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TEEN: Unpredictable

Contents, Prologue, Chapter 1 - Pewter City
  • AetherX

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    Unapologetically generic journey fic here. What originally started as trying my hand at a simple journey style story became something a little more. Also the first thing I've ever seriously written.

    This story is about a boy named Keith Anders and his adventures through the Pokemon World. He's enthusiastic at first but as time goes on he discovers the harsh realities of the world that he had apparently been protected from.

    Ratings tags: Moderate Violence, Mild Suggestive Themes, Strong Language

    EDIT November 21, 2014: I've begun doing some rewrites/revisions of the earlier chapters for consistency, quality, and style. Currently up through: Chapter 7 - Tim vs Misty (March 26, 2017)

    EDIT June 25, 2022: This story is now complete. I may make some minor fixes and alterations here and there, but I'm not going to do any more major rewrites. Maybe at some point in the future I'll reboot this, but for now it is as finished as it is going to be.

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    Table of Contents:
    Prologue - Pallet Town (below)

    Arc I: The Journey Begins
    Chapter 1 - Pewter City (below)
    Chapter 2 - Mt. Moon
    Chapter 2.5 - Skies above Kanto

    Arc II: Cerulean City
    Chapter 3 - Cerulean City
    Chapters 3.5 & 4 - Forest near Celadon & Nugget Bridge
    Chapter 5 - Battle vs Misty
    Chapter 6 - The Wilderness Around Cerulean
    Chapter 6.5 - Celadon City
    Chapter 7 - Tim vs. Misty

    Arc III: Sabrina's Training: Power of the Mind
    Chapter 8 - Saffron City
    Chapter 9 - Sabrina's Gym
    Chapter 9.5 - Forest near Celadon
    Chapter 10 - Sabrina's Gym, final training

    Arc IV: The Turning of the Tides
    Chapter 11 - Battle vs. Lt. Surge
    Chapter 12 - Pokemon Tower
    Chapter 13 - Lavender Town
    Chapter 14 - Routes 8 and 7

    Arc V: Celadon City
    Chapter 15 - Forest North of Celadon
    Chapter 16 - Celadon Hospital and the City
    Chapter 16.5 - Celadon City Again
    Chapter 17 - Erika's Gym
    Chapter 18 - Battle vs. Erika
    Chapter 19 - Celadon Department Store and Hotel
    Chapter 20 - Rocket Game Corner

    Arc VI: Koga's Training: Power of the Body
    Chapter 21 - Routes 16-18
    Chapter 22 - Fuchsia City
    Chapter 23 - Ocean South of Fuchsia
    Chapter 24 - Tim vs. Koga
    Chapter 25 - The Safari Zone and one last night in Fuchsia City

    Arc VII: Before the Storm
    Chapter 26 - Cinnabar Island
    Chapter 27 - Battle vs. Blaine
    Chapter 28 - Pallet Town

    Arc VIII: The Spring Battle Festival Tournament
    Chapter 29 - Preliminary Round
    Chapter 30 - Primary Round 1: Keith vs Anna
    Chapter 31 - Primary Rounds 2 & 3: Keith vs Neil
    Chapter 32 - Championship Semi Finals: Keith vs Spencer
    Chapter 33 - Championship Semi Finals: Tim vs Criss
    Chapter 34 - Championship Finals: Keith vs Criss Part 1/2
    Chapter 35 - Championship Finals: Keith vs Criss Part 2/2

    In 'verse One-Shot: Unsung Heroes

    Arc IX: The Battle for Saffron City
    Chapter 36 - Twilight
    Chapter 37 - Dawn
    Chapter 38 - Midday
    Chapter 39 - Silph Tower
    Chapter 40 - Dusk (Part 1)
    Chapter 41 - Dusk (Part 2)
    Chapter 42 - Project Titan
    Chapter 42.5 - Nolan vs Reese

    Arc X: The Settling Dust
    Chapter 43 - Aftermath
    Chapter 44 - Explanations
    Chapter 45 - Rewards
    Chapter 46 - Farewells
    Chapter 47 - The Fall

    Arc XI: The Pokémon League
    Chapter 48 - Reflections
    Chapter 49 - The Pokémon League
    Chapter 50 - Lorelei
    Chapter 51 - Bruno
    Chapter 52 - Agatha
    Chapter 53 - Interlude
    Chapter 54 - Lance
    Chapter 55 - Champion
    Chapter 56 - Finale

    ***​


    Prologue

    Flames and black smoke billowed from the windows of the building on the screen. My mother gasped as I shouted for my brother. He rushed into the room, distressed by the sheer panic of my voice.

    “What’s going on?”


    I never felt like I really had to worry about my father. His job was hardly dangerous, and he was such a kind and caring man. No one could ever possibly mean him harm. The thought never occurred to me that when he left on brief business trip, he might never come back.

    “The blast occurred only minutes ago,” said the news reporter. “It is believed that a group of scientists were inside at the time. Fire fighters are battling to rescue them now.”

    I had been to work with Dad before, at Oak Labs, not far from my home. All he did was scribble notes on a clipboard while looking through a microscope at some little things swimming in a Petri dish. On some occasions he would observe slightly bigger little things swimming around in a test tube. I’m sure all these little things, slightly bigger or otherwise, had names, but I didn’t care at the time. My dad was a biologist, specializing in genetics, which I thought was a dreadfully boring occupation.

    “The cause of the explosion is being connected to a criminal ring known as Team Rocket. Several members of the organization were seen running out of the building seconds before the original blast occurred. They seem to have escaped off of the island, but are being closely pursued by police officers.”

    For these reasons I thought nothing of it when he came into my room one evening and told me about an old abandoned mansion on Cinnabar Island.

    “It’s actually an old laboratory of a retired colleague of mine,” he told me. “So myself and several others have been invited to go take a look around. Maybe we’ll be able to find some research papers or something. The man who worked there was very successful, and had some interesting projects.”

    “Cool,” my unexcited fourteen-year-old self responded. “How long will you be gone?”

    “A couple days, so be sure to help your mother around the house. I’ll be gone in the morning, so I’ll see you when I get back.”

    “Mmk… bye.”

    “Bye, Keith.” He patted me on the shoulder and left my room. Forever.

    My mother cried quietly as my brother stared ahead, emotionless. We were crowded around the TV as a single stretcher worked its way across the screen. A single stretcher with my father on top of it. Bleeding. Burnt. My brother turned away as my mother let out a sob.

    I just stared in disbelief.



    (--o--)​


    Chapter 1

    I was tired and torn up when I finally emerged from Viridian “Hellhole” Forest, but I was alive. I marched into Pewter City triumphantly, with a newly claimed Butterfree by my side.

    “Well, that was certainly an ordeal.”

    It chittered in response.

    The sun crept over the mountains and began to shine on the city. I recalled my Butterfree, nicknamed Locustod, back into its Poké Ball.

    I had planned and prepared to hike through Viridian Forest that day. Then that infernal Butterfree threw a wrench in those plans. Six miles had quickly turned to fourteen and I was beat, literally.

    I casually tossed the Poké Ball holding my new acquisition to myself as I walked down the road to Pewter, seriously considering throwing it into the bushes beside the road.

    Two days ago I turned sixteen. Two days ago I got my Pokémon license and my Squirtle, Rainer. Two days ago, I knew what I was doing. Now, not so much. This journeying stuff was tough.

    Only three nights ago I had lain next to my best friend Tim on the roof of his house, looking up at the stars.

    I closed my eyes tiredly, remembering.

    Tim had turned to me. “If you could have any Pokémon, any one at all, what would it be?”

    I looked at him and raised an eyebrow. The question had definitely been on my mind for quite a while. After a moment’s hesitation, I responded. “A Dragonite. Definitely a Dragonite. What about you?”

    “Dragonite? Those things so rare they might as well be legendary,” he’d said laughing. “I’d like a Gyarados -- those are just plain badass.”

    “I’ll be sure to send one home to you for your birthday,” I’d teased.

    “Oh, shut up, I doubt you’ll even be out of Viridian Forest in two weeks,” he had said, punching me in the shoulder. I had just laughed and looked back up at the stars.

    If it weren’t for Locustod, though, he just may have been right. On the other hand, if it weren’t for that damned Butterfree I probably would have been out of that place hours before.

    It had attacked me and my Pokémon earlier that day while we were sitting under a tree. I had been perusing my map and letting Rainer and Baron, my new Pidgey, get to know each other.

    After I had woken up from my little sleep powder induced nap at some ungodly hour this morning, I had tracked down the bastard, caught it, and forced it to show me the way out.

    Butterfree was a far cry from a Dragonite or Gyarados, but it was a start.

    When I finally reached the streets of the city, I looked at my watch: 6 AM.

    I began wandering around the city, drowsy eyed, waiting for the town to wake up. Pewter wasn’t that big of a city, but it dwarfed my home town of Pallet. There weren’t any skyscrapers or even many modern looking buildings. The red brick apartments and shops lent a quaint, old-timey feel to the place.

    I decided to wander my way over to the path towards the mountain. I still had to beat Brock, the Gym Leader, but there was no harm in looking ahead.

    The sun was low and reflected off the gray clouds, casting a foreboding light on the city and surrounding mountains. At a dip between two plateaus, the paved road became gravel and looked like it turned into a dirt path about a quarter mile down. I sighed and leaned against a sign post proclaiming, “MT. MOON – LICENSED TRAINERS ONLY.” It had been some time since my dad had taken me here to visit the museum, the year before he died, and the mountain was bigger than I remembered. Rest would definitely be necessary before I tackled it.

    I stared at the densely forested peak, daydreaming of soaring over it on the back of a mighty Dragonite. It felt good to finally be out on this journey I had dreamed of for so long, fending for myself. It offered a level of independence that made me feel confident and powerful.

