COMPLETE: When Evil Meets Evil (Book 1) (COMPLETED)

[Marcat]

Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Chapter 8, and Trivia Chapter)

Sorry it took so long to get back to you.
Anyway... good finale. However, you have grammar and spelling issues.
For example.
In one instance you spelled "Feet" as "feat"
Another is that you said "While people were ran from their homes". Thats bad grammar.
Sorry for being a Grammar/spelling fanatic but these comments benefit you more than a random "Great job" comment.
Great job though. lol

 

[NikNak3000]

Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed!)

And so the story comes to an end (and starts up again as Hoenn gets invaded in your next book). I liked the way that the leaders tried to cheat their way to victory, but would Archie really be worried about Cyrus' Honchkrow? He is an evil leader and everything...

I'm glad that Cyrus finally won, and how he reacted when one of his Pokémon died (i.e. did nothing) was just what he would have done! I loved the Kanto revolution as well!

All in all, a satisfying conclusion - now to read the sequel!

 

[alster08]

Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed!)

Thanks I cant wait till you find out the secrets and horror that will take place in book two.