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Next step of the stuff here, C9. Coming in hot for Day 1 of Review Week!
- That feel when they use fkn Fahrenheit in Kalos
- Of course shallow people wouldn't be able to happiness evolve
- She sounds like a Poke flipper
- This guy moves fast
- Of course they/you would call it a tea party.
- EVILLLL
- Hm, the shiny thing seems less inherently the capacity for being evil than it is demonic possession maybe
- One trope that bugs me is trainers being able to easily understand their Pokemon. Especially if the Poke's words remain hidden
- Hoo boy circling back to the incident
- Otome guy is here. Also he is acting funny
- Language shifts can always be tricky, might want to make them stand out more
- Welp, both busted
- This is almost crossing into anvilicious territory about trading in general, making it look like just a horrible thing no matter what. But maybe this side is just biased.
- She got his number!! I mostly joke but she actually squees a little on realizing too
- With Noel a bit jokingly too, if Odette wasn't in a crummy world, she could totally be an otome protagonist. She's even a little oblivious
- tfw no anime hair colors (or reds)
- I wonder if any of these demons have accidentally been unleashed by someone being too brutal in a battle or some random bleeding
- Man imagine how screwed they would be at a camera that can't be magically disabled. MMBN everything is on the net vibes here
- And Odette suddenly unleashes her own demonic powers. I guess she's the demifiend
- From h face? Huh?
- From Noel's description she may have attacked it in the spirit world after being pulled there or something
- Well as expected, Dorien is pissed
- Noel a master of excuses thankfully. Which may be legit but still. Also this might hit better if the low blood pressure was mentioned at all before this. Plus wow, thought she'd have high given how high strung she usually is
The plot continues to thicken. No doubt Dorien is going to be the least of Odette's worries after this. Keep it up, and hope to see more of this!
- That feel when they use fkn Fahrenheit in Kalos
- Of course shallow people wouldn't be able to happiness evolve
- She sounds like a Poke flipper
- This guy moves fast
- Of course they/you would call it a tea party.
- EVILLLL
- Hm, the shiny thing seems less inherently the capacity for being evil than it is demonic possession maybe
- One trope that bugs me is trainers being able to easily understand their Pokemon. Especially if the Poke's words remain hidden
- Hoo boy circling back to the incident
- Otome guy is here. Also he is acting funny
- Language shifts can always be tricky, might want to make them stand out more
- Welp, both busted
- This is almost crossing into anvilicious territory about trading in general, making it look like just a horrible thing no matter what. But maybe this side is just biased.
- She got his number!! I mostly joke but she actually squees a little on realizing too
- With Noel a bit jokingly too, if Odette wasn't in a crummy world, she could totally be an otome protagonist. She's even a little oblivious
- tfw no anime hair colors (or reds)
- I wonder if any of these demons have accidentally been unleashed by someone being too brutal in a battle or some random bleeding
- Man imagine how screwed they would be at a camera that can't be magically disabled. MMBN everything is on the net vibes here
- And Odette suddenly unleashes her own demonic powers. I guess she's the demifiend
- From h face? Huh?
- From Noel's description she may have attacked it in the spirit world after being pulled there or something
- Well as expected, Dorien is pissed
- Noel a master of excuses thankfully. Which may be legit but still. Also this might hit better if the low blood pressure was mentioned at all before this. Plus wow, thought she'd have high given how high strung she usually is
The plot continues to thicken. No doubt Dorien is going to be the least of Odette's worries after this. Keep it up, and hope to see more of this!