    It was only then that I noticed a bench on the far side of the road with a dark haired girl laying on it. She had one knee up and her arms folded across her chest. I would have thought she was sleeping if I had not seen her looking at me with a single open eye. Upon noticing my gaze, she snapped it shut again.

    “Hmm….” I was a little crept out, so I didn’t say anything. I instead looked back down the road, where I saw a young man, probably in his twenties, walking quickly towards the city. He was wearing a long dark overcoat and a brimmed hat. He looked suspiciously at me as he passed, but I just smiled and nodded hello. I guess he hadn’t noticed the girl, who immediately perked up. She stood and walked quickly to catch up with him. She stepped in behind him and grabbed him by his collar, spinning him around. Apparently she was pretty strong, as the man could not wrestle free.

    “And just where do you think you’re going?” she asked him angrily.

    “Hey!” I cried. “What are you doing?” I took a step towards the pair. With lightning fast reflexes, the girl pulled a knife from her belt and threw it at me with her free hand. It missed me by a matter of inches, instead sticking into the sign post with a loud “thunk!” where it quivered ominously. It wasn’t a very big knife, but it lacked any kind of handle or binding. It was clearly weighted for throwing.

    I stopped in my tracks, looking back and forth between the knife and the girl.

    “I’ll deal with you in a minute,” she said before turning back to her victim.

    All I could do was nod and slowly back up to the sign post. Confident and powerful indeed.

    “I asked you a question. Where are you going?” the girl repeated.

    “Into town. Who are you? I haven’t done anything wrong,” he protested wildly.

    “Who says you did?” She reached into his coat with one hand and pulled something out of his pocket, “Oh wait, this does.”

    I stared in amazement. It appeared to be a normal trainer ID card, but when she turned it so it caught the light, I saw a large red R emblazoned on it. “Team Rocket, huh? Well, there’s something wrong.”

    Memories flashed through my mind. My father… Team Rocket… Cinnabar Island…

    I wasn’t paying much attention as the girl took something from the man before releasing him to run back in the direction he had come. By the time I had snapped out of it, the man had disappeared down the road towards the mountain and the girl stood looking at me with her arms crossed and a cynical look on her face. “What’s your problem?” she asked.

    I stared at her blearily “Huh?”

    “Well, first of all, you show up at six in the morning to a mountain trail with bloodshot eyes and torn up clothes, obviously unprepared to go hiking. And then you completely phase out at the first sight of a Team Rocket agent. Most people run away screaming. Maybe I should be impressed…”

    I looked at the strange girl. She had fair skin and striking blue eyes that squinted when she frowned. She looked a couple years older than me, but it was hard to tell. She was tall for a girl, almost my height. She might have been pretty if she wasn’t so terrifying. And yet, something about the way she had stood up to a supposed Team Rocket agent made me admire her.

    “I got lost in the forest, just got out. And… um…” I hesitated before continuing. “My father was killed by Team Rocket a few years ago; kind of… traumatic for me, if you know what I mean.” My voice was broken sounding, a combination of the stress of the situation and the delicacy of the topic.

    Her face lightened slightly. “I do.”

    I stared at her skeptically. I had never reacted well to the “I know how you feel” routine. Losing your pet Vulpix or going to your grandfather’s funeral is different than losing a parent. Pets and grandparents are supposed to die. You don’t want it to happen, but you know it will. Fathers are supposed to live. Losing someone that close leaves a gap in your life. Not just emotionally, but physically.

    The girl nodded. She looked at me in a way that made me feel like she knew exactly what I was thinking. How I felt. And she empathized.

    “I’ve lost…” she started, then paused. “Team Rocket and others like them have taken people from me, too. That’s why I’m hunting them.”

    Suddenly I felt much warmer towards her. Team Rocket was a very real threat in the wilderness of Kanto and Johto. They had started showing up here and there a few years before, with ties to poaching and weapon trafficking. No one really knew what they wanted, but they were well organized and well equipped, a real threat for the police forces and rangers of Kanto. Attacks on the scale of the one that killed my father were rare, but not unheard of.

    “What did you do with that guy?” I asked her.

    “I took the Moon Stones he was smuggling and kicked him back to his superiors.”

    In the distance, the city clock chimed seven. She turned and began walking back into town. I jogged to catch up with her. “So did you wait all night for that guy to come?” I asked.

    “Yes.”

    It was only then that I noticed the Flareon, a vulpine fire-type with dull orange fur and a beige mane, walking beside her. It was surprising, as usually Flareon are incredibly bright and nigh impossible to miss. But this one was dirty and tired, probably from spending a night out of its ball awake.

    “Shouldn’t you recall your Flareon?”

    The girl glanced down at her Pokémon. “She won’t go in. She’s just too protective of me for that.”

    We rounded a corner and the domed roof of the Pokémon Center came into view. I wondered what would make a Pokémon so loyal it refused to let the trainer leave its sight. I realized I didn’t even know this girl’s name, so I asked her.

    “Just because we have something in common doesn’t mean I have to answer all of your questions,” she responded curtly.

    “Oh…” I wasn’t sure what to say. “Uh… I understand.”

    I didn’t.

    She pushed open the door of the center and paused, looking me up and down. Finally she said, “Oh, all right, join me for breakfast. Couldn’t hurt…”

    I followed her inside and looked around curiously.

    The Pokémon Center was different than the one I had spent the night in back in Viridian. The floor was dull grey laminated cement. Several empty couches and armchairs were spread around the room, surrounding tables laden with newspapers and magazines like Breeder’s Weekly and Silph Co.’s monthly catalog. A long reception desk ran the length of the far side of the building, behind which a pair of tired looking nurses went about their work.

    I strode up to the desk and handed over my three full Poké Balls before following the girl through a doorway in the right wall of the building into the small cafeteria. It was better equipped than the Viridian Center’s, but that wasn’t saying much. I grabbed a bagel and a bottle of juice before giving my trainer ID to the cashier to be swiped. I noticed the girl paid in cash, so she wasn’t on a League-sponsored journey.

    She introduced herself as Criss when we sat down at a small table by a window. She didn’t give a surname.

    “I’m Keith,” I said between bites. I hadn’t realized how hungry I was. “So how long have you been fighting Team Rocket?”

    She almost seemed to recoil at the question, but after a second she shrugged and said “a couple years, I think. Where are you from?”

    I could tell she was trying to change the subject, but I didn’t want to estrange my first friend on the road by calling her on it. Instead I told her the story of my journey so far, starting from Pallet Town.

    Pallet was a little fishing village on the southern coast of Kanto. The only thing significant about it was Professor Oak’s lab.

    Professor Oak was friends with everybody in Pallet Town but he had grown really close to me and my mother. He had been best friends with my father, and when Dad was killed by Team Rocket, Professor Oak had taken us under his wing. My mom worked as his secretary, but we mostly lived off of his own paycheck. My brother Spencer had gone off travelling in his work for Silph Co. so as not to be a burden. We hadn’t seen each other in a while, but we communicated through mail and telephone. He often hooked me up with all sorts of cool new technology. In fact, in the bottom of my pack was the Ultra Ball he had sent me as a gift for my birthday.

    I gave Criss a brief recounting of my little adventure in Viridian Forest before saying, “That’s pretty much all I have to tell.”

    “I can show you the way to the gym if you want,” she said. “It’s on the way to the museum, where I’m going to drop off these Moon Stones. You should get some sleep first, you look tired.”

    “Yeah, that’d be great.” I agreed. “What about you? You look tired yourself.”

    “I always look tired. Just go get some rest. I’ll be training.”

    I nodded and slouched off towards the bunkroom, up a small staircase beside the cafeteria.

    Before I finally fell asleep, I just stared at the ceiling for a few minutes, thinking about what had happened so far. I thought about calling home to let my mom know I was okay, but it didn’t really seem worth it. She had never been as encouraging as Dad when it came to Pokémon. I missed him every day.

    *

    A little before noon I was shaken awake by a frantic looking nurse. “Excuse me sir,” she said exasperatedly, “are you the trainer of the Butterfree that was brought in this morning?”

    I blinked my eyes and shook my head a couple times to make sure I wasn’t dreaming. “Uhh… yeah,” I said groggily. “What’s wrong?”

    “Your Butterfree is attempting to attack my assistant Chansey and just throws stun spores everywhere whenever I try to get close to it. Can you please do something?”

    I slowly sat up and put my feet on the floor, swearing under my breath, and rubbed my eyes. I hated it when people woke me up, but this nurse seemed at her wit’s end and besides -- she was cute.

    I pulled on my shoes and followed the nurse to the medical rooms. She handed me a surgical mask to keep out the stun spore, but I declined.

    “It acts like a prick, but you’ve just got to show it who’s boss,” I said.

    I shoved open the door the nurse had indicated and stepped inside. The room smelled like the powder that had knocked me out the day before, but it wasn’t too strong. Locustod was chasing an incredibly agitated Chansey around the room, chittering wildly.

    “HEY!” I yelled at it.

    It stopped instantly and stared at me, frightened.

    Chansey ran past me, out the door, wailing insanely.

    “WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?!?”

    The bug type landed at my feet and bowed its head. I recalled it back into its Poké Ball. “Damn Butterfree,” I muttered under my breath.

    I turned to leave, but the door was blocked by the nurse, who looked rather indignant. “Is that how you handle all of your Pokémon?” she said acrimoniously.

    “No,” I sighed. “Just the ones that are a complete PAIN IN THE ASS!” I directed the last four words at the Poké Ball still in my hand. I pushed past her and walked back into the main room of the center, where I picked up my other two Pokémon from the nurse there.

    Still steaming about Locustod, I retrieved my backpack from the bunk room and walked out the back door, which led to a small grass field used for Pokémon battles. Criss stood at one end with her Flareon by her side. In front of her an Ekans slowly slithered towards its opponent, a Zubat at the far end of the field. She must have been putting on quite a show, as a small crowd had gathered to watch.

