursed it back to life, he didn't expect the pokémon to take a shine to him and take him under its wing.
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Rating: Everyone
-Mild suggestive themes
-Mild violence

Disclaimer: If you're here for grand epic world-building and long-winded thought-out descriptions of environments, then this isn't the story for you. If you're here for fluffy nonsensical character interactions, then I hope I do well at that. Also, prepare for major canon discontinuity.


Chapter One

Ezra was jolted awake by loud shouts and the sound of a crowd moving through the city.

Such occurrences were not uncommon, but the boy couldn't think of any recent celebration that would warrant a drunken mob, which drove him out of his dark corner within the city's labyrinthine alleys.

Like many other children before him, Ezra had ran away from his place of birth as soon as he was able and had taken to life on the streets.

You learned quickly in such an environment, or else you wouldn't last long, and unlike many before him, Ezra was a natural at sneaking around and getting into places children weren't allowed.

Well, technically weren't allowed, as children were expected to help when called on by their seniors whether they were street urchins or well-groomed sons and daughters of those with rank. Such rules were enforced by the magical creatures that had been tamed over the years.

Ezra had long since endeared himself to most of the city's watchdogs and most of their chases were for show, but that didn't spare him from getting caught and punished anyway.

One such creature was a female pichu with a notched ear who had attached herself to him and followed him everywhere.

Shadowing the crowd, Ezra picked up a few interesting bits of information.

"Did you hear? Damos killed Arceus and ensured the survival of our city!"

Arceus was a name the boy had heard before. Legends had told of its generosity that had allowed the city to flourish in the first place and the thought of turning on such a benefactor didn't sit well in the boy's gut. The fact Pichu bristled on his shoulder showed she didn't like it either and Ezra gently rubbed her notched ear to soothe her.

"And it's now buried in the old ruins."

"Good riddance. Now we can focus on getting the crops in and get ready for winter..."

Ezra broke off from shadowing the mob and scampered up a nearby wall, taking to the rooftops for faster traversal. He glanced up at the palace that dominated the eastern skyline before turning his back on it to head in the direction of the old palace.

Which lay outside the city walls, within the nearby forest that had long since swallowed it.

Venturing outside the city limits - especially after dark - was dangerous enough without either an armed guard or a creature to protect you. Ezra leaped into the branches of a tree growing by the wall without a second thought and vanished into the gloom.

Plunging into the forest, Ezra again clambered to a higher level, since most of the larger dangerous creatures couldn't climb the thin trees and the ones living in the leaves were asleep.

He paused outside a cave when Pichu let out a squeak. Sounds emanated from within and Ezra glanced at Pichu, who nodded encouragingly.

Entering the cave, Ezra noticed the opening had been widened, with loose bits of rubble littering the floor. Carefully brushing a foot along the ground to avoid stepping on any sharp rocks, Ezra froze as he stepped in something warm and wet. The scent of blood filled his nostrils and he gulped.

Venturing forward seemed less and less fun, but Pichu shocked him when he turned to leave.

"I don't want to become lunch," he hissed at the mouse, who was emitting a soft yellow glow in the gloom. She rolled her eyes and motioned for him to continue forward.

Ezra hesitated before giving in to his curiosity, going further.

He rounded a corner and stopped, staring at the scene in front of him.

A massive four-legged creature lay on a bed of moss, sides rising and falling slowly as it breathed. Its body was covered in all manner of wounds - some scabbed over, others still oozing blood.

The most prominent feature of the creature was a golden ring around its middle, one Ezra recognized from pictures.

"Arceus..." he breathed, awestruck.

The creature stirred at his voice and Ezra ducked back around the corner, hands clasped over his traitorous mouth. To his horror, Pichu jumped off his shoulder and scampered towards Arceus, chattering excitedly.

"You don't need to tell me, little one. I knew he was there the moment he set foot in this cave. Come out of hiding, child. You have nothing to fear from me anyway. If you're here to kill me, I merely ask that you make it as quick and painless as you can."

Ezra rubbed his head as a voice sounded within it. He wasn't sure whether it was male or female, young or old. It was surprisingly relaxed and not at all what he expected.

Slowly stepping into view, Ezra moved carefully, hands out to his sides to show he was unarmed. It was a trick he'd picked up from the city's creature tamers, who found it easier to approach them if you didn't show any aggressi-

"You look like an idiot."

Ezra straightened up, scowling. "Oi!"

Arceus slowly lifted its head and looked at him. The glowing red eyes bored into the child before slowly blinking.

"A child? They send a child to finish me off? I'd be offended if I wasn't so tired."

Pichu clambered onto Arceus' body and licked at one of its wounds gently. Ezra frowned and took a step forward.

"How can I help you?"

The question hung in the air and Arceus blinked in surprise.

"Help? Why would you help me?"

"You're hurt! Why wouldn't I help you?" Ezra said, taking another step.

"You are a human, like the one that tried to kill me."

"Damos?" Ezra asked, remembering the name one townsperson had uttered.

"No, not him. It was...someone else. Can't really think straight at the moment."

Ezra reached Arceus' side and frowned. "How did you get here, anyway?"

Arceus sighed and winced in pain, shifting on the moss. "My children brought me here and went off to gather berries. Kinda surprised they let you in here, actually."

Its gaze then fell on the Pichu climbing on it.

"Ah, no wonder. She was with you."

"What's she got to do with it?" Ezra asked.

"She doesn't pick just anyone to follow. There's something about you she likes and the rest know better than to argue with her."

The ground suddenly erupted with several small geysers of dirt and several bidoof and another pichu climbed out of the holes, holding all manner of berries. They glanced at Ezra, then at Pichu, then proceeded to ignore him, depositing their berries within reach of Arceus' head. The other pichu ran up to the notch-eared one and Ezra noticed its coat was a darker shade of yellow than the other.

Arceus ate a few berries and relaxed, sighing softly before it glanced at Ezra.

"Well, boy, what are you going to do now? Lead your kin here to kill me before I get my strength back?"

"Don't lump me in with them," Ezra said, crossing his arms. "I don't like them any more than you do."

Arceus glanced at the various bruises covering the boy's limbs and after a moment, it pushed some berries his way.

"Eat."

Ezra blinked in surprise before taking a Sitrus berry. Biting into it, he winced as the flavor flooded his mouth and he almost spat it out. He wasn't used to such flavor and it took him a few seconds to swallow it. Catching his breath, he finished the berry and grabbed another and in a few minutes had eaten three more.

"Most odd," Arceus said, watching as the boy's head drooped from a mixture of good food, the warm interior of the cave and exhaustion. "Who are you?"

But the boy had already fallen asleep and didn't answer.

-

"Do you have a name, boy?" Arceus asked.

The child looked up from where it was helping the spiky-eared pichu grind some berries into a mixture with a frown.

"I do, but nobody ever uses it," he said with a shake of his head as the pichu offered him a berry.

"Well, it would be nice to call you something other than 'boy' or 'you'," Arceus said, wincing as it shifted on its bedding.

The boy carried a few bowls of mashed berries over to the pokémon and watched carefully as it licked the bowls clean, yet seemed hesitant to speak.

Arceus simply gazed at the young human, who had risked the wrath of his kinsmen by helping the pokémon they had sworn to destroy.

"Most people just call me Ezra," the boy said after Arceus had finished eating. Taking the bowls, he said down and began cleaning them with the help of a totodile and cyndaquil. Giving the cleaned dishes to a pikachu-colored pichu, the boy then glanced at Arceus, who had taken on a thoughtful look.

"Do they treat you well?" Arceus asked. The boy went still, arms resting on his knees.

"They treat me the same as the other dregs of society. Children are ignored, but are still expected to help with whatever needs doing that can't be handled by the creatures."

"Pokémon," Arceus corrected absently, mind churning.

"Poké...mon?" the boy asked, sounding it out slowly. "Does that mean anything?"

Arceus chuckled softly. "Some time, many centuries from now, you'll be able to carry those creatures you call monsters in your pockets."

The boy snorted in disbelief. "I do not believe you." He glanced at the two pichu and totodile. "They'd never be able to fit."

Arceus smiled and extended a leg towards the child. "Would you like to leave this place and come with me to my home?"

The boy stared at Arceus with a frown, before turning away, drawing his knees to his chest.

Time passed and the sun slowly sank, bathing the world in a warm amber glow.

The boy hadn't moved and Arceus hadn't repeated its question.

Finally, the boy exhaled and flopped onto his back, staring up at the sky.

"Yeah," he said softly. "I'd like that very much."

Arceus shivered violently and the boy paused his activities and stared at it curiously.

"What's-?"

Arceus abruptly vanished and the boy stood up in alarm.

"Arceus?!"

A moment later, Arceus reappeared, but...

The boy's legs failed him and he sat down hard.

The golden ring around Arceus' body was gone and the pokémon was covered in wounds, ranging from gouges to scratches.

"Well," Arceus said bitterly. "There's that settled."

It blinked and shook its head, glowing briefly as it healed itself. "Mhhh...feels so good to have my power back," it said happily, turning towards the boy. Seeing the state the child was in, the mirth melted from Arceus like water off a piplup. "What's wrong?"

"What was that?!" the boy cried, throwing his arms wide. "You get up all panicked, then poof, you vanish before coming back almost instantly - what happened?!"

"Oh. Cyrus remade reality and had to be smacked around a bit before things settled down."

The boy stared at Arceus in disbelief.

"You're an idiot," the boy grumbled.

Arceus embraced the child and nuzzled him tenderly. "Sorry for doing that, but it would've been far too dangerous to have had you by my side. Things got a little dicey and I had to remove my limiter to handle it."

The boy glanced at Arceus' bare body and frowned. "Limiter?"

"It's what keeps my phenomenal cosmic power in check, otherwise I'd probably be erasing things and making new universes every time I sneezed or whatever."

"I've never seen you sneeze," the boy said doubtfully.

"That's how you know it's working," Arceus said, nuzzling the child's head.

"Sod off," the boy grumbled, pushing Arceus' nose away from his hair. "So...uh...now that you don't have it-"

He blinked and then stared at the gleaming golden ring that adorned Arceus' body once more.

"Show off," the boy growled, before getting a thoughtful look on his face. "So, when you say "remade reality..." What do you mean by that?"

"Cyrus was a man who wanted to create a perfect world for himself. He gathered Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, Azelf, Uxie and Mesprit and did just that, but in doing so, caused all of reality itself to connect, opening up holes to them. Sure, it meant he got a lot of support from alternate versions of himself, but it also meant fifty times that number came through to stop him. It pretty chaotic and..." Arceus faltered before continuing. "Some universes were flat-out destroyed."

The boy stared at his hands, flexing them. "Would we have known?"

"I do not know."

"But it's over. Cyrus is gone, right?"

Arceus nodded and the boy smiled.

"So there's no need to worry about it any more."

"It's not that simple..."

Arceus trailed off when it got a look at the boy's face and noticed the wetness in the child's eyes.

"No...it's not something we need to trouble ourselves with. We came out relatively unscathed and that is what's important."

The child grinned and lifted his hands towards Arceus' face.

Rolling its eyes, Arceus lowered its head to the boy's waiting grasp and gave the boy a light nudge, receiving a kiss in return.

"I'm just glad you're back," the boy said. "Please don't do that again. Not without telling me first."

"I promise."

There were times when Arceus descended from the Hall of Origin to mingle with humans, disguising itself as one of them to observe them.

A few times, it had taken the boy along with itself and they passed themselves off as a father and son while they went around whatever town they decided to visit.

During one of their earlier trips, Arceus had made a startling discovery about the boy.

He had spent so long among pokémon that he didn't know how to interact with humans, to the point he didn't even speak the same language as they did. Arceus was careful to point that out during subsequent visits and Arceus had taken some time to educate the child in the basics of human behavior.

"Running at them excitedly, jumping onto them, and kissing them is not how you greet them," Arceus had explained with some amusement.

The boy had pouted and crossed his arms. "But that's boring. Why are humans so strict about physical boundaries?"

Arceus paused, frowning. "Social norms, such as hygiene and nobility status probably had something to do with it. The latter was more prevalent in the older eras and I do believe they've more-or-less phased that aspect out while enforcing the former. It's also about manners."

The boy rolled onto his back and lifted his arms above his head to touch Arceus' legs. "That's a shame. You learn so much about someone via physical touch and proximity."

"Unfortunately, humans have evolved beyond such understanding," Arceus said sadly. "Whether or not it was for the better...varies from person to person, and pokémon to pokémon."

"Well then," the boy declared. "From this day forth, I am a human no longer!"

Arceus blinked before shaking its head in amusement. "You are, of course, welcome to such thinking. You'll still have to abide by humanity's laws though."

The boy scowled. "But I'm not a human and their laws don't apply to me."

"They do," Arceus said sharply, causing the boy to blink at the tone shift. "There are laws in place to protect humans and pokémon alike. One of them does allow a human to use their pokémon to defend themselves if they feel threatened."

"Oh," the boy replied, staring up into Arceus' eyes. He looked away, exhaling hard before he took a breath and nodded. "Alright," he said cheerfully. "I can do that, at least."

Arceus nodded and gave the boy a nuzzle, who gave his nose a kiss and a hug in return.

Arceus and Mew watched as the boy scampered around the Hall of Origin, climbing all over the various other inhabitants and chattering away a mile a minute.

"You really know how to pick them," Mew remarked. "Haven't seen the Hall this lively since...I wanna say...the Time Crash?"

"We were lucky to come out of that relatively unscathed," Arceus said. "That boy is the result of the Crash, which caused my run-in with Marcus Gishin to go...differently."

"How so?" Mew asked curiously.

"Well, I didn't go to sleep for thousands of years, for one," Arceus said. "Instead, I was rescued by pokémon and nursed back to health by that child."

"So that's where you were these past weeks. And you brought him here," Mew noted. "Why?"

Arceus watched as the boy waved his arms animatedly, talking to Dialga about something or other and then glanced at Mew. "His living conditions were...less than ideal. No parents or support, no roof over his head, days without eating..."

"So you bring him here, where there's even less support and all those other things you mentioned," Mew said in disbelief. "I will ask again: why?"

Arceus smiled slightly as the boy glanced in its direction and grinned.

"I was given a chance to make someone happy and took it," Arceus murmured.

Mew stared at the Alpha Pokémon, eyes narrowed. "You...almost sound...infatuated with him," it said slowly.

Arceus blinked in surprise. Then it took a moment to think about the situation. "You may be right."

"People and pokémon are gonna talk," Mew warned. "Some will probably be uneasy about a relationship between a pokémon and one of its creations."

"Relationship?" Arceus said with a bark of laughter. "Never gonna happen."

"Of course, you say that now..." Mew said.

"I have a relationship with all of my creations," Arceus said cooly.

Mew raised its paws defensively. "I'm not judging you. You do whatever makes you happy, and if that child is able to make you laugh and smile, the least I can do is support you both."

"Thank you. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to prevent my ward from becoming a time traveler. DIALGA!"

Arceus woke up at a startled yelp and opened its eyes to see the boy backpedaling away from a hovering mass of glitched geometry.

"'M, I'd appreciate it if you didn't terrorize my ward," Arceus said politely.

The mass of glitches paused before a screaming face came to the surface and let out a wheezing gasp of laughter.

"Ward? Are you joking? What need does a god have for a ward?"

"He saved my life," Arceus said simply, causing the hovering error to go silent in thought.

Arceus glanced down at the child hiding behind its leg and smiled. "Pay 'M no heed. It's merely a curiosity."

'M morphed into an odd bird with pale purple/gray feathers and chuckled. "A curiosity, indeed! Understatement of the century there, my dear Arceus."

"That's the name of the game when it comes to you," Arceus replied. "What brings you here?"

The bird-type shrugged. "Was in the area and decided to drop by." It peered at the boy curiously, tilting its head. "Never thought you'd pick one of them up though. How did he save your life, O Invincible One?"

Arceus ignored the barb and gently pushed the child forward. "When Marcus betrayed me, I was buried. I was dug out by pokémon and carried to safety and then this child found me. He ignored the orders of his kind to care for me and helped me regain my strength."

"And you repaid him by stealing him away?" 'M said shrewdly.

"I came because Arceus offered me a better life!" the boy said defensively.

"Ah, it speaks!" 'M cackled. "Splendid, splendid. And quite quick to leap to your side," it added. "How sweet."

The boy's ears heated and he glanced at Arceus before looking back at 'M, who flapped its wings.

"Well, it's been nice seeing you again. Unfortunately, I've got places to be and not a lot of time to get there before the window closes, so if you'll excuse me..."

The bird flapped its wings before forming back into a shapeless mass before it twisted out of existence.

The boy sat down and leaned against Arceus. "I didn't understand any of that."

Arceus sighed heavily. "Neither do I, honestly. 'M is a byproduct of the time crash from a while ago and it's been poking around seeing what's going on in different universes. It's merely a force of curiosity and wants to know everything. Whether or not it's malevolent...depends on the universe, I suspect."

The boy stroked Arceus' leg lightly and raised an eyebrow. "So it takes on aspects of the universe it currently occupies? That'd explain the odd bird form, I suppose. Kinda wanna see what other forms it takes now. Something to ask next time it pops up, I guess."

Arceus grimaced, not really looking forward to it.

The boy stared at the gift Arceus had gotten him curiously.

"A poké ball?" he said in surprise. "Whatever for?"

Arceus knelt in front of the boy, leaning down to nuzzle him affectionately.

"I do it as...a way of solidifying our bond," Arceus said.

The boy stared down at the ball again, turning it over in his hands. He then looked up at Arceus with a smile. "I..." He ducked his head, ears burning. "I'm not entirely sure what to say here."

"An exchange of vows, usually. At least, I think that is the human equivalent to what is happening here."

"I see," the boy murmured, resting his head against Arceus'.

