The END...idea for a story

[sage]

Plot

A young boy by the name of Max Sanders is caught up in a apocalyptic world. James loses everything and has to fight his way through the world to find a better place. Will James succed or fail???

it is ver short..

 

[Kayi Rowling]

Just a couple of questions about this story idea, honey: Max Sanders and James are two different people, right? If so, what is Max trying to accomplish in this apocalyptic world?

And we'd need more information about your idea anyways, hon. I'd prefer to work with a longer version of that story in order to help you a little bit more

 

[Sith Droideka]

Well, first off, "ver" is spelled very. Second, which James, and how is he related to Max? Third, in what manner has the world ended?

 

[volcanic]

Your going to have to give us a bit more info...

 

[Drakon]

More data please.

But the idea could work.