I wasn't referring to Mill but the Timburr species itself. It just stands out as an odd choice, largely as it is a Fighting-type living in a forest, and a Fighting-type that fights with a large block of wood yet somehow dismembers other Pokemon. Perhaps, going back to my other point of the twist...
Neat little chapter. I am glad you split it up as I like the cliffhanger ending. I don't really feel that a Timburr is the right sort of Pokemon to go around cutting up other ones (I mean, it carries a giant log rather than a knife...) but I suppose a Scyther or something similar may have been...
Review time. I didn't want to review the first chapter a sI was unsure what path you were taking or where it would go next and hoped a second chapter would provide more light. And boy did it. This is a charming and sweet little story. It reminds me of an independent film, in a way - one where...
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