I am here for you and nobody else.
When I smell your scent I'll always melt.
My heart is in your hands.
Nobody can take care of it like you can.
From this day forward,
You shall not walk alone.
My heart will be your shelter,
And my arms will be your home.


My promise to you is simple,

I'll endure until the end.
I'll be your one and only,
Your lover and your friend,
I'll listen and I'll nurture,
I'll fight and I'll be true.
I'll do my equal share and I will never give up on you.


I'll try to do my very best,
To fulfil your every need.
I'll walk beside you hand in hand,
I'll help you to succeed.
I'll be your constant equal,
I'll give you room to grow,
I'll tend to you when you are sick,
Build you up when you are low.

I stand before these witnesses,
And I say unto you,
No matter what hard times we face,
Our love will make it through.


The boy touched the poké ball to Arceus' forehead and the Alpha Pokémon dissolved into pure white light. The ball wobbled for a few seconds before it beeped successfully.

The boy cradled the poké ball to his chest before he kissed it and opened it.

Arceus curled its neck around the boy and the two shared their thoughts with one another on a level only they could understand.

Arceus was many things.

Infallible was not one of them.

The being paced back and forth in front of a store, staring at the various knickknacks on display in the large window.

What to get for its partner?

The young boy never asked for anything, seemingly content with watching Arceus work, offering his own suggestions now and again whenever a problem caught the Alpha Pokémon's attention.

Toys and clothing were meaningless. The boy had all the playmates he could ever hope for among the Legendary and Mythical pokémon that called the Hall of Origin their home.

Arceus paused, head tilted.

Perhaps that was the answer.

Teleporting, Arceus appeared back in the Hall.

Looking around, it spotted the boy deep in conversation with Manaphy and Lugia, balancing Phione on his head while doing so.

Arceus took a moment to watch, admiring the boy's smile, which came easily and naturally to his face. The boy's eyes landed on Arceus and his smile turned radiant.

Handing Phione to Manaphy, he made his way to Arceus and hugged the pokémon's leg. Arceus lifted the boy onto its back and turned its head to look at him.

"Dare I ask what you were plotting with those two?" Arceus asked, giving the boy a nuzzle.

"We were discussing the possibility of organizing a get-together. Manaphy hasn't visited Lugia in a while and they've finally managed to coordinate their schedules for a meeting," the boy said.

"Oh," Arceus said, taken aback. The boy frowned briefly, touching Arceus' neck.

"What's wrong?"

Arceus sighed before gazing at Manaphy and Lugia. "Well...I was planning on taking you to the temple of the sea for our anniversary, but if you were already making plans..."

"Ah," the boy said. "I see. I'm sorry."

He leaned against Arceus and stroked its neck tenderly. "Would it help if I said I don't care where we go as long as you're there with me?"

Arceus smiled, nuzzling the boy's hair affectionately. "It helps, even if it's quite a silly sentiment."

"There's nothing wrong with the classics."
 
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Hello there, I thought I would give you a review.


When a boy met a wounded Arceus and nursed it back to life, he didn't expect the pokémon to take a shine to him and take him under its wing.
Interesting premise. This certainly isn't something I've seen often, a fic focusing on Arceus's grateful side.

Like many other children before him, Ezra had ran away from his place of birth as soon as he was able and had taken to life on the streets.
You're establishing the human protagonist a fair deal with this as it is, but I would have liked a little bit more detail at this time on why Ezra would do what he and these "other children before him" have done. Just my personal thoughts.

Well, technically weren't allowed, as children were expected to help when called on by their seniors whether they were street urchins or well-groomed sons and daughters of those with rank.
Sounds accurate enough, even if I'm not a leading historian this is an assumption I would have made myself.

Ezra had long since endeared himself to most of the city's watchdogs and most of their chases were for show
Not bad there, it really endears Ezra a bit to me as well. I've been given the impression that he's a likeable enough kid.

"Did you hear? Damos killed Arceus and ensured the survival of our city!"
This is the clincher, when your fic really grasped my interest with both hands. I happen to have watched the Pokémon movie in question.
With this one statement you gave me your setting so very well; the unaltered ancient past from M12.

Arceus was a name the boy had heard before. Legends had told of its generosity that had allowed the city to flourish in the first place and the thought of turning on such a benefactor didn't sit well in the boy's gut.
Again, a good look into what makes Ezra tick. You're doing a good job of characterizing him so far.

Slowly stepping into view, Ezra moved carefully, hands out to his sides to show he was unarmed. It was a trick he'd picked up from the city's creature tamers, who found it easier to approach them if you didn't show any aggressi-

"You look like an idiot."
No punches pulled there, though I do get why Arceus is a bit cross. Seemingly being betrayed will do that to someone.

Arceus sighed and winced in pain, shifting on the moss. "My children brought me here and went off to gather berries. Kinda surprised they let you in here, actually."

Its gaze then fell on the Pichu climbing on it.

"Ah, no wonder. She was with you."

"What's she got to do with it?" Ezra asked.

"She doesn't pick just anyone to follow. There's something about you she likes and the rest know better than to argue with her."
I rather liked this part, your setting up of that special Pichu as a head figure amongst all of the Pokémon trying to help Arceus was a nice way to explain why Ezra was even allowed in here. I didn't think she'd be this hugely important to your plot.

"Well, boy, what are you going to do now? Lead your kin here to kill me before I get my strength back?"

"Don't lump me in with them," Ezra said, crossing his arms. "I don't like them any more than you do."

Arceus glanced at the various bruises covering the boy's limbs
"Do you have a name, boy?" Arceus asked.

The child looked up from where it was helping the spiky-eared pichu grind some berries into a mixture with a frown.

"I do, but nobody ever uses it," he said with a shake of his head as the pichu offered him a berry.

"Well, it would be nice to call you something other than 'boy' or 'you'," Arceus said
These two pieces go hand in hand towards explaining a great deal more about Ezra, an outcast and a street urchin, and how he feels towards his own kind. Both of them tell me that he's led a difficult life already; not the sort of stuff any child should deserve to endure.
One little thing though, I'm the sort who prefers to capitalize the Pokémon's species names. Don't let it bother you though, I'm lax about it Moving along now!

I had to remove my limiter to handle it."

The boy glanced at Arceus' bare body and frowned. "Limiter?"

"It's what keeps my phenomenal cosmic power in check
Not once had I ever wondered what the big gold ring around Arceus's body actually was, I don't ordinarily throw wobblers regarding Pokémon designs. I rather like how you described it.

During one of their earlier trips, Arceus had made a startling discovery about the boy.

He had spent so long among pokémon that he didn't know how to interact with humans
If it were me, I would have put these in the same paragraph.

"That boy is the result of the Crash, which caused my run-in with Marcus Gishin to go...differently."

"How so?" Mew asked curiously.

"Well, I didn't go to sleep for thousands of years, for one," Arceus said. "Instead, I was rescued by pokémon and nursed back to health by that child."
So it's like a sort of alternate timeline thing? I suppose that does answer my unasked question of "What caused Arceus to go on a vengeful rampage many millennia later if Ezra had beaten Ash and company to the punch?".

"His living conditions were...less than ideal. No parents or support, no roof over his head, days without eating..."
I like how Arceus has clearly taken pity on Ezra for the horrible hand of cards he's been dealt by life.

The boy sat down and leaned against Arceus. "I didn't understand any of that."

Arceus sighed heavily. "Neither do I, honestly. 'M is a byproduct of the time crash from a while ago and it's been poking around seeing what's going on in different universes. It's merely a force of curiosity and wants to know everything. Whether or not it's malevolent...depends on the universe, I suspect."

The boy stroked Arceus' leg lightly and raised an eyebrow. "So it takes on aspects of the universe it currently occupies? That'd explain the odd bird form, I suppose. Kinda wanna see what other forms it takes now. Something to ask next time it pops up, I guess."
Nice! Glitch Pokémon from generations of old aren't something I spare a lot of thought towards, but I really, seriously do love how you've integrated 'M into your story and even bring up an in-story reason why these glitchy Pokémon would look different between Gen I games. I've got to applaud this.

"A poké ball?" he said in surprise. "Whatever for?"

Arceus knelt in front of the boy, leaning down to nuzzle him affectionately.

"I do it as...a way of solidifying our bond," Arceus said.

The boy stared down at the ball again, turning it over in his hands. He then looked up at Arceus with a smile. "I..." He ducked his head, ears burning. "I'm not entirely sure what to say here."

"An exchange of vows, usually. At least, I think that is the human equivalent to what is happening here."

"I see," the boy murmured, resting his head against Arceus'.

I am here for you and nobody else.
When I smell your scent I'll always melt.
My heart is in your hands.
Nobody can take care of it like you can.
From this day forward,
You shall not walk alone.
My heart will be your shelter,
And my arms will be your home.


My promise to you is simple,

I'll endure until the end.
I'll be your one and only,
Your lover and your friend,
I'll listen and I'll nurture,
I'll fight and I'll be true.
I'll do my equal share and I will never give up on you.


I'll try to do my very best,
To fulfil your every need.
I'll walk beside you hand in hand,
I'll help you to succeed.
I'll be your constant equal,
I'll give you room to grow,
I'll tend to you when you are sick,
Build you up when you are low.

I stand before these witnesses,
And I say unto you,
No matter what hard times we face,
Our love will make it through.


The boy touched the poké ball to Arceus' forehead and the Alpha Pokémon dissolved into pure white light. The ball wobbled for a few seconds before it beeped successfully.
This is perhaps the best way for anyone to actually catch an Arceus with a Poké Ball in any fanfiction I've ever seen. The general atmosphere of this whole scene and how you've made it sound like some sort of official union like a marriage were both very nice touches. It makes a nice change from the game version of "You threw a Master Ball!".


Overall... What can I say? I was mildly skeptical when Arceus begun to show more than platonic feelings towards Ezra since this creature is clearly eons older, but the story itself is rather sweet. My biggest con with this might be your use of line breaks. There's lots of single line paragraphs throughout this and it kinda feels unnecessary.

Another, lesser thing, was how the story seemed to suddenly skip forward in time or location in a few instances without anything telling me, which did leave me a bit confused once or twice. This is something I do with a "~" on center alignment to tell the readers when there's a change in scene going on.

Aside from these, I really did like what I was reading. Nice work!
 
Overall... What can I say? I was mildly skeptical when Arceus begun to show more than platonic feelings towards Ezra since this creature is clearly eons older, but the story itself is rather sweet. My biggest con with this might be your use of line breaks. There's lots of single line paragraphs throughout this and it kinda feels unnecessary.

Another, lesser thing, was how the story seemed to suddenly skip forward in time or location in a few instances without anything telling me, which did leave me a bit confused once or twice. This is something I do with a "~" on center alignment to tell the readers when there's a change in scene going on.

Aside from these, I really did like what I was reading. Nice work!
Thank you for your feedback

As for the multitude of single-line pragraphs...well, I've never been good with descriptions, which leads to more breaks when something new pops up, so sorry for that; it'll be common going forward

Get used to 'suddenly skipping forward in time' because that's how I tend to write my scenes because my mind likes to leap from one thought to the next without thinking how they got there - anachronistic order is in full effect and in the future, I may go back and fill in some of the blanks

Your interest in the early period may cause me to go back and explore that area a little more in future chapters though and now I kinda feel bad for leaving it all behind initially
This is really good! The relationship with Arceus and the boy was really well developed and really sweet.
Thank you

This came about because I haven't seen many (or any, given my rather brief forays into such fanfiction) fics showing off a more platonic relationship between Arceus and whomever catches their fancy (more often than not having Arceus be female, and...ergh - let's just they're rarely done well, so I decided to go with the old 'if you want something done right, do it yourself' route)
 
Chapter Two
Chapter Two

"Interesting."

Ezra blinked, pulling his head out of the clouds to see Arceus conversing with the notch-eared Pichu.

"What?" Ezra asked, walking over and scanning Arceus with a critical eye. The pokémon seemed to be recovering nicely and would probably be able to walk soon.

"According to this little one, you don't have any Aura."

Ezra tilted his head. "What's that?"

"It's...kinda like an energy field, I guess," Arceus said. "With the right potential and training, some people and pokémon can tap into and manipulate it in various ways. Usually, every living thing - and some not - has Aura in some way, shape or form, but you...don't."

"So I'm dead then," Ezra said, rubbing his arms.

"Hardly," Arceus said dryly. "It's more like there's a wall between you and the world, in a way."

Ezra scrunched his nose. "Can't say I really care about things like that. As long as I can do what I like, I'm happy." His face fell. "Although I can't do that here, because I'm not old enough."

"And what is it that you want to do?" Arceus asked.

Ezra's eyes lit up. "I want to see the world!" he said, flinging his hands up. "I want to meet new pokémon! I want to be free."

Arceus folded its legs under itself, regarding the boy silently.

Ezra's ears heated up and he looked away. "A silly little kid's dream," he said with a sheepish grin.

"My offer still stands," Arceus said.

Ezra nodded and left to find more berries.

-

Ezra clung to the ring around Arceus' body as they flew through the air.

Arceus - now sufficiently recovered - had explained to the boy that every few centuries it went all over the world to see how things were going and had been side-tracked with the fiasco in Sinnoh on the way to its next stop, in a region across the ocean from the landmass Michina Village had been in.

Intrigued, Ezra had asked to come along, having decided to take Arceus up on its offer of taking him away from his old life. Pichu and her compatriots had been sad to see him go, and Exra had been sorely tempted to ask if she had wanted to come with him, but he had refrained, knowing she'd be much better off with her friends and family.

Ezra was now mildly starting to regret his choice. He hadn't been told leaving the ground would be involved and the boy suspected Arceus had withheld that tidbit on purpose.

"Climb on and hold on," had been the only warning he'd received before they'd taken flight.

Yet the view from on high was something Ezra couldn't ignore and he stared slack-jawed as the planet unfolded beneath them.

The boy had thought the city streets that he had grown up in were never-ending, but once he saw the endless blue and green world below, he realized he'd grown up caged.

Pushing those thoughts away, Ezra felt Arceus start to descend and he watched the ground zoom up to meet them.

Moments before Ezra was sure they'd splat against the ground, Arceus shed its momentum and trotted to a halt.

It shook itself, inadvertently causing Ezra to topple to the ground in a heap with a yelp of surprise and Arceus blinked in surprise before craning its head down to nose at the prone boy.

"Sorry about that. Force of habit."

Ezra's hand lightly pushed the inquisitive snout aside and he pushed himself up, bracing himself on his elbows.

"I'm fine," the boy said, getting his legs under him. He tried taking a step and almost fell again before Arceus' leg arrested his topple. Gripping it, Ezra shook his legs to get the feeling back in them and grimaced.

"You haven't ever ridden a pokémon before, have you?" Arceus asked.

"Like that? No," Ezra said, enjoying the feeling of life coming back to his legs before he looked around. "Where are we?"

"Kalos," Arceus replied. "At least, that's what the locals call it."

"Arceus!"

Ezra jumped in surprise as a massive red and black bird dropped out of the sky, landing on the ground before it spread its wings and bowed its head.

"Welcome back to our humble land. How was your trip?"

"It was uneventful, Yveltal," Arceus replied, before glancing at Ezra. "Well, mostly."

Yveltal tilted its head before focusing on the boy. "What's this? A human? How did this come about?"

"I'll tell you once Xerneas joins us," Arceus said.

Yveltal hesitated before glancing at the mountains.

"What happened?" Arceus asked.

Yveltal shook its head. "Nothing bad. She's currently helping a Carbink colony with its sacred diamond."

Arceus nodded in understanding. "I see."

Ezra stared at the giant pokémon in awe before reaching out to touch it. Arceus firmly pushed him back.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you."

"Why not?" Ezra said with a scowl.

"If anything living touches me, it dies," Yveltal said.

Ezra's hand snapped back to his chest and he cradled it, squeezing his fingers. His eyes roamed over the pokémon and then he noticed the dead patch of grass it was sitting in.

"Ah, I see," Ezra said.

"Arceus~!" came a new voice, shortly followed by a large blue deer-like pokémon trotting into view.

"Xerneas," Arceus said warmly. "It's good to see you."

The two exchanged nuzzles before Xerneas noticed Ezra.

"Oh my, you didn't tell me you had a son!"

Ezra's face darkened and Arceus shook its head.

"He is not my son. Merely a human who helped me out in a tight spot."

Both Yveltal and Xerneas looked alarmed.

"I think it's time you told us what kept you," Xerneas said, finding her voice first.

"Gladly," Arceus said. "Shall we walk?"

-

Arceus finished its story and Yveltal shook its head. The Destruction pokémon had perched on Arceus' back, one of the few places it could sit without leaving a trail of death behind it.

Xerneas had Ezra riding on her back and the boy stroked her silken fur, causing the deer to chuckle.

"Not something you feel every day, is it?" she asked, glancing back at him with a smile.

Ezra's ears warmed and he shook his head. "No. Usually it's rough stuff," he said, plucking at his coarse shirt.

"I've noticed," Xerneas replied dryly. She giggled as Ezra shifted uncomfortably on her back and shook her head. "Don't worry about it. Your butt is hardly any rougher than Yveltal's talons."

"...Thanks?" a bewildered Ezra replied.

Watching them, Yveltal rolled his eyes. "Typical," he muttered.

Arceus raised an eyebrow. "Do I detect a hint of jealousy in your tone?"

"N-no," Yveltal said, looking away. Tucking his wings close, he pulled his neck in and failed miserably at not looking longingly at Xerneas.

"You know you'd lose nothing by asking, right?" Arceus pointed out gently.

"Except if she rejects me, I have to live with that for eternity," Yveltal said gloomily.

"Truly, being you is suffering," Arceus said dryly. "Work up the nerve by the next time I come 'round or I'll ask her for you myself."

