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Wow, thanks for sticking with it and reading it all the way through! I didn't know how accessible this would be, but I tried my hardest to give others here a glimpse of my mind.

Well, I've got to say, then, if you had no aim for a reader to "take something away" (which really should be secondary to telling a good story anyway) that this really is just good writing. I don't know that I like the story, but that's more subjective. The writing itself is really good...

This is good. I'm curious, though, what am I supposed to take away from the story rather than just what the title suggests? I think this could be a bit more thought-provoking somehow. Not to say this isn't superb writing, I just think the end seems rather defeating in all sorts. Is it...

I think you should leave it in. It makes it... extra special.

...the first time. (Keep in mind, plot is not a factor yet, simply characterization. How do these two interact, given only limited circumstances?) * * * A short, dark-skinned, dark-haired boy saw a figure in the distance. Definitely human. I've gotta introduce myself. He thought. He...

Uh, thank you for not keeping your artistic talent a secret from me!

...lesson early: they are not the same thing. Thankfully, the lesson I learned, although originally a setback, would eventually become my advantage. * * * As Terrance held me up over the ground, his eyes screaming pure excitement, my eyes could only sink down to the ground. Terrance was...

Oh my! South Florida is a great place to be this time of year, if I do say so myself. Very temperate weather, just about perfect, lows of 50 and highs of 80.

Time for me to admit. I'm... pleased to see progress. I was initially upset with this for a variety of reasons, but now I finally see effort on your part, and I'm happy to say so. Honestly, the main reason I was upset was because I thought this was a trollfic, and it was terrible watching...

...time I was blacked out, don't remember a thing. I'm sure you all guessed that. Well, continuing on, here's more of my story, where was I? * * * I awoke staring at the ceiling, in a soft bed in a cold, white building. I had no idea where I was, really, and the night before was a...

Cute... Moving on... Stellar Haze, thank you for contributing with some worthwhile criticisms after... that... I'll definitely work on the battle scenes, but as for describing the human characters, I really don't know. It's actually not something I like to do. I like for my readers to...

Seeing as he has already replied to good criticism with quitter's words... I figured it would be best if he followed through with SOMETHING. It's very upsetting to see good advice go ignored constantly.

That will be expounded on in the next chapter, so stay tuned. They're actually quite low-leveled, but we'll get to that soon.

Uh wow so much to be said. Apparently sugar-coating things for you to ingest only makes you fatter and more obstinate. So here's the deal plain and simple-like. You are not trying. It's obvious. I'm not sure why you're putting this story up here. There's no planning, no purpose, no meat...

This would be totally and completely awesome. I have never once read any "Ash and co." fic because I'm sick of "Ash and co." but this... this is right on. On topic: your question: realistic? As long as your characters remain the same characters, then being "realistic" shouldn't even be a...

Re: "Unpredictable" Hey! It's late for me to notice, but I've been away for a while, apparently you're back too! I don't know if you left for long, but I'm glad to be reading your story again. Well done again. Catching up on the missed chapters was a pleasure, and I'll be keeping up for as...

...but my trainer and his siblings and new acquaintance had plans to simply travel, so I just followed, eager for another chance to show my strength. * * * Yes, listeners, I'll admit, although timid for the most part outside of battle, when it came to showing my strength, I thought I was...

...thing, it was a piece of cake. I'll never forget feeling that way. And I'll never forget having that pretense shattered. But that's a story for another time. * * * It's a shorter chapter this time around, but I'm wiped out after today's work. More to come, prepare for Phanpy's...

Thanks for reading, guys! I'll be taking a short break (I know I JUST started) as I'm leaving to go on vacation for a few days. I'll be back for the next episode next week.

...up to me to define it. Whether Terrance knew it or not at the time, he was a genius... but enough about all that, you're all here for a story... * * * The new year had started already. Everyone in the family celebrated and Terrance held onto me tightly as the family counted down from...