    Interested to see how Criss handled battling, I sat down on a bench nearby.

    “Ekans, tackle!” Criss called. The purple snake jumped at the Zubat.

    “Zubat, fly out of reach!” retorted the boy who must have been the Zubat’s trainer. The bat flew about ten feet up and Ekans missed its target.

    Criss didn’t say anything but instead made a hand gesture to her Pokémon. The snake reared its purple head and opened its fanged mouth. A bunch of glowing poisonous needles began to fly out at the Zubat, who dodged them.

    I tore my eyes away from the battle and pulled my Pokédex out of my backpack. “Let’s see what the annoying little bug’s good for…” I muttered, and looked up a Butterfree’s available move set. I obviously harbored a strong dislike for the Pokémon, but I would need two Pokémon for my first Gym battle. I was skeptical of how well Baron would do against Brock’s rock types, and Locustod was my only other choice for a secondary. The device read the list out loud, amid the sounds of the battle in front of me. “Tackle, string shot, stun spore, poison powder, sleep powder, and confusion.”

    “Confusion? But that’s a psychic move. Huh. That’ll be very useful.”

    In front of me, Criss’s Ekans had finally managed to hit the Zubat, knocking it from the air. Criss gave it another hand signal order, grasping her fingers into a fist. The snake wrapped the Zubat, crumpling its wings.

    “Zubat! Bite it!” the other trainer cried. The bat bit the snake as hard as it could. Criss’s Ekans hissed in pain. But then it began to glow. The crowd gasped collectively and Criss managed to somehow look pleased without smiling. I was witnessing my first Pokémon evolution.

    The snake elongated, its tail curling neatly underneath it and its head reaching up even higher. The glow began to fade as a colorfully patterned hood sprouted from the snake’s neck and its fangs grew to be about the size of my index finger. The newly evolved Arbok was much larger than the Ekans had been, and much more fearsome.

    “Arbok, finish it with wrap,” Criss said coolly. The snake squeezed Zubat until the flying-type finally surrendered with a cry. Then it was released and fell to the ground, looking broken.

    “Zubat, return,” the other trainer recalled his Pokémon before walking over to Criss. They looked to be about the same age. “You’re a very good trainer. I’m gonna have to train a lot more if I’m gonna beat Brock. Take this, I found it in Mt. Moon on my way over.” He handed Criss a small, round, yellowish stone. “It’s amber, fossilized tree sap.”

    “I know what amber is, thank you.” She took the rock from him and put it in her pocket. “Arbok, return!”

    I waved her over and we left the center, Flareon striding along behind us. “That was a good battle,” I said. “Congratulations on the evolution, by the way.”

    ”I try to train every day in order to keep my strength up.” She pointed at a large building ahead. “That’s Brock’s gym. Are you ready?”

    “Of course. Aren’t you going to the museum?”

    She shrugged. “I guess I’ll stay and watch you battle Brock. I beat him already, you know. I’m interested to see how someone with your Pokémon goes about it.”

    “Really? Have you beaten any other Gym Leaders?”

    “Yep. Erika and Koga,” she said. “But Brock was the one that convinced me to catch an Onix.”

    “Oh yeah, he prefers rock-type Pokémon doesn’t he?”

    “They’re also ground-types, but people tend to ignore that. He’ll probably just use a Geodude and an Onix against you. You said you had a Squirtle, right?”

    I nodded.

    “You shouldn’t have a problem then.”

    On one hand, her confidence was reassuring, but on the other hand I felt like the pressure had just doubled. For some reason I felt the need to impress this girl.

    A minute later, I pushed open the glass door to the gym. From the outside it was smaller than I had expected, and relatively inconspicuous. The inside was sparsely lit, so it took my eyes a few seconds to adjust.

    When they finally did, I looked around at the room I stood in, for the entire building was one large room. Several fluorescent lamps hung from the ceiling, providing the dim light. The walls were made of smooth cement, while the floor was covered almost entirely in gravel and sporadic boulders. White paint outlined a battlefield that looked similar to the ones I had seen on TV. It was a little bigger than the basketball court back at my high school in Pallet Town.

    Their feet crunching on the gravel, two men approached us from across the field.

    The shorter, fatter one was smartly dressed in what I recognized as the uniform of a Pokémon League referee. The League symbol, a stylized Poké Ball, was emblazoned upon his shirt pocket, and a silver whistle hung around his neck.

    It wasn’t until then that the reality really struck me. This was my first ever official battle! Sure, I had gone up against a couple of other novice trainers in Viridian, and even beaten them soundly, but this was different. This was what I had been waiting for my entire life. An official battle against an official gym leader on an official field with an official… official. I hadn’t been very nervous up until that point, but right then, I started to sweat, my voice shook and I began to panic.

    Shakily, I held out a hand an introduced myself to the second man, who I assumed to be Brock. The gym leader was tall, stoic, and a rather imposing figure. He had dark, squinty eyes, tanned skin, and spiky black hair that stood out in all different directions. His muscular arms were folded across his chest.

    “I-I’m Keith… from Pallet Town. I’d uh, like to challenge you. To a gym battle. If that’s okay.”

    The man smiled kindly and unfolded his arms to shake my hand. “I’m Brock,” he said. “Are you a beginning trainer then?”

    “Yeah, I… yeah,” I stuttered.

    Brock clapped a friendly hand to my shoulder. “There’s no need to be nervous.” Looking behind me, he noticed Criss.

    “Criss, good to see you again.” He nodded.

    “Likewise,” my new companion responded.

    “You showing Keith here the ropes?”

    “You could say that.”

    Brock smiled again and turned to his referee. “Let’s go then, Reg.” The referee nodded back to him and strode over to a raised platform on the right side of the gym’s field. Brock walked across to a small square on the far side, calling back over his shoulder, “It’s two on two. You good?”

    A double battle? That wasn’t what I had been expecting. Panicking, I turned to Criss.

    She seemed to recognize my fear before I said anything. “He means you each get to use two Pokémon each. Double battles aren’t allowed in the Indigo League yet.”

    I gulped and nodded before shrugging my backpack off and heading to my own square. I had known that. But why had I forgotten? Maybe I just wasn’t cut out for this kind of stuff. Who knew what else I might forget? My mind raced along this train of thought while the referee announced the rules and Brock sent out a Geodude. Finally I shook my head to clear my thoughts. No, I was prepared. I could do this.

    I studied Brock’s Pokémon for a second. I had already made a decision as to what Pokémon I would be using, but I wanted to go over my rather rough plan in my head anyway. The Geodude was nothing more than a rock with arms, eyes, and a mouth locked in a crooked grin.

    They never taught us anything about battling in school, deciding to leave that to the specialized Pokémon training universities, but I had read numerous books on the subject. Geodude was a rock and ground-type. Its stone body made it almost invulnerable to most physical attacks, except the strength and precision of fighting-types. If I used water and psychic-type moves, though, everything would be fine.

    Strengthening my resolve once more, I confidently grabbed a Poké Ball from my belt.

    “Go, Locustod!”

    The Butterfree chittered excitedly as it burst forth onto the battlefield.

    “Let the match begin!” called the referee, and he blew his whistle.

    “Geodude, use rock throw!” shouted Brock.

    “Dodge it!” I responded.

    Brock’s Pokémon dug both of its hands into the gravel, pulling out handfuls of rocks that it hurled haphazardly at Locustod. But at the last second, it flapped out of the way. Emboldened, I attempted to test Geodude’s defenses.

    “Now, stun spore!” I cried out.

    Locustod hesitated for a second, then flapped quickly over to the rock-type and doused it with a toxic yellow powder. It had no apparent effect before Geodude jumped out of the cloud of spore.

    “But…” That was supposed to slow it down!

    Brock just smiled and called for another rock throw.

    This one was too close for Locustod to dodge, but I quickly came up with a counter. “String shot on those rocks!” I called across the field.

    Immediately, my Pokémon began shooting a silvery silk-like string at the bits of gravel being thrown its way. It was a mildly effective defense, knocking down or cushioning most of the rocks with sticky string.

    Now it was time to do what I should have done in the beginning. “Confusion!”

    Locustod was doing well; it clearly wanted to make up for pissing me off back at the center.

    With more excited chattering, my Butterfree’s eyes began to glow red. Immediately, a similar aura surrounded Geodude’s body. The rock-type’s eyes widened; it was obviously straining. Our two Pokémon stood like that for almost a minute, glaring at each other and unmoving except for the fluttering of Locustod’s wings. Then, with a sudden burst of motion, Geodude broke free of the psychic hold and tore up another handful of gravel.

    Before either Locustod or I could react, it was being pelted with rocks. The Butterfree whimpered as the gravel rained against its delicate wings. Geodude kept up the barrage, never giving Locustod a chance to escape. It wasn’t long before it fell to the ground, no longer able to keep afloat in the hail of rocks. Geodude didn’t stop throwing until Locustod had fallen over backwards, unconscious.

    The referee gave a shrill blast on his whistle. “The challenger’s Butterfree is unable to battle! Choose your next Pokémon!” he cried out.

    So much for that. I hadn’t really expected Locustod to do terribly well, but the thought that I now only had one Pokémon left to Brock’s two.

    “L-Locustod, return! Come on, Rainer!” It was actually almost a relief to fall back on my ever-faithful Squirtle. I encouraged myself with thoughts of the many victories the pair of us had accomplished so far on this short journey. We had never lost. We were unbeatable.

    The tiny turtle popped out of the Poké Ball and looked at Geodude defiantly, sharing my same newfound courage.

    I tried to clear my mind and think about the battle at hand. Geodude had used a lot of energy fighting its way out of Locustod’s psychic grip, so it shouldn’t take much to finish it. Brock would probably play defensively, ordering long range attacks and trying to do something, anything, before Rainer took down Geodude. So all I needed to do was catch him by surprise.

    “Tackle!” I cried.