As Yveltal sputtered indignantly, Arceus gazed around the landscape.

"I see you and Xerneas have been through a few cycles since my last visit. How have those gone?"

Composing himself, Yveltal idly preened a wing. "Usually uneventful. The Cells warn us of any major issues and Zygarde answers those we can't get to in time ourselves."

"Ah, Zygarde," Arceus mused. "Rarely around when I pass through. How have they been?"

"As stuck up as ever," Yveltal said bitterly, before taking on a more thoughtful tone. "Well, not entirely... The red core has been studying humans a little more. Especially since they started spreading out and making new towns and villages. Blue has been keeping its distance and I'm not sure where or what Purple, White and Black have been up to."

"A pity," Arceus said. "Perhaps I shall have to arrange a meeting or look for them myself one of these days."

"With or without your newest addition?" Yveltal asked, once again looking at Xerneas.

"With," Arceus said. "He's been quite eager to get away from Sinnoh and he could do with more interactions with...anyone, really."

"Hm..." Yveltal said. "Perhaps some day you can bring him back and we can have a proper get-together."

"I'm sorry I can't stay," Arceus said. "Plenty of work to do."

"No need to worry," Yveltal replied with a wave of its wing. "Go, we'll keep an eye on Kalos in your absence."

"Thank you," Arceus said. Raising its voice, it called to Ezra.

Ezra reluctantly dropped off Xerneas' back, giving her one last pat on the way down.

"Before you go, Ezra," Xerneas said. "I have a gift for you."

Ezra turned to look up at her and she lowered her head before pressing her muzzle to the boy's forehead. He went stiff, eyes wide and Xerneas' horns lit up in a myriad of colors.

Arceus watched the proceedings closely, surprised.

The glow faded and Ezra gasped, stumbling back. Catching his breath, he stared at Xerneas, who blinked shyly at him.

"I...uh... Thank you," he said, dipping his head.

"I hope you enjoy it," Xerneas said, before glancing at Arceus, who inclined its head and she relaxed with a smile. "Come back any time."

Ezra nodded and walked back to Arceus, who knelt down so he could climb up. Waving farewell to the two Kalosian pokémon, Arceus and Ezra leaped back into the sky and continued on.

-

Arceus poked around the Hall of Origin and scowled, pushing its temper down even as its frustration grew.

"You realize, Ezra, that hiding from me is pointless?" Arceus asked as it walked past ornate pillars that lined the walls. "Now, please, come out so we can talk face-to-face."

The Alpha Pokémon was greeted with silence and Arceus was glad it had ordered all of its children out of the Hall until further notice, because this was starting to become absurd.

"Very well."

The entire place turned translucent, revealing Ezra's hiding place. The boy leaped to his feet and glared at Arceus, arms folded tightly over his chest.

Arceus sat down where it was and merely stared at the boy.

Time didn't pass in the Hall unless Arceus willed it and it was more than willing to keep the place in stasis until-

"Fine," Ezra seethed, baring his teeth. He stalked over to Arceus and sat down, crossing his legs.

The expression on his face made Arceus tilt its head.

"You look like an idiot," it said mildly.

Ezra lifted his chin stubbornly, refusing to reply.

"So you don't like being ordered around," Arceus said after a few more moments. "Even more so if it's someone related to you."

Arceus glowed for a moment before taking on the shape of an older man. Arceus had done some guesswork and approximated what Ezra's father could have looked like and judging from the boy's expression, it had succeeded far too well.

"Talking about it helps," Arceus said gently.

"There's nothing to talk about," Ezra said, looking anywhere but at the figure in front of him. Arceus subtly manipulated the laws of physics so that it was always in Ezra's vision and the boy closed his eyes before opening them, as Arceus had turned his eyelids transparent.

"Screw you," Ezra grumbled.

Arceus raised its eyebrows. "The implications of such a statement while I am in this form are many."

A brief crack formed in the mask the boy was wearing and Arceus saw a glimpse of the child's life before they had met and Arceus winced internally.

Ezra's shoulders slumped and he sighed, idly dragging a hand down his face with enough force to leave a trail.

"With how my life was, is it any wonder why I preferred the company of pokémon?" Ezra asked, staring at his hand before gingerly touching his face, flinching at the contact with a frown.

Arceus didn't say anything and the boy switched his attention to his feet before drawing them close, wrapping his arms around his legs and resting his chin on his knees.

"Ezra," Arceus said, "You're going to have to get used being told what to do. That is how things work here and in the rest of the world."

"I know that," Ezra snapped.

"Then why didn't you listen to me?"

Ezra looked away. "Instinct," he muttered.

Arceus noted the heat rising in the boy's ears curiously.

"So that means it's time for training then," Arceus mused. "A pokémon training a human. What an odd twist on that idea."

Ezra glanced at Arceus before frowning. "Could you at least look like someone else? Yourself would be ideal."

"Myself would be impractical," Arceus said, resuming its natural form. It watched the tenseness leave the boy's body and his fingers twitched before he unfolded himself.

Walking over to Arceus, Ezra laid a hand on its leg and leaned against it with a sigh.

"What is it?" Arceus asked.

Ezra jerked away, ears blazing. "N-nothing," he squeaked.

Blinking, he shook his head before looking up at Arceus with a tentative smile. "I don't suppose we could start off slower this time?"

"We won't leave here until your first instinct isn't to flee from a crowd of people," Arceus said. "We have as much time as we need."

Ezra sighed in relief, hands reaching for Arceus again, much to the Creator's intrigue.

Something to look into later, Arceus mused, before leading Ezra back to his studies.

-

Ezra stood on Arceus' back, massaging the Alpha Pokémon's body and neck.

"So, what are your thoughts on man-made pokémon?" Ezra asked.

Arceus hummed thoughtfully before answering. "I do not have a problem with it. So long as the creators are not trying to control the world through them."

"That never seems to go well, does it? Mewtwo and Megearna, for example," Ezra noted.

Arceus chuckled. "Correct. Besides, sometimes they're beneficial to mankind. Or in Mewtwo's case, other members of his species."

"What do you mean?" Ezra asked, stroking Arceus' jawline.

"The mew that fought against Mewtwo was never a fan of clones, always preferring natural-born pokémon. They were also rather cool towards Ditto, since they were originally created from failed attempts to clone it throughout history all over the world."

"Why would people want to clone mew?" Ezra asked.

"Same reason people target Legendary pokémon," Arceus replied.

"Ah," Ezra murmured, idly digging his feet into Arceus' back, causing it to sigh in bliss. "So, Mew vs Mewtwo?"

"Because of that encounter, that mew eventually -albeit reluctantly - admitted that clones were just as fine as natural pokémon. They've since started following Mewtwo around and they've been learning from one another ever since," Arceus said. "Even if mew's antics drive its sibling up the wall."

"What else is family for?" Ezra asked.

"Back massages."

Ezra scowled at Arceus' lack of ears to pinch and settled for biting Arceus' neck instead.

-

"Hey, what's that?"

Arceus glanced at where Ezra was pointing as they flew over a desert in Kalos and frowned.

"Trouble," it said darkly, adjusting course.

The duo headed closer to the swirling dark clouds covering the land, plunging into them.

Ezra pricked his ears, listening to the roars of pokémon, brow furrowed in concentration.

"Unless I'm mistaken, that's Reshiram and Zekrom," he said, puzzled. "They're a long way from home."

Arceus grunted, causing Ezra to pat its neck gently.

"What is it?" he asked.

"You'll see," Arceus said clearing the storm in front of them, revealing the combatants.

Zekrom and Reshiram were facing a massive djinni, who was using rings to redirect their attacks, laughing and dancing around as it did so. Ezra noticed a crowd of humans cowering by what was once their homes.

"Hoopa," Arceus called, coming to a stop. "What is going on here?"

The djinni froze, hands hovering over its portals.

"Nothin'," it said, not looking at the Alpha Pokémon.

Arceus took in the decimated scenery and arched a brow, remaining silent.

"I was entertainin' the humans," Hoopa said, gesturing to the crowd.

Arceus stared at the terrified group of people, brow rising ever higher.

"I'm guessin' you'd like me to fix this, then?" Hoopa said, sighing.

"Oh, no," Arceus said grimly. "I have a much better idea."

In the span of a moment, Arceus had pulled the majority of the djinni's power from its body, sealed it in a bottle and warped it away.

A much smaller creature wobbled unsteadily in the air, getting its bearings.

"W-wha-?!"

"Until you can learn to use your power selflessly, you will be confined," Arceus said. "You can no longer travel through your own rings, and their range and power has been significantly reduced."

"I was selfless!" Hoopa said angrily.

"Not from where I'm standing," Arceus replied, brushing aside some wooden fragments with a leg. "You will be living with these humans, serving them. If any harm comes to them..."

Arceus' eyes glowed and its voice dropped to a growl.

"Well, I'm sure I can find a nice dimensional pocket to put you in."

What little color in Hoopa's face remained, drained away and it sank to the ground in a miserable heap.

Arceus turned its attention to the humans, who had come closer. A few bowed in its presence, while others glared at Hoopa. A stone arched through the air towards it and Arceus deflected it back, striking the human who had thrown it.

"Humans," Arceus said calmly. "Hoopa will be your guest for the foreseeable future. If it is mistreated, the same punishment awaits. Do not test me on this, my patience is thin enough as it is. Do I make myself clear?"

"Yes, Arceus!" chorused the crowd.

Arceus gazed at the crowd before pointing at one of the men. "Ghris, come here."

Not bothering to ask how Arceus knew his name, the man came forward.

"I am placing Hoopa in your care. And in your sons' and daughters' care until Hoopa is free for its confinement. Do you accept this charge?"

"Gladly, my lord," Ghris said, bowing low.

"Then accept my blessing and teach your ways to Hoopa," Arceus said, touching the man's head with a leg.

A golden glow suffused the man and he blinked, staring at his glowing hands.

"With this, you can control Hoopa to a limited degree and chastise it if needed," Arceus said, stepping back. "I trust you won't misuse it."

Ghris flexed his fingers before gazing at Hoopa with a smile. "Of course not. I will treat it as if it was my own son."

Arceus heard Ezra snort softly in disbelief from his position on Arceus' back and glanced at the boy for a moment before turning back to Ghris.

"That is better than I had hoped. Best of luck to you."

Arceus fixed the damage done by Hoopa, Reshiram and Zekrom's battle, idly noting a knocked-out Regigigas half-buried in the sand in the process and pulled it out.

Ezra leaped onto it and climbed over it curiously, much to Arceus' amusement.

"Alright, so... Hoopa," Ezra said, sitting on top of Regigigas, arms folded. "Why make a pokémon that can unceremoniously pull things from anywhere?"

"Why not?" Arceus asked, studying the programming of the golem curiously. Making a mental note to have a Celebi update it to something within the past century, Arceus then turned its attention to Ezra.

"Because of things like this?" the boy pointed out, waving his arms in the air. "A whole human settlement on the brink of getting erased just because...uh... Why was it battling legendary pokémon?"

"I'll admit that was kinda our fault," came a voice, causing Ezra to squeak in surprise, almost falling off the Regigigas' head before the titan's arm came up to brace the child.

Patting it gratefully, Ezra looked down to see Ghris and Hoopa approach, having sent people back to their homes and take stock.

"Hoopa gave us riches and we started offering it food. In return, it granted what wishes it could with its rings. One day, someone asked how strong it was and then it started battling pokémon for our entertainment. The opponents got bigger and bigger until it came to a head, and well...you see how that went..."

"Hm...so both sides were ultimately to blame. Although one took it much further," Ezra said in disappointment, resting his hands on Regigigas. "Old habits die hard and I hope both of you suffer equally."

"Ezra," Arceus admonished. "Be nice."

"No, he's right," Ghris said, glancing at Hoopa, who stared at Ezra curiously. "We both need to learn from one another."

"Then I'll leave you to it," Arceus said. Ezra waved to Ghris and Hoopa as they flew off.
 
Getting right to it this time, with Chapter One:

Technical Accuracy/Style
There's nothing wrong with the technical aspects. The whole thing was on the choppy side, what with all those one- or two-sentence paragraphs. There's a lot in there that's merely functional - the prose is pared right down to the point where I think it needs to do more to bring the reader into the world.

Setting
Related to what I was saying about style, it's very basic. Most of the story takes place in ... well, it's hard to say. I assume the Hall of Origin is the same cave in the forest near the city, but it's hard to tell since the name pops up from nowhere and there never was much indication of how big or deep the cave was in the first place (Presumably it's quite large since the likes of Lugia manages to fit in there as well)

Story
I'm a little unsure of what to make of it. I think perhaps this simply isn't really a story to suit my tastes - I didn't dislike it, per se, but I can't say I was grabbed by it either. I think the most constructive remarks I can make are on the construction of the narrative, in that case. Mostly it's coherent, I just get the impression here and there that it's a little rushed. At one point you declare Ezra's gone to sleep, then literally in the next moment Arceus asks him a question and the kid's mashing berries. The same goes for details like the Hall of Origin or this apparent edict about helping Arceus - they're stated like the reader should be already familiar with them, but you haven't really established it.

Characters
Your mileage may vary on this, but I need a bit more time to really get into a ... what to call this? Romance? The depth of feeling between Arceus and Ezra is rather taken for granted here. I suspect shipping enthusiasts won't have a problem with this, but it does lead me to wonder, given that this is a multi-chapter story, whether it could have been given more space to develop.

One thing that doesn't make sense, though, is the idea that Ezra doesn't know how to interact with humans. Right at the beginning of the story he understands the norms of his own society just fine. We know at the very least he understands the language. We're told he's surviving on the mean streets of a city. This isn't a kid who's going to greet strangers with showers of kisses.

Final Thoughts
A lot of that was kind of ... ambiguous, I'll admit. I don't like to give the impression that my preferences should have the same status as, say, matters of technical accuracy. In other words, if you don't like horror stories, then criticising a story for being horror is rather silly.

I stand by my feeling that the narrative could at least do with a bit of tidying up; clear scene breaks where the time skips around; a little less reliance on dialogue alone to tell the story; consistency in the worldbuilding
 
This isn't a kid who's going to greet strangers with showers of kisses.
Yeah, there's a heck of a lot of time between the opening scene and when that little tidbit was dropped - several thousand years of living and interacting with Legendary pokemno on a daily basis is going to warp one's perspective just a little bit

Something else I'll have to explore, perhaps

Thank you for your feedback
 
I liked Chapter 2.
Yet the view from on high was something Ezra couldn't ignore and he stared slack-jawed as the planet unfolded beneath them.

The boy had thought the city streets that he had grown up in were never-ending, but once he saw the endless blue and green world below, he realized he'd grown up caged.
This description is amazing. I feel as if I can see what you're describing perfectly in my mind.
Watching them, Yveltal rolled his eyes. "Typical," he muttered.

Arceus raised an eyebrow. "Do I detect a hint of jealousy in your tone?"

"N-no," Yveltal said, looking away. Tucking his wings close, he pulled his neck in and failed miserably at not looking longingly at Xerneas.

"You know you'd lose nothing by asking, right?" Arceus pointed out gently.

"Except if she rejects me, I have to live with that for eternity," Yveltal said gloomily.

"Truly, being you is suffering," Arceus said dryly. "Work up the nerve by the next time I come 'round or I'll ask her for you myself."
I really like this interpretation of Xerneas and Yveltal's relationship.
I'd say more except my sister needs my chromebook at the moment. I'm interested in seeing where you go with the third chapter.
As Yveltal sputtered indignantly, Arceus gazed around the landscape.
I love your interpretation of Xerneas and Yveltal.
Looking forward to see where you go with this story. I'm especially interested in that "no aura" line.
 
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"Interesting."

Ezra blinked, pulling his head out of the clouds to see Arceus conversing with the notch-eared Pichu.

"What?" Ezra asked, walking over and scanning Arceus with a critical eye. The pokémon seemed to be recovering nicely and would probably be able to walk soon.

"According to this little one, you don't have any Aura."

Ezra tilted his head. "What's that?"

"It's...kinda like an energy field, I guess," Arceus said. "With the right potential and training, some people and pokémon can tap into and manipulate it in various ways. Usually, every living thing - and some not - has Aura in some way, shape or form, but you...don't."

"So I'm dead then," Ezra said, rubbing his arms.

"Hardly," Arceus said dryly. "It's more like there's a wall between you and the world, in a way."
No Aura? I'd love to see the implication of this down the line, if you feel like going that route that is.
 
Chapter Three
Chapter Three

Ezra ran through the torrential downpour on Akala island and cursed his luck. His feet barely held on to the muddy ground and his clothing has long since been soaked through.

Spotting a cave partially covered by both the towering rock face and some foliage, the boy ducked into it and shook himself to get most of the water off his clothing. Leaning against the rough-hewn wall, he caught his breath and stared outside at the sheets of water coming down.

"Sheesh," he grumbled, swiping water off his arms and hands and stomping his feet to get most of the water off his legs. "And here I thought Kyogre's showers were bad...guess I know where she got the idea for them..."

He paused as he noticed that the cave continued deeper inside. Briefly weighing his options, he went deeper, one hand on the wall to guide himself.

Eventually, the dark winding passage opened up into a massive open area, rich with bio-luminescent plantlife, bathing the area in a light green glow, further reflected by a pool of water.

Ezra pricked his ears at a sound and took a more careful look around before spotting something by the side of the water.

A blond-haired boy decked out in tattered red and black clothing was sitting with an umbreon and lycanroc in front of a fire, all of whom had turned to peer at Ezra quizzically.

"Ah," Ezra said. "Wasn't aware this cave was taken. I'll go find another then."

A burst of red light from his belt startled him and Arceus towered over the boy.

"You will do no such thing," it said, pushing Ezra away from the passage they had come through.

