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And so the conclusion has come! I will say that, overall, this chapter was a bit more well-composed than the last one, at least in terms of being able to follow what's going on. But there were a few quirks about it that I find myself tilting my head at--not because it was bad, but because of how...

Wait, he evolved... did he... Oh my god he was so happy that-- It makes perfect sense and I hate it. Good job. Yeesh, Keith made a complete 180 on his attitude this time around. He seemed to bounce back a bit when it was urgent and he had to actually escape, but once everything was calm...

This hurts me in more ways than you know. That being said, I'll laugh if this turns out to be random foreshadowing to him coming back as Mega X, disrupting the chaos that will undoubtedly happen in part 5 or something, just so he can enter. I wouldn't put it past you. This was actually...

Dragons! That didn't take long. There isn't a whole lot that I have to say for this chapter except for the fact that I'm impressed at how even the pacing is chapter to chapter. Each piece is accomplishing a big part of the story, so I think you're doing very well so far in terms of getting a...