    Rainer immediately dashed forward. Both Brock and Geodude seemed to have been expecting some kind of water-type attack, and so were caught off guard by the sudden bull-rush, just as I had hoped. The little Squirtle turned just as it reached its shocked opponent, bashing into Geodude with its shell rather than its body. That was a little maneuver I had seen a trainer use on TV, and I had wasted no time in teaching it to Rainer back in Viridian.

    Geodude’s eyes rolled back into its head as Rainer bounced away.

    “Brock’s Geodude is unable to battle! Brock, choose your next Pokémon!” called the referee, blowing his whistle again.

    “Nice one, Keith,” said Criss from behind me.

    I grinned ecstatically. I had taken out one of Brock’s Pokémon! Only one more to go until I got my very first gym badge.

    “Geodude, good job, return! Go, Onix!” Out of my opponent’s Poké Ball came a giant snake-like figure made out of boulders, its huge, ferocious eyes glaring down at me.

    I groaned.

    “Onix, use bide!”

    I winced, expecting a powerful iron tail, or something similar, but then just looked at the Onix. Nothing happened. I had never heard of bide before. Why would there be a Pokémon technique for just waiting? I looked at Brock and then Criss, both of their faces were expressionless.

    I coughed once, then shrugged it off. Whatever, I would take advantage of this. Maybe it was some kind of test. “Rainer, use bubble!”

    Rainer jumped on top of a boulder and spewed a barrage of bubbles out of its mouth into Onix’s face. It roared in dismay, but didn’t counter.

    “Again!”

    Rainer let loose another cloud of bubbles. Again, Onix hardly reacted. I knew bubble wasn’t a terribly powerful move, but it was still a water-type technique. My attacks had to be doing some sort of damage. Why wasn’t Onix doing anything? Why wasn’t Brock doing anything? I turned around to face Criss.

    “Is this some kind of joke? What’s he doing?”

    “You’re in trouble now,” she said calmly. I turned back around to see the Onix’s eyes appeared to be almost glowing red they were so bloodshot. It growled in anger, a rumbling noise that sounded like an avalanche.

    Again, I had forgotten something critical, Brock’s signature move. A pamphlet I had read detailing Kanto’s gym leaders flashed back to me. I was in major trouble. “Rainer, watch out!”

    But it was too late. Imbued with the stored energy of Rainer’s attacks, Onix swung its mighty tail at Squirtle, sending the little turtle ricocheting off of a boulder. I watched, stunned.

    When Rainer fell back to the gravel floor with a crunch, I thought it was all over, but the tenacious little Pokémon rolled over and pushed itself shakily to its feet, using its curly tail for balance.

    “Nice! We’re still in this!” I said excitedly.

    “Onix, bide again!” Brock called once more.

    I knew Brock specialized in rock-types, his gym was rocky, even his name sounded like “rock”, but I had figured that was as far as his stone fetish went. I was wrong. He even battled like a rock. Now it was time to kick him into the gutter.

    I had two choices. I could wait for the energy to subside, thus negating the power of the bide attack, or I could finish Onix before it released the energy. I hated waiting.

    “Okay, we’ll need something with a little more power. Water gun!” My Squirtle dashed across the field, bouncing off of boulders until it was in close proximity to the beast, and then blasted it with a powerful spout of water from its mouth. “Finish it before it unleashes the power!”

    Onix shuddered and winced under the barrage of water, but didn’t react. The storing of energy that it was relying on to win was also stopping it from defending itself. At least, for now.

    Showing the ingenuity that I was lacking in my nervousness, Rainer leapt forward at its opponent and crawled up the rock-snake’s chest until it pulled itself up onto the monster’s nose. Without stopping for breath, my Squirtle blasted Onix right between the eyes with yet another powerful water gun. This proved to be too much for the rock-type. It roared and shook its head, causing Rainer to fly off and tumble onto the gravel.

    Squirtle pushed itself back up, out of breath but unbeaten. Onix, on the other hand, was in quite a bit of pain. Water softened the very bonds that held the stony flesh and skin of rock-types together and rested in the cracks between the rocks that made up their bodies, weighing them down. Getting sprayed right between the eyes would be an uncomfortable experience, to put it mildly. I just hoped it was enough.

    Onix’s roar subsided to a groan. Its eyes were shut tight and its head was beginning to sway back and forth. After a suspenseful second, it finally collapsed, its huge bulk spraying gravel everywhere as it hit the ground.

    The referee blew his whistle three times. “Onix is unable to battle. Brock is out of useable Pokémon, the victory goes to the challenger!”

    It took me a second to realize what had happened. I was in shock, complete and utter disbelief. I had won! Had I cheated? I must have, it couldn’t be possible for a beginner like me to win his first gym battle. But I hadn’t! I had won fair and square!

    Rainer gave its strange gravelly cry in excitement as it rushed towards me and jumped into my arms. I burst out laughing. Hell, maybe I was good at this!

    “Onix, return!”

    Brock strode over to me. “That was a good battle, very fun.” Surprisingly enough, he didn’t look angry at all that he had lost. In fact, he seemed as lighthearted as ever. I slowly set Rainer down on the ground and recalled it.

    I was almost shivering in anticipation as Brock reached into his pocket and removed a flat, shiny object. I’m sure the stupid grin on my face looked absolutely ridiculous, but I didn’t care. He dropped the object into my sweaty hand, held out in expectation. “That’s the Boulder Badge, an official Pokémon League gym badge.”

    I looked at the piece of metal. It was silver, and shaped like a jewel. Hands still shaking, I affixed it via a pin on the back to a white piece of fabric hanging from my belt that I had brought it along for just such an occasion.

    “You get seven more of those,” Brock continued, “and you can challenge the Elite Four. That’s quite a ways away though.”

    I laughed and shook his hand, thanking him profusely.

    A few minutes later, I left with Criss. She looked at me, “You’ve got a lot to learn, but congratulations, anyways,” she said.

    Still ecstatic from my victory, I grinned at her. “Thanks. We going over to the museum now?”

    “Yeah, I need to hand in these Moon Stones.” Out of her pocket she took a canvas bag. She opened it and showed me what was inside. A bunch of silver, magical-looking rocks glittered up at me. “They’re used to evolve certain species of Pokémon.”

    “I have a question,” I said. “Why not just follow Team Rocket to wherever their buyer is and nab him instead? Wouldn’t that be easier?”

    She smiled grimly. “Well, I would, but you see, the buyer is me. I set up a stone collecting operation in order to bait the Rockets. It’s perfectly legal to pick Moon Stones up off the ground, but the mountain itself is a protected area. Mining is strictly off-limits. When I climbed over from Cerulean about a week ago I noticed a cargo helicopter flying away from the mountain. I did some poking around and found the entrance to the mine. So I planted a rumor that someone in the city was willing to buy Moon Stones at a very high price. Of course, greedy as those bastards are one of them decided to make a little profit on the side, just as I had hoped. Since I don’t have a need for so many stones, I’m going to give them to the museum to put on display or sell for themselves. Of course,” she added, “I always take a finder’s fee.” She reached into the pouch and withdrew a couple of stones, which she put in her pocket.

    By then we had arrived at the museum, a huge four story brick building with wide granite steps leading up to the doorway. I sat down on a bench just outside the entrance as Criss went inside to drop off the stones.

    I looked at my watch. It was already around dinner time. I had slept most of the day. The sun was slowly making its way down towards the Alizarin Mountains in the west, casting ever longer shadows. I stood up and looked out, thinking about my journey so far, and this strange girl I had found. For some reason, I felt like I had to prove myself to her, as a kind of test for myself. Her vendetta against Team Rocket was something I could definitely get behind. I found myself hoping I would run in to Team Rocket on the road sometime. I would fight them, and put them in their place for what they did to my father. My win against Brock only added to my confidence and eagerness.

    I heard the sound of the door opening behind me. Criss walked up next to me.

    “So,” I said tentatively. “What’s your plan now?”

    “Tomorrow, I’m gonna go in to the mountain and bust up the whole operation,” she replied quietly, almost to herself.

    “Can I come?” I said quickly. It was just the chance I had been hoping for.

    She gave me another one of her calculating looks, like she was sizing me up. “You’re heading that way anyway, aren’t you?”

    I had no idea what crime-fighting would entail, but I was enthusiastic nevertheless.

    “I am, and I’d like nothing more than to kick some Team Rocket ass.”

    “Do you know how to fight?”

    “Uhhh… my Pokémon do,” I said slowly. “Besides that, I did wrestling for a couple years in school.”

    She stared at my eyes. Not into them, but past them. She had amazingly blue eyes. The color that you could just stare into and get lost in. They seemed to offset her otherwise light complexion. I wasn’t sure if she was waiting for me to say more, so I just stared back.

    “I suppose it’s different…” she muttered.

    I pretended I didn’t hear, instead waiting expectantly.

    “Alright, you can come along.”

    *

    NEXT: The real adventure begins!
     
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    Chapter 2 - Mt. Moon
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (Journey Fic)

    Here's the second chapter, I tried to take the events from the game and make them a little more realistic, while at the same time keeping it original.

    The little bit in italics at the beginning was added recently. It has to do with a character that I originally hadn't planned on having show up for a LONG time, but I figured that it adds to the story and will help the reader like the character a little more when he actually does appear.

    I also have a more personal thing to say about this chapter. It entails the general loss of innocence of the main character, which is important to the rest of the story. I wrote it so that Keith reacts to death and violence in much the same way as I do. Although I'm sure that many people on this forum would disagree with me, video games and movies have slightly desensitized us to violence. It's true, but not to the point where many people take it. In a life threatening situation I'm sure that all of you would react just the same as if you hadn't played any video games at all. As far as viewing death and violence from the outside though, people seem to forget the value of life. I portray significantly less carnage in my story as in some of the others I have read on here, but Keith reacts in a much bigger way. Anyone who has actually experienced a life threatening situation I'm sure would agree that Keith's reaction is slightly more realistic for someone his age, although it is still dumbed down quite a lot.