Ezra sighed as he turned, walking towards the occupants of the cave, throwing up his hands. "Fine, fine."

Reaching them, he took note of the boy's slack-jawed expression, mirrored by his pokemon, who bowed their heads respectfully to Arceus, murmuring greetings.

"Arceus, stranger. Stranger, Arceus," Ezra said, waving a hand.

"Well met," Arceus said politely. "Sorry for barging in like this."

It took the other boy a few seconds to find his voice and it came out in a hoarse squeak. Coughing, he tried again. "Who are you?"

"He is Ezra, and we are cold and tired. May we share your fire?" Arceus asked.

"O-of course," the boy said, gesturing.

Ezra kicked his shoes off and peeled his socks off before he sat down in front of the fire. Extending his hands, he flexed them as warmth slowly seeped back into them. He did the same for his feet before crossing his legs and stared at the blond curiously.

"So what're you doing out here in this weather?" Ezra asked.

"None of your business," the boy snapped, before glancing at Arceus, who glowered at him. "...Mostly staying out of the weather," he grumbled, glancing at his pokemon. Lycanroc growled softly and the umbreon nuzzled his hand, giving it a lick before wandering over to Ezra.

"Do you not have a family?" Arceus asked, sitting down beside Ezra and curled its legs under itself.

The boy's face darkened. "Yes, but they were...not that kind. Even though they say they're doing good."

"Do they work for the Aether Foundation?" Ezra asked, to which the boy didn't respond. Ezra didn't press the matter and reached a hand out to umbreon, who sniffed his fingers before nudging them. Ezra stroked the pokémon's head and smiled. "She's lovely."

"What's your name?" Arceus asked the boy

"Gladion," he replied, watching them warily.

"Nice name. Based off a flower, isn't it?" Ezra asked. "Usually it's something boring, like Rose or Lily."

"Lillie is my sister's name," Gladion said, eyes narrowing.

"Lillie is a fine name and a lovely flower," Ezra said.

Umbreon and lycanroc snickered and Arceus rolled its eyes.

"You'll have to forgive him. He's still not entirely used to dealing with people," Arceus said, giving Ezra an affectionate nudge.

"I am too used to dealing with people," Ezra said with a pout. "It's just that most of them are butts."

"You see my point," Arceus said to Gladion, as Ezra stuck his tongue out petulantly.

"I'm not entirely sure what I see," he said. "I mean...you're Arceus. And...I just...what?"

"Arceus took me in a while back and I've been with it ever since," Ezra said, idly stroking Arceus' side.

"But...you had Arceus in a poké ball," Gladion said. "How?"

"Because we trust and love one another," Ezra said simply "Plus, it keeps others from trying to capture and control it."

Gladion rubbed his temples. "Everything I know is crumbling down around me."

"Oh, believe me," Arceus said, nudging Ezra affectionately. "It's probably nothing like what you imagine it to be."

Gladion shrugged. "Not much else I can really say at the moment." His eyes landed on his umbreon, who was in the process of getting her belly thoroughly spoiled under Ezra's deft fingers, and softened. "I guess I can understand where you're coming from though."

"How progressive of you," Arceus replied. "But what about your third pokémon?"

Gladion hesitated before he sighed and pulled out a Premier Ball and stared at it before throwing it into the air. "Null, meet our guests."

Ezra paused in his petting to stare at the odd pokémon before he slowly got up, putting Umbreon on the ground and approached it.

"This is Type: Null," Gladion said as the pokémon shook itself. "Created by the Aether Foundation to destroy creatures from another dimension."

Ezra held out his hand and Null pressed its helmeted head against it before growling softly.

"It's in pain," Ezra said, gently running his fingers over the helmet before carefully hefting it in his hands and blinked at its weight. Null stared at him silently. "What is this?"

"A limiter, to keep its power in check," Gladion said. "It was deemed a failure since it couldn't control it and was frozen. I stole it to see if I could help it, but I haven't made much progress." Hiss hands curled into fists and he looked away.

"A pity," Arceus said, rising up. "Another man-made pokémon designed for combat."

Ezra glanced at Arceus with a frown.

"I may be able to help," Arceus said, getting to its feet as its ring glowed.

Null lightly pushed Ezra away and the boy went to stand by Gladion, whose entire posture was tense.

Arceus gazed down at Null before enveloping it within its power. With a crack, the helmet fell away and the golden glow sank into Null's body.

The crest on Null's head, no longer restrained, flared as three clear spikes emerged, flashing in a variety of colors. The same effect happened to the tail as well. The pokémon's head fur turned from gray to silver and it rested on its four limbs comfortably.

"That'll do, I think," Arceus said, stepping back. Gladion approached Null and touched its neck before running his hand over the sides of the pokémon's head. "Instead of having all that power cooped up inside, it's now focused in those spikes and membrane. Much like me and my plates, it can shift its Typing to best counter an opponent. Quite intriguing, that."

"It's called the AR System, modeled after your own Multitype ability," Gladion said absently as Null nuzzled him. "But they were never able to fine-tune it. I do believe that the production name was RKS or something similar."

"Aw, you have a fanclub," Ezra said, nudging Arceus.

"A fanclub dead set on creating a killing machine," Arceus said. "I think I'll go poke around Aether Foundation and see what else they're up to."

Before either boy could say anything, Arceus vanished. Ezra growled and fingered Arceus' poké ball.

"Is Arceus always like that?" Gladion asked, turning from Null, who stretched its limbs one at a time.

"Only when it's grumpy," Ezra said, putting his hands in his pockets. "So do you want to give Null a proper name? It's no longer...ah...not-finished?"

Gladion stared at the pokémon before stepping in front of it. He reached out a hand, but stopped before touching the pokémon. "Do you still want to travel with me and see Alola? No longer as Type: Null, but as...Silvally?"

Silvally let out a bark, nudging Gladion's hand aside and licked his face instead, much to the boy's surprise.

"I think that's a yes," Ezra said with a grin. "Nice name too. Very pretty."

"So, what will Arceus do to Aether Foundation?" Gladion asked.

"Depends on what it finds," Ezra replied, scooping up umbreon and stroking her fur. "What do they do?"

"Help pokémon. On the surface, anyway. It's the labs under the water where the seedier projects fester," Gladion said as Silvally nuzzled him.

A flash of light got their attention and they turned to see Arceus standing with two poké balls floating around it.

"I took the liberty of freeing the other two Nulls from containment and will be taking them with me," Arceus said. "A quick scan of everyone's memories let me send those who deserved it to jail and the others I left to do the legitimate businesses. All the research on the Ultra Beasts was sent to the International Police, which I'm sure they'll find most helpful."

"What about Lusamine - my mother?" Gladion asked.

"Whisked herself off to Ultra Space as soon as I arrived. No sign of your sister though," Arceus said.

"Probably with Hapu and Acerola," Gladion said. "She'll be distraught."

"For what it's worth, I'm sorry I couldn't help more," Arceus said.

"You've already done more than I could ever hope for," Gladion said. "Lillie's been talking about going to Kanto, so we may take some time away from Alola and let things sort themselves out in the meantime."

"I wish you two the best of luck," Ezra said, walking over to Arceus.

"Ezra," Arceus chided.

"Hm? Oh! Right," he said sheepishly, letting umbreon go, who walked back over to Gladion, who chuckled.

"See you around, Ezra," Gladion said.

"Likewise," Ezra said before Arceus spirited him away.
 
This was a pretty interesting chapter. Will Gladion appear more as a friend to Erza?
If I decide to do more in Alola, possibly

Slightly hard to do since I nipped both SM and USM in the bud before things got out of control, but I do have vague ideas involving the new stuff shown for USM irregardless

Namely involving the Ultra Recon team and Ultra Megapolis
 
OMAKE - ChromosomeShipping (Xerneas/Yveltal)
OMAKE - ChromosomeShipping (Xerneas/Yveltal)

Yveltal perched on a tree and brooded.

Gripping the branch with its talons, it flexed its wings before settling them against its torso and sighed.

"What's the matter, dear?"

Yveltal jerked its head up in surprise to see a large blue deer-like pokémon staring up at it.

"The usual," the Destruction pokémon said, gazing over the dead land it called home.

"Oh come now," Xerneas said with a cluck of its tongue. "You have me, don't you?"

"And I'm thankful, truly, for that, but..." Yveltal said, flapping a wing towards the distant mountains. "I wish I wasn't trapped here."

"You and me both," Xerneas said wistfully. "But Arceus said our powers were too great and that mankind would eventually seek to use us in their conflicts, so we must forever keep our distance from them."

"With how quickly they expand and breed, it's only a matter of centuries before they cover the planet," Yveltal grumbled. "Then where will we be?"

"There's always the Hall of Origin," Xerneas pointed out.

Yveltal made a sour face and Xerneas giggled.

"Regardless," the Life pokémon said, flicking its tail, "There's nothing stopping you from flying around high in the sky. I've heard the view is quite lovely from up there."

Yveltal nodded slowly. "It is."

"Will you let me share your sight some time?" Xerneas asked shyly.

"Of course," Yveltal said. "You're always welcome to."

Xerneas pricked its ears in surprise. "Is...that guilt I hear? Oh...I wasn't aware - I'm sorry if I -"

"Xerneas," Yveltal said with an amused smile. "Relax. Even if you look adorable when flustered, I didn't mean to cause you distress."

"You think I'm adorable?"

Yveltal rolled its eyes. "Come here," it said, jumping down to the ground, stirring up a cloud of ash. "We're going to have to refresh the shared sight since it's been a while."

Xerneas approached the Destruction pokémon and its antlers lit up in a rainbow of colors.

Yveltal reached out with its wings and gently grabbed the antlers before placing its face against Xerneas', gazing into its blue eyes.

Closing their eyes, the two pokémon let their power mix and Yveltal eventually let go of Xerneas' antlers and stepped back, blinking.

Its eyes briefly flickered from teal to blue and Xerneas nodded.

"There we go," it said happily. "Feels weird seeing things from a different perspective."

"It's only ten feet," Yveltal said.

"Well, when you're flying, it's a little more than that," Xerneas said dryly.

Yveltal raised an eyebrow. "Was...that an attempt at humor?"

"Don't you have some flying to do?" Xerneas growled at the flying-type affectionately.

"I'll keep an eye out for anything interesting," Yveltal said. "Wouldn't want to bore you with...boring things."

"Eloquent as always," Xerneas teased. "Enjoy your flight."

Sitting down, Xerneas watched its friend fly off before closing its eyes and instead looked through Yveltal's.

The land sped by, eventually turning from ashen gray to green and blue - then briefly rocky as Yveltal flew over the mountains - before opening up on grassy plains and clear lakes, rivers, forests and scattered human dwellings.

"They have gotten closer to the mountains," Yveltal noted, picking up on Xerneas' surprise.

"Dear me, how long has it been since we've checked?" Xerneas said with a sigh. "Time goes by so quickly for us."

Yveltal flew on, staring at the paths carved through the landscape by the hands of humans. "Quite a while. I don't recognize any of this."

"Would be nice if Zygarde stayed in touch more," Xerneas said bitterly.

"Zygarde only wakes up if one of us or all of this land is in peril," Yveltal reminded Xerneas.

"I know, I know, but I like talking with them. They always have such interesting stories to tell."

Yveltal chuckled, skirting around a flock of talonflame to avoid turning them into lifeless husks.

"What's that?"

Yveltal had seen it as well. "A very tall tower." Glancing down, Yveltal blinked. "In a very big human settlement."

Flapping its wings, Yveltal landed on top of the tower and gazed around the landscape.

"Interesting. It looks like a star," Xerneas said.

"Very neat and organized," Yveltal murmured. "Fascinating."

"You're drawing a crowd," Xerneas warned.

Glancing down, Yveltal noted the humans congregating at the base of the tower. "Should I use Oblivion Wing?"

"Self-defense only, remember?" Xerneas chided.

Taking flight, Yveltal scowled. "You never let me have any fun. This would make a nice summer home."

"It's autumn," came the amused reply.

"Spoilsport."
 
Chapter Four
Chapter Four

"We're back!"


Mew and Celebi turned from their chess match to see Arceus and Ezra rematerialize in the Hall of Origin.

"Welcome back," Mew said, before doing a double-take. "Dear me, what on earth happened to Ezra?"

The child was wearing what could best be considered an eyesore, consisting of a patchwork frock coat, with red, yellow, green, maroon, pink and peach colors strewn over it haphazardly. Under that was a plain white shirt with question marks on the collar. A pair of yellow yellow trousers held up by red suspenders and a pair of orange spats over green ankle boots completed the ensemble.

"Arceus picked it out," Ezra said, twirling around gleefully. "Isn't it great?"

Mew and Celebi exchanged glances before raising their eyebrows at Arceus.

"What?" it said defensively. "Ezra said it looked good, so we went with that as a basis."

"Ezra, have you ever actually owned a piece of clothing?" Mew asked.

"Only what I could scrape together out of the discard piles in the market," Ezra said with a shrug. "Nowhere near as comfortable as what I'm wearing."

Celebi rubbed its temples while Mew pinched the bridge of its nose and sighed. "Arceus, when was the last time you looked at what humans were wearing?"

"With how often trends change, it really doesn't matter," Arceus pointed out. "Ezra can wear whatever he wants and I don't want to hear any complaints from any of you. You don't even wear clothes."

"But think of our eyes!"

"Nah."

-

Ezra and Arceus wandered around the city of Pewter in the Kanto region, taking in the sights.

Or, in Ezra's case, the smells.

"So much history here," the boy said with a happy grin. "Smells like home."

Arceus silently vowed to get someone to clean the Hall of Origin - Groudon, probably, via lava - and stopped by a billboard with a map on it, gently grabbing Ezra by the scruff of his shirt to keep him from scampering off.

"They have a museum here, but it has an entrance fee," it said.

Ezra glanced at the disguised pokémon. Clad in the guise of a human, Arceus didn't appear nearly as majestic as Ezra would've liked, but after living with the legendary pokémon for several dozen centuries, the boy had grudgingly come to accept why Arceus didn't waltz around in its true form.

"Museums... That'd explain the smell," Ezra mused. His eyes wondered over the map before falling on a particular building. "And they have a gym!"

Arceus stared at it before turning around to scan the rest of the city it could see. As it expected, there were in fact guide posts to direct eager trainers to one of the Kanto League Gyms.

"I take it you'd like to go challenge it?"

Ezra hesitated. "Are there any mew that'd like to battle? Aylen and Citlali said they'd be busy for the next few decades for some reason."

Arceus' eyes went blank for a second, communicating telepathically. Shaking itself, it stroked its chin before smirking. "I have a plan."

-

"Brock, there's a challenger here asking for you!"

Brock turned from his medical books to glance at Forrest, frowning.

"They do know I'm not the gym leader, anymore, right?" he asked, getting up.

"I think he's foreign - Sinnoh, I think."

The siblings fell into step as Brock collected his poké balls.

"How many badges?" Brock asked.

"None from Kanto. Eight from Sinnoh."

Brock let out a whistle. "No small feat, that," he mused.

Arriving at the gym, the doors opened onto the battlefield and the siblings stepped through.

Brock took in the challenger's appearance and blinked. Something about the child felt familiar, but he couldn't place his finger on it.

"You do know I'm not the gym leader here, right?" Brock called.

"Sorry!" the boy said with a sheepish chuckle. "I'm a little behind on the times."

Brock glanced at Forrest. "I don't suppose you'd mind letting me take this one?" Forrest shook his head before walking to the referee's box on the side of the field.

"How many pokémon do you have?" Brock asked the challenger.

"Just one," the boy said.

"What's your name and place of birth?" Brock asked, pulling out one of his partners. Inwardly, he marveled at the notion that the kid had gotten through Sinnoh with only one pokémon...

Or else he was acting like him and went with a new team for every region...?

"I'm Ezra, from Michina Town," the boy said, pulling out his lone poké ball.

Brock blinked in surprise. "I don't suppose you've heard of a woman named Sheena or her husband Kevin, do you?"

Ezra nodded. "They're good friends of mine. Are you ready to battle?"

Brock held up his hands apologetically. "Sorry, sorry. Let's begin. Lycanroc, stand by!"

Ezra stared at the rock-type canine and grinned. "Lovely! Arceus! I choose you!"

"What-" Brock said in disbelief before the Alpha Pokémon materialized on Ezra's side of the field and shook itself, stretching its limbs one at a time before standing tall and proud, looking down at him with a neutral expression.

"Arceus and I have been partners for a while," Ezra said with a grin, lacing his hands behind his head. "Although this is the first time I've used him in a battle, so go easy on us, okay?"

Arceus raised its brows. "I wouldn't say I'm new to battling," it protested. "Just not a League match." It then turned its gaze to the lycanroc on the other side of the field curiously. "An interesting choice, that."

Brock stared at Arceus, still trying to wrap his head around the concept before shaking himself. "I...uh...hm...I mean...isn't Arceus kinda...ya know...unbeatable?"

"Yeah," Ezra said with a grin. "But that doesn't mean my other gym battles were easy. Although I used a mew for some of them...Volkner was very surprised when I used Groudon. Fantina got into a shouting match with Meloetta and Cynthia spent most of our fight talking about history with Celebi..."

Brock stared at the kid in open-mouthed bafflement, getting flashbacks to another kid with a penchant for tripping over Legendary pokémon every other day of the week. Then the last part of Ezra's statement hit and he pinched the bridge of his nose with a sigh.

"Are you telling me you're the Champion of Sinnoh?"

"I won the Championship tournament after the Sinnoh League Tournament, yes, but I turned down the role since I would much rather like to travel. So...I guess it's honorary?" Ezra said with a shrug.

"Interesting," Brock mused, before clapping his hands together. "Alright. Battle. I'll be sticking with Lycanroc. One on one. Sound fair?"

