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Looking at Chapter Five, I'm going to dispense with the usual format to avoid pointless repetition. Dialogue is still a bit stingy with the commas, but it didn't see quite so noticeable this time round so somewhere there must have been some improvement. A little bit of extra thought going into...

I presume I read up to Chapter Two last time, so I'll do my best to be coherent despite not remembering too many of the details Technical Accuracy/Style Not much new to add here, except perhaps to reiterate that you're severely under-using commas. Setting Little new to add once again, though a...

Right, let me see, let me see Technical Accuracy/Style There's a lot of silly mistakes that really could be cleared up with a good proof read - missing or inconsistent capitalisation, misformatted dialogue, misspellings: Vain Poring It's those little details that very easily, very quickly...

You probably don't remember, but you were first to review The Long Walk way back in - well, relatively speaking anyway - the mists of time. It seems appropriate that I should put something together in response So, I read Chapter One. In general it needs a tidy up. The prose is speckled with...