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  1. Beth Pavell

    TEEN: Land of the Roses

    Since kintsugi requested I review you for her prize, breaking from our usual review exchange. I'm going to skip right across the Technical Accuracy/Style section. There's never anything wrong with your technical accuracy, and barring anything experimental from you I don't think there's anything...
  2. Beth Pavell

    TEEN: Land of the Roses

    Comma. Possible nit-pick here, but if he's already wearing a customer service smile it'll be difficult for his face to light up as well. Not impossible, I suppose (Customer service smiles can visibly develop actual warmth) The Institute feels a bit more lived-in this time round. I recall the...
  3. Beth Pavell

    TEEN: Land of the Roses

    These reviews are invariably going to be shorter this time around, but here it goes: Still a drama queen, I see, since she has a degree. This one comes across a little odd in the edit. The outfit is described as if it's completely new - and indeed much of it is - but you started to introduce...
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