"Certainly!"

Forrest raised his hand before dropping it. "Begin!"

"Lycanroc, Rock Wrecker!"

The canine leaped into the air, the rocks on its neck glowing before firing at Arceus.

Brock gaped in disbelief as the deity went sprawling.

"Ow," Arceus said, deadpan, getting back to its feet. "Oh, the indignity of fighting. What a world."

Ezra giggled. "Hyper Beam!"

Brock discreetly stepped away from being in line with his Lycanroc, whose face paled as Arceus unleashed the move, and covered his face as the beam blasted the pokémon past him, down the hall, and out the back of the building.

"Oh dear, was that too much?" Arceus asked. "It's always a challenge to properly regulate the strength of my attacks." Reaching out with its power, it brought Lycanroc back from wherever it had ended up, depositing the unconscious pokémon at Brock's feet.

Brock knelt by it and was surprised to find it merely asleep, rather than knocked out. With an amused sigh, Brock returned it to its poké ball.

"Well, that went a little better than expected," he said. Glancing behind him, he was startled to see the damage from the Hyper Beam had already been repaired. Shaking his head, he strode over to Ezra, who was stroking Arceus' leg.

"Well, that was...different, but congratulations on your victory," Brock said, holding out the Boulder Badge. Ezra took it, giving it a cursory sniff before tucking it away.

"Sorry for the trouble," Ezra said, mirroring Brock's bow, much to the older boy's surprise.

"N-nah, it's fine, really," Brock said. "I was the one who leaped to conclusions and didn't think things through."

"No worries," Arceus said lightly. "We all make mistakes."

"Don't remind me," Ezra and Brock muttered simultaneously, before blinking in unison.

"Someday, I'll probably ask one of the lesser trio if they'd like to battle and I'd like a rematch. You can handle an Entei or Regi, right?" Ezra asked Brock.

"In...theory, yes," Brock said slowly. "But I'd like some advance warning. Do you plan on going to other gyms?"

"Might wander around," Ezra said. "Dunno about challenging the rest though. I prefer the open road."

Brock smiled slightly. "I know the feeling. Enjoy your journey, Ezra of Michina Town."

-

Citlali hovered beside Arceus, watching it curiously.

"So, you and Ezra have been bonded for a while now," the mew said, rolling over. "What's that like?"

Arceus folded its legs over one another, watching the boy as it conversed with Giratina and Shaymin.

"Like any other relationship," Arceus replied. "We talk, we fight, we make out, we learn about one another's lives and what our dreams are, that kind of thing."

Citlali crossed its arms, curling its tail around itself.

Arceus glanced at it for a moment before smiling slightly.

"Don't tell me you're jealous."

"Absolutely not," Citlali scoffed. "I am content with the way my life is."

"Even Mewtwo has found someone to share his life with," Arceus said mildly. "There's nothing shameful in admitting you want the same."

Citlali rolled its eyes. "I've got plenty of tail to chase all over the world. Not everyone is cut out for a committed relationship and I will happily count myself among that number."

"So long as you are happy with that arrangement," Arceus said, "Then I will leave you to it."

Citlali nodded before teleporting away.

Aylen popped into the Hall of Origin and zoomed over to Arceus.

"In case you didn't know, Ash and his class are visiting Kanto to study Kanto variants of Alolan pokémon," the mew said, wiggling in excitement.

Arceus perked up at that while Ezra tilted his head.

"Who's Ash?" he asked.

"One of Ho-Oh's Chosen, I think," Arceus said. "Brought him back from the dead when Marshadow went berserk a while back."

"I said I was sorry!" Marshadow called from where it was enjoying a spot of tea with Phione and Darkrai.

"What's he like?" Ezra asked.

Arceus shrugged. "Decent enough trainer. Goes through regions with a fresh team and takes on the various Leagues with varying degrees of success. Lost a lot of berries on his Kalos match though," it added bitterly.

"I mean, you could always stop in and say hi," Aylen pointed out.

"Care for a road trip?" Arceus asked Ezra as it got to its feet.

"Sure," Ezra said, clambering up onto Arceus' back.

Without further delay, the duo warped to Pallet Town.

"...Right, should've asked where Ash lives," Arceus muttered, looking around.

"Should we go incognito?" Ezra asked, jumping off Arceus' back. "Ask around town?"

Arceus turned into a nondescript male human with a shock of white hair with blonde highlights.

"Show-off," Ezra grumbled.

"You're perfectly capable of doing the same if you spent time practicing with your own power," Arceus reminded the boy, who stuck his tongue out.

"I'm perfectly fine with the increased durability and mobility," Ezra said, stretching his arms and legs.

Asking around town, they were eventually pointed to the Hanako Family restaurant.

"Hello, and welcome," greeted a woman with reddish-brown hair. "How can I help you?"

"We're looking for a boy named Ash," Arceus said. The woman took in the man's appearance and frowned.

"Is he in trouble?" she asked carefully, crossing her arms.

"Hm? Oh, no. No, he's not. It's just that my ward wanted to meet him," Arceus said, gesturing Ezra forward.

"Swanky place you have here," Ezra said. Arceus facepalmed with a grumble.

"I'm Delia, Ash's mother," the woman said with a slight smile. "He's currently with his friends in the back. I'll go let them know they'll be joined by two more, if that's alright?"

Arceus stroked his chin thoughtfully before nodding. "I'll leave Ezra here then, if that's alright with you?" Delia nodded and Arceus smiled. "I have a few things to take care of. Ezra, play nice and try not to show off too much, alright?"

Ezra blinked as Arceus lightly tapped his mind and he grinned, nodding. "Of course."

Bowing politely, Arceus turned and walked out of the restaurant as Delia led Ezra to the back, where a group of Alolans were talking animatedly with one another.

Ezra idly stroked the lone poké ball at his waist, feeling Arceus' warmth through the sphere and smiled as he introduced himself to the group.

"Ash, this is Ezra, the kid I told you about," Brock said.

"The one who beat you with a single pokémon, right," Ash said skeptically.

Ezra tilted his head, wondering if Brock hadn't told Ash what pokémon he had used to beat him... Shrugging, he shook Ash's hand and politely introduced himself to the rest of the group, wishing he could use the pokémon's way of greeting them rather than the human's, but sitting through another one of Arceus' lectures on etiquette prevented him from moving.

"Is it true that you defeated the entire Sinnoh League with only one pokémon?" the professor accompanying the group asked. Ezra noted his overall lack of clothing and silently gave him his approval before nodding.

"Well," he said, catching himself, "not one pokémon for the entire gym challenge, but only one pokémon per battle."

"That's still pretty impressive," Kukui said, crossing his arms. "Even with a full team, it took some doing to get through my Kanto challenge."

"You've done the Kanto Gym challenge?" Ash asked in surprise.

"About a decade ago, yeah," Kukui said, pulling his hat over his eyes. "Couldn't pass the island trials, so I decided to test my luck elsewhere. With similar results... But that led me to becoming a pokémon professor, so it wasn't all bad."

Ezra stared at the food, not recognizing some of it.

"Alola shares a lot of culture with the Kanto and Johto regions," Mallow said, handing him a plate with several different bite-sized portions on it, ranging from sushi, to burgers, rice, berries, sweet bread and what looked suspiciously like fried tentacool.

Eating everything but that, Ezra enjoyed the meal well enough before Kiawe bombarded him with questions about his Sinnoh challenge.

"What pokémon did you use?" he asked eagerly.

"Uhm," Ezra said awkwardly. "That's-"

"You can tell them," Arceus said as it popped out of its poké ball. Hardly larger than a litten, the Alpha Pokémon landed on the table and took a Malasada donut.

Everyone who recognized Arceus - Brock excluded - gaped at it.

"It's smaller than I thought it'd be," Kukui said, composing himself before leaning in to stare at it.

"Being able to control our size is second nature to most legendary pokémon," Arceus said, nibbling its doughnut. "I'd rather not damage Miss Ketchum's restaurant, after all."

"I appreciate that," Delia said, clearing some plates, aided by Sophocles and Togedemaru.

Lana and Lillie stared at Arceus with varying levels of curiosity.

"It's not going to bite you," Lana said.

"Only if you ask politely," Arceus said, turning its attention to the girls.

Lillie let out an eep and leaned away from the table.

"She has trouble touching pokémon," Lana explained, causing Arceus to blink in surprise. Devouring the rest of the Malasada, it stepped closer to the girl, who froze, trembling.

"And why is that?" Arceus asked gently.

"I don't remember," Lillie squeaked.

"A pity," Arceus murmured, turning away. "I hope you find out how that happened and regain your confidence. My children love to be touched and it's how most of them communicate." It nodded at where Shiron and Litten were curled up together, having dozed off after eating their fill.

"So you're saying you used Arceus in your gym match against Brock?" Kiawe asked. "How did he battle?"

"It was a one on one," Ezra said. "And he used a Lycanroc."

"Hm..." Kiawe said, sitting back. "I've sparred against Ash's rockruff, and Olivia's Lycanroc... Thanks, I'm sure that'll help tomorrow."

"Unless he uses another of his pokémon," Ezra pointed out. "Gym leaders are supposed to have many different pokémon they can call on depending on the skill of the trainer. No two battles are alike and ours was more for fun than anything else."

"So you don't plan on taking any other gym on?" Misty asked. "Pity. I'd have liked to spar with you."

"Maybe some other time," Ezra said with a grin. "Arceus and I have an anniversary coming up that'll probably eat up a few weeks."

"Anniversary?" Kukui asked blankly.

Ezra smiled, idly rubbing Arceus' poké ball. "Yeah... We've been together for a long time now."

"Together?" Lana asked.

"Married, in a sense," Arceus said.

"You're...married to Arceus?" Sophocles asked.

"Mmhm," Ezra said, stroking over Arceus' back, tracing over its golden limiter ring slowly. "I owe a lot to Arceus."

"If anything, it is I who has a debt that I could never repay," Arceus said, nuzzling the child's neck.

"You already have, many times over," Ezra replied. "You've shown me so much more than I ever hoped to see."

Arceus looked away, blushing and Ezra stroked over its back tenderly.

"So what do you plan on doing after this?" Kukui asked.

"After our anniversary, we'll probably go to Johto and spend time with Lugia and Ho-Oh," Ezra said as Arceus curled in his lap.

"I've met them both," Ash said, perking up. "Met Ho-Oh at the start of my journey and got a Rainbow Wing from it and ran into Lugia in the Orange Islands."

"I heard about that," Ezra said. "Rayquaza griped about it for a long while before going off to give Lugia a piece of its mind."

Ash winced. "Oh, that doesn't sound pleasant."

Arceus shrugged. "When someone messes with your domain due to those under your watch misbehaving, what else are you going to do?"

Ash nodded. "Makes sense."

Arceus looked outside and got to its feet. "And with that, it is time for us to depart. Good luck with the rest of your week."

Ezra said his goodbyes and the duo vanished.
 
Chapter Five
Chapter Five

Ezra stared at a Pokémon Contest poster on the wall of a pokémon center in Slateport City curiously.

"I'd love to give that a try," he said, getting Arceus' attention. The disguised Alpha Pokémon raised an immaculate eyebrow thoughtfully.

"And who would you ask to participate with you?" it asked.

Ezra fidgeted with the bottom of his vest, ears burning. "Well..." He said shyly, looking up at Arceus. "I was thinking of asking you."

An interesting variety of emotions flickered across Arceus' face and it gazed at the poster for a moment.

"I'm not...entirely sure that'd be fair," it said after a moment. "My mere presence would probably unnerve the other competitors and you wouldn't get a satisfying experience from it."

Ezra pouted, crossing his arms. "It only seems fair that being able to show off your pokémon would mean using one you're exceptionally close to."

"This coming from the one who spent several decades befriending every pokémon that stopped by the Hall of Origin," Arceus said with a grin.

"Yes," Ezra said with a dismissive wave of his hand, "but I'm not married to any of them."

Arceus stroked its chin thoughtfully before ruffling Ezra's hair. Crouching down to meet the child's purple gaze, Arceus took and stroked the boy's hands tenderly.

"Well, if you want to show me off the way you have in mind, I don't think Contests would be the way to do it," Arceus said. "However," it said, raising a finger as Ezra's face fell, "Kalos has things called Tripokalons - Showcases - where the bond between a trainer and their pokémon is shown in various different ways. Only drawback is that it's girls-only."

Ezra's eyes gleamed mischievously and Arceus tilted its head curiously.

"Do contest halls have dressing rooms?" Ezra asked, peering at the poster again.

"What are you thinking?" Arceus asked warily, standing up. Ezra grabbed its hand and tugged it towards the doors leading outside.

"I'll show you once we get there," Ezra said with a grin.

A few minutes later had the duo ensconced within the dressing rooms of the Slateport Contest Hall. The rooms were open to anyone for ease of practice and Arceus had been rather startled to learn every room had its own set of clothing options for both sexes and it was curious to see what-

"Ta-da!"

Torn from its ruminations, Arceus turned to see Ezra step out from behind the curtain.

"What do you think?" he asked, twirling around.

A loose white midriff-baring shirt with pink and blue highlights over a black undershirt covered the boy's torso while a pair of white shorts with similar highlights to the shirt hugged the child's hips. White ribbons were laced around his arms while a bow sat at his neck and hip. White, blue, and pink-striped sleeves and leggings ending in pink gloves and blue shoes covered his arms and legs. Striking a pose, Ezra grinned at Arceus' dumbfounded expression.

Blinking away impure thoughts, Arceus cleared its throat. "Sylveon suits you," it said. "I'm surprised you didn't go with absol or umbreon."

"They're cute enough, but not exactly girly," Ezra pointed out.

"I think you could make it work," Arceus said dryly. "Besides, I'm reasonably sure we could still participate in the Showcases without having to hide your gender, as that'd just complicate things."

"Maybe," Ezra said. "It's not like I plan on going through the entire thing though. Could you really imagine me as Kalos Queen?"

"Yes."

Ezra snickered before staring at the racks of clothes. "How much do you think this costs? Because I kinda want to take it home to play around with some more." He glanced slyly at Arceus. "And I imagine you wouldn't mind me trying on some other outfits in private, hm?"

Arceus swept the boy up in its arms and nuzzled the immortal child. "You know I love you for you. The clothing is always optional."

"I'm well aware," Ezra giggled, nuzzling back.

-

Monsieur Pierre stared down at the boy in front of him in surprise before leaning back in his chair, hand stroking over his blond goatee slowly.

"So, you wish to partake in a Pokémon Showcase, cher petit garçon?"

Ezra raised an eyebrow. "Oui, s'il vous plaît."

Pierre's lips twitched before letting his eyes roam over the child and his brow furrowed. "You are aware, of course, that Showcases are reserved for jeune femmes, yes?" His blue eyes flicked to the man standing behind the child, who met his gaze evenly.

"I'm aware," Ezra replied, pulling out a stack of notes from his bag. "I even did a little light reading over the past few days-"

"Weeks," Arceus coughed into its hand. Pierre blinked as Ezra then flicked through the notes and handed him a sheet.

"As you know, Showcases were originally created to choose a partner for the King of Kalos," Ezra said, crossing his legs and arms as Pierre skimmed the notes.

"And there are males listed among the King's partners from ages past," Pierre mused. "And while the rules say young women, it does not ban males from participating." He handed the notes back with a nod. "Very well. Welcome to the Pokémon Showcase, Ezra of Michina Town. You'll be eligible to participate in the next Rookie Class showcase three days from now in Gloire City."

Ezra nodded, getting to his feet. Shaking Pierre's hand, he then left with Arceus.

"I notice you didn't tell him you were responsible for the fact some of the Kalos King's partners were male," Arceus said as they walked down the street, glancing shrewdly at its ward, who blinked innocently at him.

"And you were responsible for almost letting me become part of the Kalos Royal family," Ezra said dryly as he laced his hands behind his head.

Arceus grimaced. "I do apologize for that. Lucky for you, the Kalos Queen at the time wasn't a huge fan of children and talked her husband out of adopting you."

Ezra narrowed his eyes. "Are you saying I'm a bad kid?"

"You haven't been a 'kid' for over five hundred years," Arceus said, tousling Ezra's hair affectionately. The boy's ears heated and he looked away.

"Come on," he said, running ahead. "I'd like to raid the nearest Boutique for costumes."

Shaking its head with a rueful grin, Arceus followed the boy.

-

Ezra lowered the Azure Flute from his lips as the lights around them returned to normal and he bowed low as the crowd erupted into cheers.

"A marvelous performance from Ezra, ladies and gentlemen!" Monsieur Pierre said, taking center stage as Ezra and Arceus went back to stand beside the other competitors. "Now then, let the voting commence!"

Ezra watched as a storm of hearts flowed from the audience and he closed his eyes, hands clasped behind him, relaxing with a smile on his face.

He and Arceus had decided to recreate the latter's birth for their performance and Arceus had given the boy a crash course in playing the Azure Flute with some help from Meloetta for two strenuous days before taking the third to rest and relax before the show.

When their turn had come, Arceus and Ezra had merged their minds and tuned out the crowd, only focusing on their performances.

"And we have our winner!"

Ezra's eyes opened and he saw everyone looking at him.

"Congratulations, Ezra from Michina Town, on an overwhelming victory!"

Ezra looked up at the holographic keyhole over his head and stared in surprise at the nearly-solid coloring.

Kelfki flew from the end of Pierre's staff to hover in front of Ezra and he took the offered key, looking at it for a moment before smiling.

Stepping forward, he held the key up.

"I would like to give this to second place," he said clearly. "I do not plan on participating in the complete Kalos Showcase circuit and as such would not want to rob someone else of their chance to begin."

The crowd broke out into murmurs and Pierre smiled slightly before tapping his cane on the ground.