    But I digress, here's the chapter in all its much too long glory:

    Chapter 2

    On a cliff high above the road to Mt. Moon, stood a figure looking out at the sunrise. Beside him perched his loyal partner, a Flygon. As the man slowly stroked the dragon’s neck, he noticed a pair of hikers on the road far below. Curious, he turned to his backpack and pulled out a pair of binoculars. He looked through them at the people down below.

    “Hmm… Interesting. She’s found a friend.” He smiled. “What do you say we let them take this one Flygon?”

    Flygon let out a huff of agreement.

    “Okay then. I guess we get to take it easy today.”

    *****

    After a hurried breakfast, we were on the trail around dawn. Baron hopped beside us quietly, and of course Criss’ Flareon trotted along next to her. We walked in silence for a little ways. I entertained myself by watching the surrounding scenery change. Being raised by the sea, I was not much used to mountains, so I was very interested by the increasingly rocky terrain.

    Mt. Moon was a long dormant volcano rising high above the hills separating Pewter and Cerulean. It would be quite a climb to the top, but the road to Cerulean cut across the side. We were headed somewhere in between. Criss seemed certain that the Rockets would be based out of a cave of some kind that would have an entrance hidden by the trees.

    My wandering gaze came around to rest on Criss. She wore a similar outfit to the day before: relatively tight fitting clothes, a sash around her torso that held her Poké Balls, and a folded blue bandanna with a white symbol on the front serving as a headband.

    “You’ve got four Poké Balls; what other Pokémon do you have?” I asked.

    “Flareon, Arbok, Onix, and Tentacruel,” she said mechanically.

    “So you carry around a Poké Ball for Flareon even though she refuses to use it?”

    “Yes. Just in case.”

    “I’m curious; how come Flareon’s so protective of you?” I asked innocently.

    “She saved my life when I was young,” Criss said. She added quietly, almost as an afterthought to herself, “...and many times since then.”

    I waited, but she didn’t say anything more. I decided to take another stab at friendly conversation. “Where’d you get that headband? I’ve never seen that symbol before.”

    Her brow furrowed and she tore the bandanna from her head. She stuffed it into one of the side pockets on her pack and didn’t respond.

    I had never met someone so guarded before. Clearly she wasn’t big on talking about herself. I got the distinct feeling that she was hiding something, but despite my curiosity, I was terrified to pry any deeper.

    We didn’t talk any more until the trail began to turn back and forth in huge switchbacks as we climbed the mountain. The trail narrowed, forcing us to walk in single file with Criss taking the lead. As we picked up altitude, more alpine varieties of trees took over the forest around us and the underbrush grew more and more scant until the boulders and stumps outnumbered the shriveled berry bushes.

    With each silent step I felt more and more nervous about what we were going to do. My impeccable confidence of the previous day seemed considerably less convincing this morning. I barely knew this girl, and yet here I was, about to go fight a band of criminals alongside her. I watched Baron, who now fluttered from tree to tree to keep up with us. All I had to rely on in a fight was this tiny bird, an energetic turtle, and an unruly butterfly. I didn’t even know if I could trust Criss. After a minute I noticed Criss looking at me awkwardly and I realized I had been muttering to myself.

    “Sorry, uh… do you have a plan of some kind?” I asked her.

    She paused a second before responding. “No, I don’t, not really. All I know is that we need to get in there, find the person in charge, and either kill them or set them up to be arrested somehow. I’ve been given private investigator status by the Pewter City and Cerulean City police departments, so I have some good contacts. Besides that, we’ll mostly wing it.”

    I was shocked. “Kill them?!”

    Criss stopped walking, turning around and stared into my eyes with that hard look on her face. “Yes, if necessary,” she said coolly. “What did you think we would do?”

    “I don’t know. Paralyze them with electric attacks, I guess. And then drag them back to the police.”

    She raised an eyebrow skeptically. “Do you have any electric Pokémon?”

    I shook my head.

    “Neither do I. And I wouldn’t fancy dragging a couple Rocket grunts for four miles down a mountain.”

    I sighed. “I guess not….”

    Criss’s face softened a little and we kept walking.

    “Ideally, that’s exactly what we would do,” she said over her shoulder, “but it’s just impractical.”

    “I guess that makes sense. How do we set them up to be arrested then?” I asked, trying my hardest to keep my voice steady.

    “Usually I just find a way to tie them up and go fetch the police,” Criss replied, matter-of-factly.

    I was skeptical, but it seemed like she had done this before. She suddenly threw out an arm to stop me.

    “That’s the spot.”

    I looked through the trees where she was pointing. About fifty yards off the trail, the steady slope of the mountain was interrupted by a steep rocky cliff face that rose up twenty feet or so.

    “By that cliff? How do you know?”

    “Look, foot traffic has left a clear trail off of the main path in that direction.” She pointed out the bent bushes and broken tree limbs as she followed the trail off the path we had been walking on.

    “How do you know it wasn’t a Sandshrew or Rattata?” I asked as I followed her. As if skeptical, Baron watched us from a branch above the main path without following until we were almost at the cliff.

    “I don’t, but this still looks like a likely place.”

    The ground was even rockier here than on the trail, and the trees considerably thinner. “What exactly are we looking for?”

    “Something like… that.” Criss pointed at a hole where the cliff met the ground a short ways away. I was surprised we hadn’t seen it walking up, but I suppose Team Rocket had tried to camouflage it from the trail as best as they could.

    Baron beat us there, fluttering down to the rim of the hole and looking in. It looked like some kind of old mineshaft that went down into the earth and then flattened out right before going completely dark. It was wide enough for two or three people to walk side by side, but looked like it might get narrower farther in.

    Baron looked up at me, cooing cynically, its beige eyebrow-like feathers angled in a perpetual scowl.

    “They’ve probably strung some lights farther along. For now, Flareon will light the way.”

    The flaming red cat-like Pokémon scrambled down into the darkness, illuminating the cave with an eerie crimson glow. Criss followed. I recalled Baron and climbed down too, albeit reluctantly.

    As expected, it flattened out pretty quickly and we walked into the depths of the mountain. The stuffy silence was just as unsettling as the darkness. I’d never been this far underground before.

    About two minutes in I was about to make a comment on the lack of guards when we rounded a corner and entered a huge, dimly lit, roughly circular chamber. We were about halfway up, ten feet or so. A wire with lights was strung around the whole circumference of the room at about our eye-level. Our ledge tapered off to the left and right and a ladder hung down in front of us. The cavern floor was jagged and littered with boulders. A multitude of metal crates were scattered about as well as an assortment of lamps. Several tunnels led off in various directions. We were the only people in the room.

    “Where…?” I started, but Criss put a finger to my lips and I stopped.

    She leaned over and whispered into my ear, “Our voices will carry easily through the cavern; we need to be quiet.”

    She silently descended the ladder, looked around, and beckoned to me. I stood next to her, staring at the crates.

    “Where do you think the Rockets are?” I whispered.

    She shrugged and glanced at each of the side tunnels.

    Suddenly, we heard a rustle from one of the tunnels to my right, the sound echoing to make it seem incredibly loud. Criss yanked me down into the shadows behind the nearest boulder. We crouched there, waiting.

    And then, with an unsettling screech, a small blue and purple bat fluttered out of the tunnel and began to tear away at the light cord running along the wall with its tiny fangs.

    “Zubat,” Criss muttered. “They must not be used to this kind of intrusive light.”

    “HEY!”

    We both jumped, and Criss yanked me farther back into the shadows. A man in a dark uniform with a red R emblazoned on the front had run out of one of the tunnels, with a Raticate at his heels. He was yelling at the Zubat. The Raticate began to scratch at the walls and glare up at the Zubat, but it couldn’t reach very far. The man picked up a rock and threw it. The Zubat dodged the projectile, screeched again, and flew away.

    The man was cursing under his breath. He stalked back down the tunnel that he had come through. “Damn bats. If we have to stay here any longer, we had better get some flying-types of our own.”

    As his mutterings dwindled away down the tunnel, Criss began to stand, but I pulled her back down. “Wait,” I hissed, “I thought I saw something moving over by those crates.”

    Sure enough, a couple seconds later, a small pink head peeked up over one of the metal boxes. The Pokémon clambered on top of the box and stared down the tunnel that the Rocket had taken.

    I fumbled at a side pocket of my pack, eventually pulling out my Pokédex as Criss and I both stared. At the last second, I remembered to mute the device.

    “Clefairy, the fairy Pokémon,” I whispered aloud. “The moonlight that it stores in the wings on its back apparently gives it the ability to float in midair. Its adorable behavior and cry make it highly popular. However, this cute Pokémon is rarely found. It becomes easier to spot, for some reason, on the night of a full moon.”

    The pink puffball looked around once more and then reached down to the lid of the crate. With a grunt, it pulled the lid off but toppled backwards. I craned my neck to see what was inside. It was a bunch of Moon Stones. The Clefairy got back up and grabbed as many Moon Stones as it could hold before dashing down one of the tunnels.

    I looked over at Criss. She seemed to be suppressing laughter. This was strange; I had never seen her laugh before. I raised an eyebrow.

    “Sorry,” she said breathlessly, “I don’t know why I find that so funny. Come on, let’s go.”

    We cautiously made our way down the unlit tunnel where the Rocket had went.

    “You might want to let one of your Pokémon out,” Criss suggested. “Just keep it quiet.”

    I released Baron from its Poké Ball again. It landed on my outstretched arm and cooed softly. I looked at it and put my fingers to my lips. It cocked its head sideways in a bemused fashion but didn’t make any more noise. It wasn’t until then that I realized that I hadn’t actually used Baron before in any major battle. I hoped that wouldn’t matter, as it was too late to train it now. At the very least, it had put up a noble fight when I caught it on Route 2.

