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Here for chapter 17 and ATLAS interlude yasssss LOL, even though these are forced references, they feel pretty natural. Sporting themes from a conglomeration of other fics seems to be your specialty, eh? ;) There's a pretty distinct change in the style of narration in chapter. It feels a lot...

Really like this description for the opening. It's really telling of the protag's character that she doesn't care about the chaos that just happened in terms of how Violet's residents feel about it. She still cares, but only in regards to how it applies to her. I prefer the characterization...

Ah, okay. I tend to copy/paste chapters I need to catch up on in a document to transfer to my Kindle for reading. So I miss edits sometimes. At any rate, go ahead and steal the idea. XD

I feel bad for the protagonist here. We all have the potential to become something awful and inhumane, and naturally, seeing the truth of that in herself is terrifying. I mean, I wouldn't say that the protagonist's the smartest character in all this after some of the decisions she's made thus...

All right, and now I've caught up with your main fic as well. I must say, the title seems very apt after reading these last couple chapters. I also read the Cherrygrove arc rewrite to make sure I wasn't missing anything important. Lol, well, opening sentence in the rewrite and I realized...

I FORGIVE YOU AND I THANK YOU FOR THE LONG ASS REVIEW REPLY. To answer your only question, it's that she's overall an asshole AND it's grating to read. It's grating to read because that's probably where the overdone narration comes from. Anddd since you've read LaON, your nameless protag reminds...

Looks like it's literally been a year since I reviewed this. I think I stopped because I asked questions in my last review and they were never answered, to be honest. But uh, I'm trying to review more and I do love you (I don't think we were talking before I reviewed the first time, actually) so...

Hey, your votes for the winter 2014 nominations reminded me I'd been wanting to read this for a while. (Thanks for the nominations, by the way.) I feel like your style is similar to what I've been wanting to achieve with one of my first person fics. I love the main character's snarkiness, her...