"Well, this is certainly a first!" he said. "Well then, will Miss Aria step forward?"

Ezra turned to see a young woman with a fennekin step forward and he walked over to her.

"You two did well," he said, holding out the key. "I wish you and your little one the best of luck on the road ahead."

"T-thank you," Aria said, taking the key and admired it, holding it up to the light.

Ezra nodded before following the others off stage.

-

"Hey, it's Ezra, right?"

Ezra paused as a voice called to him and he turned to see a green-haired girl approaching him, with a glaceon and leafeon flanking her.

Her hair was pulled back and was arranged into the shape of a pair of leaves on the left side of her head. She wore a green top with wrist-length black sleeves that left her midriff exposed, with a blue gem resting in the center of it. A pair of skintight black pants hugged her swaying hips, where another pair of blue gems rested. A green half-skirt flared behind her and she tilted her head to the side as she stopped before him.

"Your performance was quite admirable," she said, resting a hand on her hip. Her pokémon chirped greetings at him, which he returned.

"As was yours, Miss Sara Lee," he said with smile, crouching down and extended his hands to the eeveelutions, who glanced at their trainer for permission to approach; at her nod, they nuzzled into Ezra's hands. "Very clever use of ice and grass moves," Ezra noted, admiring the pokémon's glossy coats.

"Just Shin, please," she said with a grimace. "Sara Lee is just my stage name." She glanced at Arceus, who was watching their exchange quietly. "You've trained him well," she said with a polite bow.

"I didn't do much," Arceus said. "Most of it was very last minute."

Ezra sat down on the ground, crossing his legs under him and chuckled. "He's very modest when he gets complimented." Arceus rolled his eyes and Shin giggled.

"Instead of standing – or sitting – around uncomfortably, why don't you two go grab a drink together?" Arceus said, stepping forward.

Shin and Ezra blinked before looking at one another.

"I…don't have a problem with that," Shin said, cheeks pink. Ezra shrugged.

"Sure, why not."

"Splendid. I'll see you back at the Pokémon Center whenever you're done, Ezra. Try not to break my wallet, would you?" Arceus said, flicking a credit card at Ezra, who caught it with a grin as he got to his feet.

"Well, since I'll be feeding Shin and her pokémon, I can't make any promises," he said cheerfully.

Glaceon and leafeon perked up at that and eagerly twined around Ezra's legs, almost sending him back to the ground.

"So, got any preferences?" Ezra asked Shin, who shook her head sheepishly.

"Never been here before," she admitted.

"Not a problem," Ezra said. "That just means we get to walk around until something catches our eye." He hesitated, taking in her outfit before adding, "Unless that's a problem?"

"Hm?" she said, before noticing his gaze. "Oh! No, that's not a problem. I designed this outfit specifically for mobility and comfort in all kinds of weather."

"I'd love to see more of it," Ezra said. Arceus facepalmed and Ezra glanced at him, then thought about what he had said. "Uh…"

Shin shook her head. "Don't worry about it," she said kindly, taking Ezra's hand. "Come on, let's go see what we can find."

Arceus watched them go thoughtfully.

-

Ezra and Shin Lee each toyed with their drinks, not looking at each other.

They sat across from one another at one of Gloire City's cafés.

"So," Shin said slowly, fingers clenching around her drink as she glanced at Ezra shyly. "What made you decide to partake in a Showcase?"

The boy put his own beverage aside and laid his hands on the table, staring at them before curling them into fists. "My...I was in Slateport City, saw a sign for Pokémon Contests and wanted to take a crack at them, but wanted something that I could actively participate in rather than merely directing Ar - my pokémon through it."

Shin raised her eyebrows, leaning forward. "And so you decided to partake in a female-dominant challenge."

Ezra shrugged. "I had fun with it, as did Arceus."

Shin nodded slowly, leaning back before slumping in her chair, the bracelets on her wrists clinking gently as she ran a hand over her face. "That...was something nobody was prepared for," she said with a shaky laugh.

"I get that a lot," Ezra said.

"So, like...was he a Ditto? Or a Zoroark? Something else entirely?" Sara asked, tilting her head to the side.

"No, that was Arceus itself," Ezra replied, sipping his drink.

"How?!" Shin blurted out, throwing her hands wide. "How does someone wrangle Arceus into a Pokémon Showcase?!"

"By asking nicely," Ezra replied, ignoring the stares passerby were giving them, before getting a thoughtful look on his face. "And I suppose reenacting the creation of the universe for the Free Performance helped too."

"Usually it'd take a Gothitelle to get those kinds of visuals," Shin said. "It was...astounding, to put it mildly. And your flute-playing skills were phenomenal."

"I had a good teacher," Ezra said with a smile. "Even if she kept hitting me over the head with the flute when I bungled it," he added, rubbing his head sheepishly.

"My dance teacher was the same way," Shin replied, resting her elbows on the table, head on her laced fingers. "But once I got my partners, it became a lot easier."

"Your pokémon were remarkably well-trained," Ezra said.

"Thank you," Shin said. "So, where does Arceus stay when it's not with you? Does he prefer poké balls or what?"

"Arceus isn't usually picky, but it tends to prefer Luxury or Premier Balls, or walking alongside me, carrying me when I get tired. Sometimes it shrinks down and makes me carry it around," he said with a sour look on his face, causing Shin to giggle.

"You two seem close," she said, green eyes meeting purple for a moment before flitting away. "That's good."

Ezra narrowed his eyes and he took in her posture curiously, noting it was similar to that of a pokémon who...

"Hm," he said, before speaking. "I see why Arceus wanted us to spend time together."

One of Shin's brows quirked up. "What do you mean?"

Ezra massaged the sides of his eyes before gazing at her. "Well, I do believe it was trying to get me a date, for one."

Shin's face turned a light pink. "A-ah," she said, looking away. "I see..." She glanced at him out of the corner of her eye. "And your verdict?"

"You're a nice enough girl," Ezra said, "But I wander around a lot, especially with Arceus by my side, which makes having a relationship...difficult."

"I see," Shin said, somewhat cooly. Ezra held up his hands.

"But that doesn't mean that I can't spend a few years or more in one place, and Kalos is quite lovely - much like you, so I wouldn't opposed to spending more time with you and exploring the differences between a human relationship and a pokémon one."

"So you're using me more as an experiment," Shin said flatly, crossing her arms. Ezra winced, again holding his hands up, leaning back defensively.

"Of course not," he said, a little harsher than he intended, which piqued Shin's interest. "I'm just new to the whole thing and would like a guide, if that's alright with you."

Shin slowly uncrossed her arms and regarded him thoughtfully.

"Alright," she said slowly. "It's been a while since I've dated as well, so it'll be a learning experience for both of us."

"I look forward to it," Ezra said.

-

"I'm back," Ezra said, opening the door to the room Arceus and he had booked at the Pokémon Center.

Arceus, in its natural form, was sitting on the bed, reading. It blinked in greeting at Ezra and the boy joined it after kicking his shoes off. Leaning into Arceus' warmth, Ezra sighed heavily.

"That was a clever ruse of yours," he said, nipping Arceus lightly.

"I was just doing what I thought was for your benefit," Arceus replied, nuzzling the boy.

"Aren't you jealous?" Ezra asked.

"Jealousy is not something most pokémon have – towards humans, anyway," Arceus replied. "I knew that there'd be humans who'd want or form relationships with pokémon, so I made it a little easier for such a thing to happen."

Ezra tilted his head. "Seems like that'd needlessly complicate things. What if the human was in a relationship with a pokémon and then pursued another human? Wouldn't the human get jealous that their partner was also with pokémon?"

"I do not know, or care," Arceus replied. "What humans do with their lives is their business. It then frees up my attention towards more lucrative things, such as making sure you're happy."

"I am happy," Ezra said. "With you."

"Consider this a learning experience then," Arceus suggested. "Miss Sara Lee certainly seemed taken with you and you could do with spending quality time with the opposite sex of the same species."

"She's definitely…something," Ezra admitted, remembering the way she had acted around him. "May be a little awkward when I tell her my age though."

"Humans decided thousands of years ago that once you were old enough to own a pokémon, you were old enough for everything else," Arceus said. "What a fascinating species."

"So what happens if she and I reach the physical part of a relationship?" Ezra asked. "Human anatomy is quite different from pokémon anatomy and I'd rather not make a fool of myself."

Arceus blinked, then frowned. "I…uh…hm…" it said. "I suppose we'll have to research that bit, won't we?"

"That's gonna be fun" Ezra muttered, "Given that I look like a little kid."

"Leave that to me," Arceus replied. "You, on the other hand, have some more time with Sara to look forward to."

"Shin, actually," Ezra said absently, stroking over Arceus' ring, as he then told Arceus about their date.
 
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Chapter Six
Chapter Six

Shin and Ezra poked through a Shalour City Boutique in pursuit of outfits for Shin's next performance.

"How's this?" Ezra asked, holding up a frilly blue and white-striped dress. Shin poked her head out of the rack of pants she had been perusing and studied it for a moment thoughtfully.

"Does it come in something that goes well with green?" she asked, tapping her head. Ezra got a thoughtful look on his face before turning back to the rack. Shin watched him as his fingers danced over the sleeves of the dresses, muttering under his breath as he did so and she smiled slightly before turning back to her own row of clothing.

Green and black with traces of blue and yellow had worked well enough for her debut, but she wanted to try something new. She eyed a pair of purple leggings thoughtfully before pulling them out.

"What do you think?" she asked, turning around once again. Her lips twitched as she saw that Ezra had also chosen a purple dress. He stared at the leggings in her hand and nodded thoughtfully.

"Well, that settles it then," Shin said with a giggle, taking the dress from him. Holding it against her chest, she checked the length. "A little short, don't you think?" she asked teasingly.

"Isn't that what the leggings are for?" Ezra asked innocently. Shin rolled her eyes.

"True, but while it's often unavoidable with dresses, I should at least make an effort to pretend to have modesty when performing," she pointed out.

"Hadn't thought of that," Ezra murmured, stroking his chin, before lifting the hem of the dress. "Perhaps we could add extensions to this?"

Shin imagined the design and nodded slowly. "That's doable. Thanks for the help."

-

Shin Lee and Ezra strode through the flower fields on the outskirts of Shalour City, admiring the scenery.

"So, what got you into Showcases?" Ezra asked as the two sat down. Shin released her glaceon and leafeon, who stretched, yapped at one another before running off into the flowers to play and explore. Shin picked a bunch of flowers and started braiding them together as she spoke.

"I was a hyperactive child, always getting into mischief, so my parents decided to focus that into something productive, like dancing," she said, fingers moving deftly through a familiar series of motions. Within a few minutes, she had a crown of flowers which she set aside before starting on another. "Like any kid that age, I protested, but I guess deep down I knew they were doing it because they cared, so I doubled down and focused on it. Wasn't all that great at it until I got my first pokémon, which eventually became my leafeon. Being a daredevil, I started using pokémon moves in my dancing, dodging leafeon's razor leaves and vine whips." She smiled slightly, tying another crown closed. Moving to set it with the first, she blinked in surprise. "It's gone!"

Ezra peered around her and tilted his head, before getting to his feet. Looking around, he spotted a flash of white in the grass. "There!"

Whatever it was froze at the sound of his voice before bolting away. Ezra made to pursue, but Shin grabbed his arm and shook her head when he turned to look at her.

"It's just a flower crown," she said, raising her eyebrows. "Nothing to get worked up over."

Ezra blinked sheepishly. "Well, at least it'll look good wearing it." Shin's ears went pink and she looked away with a giggle.

The two sat back down and Ezra watched her work for a while in silence. Shin occasionally looked up at him, looking like she wanted to say something, but never spoke. Ezra didn't push her on it and laid back on the ground, staring up at the sky, watching clouds float by.

-

Arceus opened its eyes as the door to their room opened and Ezra came in.

"I'm back!" he called, taking his shoes off. He placed a bag of clothing down by the wall and made his way to Arceus, giving it a hug and a kiss.

"Welcome back," Arceus said, nuzzling the boy. "How was your shopping date?"

"Enjoyable," Ezra replied. "Shin has everything ready for her next performance in a few weeks."

"So why do you have clothing?" Arceus asked curiously. "Especially since you didn't seem interested in participating again."

Ezra shrugged. "Doesn't hurt to have options. Besides, you never know when you may need a costume for a masquerade or something."

Arceus chuckled and gazed at Ezra for a moment before curling around him.

"Something up?" Ezra asked, rubbing over the Alpha Pokémon.

"Well, since you seem to be getting along quite nicely with Miss Lee, I...have been considering leaving the two of you to your devices for a while."

Ezra blinked in surprise and Arceus pushed its head into the boy's chest lightly.

"Yet at the same time, I don't want to leave you," Arceus said with a sigh.

"Isn't that what being a parent is all about?" Ezra asked. Arceus snorted softly and Ezra scowled affectionately. "Even though you and I are a little beyond that."

"You're taking this remarkably well," Arceus noted.

Ezra smiled and squeezed Arceus' legs lightly. "Well, it's not like we're being separated forever, or breaking up, right?"

"Wouldn't dream of it," Arceus replied. "I just want you to be happy with Miss Lee."

"I don't suppose you'd be willing to stick around for her next show?" Ezra asked.

"I can do that much," Arceus said. "After that...well, we'll see. Barring any world-ending catastrophes, I suspect it'll be a while I see you again." Its tone then turned musing. "Granted, that doesn't mean I won't stop in from time to time."

"So long as you don't pop in during intimate moments, that shouldn't be a problem," Ezra said, curling against Arceus' side.

"Oh? Am I going to be a grandfather soon?" Arceus teased, causing the boy to scowl at it. "She's over fifteen?"

"Turned fifteen last December," Ezra said.

"I wish you the best of luck," Arceus said, nibbling on the boy's fingers. "She's quite lovely."

"I've noticed," Ezra replied dryly.

The two then settled down for the night and were soon asleep.

-

Ezra sat on the side of a hill and watched as Shin practiced her Showcase routine.

She had used Glaceon's Powder Snow to freeze a part of the grassy field into a stage and was attempting to use Magical Leaf and Ice Beam to set up her finale, but was having a little trouble with the timing. Leafeon was also suffering due to skating around on ice and every few minutes Shin stopped practicing to cup her pokémon's paws between her hands to warm them up.

Ezra got to his feet and ambled down to offer help of some kind while Arceus watched the proceedings silently.

Shin looked up at Ezra as he approached and he knelt down beside her as she warmed Leafeon against her body.

"As you can see, I've hit a bit of a roadblock," Shin said with a sigh. "And it's driving me up the wall."

"Is the ice rink absolutely necessary?" Ezra asked, stroking over Leafeon's fur, gently warming the pokémon with his power. Leafeon chirped at him and licked his hand, causing Shin to smile slightly before she got a contemplative look on her face.

"Not...entirely," she said slowly. "I suppose I could have Glaceon use some fast melting ice to add some style to her performance while Leafeon and I dance normally..."

Ezra glanced at Glaceon, who fretted at her partner's side. Leafeon flicked her tail at the Ice-type and mewled at her. Glaceon huffed before lightly nuzzling the other pokémon.

"Practice makes perfect," Ezra said. "And we've got plenty of time to do so."

Shin nodded before massaging Leafeon's paws one last time before getting to her feet. "Alright, one last attempt for today. You ready, girls?"

Ezra went back to the hillside, sitting beside Arceus, who ruffled the boy's hair.

"You're getting better at interacting with humans," it said warmly. Ezra's ears heated and Arceus chuckled. "I'm glad to see how much you've grown."

Ezra leaned against Arceus' side and the two resumed watching Shin perform.

-

Heading back into the city from the flower fields, Shin and Ezra were chatting quietly, hands twined together. Behind them, Arceus walked slowly, letting them get ahead of it. Arceus stopped and sighed, gazing up at the sky, letting its eyes admire the world it had created all those countless years ago.

"You alright?"

Arceus twitched in surprise and looked down to see Ezra hugging him. Stroking the boy's hair as it looked into the child's curious eyes, it nodded.

"Just lost in happy memories," Arceus said. Ezra narrowed his eyes, but didn't press the issue. Arceus then turned the boy around and pushed him forward. "Back to your girlfriend," it teased, causing the boy to stumble. Ezra whirled, jabbing a finger at Arceus.

"You-" he said, only to bump into something sharp and he jerked slightly. Turning, he came face-to-face with a lucario, who was studying him closely. Arceus was happy to see that Ezra was unharmed, save for a hole in the back of his shirt from the pokémon's spike.

"Hello there," Ezra said, tilting his head. "Are you lost?"

The lucario sniffed the air around the boy curiously, the aura sensors on its head twitching.

"He doesn't have Aura," Arceus said, stepping up to the boy's side. The lucario glanced at the disguised Alpha Pokémon and inclined its head respectfully before it stepped back.

"Hey!" came a new voice. A girl wearing a red and white skating outfit rushed up, another lucario running behind her. She came to a stop beside the lucario and rested her hands on her knees, catching her breath. Standing up, she scowled at the lucario. "You can't just go rushing off like that! You had me worried, and-" She stopped, noticing Ezra, Arceus and Shin. Clapping her hands together, she bowed low. "Hello, my name is Korrina and I offer my most sincere apologies for the behavior of my pokémon," she said. "As the gym leader of Shalour City, I should be more diligent with my pokémon, but you know how they are."

"Indeed," Arceus replied lightly, eyes twinkling in amusement as the lucario blushed. "I suspect he was drawn here by my ward, Ezra. He lacks Aura, which causes pokémon sensitive to it to notice."

Korrina tilted her head before looking at her lucario. "Is that what's had you uneasy lately, Riley, Aaron?" The two lucario nodded, red eyes resting on Ezra, whose purple eyes met theirs. Something passed between the trio and they dipped their heads respectfully to him before turning to their trainer.

