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Right off the bat, this chapter brings back a nitpick I had from the first couple of chapters: the pacing. It can be hard to stay focused on the actual content when you have these brief dialogue paragraphs interspersed with huge chunks of narration. The eleventh paragraph (stars of with "Will...

I don't actually think I've got a lot to say about this one. Possibly because I think I'm a bit confused... and maybe reading too far into things. The central part of this chapter is, in essence, a "clip show" in writing. We're treated to a parade of the story's events through Max's mind. Using...

I'm not saying that I consider Spike to be a reliable narrator, but dang if he didn't drop a (potentially) spicy bit of information! First off, the idea that Doc's using some sort of "legitimate" operation as a backdrop for his shady practices is an interesting way to bring up the tidbit that he...

A training montage, you say? Aww, look, Max is promising to do better. He's mostly in apology mode for his first two scenes here. And it's nice to see that change in him. But actions speak louder than words, so I'm waiting for something more than an apology to see that things have really...

Hiya. So, I've given this a look see and kind of mish-mashed all my thoughts together into a review. Though you're welcome to ignore it. You wouldn't be the first. ^^; Starting off here, I'm also the type of person who really gets a kick out of seeing the League Challenge turned into a...