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Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Part 7 Posted) Please Read
Thanks so much for the help. I promise that this last Chapter will "Blow" you away.
As the end of this fix draws near, I sense an explosive finale...
The plot stays good, but it does get a bit repetitive after a while, what with battle after battle. In your sequel, try to spice it up a bit - maybe a grunt discovers a secret goldmine, or Team Rocket blow up the Devon Corporation (since it takes place in Hoenn).
There are, like other people say, quote a few mistakes. Try using a spell check to improve your accuracy, but remember that they can be unreliable...
Thanks so much for the help. I promise that this last Chapter will "Blow" you away.