She frowned, biting her lip. "Well, if there's anything you need help with, feel free to stop by the gym," she said, before noticing Shin. "Aren't you a Performer?"

Shin nodded. "I plan on partaking in the Shalour City Showcase later today," she said. "Maybe get a key out of it."

"I look forward to watching it," Korrina said. "Aaron is really fond of Showcases and they've grown on me as well. Riley's the odd one out, as he prefers gym battles."

"I may stop by sometime then," Ezra said, getting Riley's attention. "While I don't really plan on partaking in all the Leagues, I do like having the odd gym battle here and there."

"Splendid," Korrina said. "I look forward to your challenge." She bowed to them once again before skating off, followed by her pokémon.

Shin watched them go before turning to Ezra. "No Aura?" she asked curiously.

The boy shrugged. "I'm not sure why that's a thing, but I haven't noticed anything odd about it." He glanced at Arceus, who shrugged as well.

Shin's worry melted away and she took Ezra's hands, squeezing them. "Well, shall we go relax for a bit before the Showcase tonight?" she asked.

"Certainly," Ezra said, and the trio continued on.

-

Ezra and Arceus sat in the upper balcony of the Shalour City Showcase, watching the various performances.

"Cal had a good thing going with her Scraggy," Arceus mused thoughtfully, leaning on the railing.

"Cal?" Ezra asked, glancing at it. "Could've sworn her name was Kiri Concetta."

Arceus' lips twitched. "Sara Lee," it countered. Ezra shrugged and turned his gaze back to the stage, perking up as Shin appeared, flanked by her leafeon and glaceon. Throwing a kiss to the crowd, she began.

Starting off with a Grassy Terrain, Glaceon then froze it with Powder Snow, which was then melted by a Sunny Day put out by Leafeon, throwing a myriad of rainbows through the evaporating snow. Shin danced among the shifting colors, arms extended, limbs moving in hypnotic patterns as her pokémon ran and leaped around her. A storm of Magical Leaves then sliced through the mist, winding around a pillar of ice before exploding outwards in a blast of cold, freezing them in the shape of a flower. The entire construct then shattered into a glittering array of shards and Shin bowed low.

Monsieur Pierre then took the stage, congratulating the performers before the voting began. Turning the color of his PokéLume to purple to match Shin's key color, Ezra then glared at Arceus, whose caster was emitting a yellow glow.

"What?" Arceus said innocently, "I'd already seen Miss Lee's performance before."

Pinching the bridge of his nose, Ezra shook his head and watched as the different keyholes hovering above the performers filled. They faded away while the levels were even and the stage went dark.

"The winner of the Shalour City Showcase is..." Monsieur Pierre's voice filled the room and Ezra bit his lip nervously. The spotlights snapped on, illuminating a single figure before the entire arena was flooded with light.

"...Miss Sara Lee! Congratulations!"

Arceus watched in amusement as Ezra let out a whoop, leaping into the air. It seized Ezra by the scruff of the neck as the boy nearly leaped over the railing and shook its head, smiling. "Patience, Ezra," it said admonishingly. Calming slightly, Ezra watched as Shin received her key from Pierre's klefki and the Showcase concluded.

In her dressing room, Shin Lee let out a breath and sank into her chair. Placing her trembling hands on trembling knees, she gazed at herself in the mirror. The girl staring back at her looked like she'd been been poleaxed and she let out a laugh of relief.

Her pokémon twined around her legs, jumping into her lap and covered her in licks and nuzzles, causing her to dissolve into helpless giggles as she fended them off.

There was a knock on the door and she turned as it opened. Ezra and his guardian stepped inside, shutting the door behind themselves. Ezra was vibrating happily and she watched curiously as the boy's guardian lightly tugged on the boy's shirt collar and he relaxed slightly. Taking a deep breath, he nodded to her.

"Your performance was amazing," he said simply. Shin's face went pink and she looked away, fiddling with the hem of her dress nervously.

"You think so?" she murmured. "I wasn't entirely happy with it."

Ezra blinked, stepping towards her. "Really? I thought it was beautifully executed and you did it in a such a way both your pokémon got to shine. Literally," he added after a moment.

Shin nodded, before stifling a yawn, blushing as she did so. "Sorry," she said, shaking her head. "It took a lot out of me."

Ezra blinked in sympathy and his guardian placed his hands on the boy's shoulders, giving them a squeeze.

"Well done, Miss Lee," he said with a dip of his white-haired head. "I daresay that was one of the best Showcases I've seen this year."

"Yet you didn't vote for her," Ezra muttered before yelping with pain as the hands dug into his shoulders. Shin winced and held her hands up placatingly.

"It's not a problem," she said. "Really," she added when Ezra's eyebrows arched. He looked at her for a moment, causing her to squirm before he reluctantly nodded. Gazing at the key, she took a breath and stood up, walking up to Ezra, who tilted his head and looked up at her.

She met his purple eyes and her hands lifted to his face, cupping it gently before she leaned down and gently kissed him.

Ezra's body twitched at the contact and Arceus stepped back, hiding a smile. Turning, it quietly left the room as the distance between the two humans vanished.

-

Shin held her Princess Key in the air, admiring it as she and Ezra wandered through the flower fields outside Shalour City. Holding the key to her chest, Shin wiggled happily before turning and hugging Ezra tightly.

Pulling away from him, she smiled. "Thank you for your help," she said, eyes gleaming with something Ezra couldn't quite place. Leaning forward, she kissed him gently and he nuzzled her, causing her to giggle. "That feels weird."

Ezra pulled back with a hurt look and pouted, causing Shin to blink before stammering an apology. Ezra waved it off with a sheepish smile, ducking his head. "Sorry," he said shyly. "It's just…this is all so new to me, ya know?"

Shin gazed at him, her mind going back to the previous evening and she smiled, taking his hands in hers. "Neither of us were perfect then," she said, raising her eyebrows, causing Ezra's ears to turn red. "It's a lot of fun."

Ezra nodded, turning his attention to the flowers, admiring them. The two came to a stop and Shin started braiding flowers as Ezra watched her.

"Vui~!"

Ezra twitched in surprise before turning to see a silver-furred eevee with red eyes wearing a crown of flowers looking up at him, tail wagging shyly. Ezra glanced at Shin, who had placed her flowers aside and was watching silently, before slowly kneeling down, not wanting to scare the eevee away.

"Hey there, little one," Ezra said gently. "You didn't have to bring these back, you know."

The eevee looked at the flowers before flattening her ears guiltily. Ezra motioned the pokémon closer. She looked at him, tilting her head and sniffed the air before she stepped forward, tail wagging slowly. Once she was within reach, Ezra placed the crown of flowers on her head and smiled.

"There, you see? A perfect fit."

The eevee flicked her ears before chirping happily, dancing in a circle, which had Shin moving closer out of curiosity. Watching the little one's dance, she stroked her chin musingly. Noticing her, the eevee froze up, tangling her paws together before going down in a heap.

Ezra helped her to her paws, smoothing her fur before making soft soothing noises to calm the pokémon. The eevee ducked her head shyly, hiding under Ezra's hands and he stroked her gently.

"There, there," he said. "This is Shin, a trainer who also uses eevee. Well," he corrected himself, "Glaceon and leafeon, at least."

Shin sat down, smoothing her glaceon-themed skirt as she did so, and smiled at the eevee. "You remind me of them when I first met them. While they're not as graceful as you, I imagine they'd like to meet you." She then perked up. "I know! Do you want to come with us?"

The eevee's ears stood up and she nodded, red eyes gleaming.

"But which of us gets her?" Ezra asked.

Shin pulled a poké ball from her belt and placed it in front of the eevee.

"That's for her to decide," she said. "Roll it towards whomever you'd like to travel with."

The eevee looked between the two, sniffing the around each of them before bumping the poké ball with her nose, nudging it towards Ezra. She barked at him, waving her tail. Ezra picked up the poké ball and tapped it against the eevee's head. The ball opened up, sucking the silver-furred fox into it. Shaking for a moment, it then beeped successfully.

Ezra then released her and she leapt into his arms, nuzzling him. Shin giggled.

"Congratulations," she said. "You ever own a pokémon before?"

Ezra shook his head and Shin sighed.

"Something else for you to learn about," she teased. "Come on then," she said, rising to her feet. "Let's go find my wayward ones and introduce her."

-

Ezra stared across the field at his Sinnoh League opponent curiously.

The man named Tobias stood tall and proud, a confident smirk on his face as the referee went over the usual rules before calling for the two trainers to send out their first pokémon.

"This'll be easy," Tobias declared. "Emerge, Darkrai!"

The Darkness Pokémon appeared in a flash of dark purple energy and Ezra bounced on his heels excitedly before throwing his own poké ball.

With a roar that shook the arena, Rayquaza materialized.

Tobias' jaw dropped and even Darkrai seemed dumbfounded.

"How in the-?!" Tobias demanded furiously.

"I asked nicely," Ezra said before pointing up. "Dragon Ascent!"

"With or without Primal Reversion?" Rayquaza asked, bathing itself in green and yellow energy.

"Eh, we're in the League, so you may as well go all-out," Ezra said. Rayquaza grinned before blasting off into the air, cracking the arena as it did so.

Tobias looked skyward for a moment before turning his gaze on the small child across the field, who was looking at Darkrai curiously.

"Darkrai, Phantom Force," Tobias ordered. Darkrai flitted out of view as Rayquaza descended from the heavens like a green thunderbolt, striking the ground with enough force to completely vaporize the field.

Darkrai rematerialized and struck at Rayquaza, who didn't even seem to notice, before getting smacked by Dragon Tail, sending it into the stadium wall. When the dust cleared, Darkrai sank to the ground, unconscious.

"Darkrai is unable to battle!" the referee declared. Tobias blinked before scowling. Recalling his pokémon, he pulled out his second.

"Latias, stand by."

The red dragon coalesced with a trilling coo before seeing Rayquaza and it turned into a strangled squeak of terror.

"Ice Beam!" Tobias ordered, but Latias was too scared to move and Rayquaza hammered her into the ground with Dragon Claw.

Ezra frowned before recalling Rayquaza as Tobias sent out his third pokémon, feebas. The man's shoulders slumped and Ezra hesitated before sending out Meloetta.

"Did you seriously only have those two powerhouses to carry you through Sinnoh?" Ezra asked as Meloetta beat the ugly fish into submission. Tobias nodded before sending out a bidoof.

"I'm quite curious as to how you've gotten your own legendary pokémon," Tobias said as Ezra's Manaphy washed the bidoof away.

"Grew up around them," Ezra said as Tobias sent out a togetic, which Ezra countered with Lugia, who Aeroblasted the fairy into next week.

"Interesting," Tobias said, sending out a buizel, who was promptly fried by Ezra's Zeraora.

"And the winner is Ezra, who will be moving on to the semifinals!" the announcer declared as the crowd went wild, thoroughly both confused and impressed with the legendary pokémon shown. Ezra and Tobias shook hands, with the former promising to sit down with the latter after the tournament to swap stories before they went their separate ways.
 
Going into this, I will admit I was a little skeptical--humans catching Legendaries usually goes horribly wrong, and the story typically devolves into "let's mow down everyone that stands in the way and call the main character god' (although that kind of story can also be done well if you know what you are doing.)

That said, you managed to pleasantly surprise me by coming up with a realistic and believable reason for why Arceus, creator of the Pokeworld, would want to go with a human boy, and a sweet and believable dynamic between the two of them. Well done!
 
Chapter Seven
Chapter Seven

As the door closed behind Arceus, Shin jerked back from Ezra, pulling her arms away from him to hold them in front of her, fingers curling into the palms of her hands.

"S-sorry," she squeaked, cheeks pink. "I was so caught up in getting a Key that…" She ran a shaking hand over her face and ducked her head sheepishly.

Ezra touched his lips before he shook his head and smiled softly at her. "There's nothing you need to apologize for," he said gently. After a moment, he added quietly, "You have very soft lips."

Shin arched an eyebrow before giggling coyly. "Is that so?" she murmured, gazing at him thoughtfully.

"I can see why humans like kissing so much," Ezra said, glancing at the door. Shin saw his brow crease for a moment before Ezra glanced back at her. His purple eyes scanned her face and she blinked.

"Is there something wrong?" she asked self-consciously.

"Can I kiss you again?" Ezra asked shyly.

Shin was silent for a moment before she then approached him and he looked up at her. Their eyes met and Ezra reached up with his hands to gently cup her cheeks before he moved in, standing on his toes as his lips brushed against hers. Shin shifted her hips, letting her body relax as Ezra pulled back to look at her.

"Never kissed a girl before, have you?" she asked in amusement. He'd been holding his breath, which had caused his face to contort as he had neared hers, which she found adorable.

"Only Arceus," Ezra admitted. Shin frowned as she tried to parse that statement. She sat down, pulling a chair away from the room's table and crossed her arms.

"How does that work?" she asked.

"Arceus adopted me a long time ago," Ezra said, taking a seat as well. "We grew close and…after a particularly rough period, I realized I had fallen in love with it, but…" He let out a breath, trembling as he clasped his hands together. "I wish I had been able to tell it in a more…suitable fashion."

Shin's green eyes narrowed sympathetically and she leaned forward. "But it worked out in the end, didn't it?" she asked softly.

Ezra pulled out an old poké ball and ran a thumb over its weathered surface. "Yeah," he murmured.

"Okay, but if you're in a relationship with Arceus," Shin said, "doesn't that make it awkward to start one with me?"

"Pokémon don't have the same views in relationships that humans do," Ezra said. "Harems are quite common among every species." He smirked in amusement. "It's why there's so many pokémon to begin with."

"A…harem," Shin said slowly. "So, does that mean you have other girls elsewhere?"

Ezra shook his head. "No," he said. "Even if I did, I wouldn't think about adding others unless everyone involved knew about and loved each other as much as I loved all of them." He scratched his head. "It's a little hard to explain, sorry."

"No, I get it," Shin said with a kind smile. "A relationship only works if there's love involved. If everyone isn't happy…"

Ezra nodded and gazed at his hands before looking back at her. "So, as I said on our first little outing, I'd like to spend more time with you, if you'll have me?"

Shin stood up and walked over to him before leaning down to kiss him again. Leaning back from the dazed boy, she smiled. "Of course," she said, before getting a thoughtful look on her face. "Question," she said, holding up a finger. "Is Arceus a boy or a girl?"

"Yes," Ezra said, causing Shin's mind to screech to a halt.

"How does that…work?" she asked blankly. "Especially if you two have…er…have you two had sex?"

"Of course," Ezra said, blinking in surprise. "Isn't that something married couples do?"

"Married-?" Shin stared at the curious child in front of her. "How old are you?"

"I stopped counting somewhere in the three thousands," Ezra said with a shrug. "I don't age." He snorted in amusement. "Arceus was at least kind enough to let me sexually mature though, as it wanted me to experience that at some point."

"Arceus was trying to get you laid?" Shin asked, stunned. "You're ageless?" She then perked up, leaning forward, eyes gleaming. "What have you seen? What were things like three thousand years ago?" She paused, tilting her head. "I dimly recall that Showcases have been around for thousands of years… Do you know anything about how they were back then?"

Ezra held his hands up with a chuckle. "I haven't been in Kalos for all of its development," he said. "But I do know that Showcases used to be held as a way to determine the Kalos King's partner. I was also one of the few male performers back then, since the then-King was bisexual, but the previous Kalos Queen wasn't too keen on competition and…" He let out a breath, wincing. "It got ugly, so Arceus and I left."

Shin leaned back in her chair, crossing her arms. "That sucks," she said. A comfortable silence fell between them and Shin watched as Ezra looked around the room. Their eyes met once more and Shin reluctantly got to her feet.

"Well, the Showcase is over, so we'll have to continue our discussions elsewhere," she said, gathering her things. Ezra helped her straighten the room.

"Arceus still has our rooms booked in the Pokémon Center. You're welcome to join us there if you like. Well, me, at least; since it'd have likely gone by now," Ezra said.

"I'm guessing Arceus was that gentleman with you?" Shin asked. "I can see why you like him." She glanced at him shrewdly. "You seem to like older partners."

"Well, I'm stuck at ten-ish years, you're fifteen, Arceus is millions of years older than me…" Ezra mused. "Huh…you're right. Strange how that works."

The two then departed, heading back to the Pokémon Center.

-

Ezra leaned against Arceus' side and stretched his arms above his head.

"Well, that's Unova done with," he said, resting his head against Arceus' warm barrel. "The Vale Kingdom is at peace once again."

"Quite so," Arceus said, not quite keeping the ire out of its voice. "Lucky we stopped by, otherwise I imagine that the Dragon Force would've done far more harm."

Ezra shivered as he remembered the raging purple energy that had drained the life from the forest as it bled out of the ground, leaving thousands of pokémon and people without homes.

"Yeah," he murmured, fingers brushing over Arceus' side. The Alpha Pokémon glanced at him before nuzzling him.

"Cheer up, dear. You're a hero of the Vale. This is a happy day."

Ezra pushed Arceus' muzzle away with a rueful grin. "Victini did most of the work, and then the princes guided the castle back to its perch."

"And who was the one to direct the princes' and dragons' attentions to the calamity in the first place?" Arceus asked.

"Victini," Ezra said stubbornly.

"Who was playing with...?"

"Sod off," Ezra grumbled, smiling. The Alpha Pokémon smirked and nudged him with its head again.

"Lord Ezra!"

A scowl crossed the boy's face, quickly swept away by a carefully neutral expression as he turned to see the King of the Vale approach, flanked by the two princes who wielded the power of Reshiram and Zekrom.

"Yes?" he asked, as Arceus got to its feet and towered over the boy. The king and princes kneeled, heads bowed.

"We would be honored if you'd join us for a celebratory dinner," the King said.