    Another room was coming up on the right. We could see the light against the wall. Criss and I crept up to the corner and she peeked around. I could hear voices. She took a quick step to the other side of the doorway so that I could listen, too.

    “So the boss is taking the rest back on this helicopter?” said a rough voice that I recognized as that of the Rocket we had seen earlier.

    “No, he’s leaving the crates that are in the main chamber right now. We’ll carry those down by hand,” said another voice; the other men in the room groaned. “But the real money will be from these fossils that we found. If we can get them to one of those revival machines, we’ve hit a gold mine.”

    “Figuratively, of course. We’d never get that lucky,” said a skeptical voice that I actually recognized as the Rocket from the previous morning.

    “Quit your complaining. Your paychecks will be considerable if you actually do your job. Now get back to patrolling the tunnels. An infiltration while the boss is still here would be a great reason for him to have us all killed,” commanded the first voice.

    Two figures walked out of the room and right past me. I held my breath and tried to blend in with the shadows. I could feel Baron quivering as I held the little bird against me. Amazingly, it was so dark that they didn’t notice me. I glanced over towards Criss but she wasn’t there. Hesitantly, I peeked into the room and saw her standing menacingly, facing the third man. He hadn’t noticed her as he was bending over and shoving some boxes onto shelves on the back wall of the room. This cavern wasn’t nearly as big as the first, only about the size of my bedroom. It seemed to be more of a combined office and storage closet. The back wall was covered by bookshelves holding stones, books, and fossils. Maps carpeted one wall and the other had an array of hooks on which hung ropes, drills, and mining tools.

    Flareon, at Criss’ side, growled audibly.

    The man straightened up and began to turn around. “I thought I told you to…. Huh?” But before he could alert the other Rockets, Criss jumped at him and punched him across the face. He stumbled backwards, his head smashing into the shelves before he crumpled to the ground. Down and out in one hit. Criss turned around to see me standing in the doorway with my mouth gaping.

    Criss flexed her fingers and gazed at her hand “Ouch. That hurt,” she said calmly.

    “Holy hell….” It was all I could say. Adrenaline coursed through me as I realized what she had done.

    She smiled mischievously at me, “Sorry, I’m not very feminine am I?”

    I continued to stare with open-mouthed astonishment while she tied up the man with a rope off of the wall and gagged him with his own hat.

    After recovering from my shock, I decided to take a look at the contents of the shelves. A few fossils had fallen to the ground when the Rocket had ran into them. Baron jumped down off of my arm and began pecking at one with a swirling shell. I picked up one with a strange dome.

    “Do you think that what he said about fossil resurrection is true?” I asked Criss, my voice shaking slightly from the adrenaline.

    She looked over. “It is, I’ve seen it. The technology was developed in a lab on Cinnabar Island,” she replied. “Devon Corp is working to perfect it and make it commercial.” She grabbed the fossil that Baron had taken an interest in and looked at it before pocketing it.

    “Psht, Devon. What do they know?” I scoffed. Following her lead, I tucked the domed fossil into a side pocket on my backpack.

    “What’s wrong with Devon?”

    “My brother works for Silph, so I have to dislike Devon on principle,” I explained. Devon Corp was the Hoenn region’s Silph Co. They both were leaders in Pokémon technology development and design. My brother always complained about problems that the competition with Devon made. Criss just shook her head and smiled. Before we left the room, she looked down at the Rocket.

    “This would be easier if we just cut his throat.”

    The calmness with which she stated this astounded me. I tried to act casual. “Nah, let’s just leave him,” I choked out.

    “I guess,” Criss agreed, to my relief.

    A moral battle raged in my head as we left the room. I had left Pallet looking for independence and a chance to fend for myself. I had no idea that might mean murder. The thought made me sick to my stomach.

    My friend David had left on his journey a couple months before I did. Somewhere out there he was traveling from gym to gym with his Bulbasaur. I couldn’t help but wonder if he was going through similar things. How would he handle this? Would his traveling companion’s casual mention of murder break his friendly, confident bravado?

    What was I even doing here? Did Criss really think I could help at all? Why had I even asked to come along? Part of me wanted to run out of this dark cave as fast as I could and book it to Cerulean City, never looking back. But even as I considered doing that very thing, the part of me that had gotten me into this situation in the first place spoke up.

    These were the men who had torn my family apart. The thought of my dad made my heart clench in sadness and outrage, like a vice-grip had taken ahold of my chest. I had beaten Brock. I could beat these assholes. This was just another step on my journey. I could prove myself to Criss and make myself stronger in the process. Newfound confidence poured through me. This may not be the usual way a journey worked out, but I wasn’t going to let that stop me. Instead, I was going to let it help me grow.

    Not to mention, a more logical side of my brain added, Criss’s side is probably the safest place to be right now. Her handling of the Rocket in the supply room was evidence of that.

    That shut up my cowardice.

    “No more time for espionage,” Criss’s voice came from the darkness ahead of me as we walked back down the tunnel. “Let’s go get those other two and get out of here.”

    I just nodded silently, even though she couldn’t see. Baron cooed encouragingly in my ear.

    We walked down the hallway back into the big chamber. “Now where are those other --” started Criss, but her unfinished question was immediately answered.

    “Hey! What the hell do you think you’re doing?” came a shout from one of the tunnels. I turned to see the Rocket with his Raticate and the other Rocket with an Ekans. I was still buzzing a bit from when Criss punched out the other Rocket, but the shout gave me a fresh burst of adrenaline.

    “Go! Flareon!” shouted Criss beside me. Her Pokémon dashed forward and tackled the Raticate.

    I saw the other Rocket send his Ekans at me. Realizing the urgency of the situation, I shook off my last dregs of hesitation and commanded a gust from Baron, tossing the little bird forward. The swirl of dust and wind from Baron’s rapidly beating wings did little to the huge purple snake, which just slid back about a foot.

    “Sand attack, Baron!”

    The blast of sand hit the Ekans in its face and it shook its head, hissing and spitting. I could hear Criss and the other Rocket fighting about ten feet to my left.

    “Hyper Fang!” the Rocket called.

    I could feel the heat as Flareon responded with a blast of fire.

    “Ekans, Poison Sting!” called the Rocket I was facing.

    “Dodge it!” But I was too late. The poisonous barbs that shot from Ekans’s mouth caught the bird full on. It let out a soft cry of surprise, and then fell to the dirt. “Baron! No!”

    “It’s over, kid; now get out of here before I stop feeling so merciful.”

    But with a strained coo, my Pidgey pushed itself up onto its feet. Pinpricks of blood dotted its lightly colored chest.

    “No, wait,” I said. “You’re not strong enough!” I began to get out its Poké Ball but was stopped when I noticed the glare it was giving me. Then it began to glow.

    “Huh?” exclaimed the Rocket. His Ekans was looking at Baron quizzically.

    It started as a soft white shine coming out from under Baron’s feathers, casting strange shadows on the cave surfaces around us. The light grew brighter and brighter, particularly from Baron’s eyes. The little bird let out a strange fluttering growl, unlike any sound I had ever heard it make before. Then I realized what was happening. Baron began to grow. It swelled upward and outward, growing to the height of my waist. Pinkish-red hair-like feathers sprouted from the back of its head and it spread its wings out. The glow slowly faded. Baron let out a shrieking battle cry. I couldn’t help but feel like it was directed at me. As if to say, “I have made myself strong enough.”

    I realized that I had no idea what moves a Pidgeotto was capable of. But I didn’t have time to reach for my Pokédex. The Rocket had already reacted.

    “Ekans, grab it with a wrap!”

    “Baron, dodge it!”

    The bird flapped into the air and let out a defiant cry at the snake.

    “Use --” I paused. “I don’t know, just get it!”

    The Rocket laughed at this, but stopped when my new Pidgeotto swooped down at his Ekans. The bird grabbed the snake around the middle and slammed it, hissing, into the wall. It fell and hit the ground, where it coiled up, almost as if it were shrinking. Its head did not rise up. Baron circled and landed next to me, letting out another shriek.

    Well how about that.

    “Nice one!” I exclaimed. In the standard reflex of ending a battle, I recalled my Pokémon.

    I looked over at Criss to see her locked in hand-to-hand combat with the other Rocket. Her Flareon was chasing the weakened looking Raticate around the room, launching a constant flamethrower attack.

    I looked back in time to see my foe’s fist collide with my face. I fell over onto my hands and knees, my head buzzing. I saw stars and felt my nose begin to bleed.

    The Rocket loomed over me, his legs barely visible in the dim lighting a few feet in front of me. He said something, probably a threat or jeer of some kind, but my addled brain didn’t really feel like processing it.

    One of my hands immediately went to my bleeding nose by reflex. The other, supporting my weight, curled around a rock the size of my fist.

    I didn’t even think about the consequences. My fingers clamped down on the rock and I jumped upwards. Before the Rocket could react, I slammed the rock into the side of his head as hard as I could. I felt something give beneath the blow, and he dropped like a sack of potatoes, unconscious at the least.

    Wiping the blood away from my nose, I looked over to see Criss kneeling over the other Rocket, who looked like he had been long since knocked out.

    She stood and gave the fallen Rocket a swift kick, then turned to her Flareon.

    “Let’s go, Flareon.” Her Pokémon had somehow managed to wedge the Rocket’s Raticate between a pair of boulders. The Raticate’s fur was slightly singed.

    Criss looked at me.

    “We can get that fixed up in Cerulean,” she said, gesturing to my nose. “Sorry, I meant to tell you. These guys only use Pokémon at first.”

    “Yeah,” I replied sarcastically, my fear fighting with my excitement about winning. “Thanks for the warning. At least they’re stupid.”

    “I just realized, though,” said Criss, “I don’t think we’re done here.”

    “What? You think there’s more?”

    “Absolutely. The first Rocket said that the boss was still here, loading a helicopter or something.”

