heyo, thanks for the quick response. unpacking the meat of it/didn't want to quote the whole thing here, but:
I get that, and I think that would make for a really interesting conflict! But I think then setting the story wholly in this one instance in time is weirdly between the two incidents...
Hiya there, chiming in from the one-shot competition!
There's a lot to unpack here. Your initial premise is really intriguing; it's an interesting twist on losing a loved one to tell the story from the point of view of... the lost loved one. And there's quite a bit of unique developments that...
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