"As long as I'm not being made an heir to the kingdom, or given titles or lands," Ezra replied, watching them carefully. The way the king winced made him roll his eyes. "Seriously, I was just doing what anyone passing through would've done. I don't need a reward for doing so." His voice softened slightly. "I'd be honored to join you. I'll be down shortly."

The king and princes bowed again before leaving him and Ezra braced himself against Arceus' leg and groaned.

"First Sinnoh, then Kalos, and now Unova. Please tell me that your children in Johto or Kanto, or wherever is next on our checklist are well behaved."

Arceus frowned, tilting its head. "That depends if Lugia and Ho-Oh have been keeping their own wards under control. I know Ho-Oh's are usually well behaved, but Lugia's always give him some trouble, and I do plan on checking with him next, so..." The Original One's red eyes gleamed. "Of course, I could always leave you here to be fawned over while I go check-"

"Don't you dare leave me here," Ezra hissed. Arceus blinked in surprise at the boy's tone as his entire posture did an abrupt change. The boy trembled, hands clenching as his purple eyes darted around, as if seeking somewhere to hide. "Please, no, not again, not-"

Arceus wrapped itself tightly around the boy, sending a celebi to tell Victini to pass on a heartfelt apology to the king as it whisked the child and itself away.

-

"Hey, Celebi?"

The time-traveling pokémon opened an eye to see the human Arceus had brought home with it a few weeks ago staring at it. Quite an impressive feat since Celebi had taken up residence on top of one of the Hall of Origin's pillars.

"What is it?" Celebi asked, sitting up as the boy pulled himself up to sit on top of the pillar.

"How are there ever any problems if you have the ability to go to and from the future?" the boy asked.

Celebi's lips thinned and it frowned. "Some things need to happen," the pokémon replied. "Others are the better option. Knowing the future means trying to change it and that leads to being so paranoid or cautious that somewhere along the way, things will snap and become infinitely worse."

"Ah," the boy said, fingers drumming on his knees. "That makes sense. So you just keep watch and give warnings when and where they're needed?"

"Quite so," Celebi replied. "Although one thing I have noted is that Arceus taking you in had some...interesting ramifications to future events and even Dialga isn't entirely sure how that's going to go."

The boy's face fell and he looked away. "Sorry for making things harder."

"Nonsense," Celebi said. "That's a good thing, as it means there'll be new things to look forward to instead of repeating events for the fourth time."

"Fourth...?" the boy asked, tilting his head.

"Nothing you need to worry about, little one," Celebi said, shooing the boy away. "Now if you'll excuse me, I'd like to get some sleep done."

"Sweet dreams," the boy said, before diving off the side of the pillar to land on top of a Regigigas passing by.

-

Ezra watched as Shin and Korrina chatted a mile a minute about clothing - ranging from types and colors of fabrics, to what was best for different kinds of weather, and what to wear when training, traveling, or performing.

The boy then glanced down at his shirt and vest combo, feeling uncomfortably overdressed, before glancing at Lucario, who was pawing through a plate piled high with macarons. The Aura Pokémon's ears flicked and he met Ezra's gaze curiously. Ezra's lips twitched and he pulled a macaron from his side of the plate, one piled high with toppings, and handed it to the pokémon, who scarfed it down eagerly.

The girls paused in their discussion as Lucario burped and Korrina giggled, reaching over to stroke over her pokémon's fur softly.

"Easy, there," she chided him gently. "Slow down, otherwise it won't settle correctly and you'll be barfing it back up." A far-too-familiar look crossed over her face and Lucario ducked his head sheepishly before letting out a soft growl. The gym leader then glanced at Ezra. "So, you don't have Aura? What's that like?"

Ezra scratched his head, shrugging. "It's never been something I've thought about," he admitted. "The only time it was really an issue was when Arceus and I visited the Rota Kingdom in the Kanto region a long time ago. The lucario there proclaimed me the Blank One and inscribed me into their legends after I helped their Aura Guardian protect the Tree of Life."

Lucario choked, eyes going wide as Shin and Korrina tilted their heads. Korrina noted her pokémon's reaction and frowned.

"Doesn't sound good to me," she said, stroking her chin as she sat back in her chair, crossing her legs. "I know a lot of people and pokémon who use Aura to communicate with one another, as well as using it to augment their attacks and the like... But, not having an ounce?" She shook her head, hair brushing over her face. "Doesn't seem natural."

"Nothing about Ezra is natural," Shin said, causing Korrina to look at her curiously. Ezra nodded, smiling ruefully.

"She's right," he said, tapping his finger on the tabletop. "Ever since Arceus took me in and Xerneas gave me eternal life, I've been traveling all over the world, seeing all kinds of things, and getting into all kinds of mischief," he added with a grin. "Much to Arceus' irritation."

"It didn't seem all that irritated when it set you up with me," Shin noted. "And I haven't found you irritating. Amusing, yes, but other than being eager and curious, you seem about as normal as normal can be, Aura or not."

Korrina laced her fingers together in her lap, digits brushing against the keystone set into the back of her right glove. "Well, everyone has something that makes them unique, so as long as your condition is not harmful, I guess that's your little quirk."

"Thanks," Ezra said. Shin rested her hand on top of his, giving it a light squeeze and he looked at her with a warm smile. His eyes darted over her face for a moment and he kissed her nose, causing her to squeak and blush. Korrina snickered as Lucario snuck another macaron from the plate, drawing attention to himself when he choked on it.

"You'll be scrubbing the gym floors when we get back," Korrina said in exasperation. "You're almost as bad as Clemont's chespin."

"Clemont?" Ezra asked, perking up.

"The Lumiose City gym leader," Shin said. "He's a bit of an inventor who uses Electric-type pokémon. Although he's got a few other types that aren't used in battles." She watched as Ezra's purple eyes gleamed and she pulled her digital guidebook out, flicking through it for a moment. "Ah, good. Lumiose City is on the way to the next Showcase anyway, so we'll be able to stop by and see if he's around."

"Are you sure that's okay?" Ezra asked. "I don't want to hinder your Showcase progress-"

"Relax," Shin said, ruffling his hair. "There's plenty of time to poke around and explore the places along the way."

"Good luck, both of you," Korrina said, before biting her lip, looking as if she wanted to add something, but wasn't sure if she should.

"What's the matter?" Shin asked, noticing the pause.

"Ah, I know this might sound strange, but…can I join you? At least for a little while?" Korrina asked.

"Of course," Ezra said without hesitation, before looking at Shin. "If…that's alright with you."

"No reason for it not to be," Shin said with a smile. Korrina smiled shyly, ducking her head.

"Thank you. I'll try not to get in your way."

Shin and Ezra scoffed in unison, waving their hands dismissively.

"Don't worry about it," they said simultaneously. Korrina blinked in surprise and giggled as the two looked at each other.

Korrina got to her feet, kicking her heels together to release her skates. "I just need to go pack a few essentials and I'll meet you outside the city."

Waving, she skated off. Ezra looked after her, arms crossed, finger tapping against his bicep.

"She's not telling us something," he mused.

"And we're not going to pressure her into spilling it," Shin said firmly. "She'll tell us when she's ready and we're going to help her relax."

Ezra glanced at her with an amused grin. "I'm sure you'll be better at that than I will be. You have a lot to talk about in terms of Showcases."

Shin nodded, lacing her hands behind her back as she bumped her hip against his. "One of these days you'll have to perform again. Maybe with eevee?"

Ezra shrugged. "I'll have to ask her."

"Or!" Shin said, clapping her hands together, startling Ezra, "Perhaps…" she hesitated, scratching her cheek shyly, "I could use her with Glaceon and Leafeon?"

Ezra nodded after a moment. "That'd probably be better than me using her. You're a lot better at Showcases than I am."

"Says the one who won his debut by a landslide," came the dry reply.

Ezra shrugged, putting his hands in his pockets. "Fair enough," he said with a sigh.

Shin linked her arm with his and smiled at him before tugging him into a hug, tousling his hair. "Come on," she said, pulling away. "Let's get our stuff and wait for Korrina."

-

Arceus gazed down at the sleeping boy nestled against its belly and let its mind wander.

Once the boy had declared his affection for the Alpha Pokémon, their relationship had...changed. Arceus kept catching the boy giving it gazes that were filled with an emotion Arceus wasn't familiar with and the boy's touches seemed to linger with the pokémon long after the hand had left its skin. Arceus found itself finding excuses to place itself within reach of the boy's touch and the boy was more than glad to fulfill Arceus' wishes, but at the same time, Arceus felt like it had been taking advantage of the boy's naiveté and then asked what the boy desired from it.

"You," he had replied, purple eyes meeting red. "That is all I need or want, at the moment."

His hands had lifted up, and Arceus had placed its head between them shortly before the boy's lips pressed themselves on Arceus' face, where the mouth would've been on a human. The lack of a mouth had disappointed the boy, but he had simply smirked and traced his fingers over the lines without saying anything, much to Arceus' confusion and when pressed, had replied with a disarming "Don't worry about it. Please."

The boy had then asked to explore Arceus' body and had spent a few minutes climbing over the Alpha Pokémon, hands and feet touching every inch they could reach and occasionally the boy's lips and tongue would explore various areas as well, causing Arceus' body to tremble and heat up.

Once his curiosity had been satisfied, Ezra had then spent a few minutes toying with Arceus' ring, admiring the colors of the gems set in it and guessing which Types they had represented. He then realized Arceus kept shifting them once he had moved on to the next one, which had earned a light-hearted kick from the boy that had left him cursing up a storm and massaging a sore toe.

He rested his hand on the ring and leaned back against Arceus' neck, sighing softly.

"Penny for your thoughts?" Arceus asked, craning its head around.

Ezra leaned his head back, staring at the roof of the Hall of Origin.

"I know I say it a lot," Ezra murmured, turning so he could gaze into Arceus' eyes. "But thank you."

"As always, happy to help."

-

"Tell me about yourself," Ezra said, gazing up at Arceus.

The duo were sitting in the Hall of Origin, not doing much of anything, which had caused the boy to ask the question.

"What do you want to know?" Arceus asked, tucking its legs under itself, settling down.

"Well..." Ezra said slowly, getting to his feet and pacing in front of Arceus, "you're the one who created the pokémon world, right? Why?"

"To answer that, we'll have to go back to a time before I gave myself a corporeal form," Arceus said.

Ezra stared at Arceus blankly.

"This body," Arceus said, tapping its chest with a foreleg, "is a created construct. It's not real."

"Felt real to me," Ezra said. "It's warm, has a pulse, muscles shifting under the fur..."

"All simulated," Arceus replied. "Quite literally child's play for me."

"You were a child once?" Ezra asked, tilting his head.

Arceus smiled in its own way and nodded. "Before anything existed, there was an egg. My egg. I do not know how or why it existed, only that it did. One day it hatched, but what was in it wasn't what you see before you. There was only..." Arceus' voiced trailed off and it shook its head in frustration. "It's hard to explain what it was. My...soul? A collection of thoughts? Whatever I was at the time, I was lonely, so I tried making something to keep me company. Unfortunately, the thing I made couldn't survive wherever I was, so I had to make a special place for it to live. Of course, I had to make it massive so that what I made wouldn't get bored and have nothing to do, so I made a universe."

"You make it sound easy," Ezra said. "And...a universe? So there's more?"

"Of course," Arceus replied. "You never get anything right on the first try, and I've made and destroyed more universes than I can remember, and I can remember a lot."

"That's quite impressive," Ezra said, leaning back, gaze thoughtful. "So you made a universe, and filled it with life. What then?"

"Much like how nothing could survive in my realm, my universes couldn't tolerate my...form," Arceus said, "So I had to make a body for myself to control within the universe, and that is what you see in front of you."

"I'd like to see your real form some day," Ezra said.

"Have you ever looked directly at the sun?" Arceus asked.

"Once, then never again because it was agonizing," Ezra said.

"Well, imagine that, but infinitely more agonizing, and you'd be maybe a trillionth towards being able to comprehend my true form," Arceus said.

Ezra's eyes went wide and he gazed at Arceus, eyes wandering over the pokémon.

"So, what about power?" Ezra asked, touching Arceus' leg, feeling the short fur, taut muscles, and the steady pulse of life flowing through it. Arceus unconsciously gave off an aura of power, which it usually kept restrained, but Ezra knew it could unleash it if it ever needed to.

"Much like my true form, this shell would never be able to hold all of my power, so it merely acts as a...I suppose something akin to a funnel," Arceus mused. "Nothing I have made has ever been as strong as it, since their bodies are physical - flesh and blood."

"So they'd burn up, or something?" Ezra said.

"And probably take half a continent with them in the process," Arceus said. "There's a reason I spend most of my time here and only venture out to check on things every few centuries."

"Out of morbid curiosity, have you ever gotten angry and let loose within a universe?"

"Yes, and it went exactly the way you'd expect," Arceus replied, eyes glowing red.

Ezra's purple eyes met them, and they softened slightly before looking away.

"But that was a long time ago," Arceus murmured, before turning back to Ezra. "Now then, I do believe it's time for dinner, so I'd appreciate it if you could gather my wayward children and let them know it's first come first served."

"Yes, dad," Ezra said sarcastically, before scampering off, as Arceus watched him thoughtfully.

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"Question," Ezra said as he stared at the chess board Arceus had procured years ago.

"Hm?" Arceus asked with a blink as it took one of Ezra's Knights.

"You and Xerneas seemed quite close when we stopped by. Did you two date at one point?" Ezra moved his Rook three spaces and Arceus promptly nabbed it as well.

"Not in the usual sense of the word," Arceus said as Ezra fumed silently. "She's just exceptionally curious about relationships, much to Yveltal's consternation, as he's never sure if she's genuinely interested in a relationship or just teasing him."

"Would certainly be nice if one's intentions were made clear as soon as they became a thing," Ezra muttered, eyes roaming the board as he warily pushed a Pawn forward.

Arceus nodded thoughtfully as it pondered its next move. "It would certainly make life easier for both parties." Making its choice, Arceus then moved its King into play.

Ezra's brow furrowed as he took note of the pieces on the board. Taking the King would open up the Queen, but he'd lose valuable mobility pieces in the process. Biting his lip, he played it safe and went after Arceus' Knight instead.

"So you've never been in a relationship?" Ezra probed, gauging Arceus' reaction.

"I have had plenty of lovers over the years," Arceus replied. "It's just that most of them were mortal and have been laid to rest."

"So Xerneas would be great for you," Ezra said. "Similar body types, and she's quite lovely to look at."

"Oh? Perhaps the two of you should be dating," Arceus said. "She seemed to fancy you."

"Eh," Ezra grunted, as Arceus swept through his pieces with ease. "I've already got someone I'm interested in."

Arceus' brows rose, but it couldn't get anything more out of the boy.
 
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At a glance, the plot is easy to understand. Ezra rescues an Arceus and is rewarded for his actions by being whisked away to the Hall of Creation, never to worry about the pesky parts of mortal existence again. Not the most original by any means, but an interesting idea worth writing about.

However, when you actually dig down into this story, it feels like such a mess. There's time skips, scene changes and other things that just come out of nowhere and left me confused. There are little details that are established, then disregarded fairly quickly. An example is how Arceus explains to Ezra that in the future, people will be able to carry Pokemon in their pockets. Then, before the first chapter even ends, Arceus gives him a Pokeball that he instantly recognizes. Unless some massive leap in time and a subsequent memory wipe happened, that doesn't make a whole lotta sense.

Anyways, onto setting. I actually quite liked the description of the town the story started in. You got a real sense that it was a classical-era society, likely drawing inspiration from romanticized accounts of ancient Greece, but in a big metro center like Rome. Or at least, that's what I imagined.

After that, description was fairly lacking. I didn't get much of a sense of what the Hall of Creation was or what it should have looked like. All I could gather was that it was cut off from the rest of existence and was basically the clubhouse for all of the legendaries.

Ezra effectively being a feral child was a nice touch, but I'm not sure it'd be completely accurate if he still lived within a city. Even more, as stated early on that he waited until he was older to run away from his family, he likely would have had society's quirks ingrained into him, even if he left it alone for, say, 10 years.

Arceus is kinda strange, and not what I'd expect an all powerful creator of everything to be. It seems more human than the human characters. More loving. More patient. More forgiving. But, all-knowing, all-powerful gods are perfect for creative liberty, so I can't find any faults with that.

The style is very easy to read, apart from the odd, unannounced scene changes and time skips. When I mentally cut the scenes apart and view them as individual pieces, they're very well written. That is the only real feedback I can offer here, learning to better break up the scenes and transition between them.

In a technical sense, it's well written and very polished. I did find one misused word, but I've forgotten where it is. It's in the first chapter (unhelpful, I know). The fact that I've forgotten probably means it's not that important and doesn't distract much.

Honestly? Keep at it. It's an interesting idea worth exploring further and further.
 
So this, postreview-y stuff. This is...kind of something that's all over the place. On one hand, I do like the straightforward character interactions and when there's actual plot rather than random "fluffy nonsensical character interactions". Sometimes emphasis on nonsensical. Like I liked it when Shin was introduced. Then sudden random flashback to crushing the shit out of the guy from the DP league anime.

I don't like the random scenes or bits of Ezra just crushing things with legendaries who obey him just because god said them. Especially the Tobias bit. I mean it was a dumb part of the anime sure but that read like such a revenge fantasy... Or the bits where Arceus is like "I AM GOD PUNY HUMANS".

Interesting concept, that said. A feral child hanging around with a creator god. Who first initially seems to romantically love him then that gets downplayed into parental love. Except now it's leaning romantic again? Huh? In any event, this could probably could be even better if it had focus rather than being all over the place. This is too far over the place for even me! :p Definitely has potential, though. Hoping you can see it realized!
 
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