    The Rocket Boss? I don’t know…. What does it matter if he gets away?” Little was known about the leader of Team Rocket, and I couldn’t help but be scared. My excitement drained away. This wasn’t quite the heroic battle I had anticipated. But what, then, had I anticipated? Whatever my motivations for coming with Criss in the first place, I was ready to leave immediately. The whole quit-while-you’re-ahead philosophy sounded really appealing right about now.

    “Exactly; it’s the Rocket Boss. Imagine if we could catch him. Let’s go.” Clearly Criss had no similar qualms. She rushed over to one of the side tunnels and flipped a huge switch on the wall. Lights flickered on down the tunnel. She beckoned to me before dashing out of sight, her Flareon hot on her heels.

    I stood still for a moment, looking after her. My eyes glanced back and forth between the tunnel that she had ran down and the ladder to the side that would lead back to the surface.

    I could leave. What would the consequences be? I wasn’t likely to run in to Criss ever again.

    And yet… I wanted to stay with her. Criss had shown faith in me. Faith that I would be able to help.

    Here I was, on my way to a city I had never visited before, on a journey all on my lonesome, and she had shown faith in me. I couldn’t leave her to fight Team Rocket on her own, mythical mob boss or not. I don’t know why I felt that way, but I just couldn’t. Maybe it was because of Dad. Maybe it was because of some sense of justice within me. Maybe it was just my natural response to a damsel in distress.

    I snorted painfully. Heh. This girl? A damsel in distress? As if.

    My nose voiced its input by throbbing and slowly dripping blood.

    “Oh, what the hell.”

    I sprinted off after Criss.

    She had stopped to wait for me at a fork in the tunnel. It was clear which way to go. One of the paths diminished into some sort of natural, unlit crevice while the lights continued up a set of metal stairs that led to a door in the cave wall. As soon as I caught up to her, Criss leapt up the stairs.

    She slowly pushed the door open and stepped outside into the blinding sunlight. I followed, immediately ducking behind a boulder to avoid being seen by the figures standing not far in front of us. Criss did the same.

    I peeked out from behind the rock, blinking as my eyes adjusted to the daylight. We looked to be in Mt Moon’s crater. Two men wearing Team Rocket uniforms were loading what were clearly the last few crates of Moon Stones aboard a large cargo helicopter. Another man stood to the side, watching them with his hands clasped behind his back. The third man was tall, with thinning brown hair and a very imposing demeanor. He wore a slight, almost sadistic grin and a slick three piece suit. This was clearly the famed Rocket Boss. No one seemed to know anything about this man beyond the fact that he existed. I gulped, more than a little intimidated. Criss only seemed to get angrier at the sight of this mysterious figure.

    She let out a low, guttural growl and reached to her belt, pulling out her knife. The look in her eyes could only be described as bloodlust. I had never seen anyone so angry.

    I thought I hated the Rockets.

    “Criss, wait --” I hissed.

    But I was ignored. She growled again as she leapt out into the open and dashed towards the tall man. I grabbed at Flareon to stop it from following her out, but it burned my hands and ran off after its master.

    No one appeared to realize what was going on at first, but as Criss dashed towards the tall man, knife raised, he turned to her. With surprising reflexes, the Rocket boss grabbed her by the wrist, the second she was close enough, and twisted it so she would drop the knife. But Criss was made of stronger stuff than most people. She held onto the knife despite the man’s maneuver and swung her other arm around to punch him in the side. He let go of her wrist at the blow, but by that time, the other Rockets had started to react. One of them leapt into the helicopter and started up the rotors. The other dove at Criss, tackling her and pinning her to the ground. Flareon caught up to them and latched its jaws onto the Rocket’s leg in some sort of fire-infused bite.

    I gave a yell and emerged from my hiding place. The Rocket Boss jumped at my appearance but then strode towards the helicopter, ignoring both me and the tussle now taking place on the ground behind him. The helicopter’s blades sliced through the air so fast that they looked like a blur; their thumping sound deafening. I dashed over to Criss and pulled the Rocket grunt off of her, beginning a wrestling match of our own.

    Now, I’m far from unfit, but besides being tall, I’m not a very big person in the first place. Despite the fire Pokémon still latched to his leg, the Rocket had a definite weight advantage. Within seconds I was pinned to the ground.

    Underneath the Rocket’s arm I saw Criss get up on one knee and hurl the knife at the Rocket Boss, who now stood in the helicopter’s bay. The blade sank into his arm as the helicopter slowly began to lift off. I guess they didn’t care about the man they were leaving behind.

    The Rocket boss grimaced in pain, but removed the knife. Blood poured from his wound, undoubtedly staining his suit. He let the knife fall to the ground. Almost in slow motion, I saw him put a hand into his jacket and withdraw a gun.

    Guns are heavily outlawed; possession of one is worth a life sentence in jail. Gun running is one of Team Rocket’s specialties, but even among the organization they are very rare due to the risk in owning one. I was in way over my head. What had I been thinking? People could die here. Criss could die here. But I wasn’t going to let that happen. With a surge of adrenaline, I hurled the Rocket off of me as the gunshot rang out.

    I wasn’t going to be able to pull Criss out of the way.

    But it seemed my adrenaline did more than I thought. It took me a second to realize what had happened as the helicopter rose into the sky and disappeared over the crater’s edge. I had tossed the Rocket straight into the path of the bullet. He laid on the ground, dead, his black uniform disguising the pattern of blood blossoming on his back.

    Criss knelt, oblivious to all else, staring at the spot where the helicopter had disappeared. I could see the hatred burning in her eyes. I stood up, shivering from the adrenaline coursing through my veins.

    “Are you okay?” I asked Criss shakily. I reached out a hand to put on her shoulder.

    She shrugged off my hand and turned her head to look at me. I expected her to be crying, but her eyes were dry. “No.”

    Without another word she stood up, retrieved her blood-stained knife, wiping it clean on her shirt as she walked back down the stairs. Ever diligent, Flareon stayed by her side. I followed silently.

    As we walked through the main chamber, I realized that the two Rockets probably should be tied up. I pointed this out to Criss, who wordlessly walked over to the grunt that I had felled and put her finger to his throat to check his pulse. I glanced at her victim and saw that he lay in a pool of blood. Criss had already slit his throat.

    She was a scary person.

    I looked back to see Criss climbing the ladder to the exit tunnel. In confusion I went and checked the pulse of the other Rocket myself. There was none. I had directly killed a man. I just turned away, and followed Criss up the ladder. The image of my dad’s burnt carcass swam to the front of my mind. I held it there, hardening myself against any pity or regret I might have.

    We climbed steadily back out of the cave. Blinking in the sunlight, we made our way back down the side of the mountain. Criss never said a word. I spent most of the trek scraping dried blood from my nose off of my lips and chin. We stopped at a clearing in the trees to look out at Cerulean City.

    It was quite a bit bigger than Pewter City. Downtown was on the side closest to us, orderly blocks organized the nondescript shops and businesses. I recognized the distinctive red roof of a Pokémon Center, as well as a large grey building that had to be the gym. On the far side were rows and rows of houses, as well as a road that led into the hills in the distance. A huge river with a wooden bridge spanning it flowed past the city on our left; and another road led away into the distance to our right.

    A few short miles later, we strolled into the city and stopped at a crossroad.

    “I’m going to go to the police station,” said Criss. “You keep going on to the Poké Center. It’s not far down this road. I’ll meet you there.” She gestured to the left. It was the first time she had spoken since we had left the crater.

    I nodded and looked after her while she went off to the right. She had a past. That much was clear. What had put her on this path? How long had she been doing it? What drove her to such insane lengths? Only time would tell.

    Hopefully.

    Silently, I continued walking down the road she had indicated. When I reached the center, I turned in my Pokémon to be healed and collapsed on one of the available beds.

    *****

    NEXT: Who is the man with the Flygon?

    I'll try to keep them a little bit shorter in the future :p
     
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    Chapter 2.5 - Skies above Kanto
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (Journey Fic)

    Thanks for the feedback, the main character's name is Keith. I think I put that in there somewhere, it's tough to introduce him when its in 1st person. The battles will get better, longer, and more detailed as time goes on. I did write these early chapters a long time ago for the most part, so they aren't as high quality.

    Here's the next chapter, its actually more of an in-between account of what happens to that creepy guy with a Flygon so its much shorter. I just wrote this for fun the other day and I think it turned out pretty good.

    Chapter 2.5

    The rhythmic thumping of helicopter rotors woke the young man from his afternoon nap on a ledge near the crater of Mt. Moon. He quickly shook his Flygon awake as well.

    “Shit! They let someone get away. I hope they’re okay; I thought she could handle this. Come on, Flygon, it’s go time.”

    He leaped onto his companion’s back and put on the pair of goggles that dangled around his neck as it began to beat its powerful wings. Within seconds they had lifted off and were in pursuit of the helicopter. As they zipped over the crater, the man looked down. He saw only one body, wearing a black uniform, and breathed a sigh of relief before turning his attention back to the chase.

    As they neared the large black helicopter, the man saw the bright red R emblazoned on its side. But that wasn’t all; the R had a circle around it.

    “The boss? I guess that explains a lot,” exclaimed the man. “That letter to Slateport must have been a diversion. At least we didn’t take the bait, huh, Flygon?”

    The dragon hummed in response.

    “That copter’ll be heavily armored. You ready? We could end this all today…”

    Flygon growled in agreement and anticipation. With that, they dove into battle.

    A fiery flamethrower lanced from Flygon’s mouth towards the cockpit of the helicopter. The pilot was caught by surprise, but managed to veer the craft out of the way. Almost immediately, the cargo door opened slightly and two Poké Balls were tossed out. A pair of ravenous Fearow burst from them and raced towards the dragon.

    “Expendables? These people sicken me.”

