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  1. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter X: Negotiation Part II

    ~Chapter X: Negotiation Part II~ "D-did we...l-lose th-them?" The caterpie barely managed to get out in between breaths. The rest of us didn't respond immediately. I closed my eyes and tried to slow my breathing. "I think so," the jigglypuff finally responded, looking behind her at the area we...
  2. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter IX: Negotiation

    ~Chapter IX: Negotiation~ It was starting to become a regular thing, I realized, me getting knocked out by something and waking up sometimes later feeling sore all over, sporting a piercing headache that reverberated through my entire being. Just because I realized this, didn't mean I had to...
  3. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter VIII: Colloquy

    ~Chapter VIII: Colloquy~ Walking through Viridian Forest's supposed main path was...weird, for me. I had grown up on the knowledge that this forest was huge, but I just never realized exactly how huge it was. I noticed some pokemon in the trees, watching us from a distance. Or, more accurately...
  4. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter VII: Incursion

    ~Chapter VII: Incursion~ I wasn't entirely sure why, but the sight of all the glass shattering sent a shiver down my spine. I felt my breathing begin to pick up and internally cursed myself. Calm down, I thought. You're panicking for no reason. You're being stupid. Stop being stupid, Pikachu...
  5. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter VI: Indication

    ~Chapter VI: Indication~ My head was absolutely pounding. Everything felt numb, from my legs to my cheeks, and my ears felt as if they were bleeding. I groaned as I cracked my eyes open to see a dark orange and purple sky. Dark clouds were just starting to disperse and I glossed over the...
  6. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency

    Thank you for the feedback! I...see I still have quite a bit of room for improvement, lol. There had been something bothering me about the first few chapters I've written and I think the stuff you pointed out---like the inconsistent use of gender pronouns; that was originally done for a reason...
  7. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency

    Ahhhhhh...don't get your hopes TOO high-I kind of messed up on their meeting a tad, which is why I'm trying to change course direction in the following chapters after...the first two episodes canonically. They have a few similarities, but the meeting itself is different in a...well, a rather...
  8. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency

    Honestly, I always found that a bit odd as well. So, I made an actual reason for it that will be revealed later on, as I kind of made a large overhaul on the Pokémon world's system as a whole. Also, quick note: the world itself is Takeshi Shudo based(meaning I took inspiration on building this...
  9. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter V: Interception

    ~Chapter V: Interception~ "Hey." I groaned. "Hey." My head throbbed, but I kept my eyes shut. "Hey-oh for the love of-!" I felt something sharp hit my cheek and my head snapped to the side. My eyes cracked open to see a rattata right in front of my face...upside down. The rattata...
  10. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter IV: Destiny

    ~Chapter IV: Destiny~ The storm had sporadically continued throughout the rest of the week. It wasn't really much of a storm, anymore, but there was certainly a lot of rain. Either way, it didn't stop any of the preparations for April 1st, when the four trainers from Pallet would receive their...
  11. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter III: Confinement

    ~Chapter III: Confinement~ My head was pounding. I awoke to see the clefairy tapping against the table with its claws in a bored manner, the other Starters huddled together watching it on the other side. The girl sat on a chair next to said table, with her head in her hand as she looked at her...
  12. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter II: Conception

    ~Chapter II: Conception~ A week had passed and I still hated this place. I was also nowhere near close to finding out where the hell that stupid Poke Ball was. I tried to get more answers out of the bulbasaur and the other starters, but they refused to indulge me in such information. I hated...
  13. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency
    Threadmarks: Chapter I: Prologue

    ~Chapter I: Prologue~ The girl was beginning to get on my nerves. She spoke a mile a minute, pacing back and forth across the room, and acted like she hadn't just beat me up with her stupid pink clefairy to catch me in some stupid ball. Did she even care? "Gramps, I did what you asked! What...
  14. Jewel the Quaxly

    TEEN: Insurgency

    I debated back in forth in my mind before deciding to take the risk. I watched the thee Starters begin to walk up the cliff on a long slope, before taking a deep breath and going for the plunge. I walked forward and began following them from a distance. I would stay until I found that stupid...
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