Recent content by RaiThunder

That sounds like a really interesting idea - each past MC mentoring the current MC, while they uncover new depths to the situation...Sounds like a great plot. I look forward to see more of it, Stellar Haze.

This sounds like an interesting idea. I like the idea of a new MC for every decade, it would show some interesting changes by showing us how the MCs change throughout the course of the war. EDIT: By the way, sorry I haven't posted a review for your other story yet - I've been busy with some...

If you have that little faith in your idea, throwing it away might be a good idea. Again, no one mentioned your crossover specifically. Things like that are why I said you're acting like people are out to get you. I am turning down your story because I just don't like crossovers. Maybe it...

Okay, wow way to fail reading comprehension. I never once said your crossover would go bad. I explained why I personally don't like crossovers. You posted this: And I said exactly why I dislike crossovers and what I think is wrong with the majority of them. Not everyone is out to get you and...

Most crossovers go exceptionally bad and most author's use them for the express purpose of making their favorite characters meet with no logical reason for the crossover. I tend to avoid crossovers just because they tend to go into realm of ridiculousness I can't stand.

Does anyone know how go about finding a beta? I'm looking for someone to look over my writing and help with the grammar and general errors...And then I realized I have no idea how to do that. Halp?

Rioghan watched the two, entire body still but for his jaws, which clicked with impatience. He watched Fuego with impatient eyes, seeing the bruises lighten up. He released his grip on his own human and stalked up to his frenemy, ignoring the human. "Fuego, so glad to see you're all right...

Firstly, thank you so much for the review. I really do enjoy your reviews. I'll go back and edit this, because if you had that half-second of confusion then other people probably will too. Thanks for the advice. I'm glad you enjoyed the battle - they very fun to write. Also - since you...

Three Times the Isshu has been updated with Chapter Two. In this chapter, our three trainers have their first battles, goals are declared, and Dr. Juniper lays down the law.

I tend to portray pokemon as more ...'sapient' I believed is the most appropriate word. I don't portray them as human, per se, but they have similar intelligence and emotional range in my works. Each species has it's own understandings, moral/ethical boundaries, that make them distinct amongst...

Hm. Would you mind if it was an actual plant? Because this website lists plant/flower names for people: Flower Plant and Tree Names for Girls If you want it to be a play on words - how are you thinking? Like, naming her something related to lotus, which is related to shyness and having her...

What kind of name are you looking for?

Chapter Two Author's Note: This chapter is longer - I really couldn't find a place to stop. There's a lot of knowledge about rules and laws here, but please understand that the information is necessary - both for the story and to understand later actions the characters may take. And - I've...

:sigh: If you wanted to discuss Mary-Sues, why did you post all about your character? It's alright to be paranoid - everyone gets a little annoyed, but I have to say that I am becoming irritated with your ignoring my posts and points. unrepentantAuthor and I have both pointed out the flaws we...

If you can't expand on her character without revealing plot details, then yes, you have tied her far to closely with the plot of the story. She should be a character in her own right, with fears, weaknesses, strengths, and goals that you should be able to talk about without fear of spoilers. If...