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@Athena, @AceTrainer14 , @Ghostsoul, @Beth Pavell, @canisaries, @Ambyssin Well it's been kind of a while, but I'm proud to say that we're back with Because You Were There. Also, I want to say that I'm super glad that this story actually managed to come out on top for Best Drama during the...

I think in this case it has more to do with me doing the changes too quickly, but basically Sarah goes from annoying to respectful because of proper military etiquette, she's talking to a superior so she has to salute before she leaves. Then she smiles at Sombra both to show that she returned to...

Hi, just wanted to give a quick reply to @canisaries I'll reply to everyone else once chapter 6 is (finally) completed. For now, canisaries, I don't mind you pointing out the grammar mistakes, I know that grammatically I have a lot of work to do, especially with the older chapters, so I...

@Athena, @AceTrainer14 , @Ghostsoul, @Beth Pavell Anyways, I think that's all the responses. Suffice to say, I was actually a bit down the last couple of weeks in trying to process all of the critiques and seeing how I could incorporate them going forward. I'm not kidding when I say that I've...

And with this chapter we officially enter Part 2 of Because You Were There. After the battle against Xurkitree, Sarah and Sombra will have a lot of coming down to do as the events of the fight revive a lot of old wounds and may even lead to new ones down the line. Part 4: Request Year 11 “What...

Could it be? Is Flaze finally updating this? Well yes, it actually is. Admittedly life got a bit in the way, which is sad cause this chapter has technically been ready for a month. As I stated at the start of this, these first three chapters were written as a oneshot for URPG and I've been...

Well the thing I can tell you about the Ultra Space issue is that yes, it is Ultra Space, there's a reason why there's broken debris and buildings scattered on it and it kind of gets explained, or is supposed to be explained I still haven't written it out, later. You'd be half right. You see...

Part 2: Struggle Year 11 Having stepped out of the void we quickly made our way towards Castelia. I was actually sad that we were so close to the city, if there was one thing I enjoyed when I was plugged into It, it was running. As I sprinted across the field in its body I felt powerful...

Good day everyone...it's sure been a while since the last time I uploaded a story here. This is something I've been working on for the last month or so, it was originally posted as part of a contest in URPG and I decided that I couldn't let the workshop miss out on what I see as my best story...