Thanks for the feedback again! I meant to reply sooner but I got buried in work. Glad to see you enjoyed the chapter, especially with the Zoroark!
I'll try and keep in mind about the commas as well in future chapters as best as I can.
As for the ending, I can see why it would be a little bit...
Threadmarks: Chapter I.V - The Friend, The Spirit and the Swordsmon
POKÉMON MYSTERY DUNGEON
MERCENARIES OF DAWN
EPISODE I – RISING STARS
CHAPTER V – THE FRIEND, THE SPIRIT AND THE SWORDSMON
Rex grunted as he lifted the trunk, his muscles straining from the mass. "Go!" he barked.
"On it!" Foster responded, diving underneath to the other side. "Just give me a...
POKÉMON MYSTERY DUNGEON
MERCENARIES OF DAWN
EPISODE I – RISING STARS
CHAPTER IV – FALLEN MERCENARIES
Rex leaned against the grey wall, panting as he wiped his face clear of sweat. The side of his gut throbbed from a well-placed strike from a sneaky Beldum. It was nothing that a well-placed...
Just before I upload the next chapter, which is a pretty major one, I'd like to say thank you for the support and feedback @PugScribe and @Cavespider_17! I really appreciate it! I hope you keep enjoying the story, and I'll try and take any feedback into account in future chapters!
POKÉMON MYSTERY DUNGEON
MERCENARIES OF DAWN
EPISODE I – RISING STARS
CHAPTER III – ATTACKING THE RUIN
You might assume that Foster would lead me to a group of bandits within the woods, attack me in a pre-planned position or even just leave me to rot in that forest. But that was far from the...
POKÉMON MYSTERY DUNGEON
MERCENARIES OF DAWN
EPISODE I – RISING STARS
CHAPTER II – AN OPEN OFFER
Rex weighed the pouch in his hand with a satisfied smile before placing it back into his satchel. It had taken a bit of time to get the bandits gathered up and locked within the small collection of...
Hello.
If you are reading this, well, I believe the typical saying is that I am already dead.
That would be somewhat cliché though. I hope that I am alive and well if someone is reading this for whatever reason that may be. So, allow me to introduce you to this diary instead. My diary. Or...
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the properties that will be mentioned or explored in this story. They are all owned by individuals with alot more clout then I do. I do not make, nor intend to make any money off this story. It is a fanfic that is for fun and to get myself out there, and not for...
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