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  1. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Posting Frequency: After thinking about it some more, I'm planning on posting a 6,000 word chapter once every two weeks--the equivalent of two PMDFI Chapters. It'll keep people interested n my writing, and it's still slow enough where people should be able to post their thoughts, right? Also...
  2. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    And now, ladies and gentleman...the final chapter. Chapter 50: Years Later… 20 Years AMW (After the Mist Wall) It was autumn in Lucario Guild, when the wind pulled the leaves away from the Tree of Slumber, when the day had a perpetual orange hue, and when the local Swellow migrated south...
  3. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Woohoo, I'm on a roll! The second-to-last chapter is here, and I plan on the final one being here tonight! Stay tuned! Chapter 49: Triumphant Return For the first time since the Ultra Beasts invaded the Forgotten Isles, the land, sea and sky, and all its denizens, were at...
  4. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Having a crazy amount of inspiration here, so I'll just keep posting these as they come. The sooner this is finished, the sooner I can get to work on what I hope will be my greatest fiction yet! Chapter 48: Final Frontier “Aura draws power from the bonds between Pokemon, the bonds between...
  5. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Alright, here is a penultimate chapter! Oh, one note I'd like to make: when writing the Ultra Beast's dialogue, I purposely made it sound odd and stiff. I wanted to have a different feel for their words in content as well as type, so if there's any complaints about the dialogue involving them...
  6. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Whoo boy...wasn't expecting this large of a review. Really. I guess I needed it, but I wasn't expecting such a scale. Let me break down my responses...I feel like I should maybe give some reasoning behind my actions. Posting Frequency: Yes, I realize that I've been posting a lot. More so than I...
  7. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Sorry this one took so long to write compared to the last few; it was hard to envision how the fights with the Ultra Beasts would turn out. I'm satisfied with what came out however, so please, enjoy the fourth-to-last chapter of PMDFI! Chapter 46: Ultra Comeuppance “Holding up...
  8. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    This chapter was harder to write than some of the others, as I'm not used to writing fight scenes with non-humanoid Pokemon. The battles were shorter than I liked, but they served their purpose. Chapter 45: Conflicted Ascent The rain soon turned into snow on Mount Sol as Ekon...
  9. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Chapter 44: Conversion Completed The present world returned to Ren, pounding the sides of his head. He fell in front of Mewtwo and covered his eyes, shivering. “H-How did I see that? I wasn’t there!” Mewtwo stooped, a slight grin appearing. “I took the liberty...
  10. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Time to change things up a bit. Chapter 43: Ascension into Light Beyond the growing storm over Mount Sol and Lune, beyond the threat of the Ultra Wormhole, beyond the deception of Arthus the Usurper…calm. A meadow of lush green grass, brushing softly against a...
  11. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Must be a consistent thing with me, making a chapter a day when I have great ideas. The sooner I get this done, the sooner I can take my break, so let's get on with chapter 42! Chapter 42: Of Two Minds The ocean washed against the coarse beach, the Primarina’s raft pushed past...
  12. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    I might just go to a policy of posting chapters when they're ready, rather than a formulaic format like before; I'm in the last rush, with nine chapters remaining. I think I can risk it. But egads, I didn't realize how little content I put into my chapters! I'm having to go with smaller...
  13. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    I hate making posts without chapter updates, so I'll keep it brief: writing long stories like this is hard. For the past five months, all of my creative energies have been focused on this with the occasional trip down another path, like with Dente's Tale. I want to make an experience enjoyable...
  14. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    I've been reviewing my plot outline, and I realize that I don't need near as many of the chapters I had originally intended. What went from a 20 chapter act has been reduced to a 13 chapter one, shorter than even Act 2. I was trying to plan around a particular number of chapters, but that...
  15. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)
    Threadmarks: Act 3: The Bestial Conflict

    A bit of a shorter chapter this time around, but it'll do for a transitionary chapter. Enjoy the beginning of Act 3! Oh, by the way: This chapter serves the purpose of explaining the history of the Ultra Beasts, as I don't think I'll be able to get that done later on. A bit of a digression, I...
  16. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Thanks for the review canisaries, I really appreciate it. Alright, I've started posting the edited chapters, starting with 1-6. I'll be gradually posting them over the week, and post Chapter 39 on Friday. I'll be gone on Saturday, so I'll be unable to post. Keep an eye out! EDIT: Egads, I...
  17. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Editing is going along smoothly; just finished all of Act 1, but until my cousin--my newly appointed editor--comes out with some more suggestions, I won't be posting them just yet. I doubt it'll be finished this week, but I assure you, it will be done by next Friday!
  18. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Chapter 38: Storming Showdown Tapu Koko surged toward Buzzwole, the Ultra doing the same. They clashed together in a spray of crimson and golden lightning, the two energies coursing from the almighty beings. The twin shields of the Tapu and the massive limbs of the...
  19. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Chapter 37: Ultra Pursuit “We have to go, now!” Ekon exclaimed, the sea beginning to stir. Zacharan looked at the oncoming shapes and hissed. “I’ll gather my tribe and attack them to buy you time. Escape to Bulu!” He leapt off the boat and rushed back to the...
  20. lucarioknight56

    TEEN: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Forgotten Isles (Chapter 50 Posted, Story Concluded)

    Chapter 36: Cascading Sides Chief Yurok and his best trackers bid farewell to the rest of the Decidueye tribe, many of which were preparing Avera’s body for burial beneath Koko’s abode. The dawn shone bright over him and the visitors of the Decidueye tribe as they stood on the...
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