    With several whispered commands to his Pokémon, a furious air battle began. Luckily, the two Fearow did not reach him at the same time. Unluckily, the bigger one got there first. Flygon managed to slow him down with a sonic boom from its powerful vibrating wings, but they still crashed into each other. The man held on for his life and continued whispering commands.

    His dragon let loose a screech that caused both of the Fearow to falter slightly. Flygon tore itself from its current opponent and fell to the level of the smaller bird. At the last second, it whipped around behind the Fearow and hit it with a powerful feint attack. The Flygon’s trainer looked around for the helicopter and spotted it in the distance, speeding away.

    The first Fearow had managed to recover by this time and now dove back down, landing a wing attack.

    “Let’s take this to your element,” the trainer told his Flygon, and it beat its wings furiously to gain altitude, but turned around right as the Fearow began catching up to it. With a cry, it dove downward at a frightening velocity. Wind roared through the man’s ears as the ground approached rapidly. He didn’t dare have his Pokémon use any of its special abilities until he was sure he had the upper hand. Unlike most trainers, he actually anticipated mirror move.

    The man gripped onto his Pokémon tightly as it quickly pulled out of its dive, mere feet from colliding with the trees. The resulting Gs blurred the edges of the man’s vision, but he held on. He turned to see the bigger of the two Fearow expertly pull out of the dive and continue the pursuit. The other Fearow was not so lucky. He could almost hear its bones crunching as it tore through the trees and slammed into the ground with a horrible scream.

    “We need to finish this quickly before our quarry gets away.”

    Flygon growled in agreement and swooped to the left into a large dirt field.

    “Perfect.”

    As the Fearow entered the field, it was met with a blinding blast of sand and dust.

    “Sand attack, sandstorm, and sand tomb,” said the man. His Pokémon obliged, and the dust whipped around their opponent, finally trapping it.

    “Flaahhhgoon!” cried the dragon as it finished its opponent with a deadly hyper beam. As the sandstorm cleared, they could see what was left of the Fearow. It was half buried under the dirt and both of its wings were bent at odd angles. It twitched slightly, then lay still.

    The man sighed. “A Pokémon Center could probably save it, but we don’t have time. Come on Flygon….”

    He knew his dragon was tired, but he pushed it to catch up with the chopper. He had trained his Pokémon well so they were back on track within minutes. But this time, the pilot saw them coming. He was clearly trained for the job, not just another stupid grunt. The copter whipped around to aim itself at its ambushers. With a mechanical “ka-chunk” two small compartments flipped out of the helicopters nose, revealing a pair of machine guns. An armed helicopter? That was too much.

    “Fuck this! Abort, Flygon! DIVE!”

    But it was too late. Bullets ripped through his Pokémon’s thin wings and chest, and a shot hit him in the upper left arm as he turned away. It was pain like he had never felt before, pain and horror. The helicopter turned and continued on its journey as the man clutched onto his injured Pokémon with a single arm and fell, silently, through the sky.

    He floated in and out of consciousness, but his Pokémon kept fighting for their lives. It beat its injured wings and screamed in pain at the stress on its open wounds, but fought to slow their descent. The last thing the man remembered before he finally passed out was crashing through the trees below.


    *****

    NEXT: Keith deals with the fallout of his ordeal on Mt. Moon.
     
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    Chapter 3 - Cerulean City
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (Journey Fic)

    Fortunately, you won't have to wait long to find out what happens to Mr. Flygon, I have another half chapter on the way. Unfortunately, he won't fit into the story for quite a long time, aside from cameo appearances. The only reason I'm saying this is because I originally wrote the fic without the italicized parts, so don't get your hopes up yet.

    Anyways, until I get some more readers and feedback I might as well plow ahead. This chapter is kind of a filler so I'll post the next one soon, maybe tomorrow. Nevertheless, its important.

    Chapter 3

    How is it that your life can be so quickly torn out from under your feet? I lay awake in my bunk in the Cerulean Pokémon Center, staring at the ceiling. This was it. I was at step two of my journey. This was my dream. I was finally living it. So why did it feel so empty?

    Mt. Moon had sapped everything from me, physically and emotionally. I stretched, feeling my sore muscles tighten. There was little reason to lay there feeling sorry for myself. I swung my feet out of bed and glanced at the corpulent man sleeping in the bunk adjacent to mine. He snored and rolled over. Attempting to keep quiet, I wandered around the dorm area until I found the public showers.

    I stood in the dark, cramped stall and watched the lukewarm water wash away the dirt and sweat and dried blood. I probably stood there for about ten minutes, not thinking about anything except the uncomfortably strong shower pressure-washing my body.

    Once the last physical remnants of Mt. Moon were washed away, I got dressed, retrieved my pack from my bunk, and walked out into the main area.

    The Cerulean Center was almost identical to the one in Pewter, but had a slightly larger cafeteria. Looking around the lobby, a bit of my tension left me. A girl rested on a couch in the corner, stroking the Pikachu on her lap as she read a book. A boy my age was talking to someone on the videophones. Such was the life of trainers. This was me now, traveling Kanto with my Pokémon just like I always wanted. That fiasco in Mt. Moon was a fluke. Nothing like that would ever happen again. And besides, I was stronger for having been through it.

    Sufficiently pepped up, I picked up my Pokémon from the nurse and made my way into the cafeteria to get some breakfast. I returned Locustod and Baron to my belt right away, but after some thought I let Rainer out to keep me company. The little Squirtle wasn’t terribly talkative, but it was better than sitting alone.

    I got breakfast for both Rainer and myself in the little cafeteria off to the side. I took a seat at a table by a window and watched Rainer munch away at the hyper-nutritious Pokémon food the center offered. I wondered how much of yesterday it had been aware of. Some people said that Pokémon had a reasonable level of awareness about what went on outside of their Poké Balls, but I wasn’t sure. The science made no sense to me no matter how many times my brother explained it.

    As we were eating, I saw Criss come in. She looked dirty and ragged, like she hadn’t slept all night. Again. Noticing me, she came over and sat down. After how dour and angry she was the day before, I braced myself, sucking in a breath.

    “Hey,” she said simply.

    I let the breath out. No angst-ridden ultimatums today, apparently.

    She gestured to my still wet hair. “The shower helps, doesn’t it?”

    “Yeah...” I responded as Flareon jumped up on the table to join us. I raised a hand to gently pet it on its furry mane. It was warm, but didn’t burn me like it had when I grabbed it on the previous day. I cheered inside. Small victories.

    Rainer watched it with what might have been jealousy, but could also have simply been wariness. Turtle expressions are tough to read.

    Criss looked like she was about to say something else, but then decided against it and settled for staring out the window. All of the hatred and rage from yesterday seemed to be gone.

    “Did you even sleep last night?” I asked.

    She looked at me for a second. “A bit.”

    I wasn’t sure if I believed her. “So how’d the police station visit go?” I asked.

    “The surviving Rocket was arrested and brought into town this morning. Here’s your reward.” She slid a wad of bills across the table to me.

    “We get rewards?” I asked, astonished, as I picked up the money. It was a fair amount, though not as much as I currently had. To be completely honest, I had more expected to be arrested for being involved in the death of a man. That thought brought a clenching feeling in the pit of my stomach. Appetite lost, I looked down at the remnants of my muffin and pushed it away. Flareon sniffed it curiously.

    “Of course,” Criss replied, “Team Rocket is a problem and the police squad appreciates all the help it can get.”

    I slowly pocketed the money, trying not to think of it as a bounty, even though that’s exactly what it was. It was too much of a windfall to give up for moral reasons, and in a way I had earned it. “What about the dead guys, are we in trouble for that?”

    “Self-defense.”

    “Only after we chose to go in there.” I spoke slowly and carefully, terrified of setting her off again.

    Criss stared off into the void, somewhere over my left shoulder. “They got what they deserved.”

    My moral compass was currently having trouble finding magnetic north, so I didn’t respond to that. “So… what now? What are you going to do next?”

    “I’ll probably head down to Vermillion City. I haven’t been there in a while; I might be able to sniff up some new leads. And my Tentacruel needs to swim in saltwater again.” She paused again before adding, “Are you going to stay here?”

    “Yeah,” I replied. And once again the rush of being on my journey pushed aside all moral quandaries and existential crises. My best friend Tim was supposedly on his way, as his birthday was only two weeks behind mine. “I’m going to wait for a friend of mine to catch up. He probably won’t be here for a couple weeks.”

    “Well…” she drifted off.

    Flareon, laying on the table, looked between me and my discarded muffin. I waved a hand. “Oh just take it.” Flareon immediately snatched the muffin up and dove onto Criss’s lap to eat it.

    “I’d… I’d better get going,” Criss said, standing suddenly after pushing Flareon aside. “I just want to let you know… I usually work alone, but thanks for having my back at Mt Moon.”

    Confidence boost, ahoy! The part of me that had so desperately wanted to impress this girl whooped silently. I nodded, trying to keep a mostly straight face. “Maybe we’ll see each other around sometime?”

    “I hope not. For your sake.”

    Well that’s nice. I tried to reign in any outward emotional reaction to that statement.

    She paused, absentmindedly brushing muffin crumbs off of her sash. “Bye.” She turned to leave but then stopped and looked back at me “Oh yeah, just a bit of advice: get to the Saffron Gym as soon as possible and talk to Sabrina. Tell her I sent you. She’ll be able to teach you quite a bit about battling.” Then she left without waiting for my reply, Flareon prancing after her.

    I watched her go, admiring the practiced grace with which she moved.

    No. Bad. This girl could turn me inside out with one hand tied behind her back. No inappropriate thoughts allowed.

    I sat alone at my table for a few minutes, my thoughts dancing between glee and terror and excitement and gut wrenching stress. So much had happened in the past four days, I couldn’t believe it. I was almost ready to go home already for a few days of rest. Almost. But I needed to focus on the reason I was here.

    The leader of the Cerulean Gym was a young woman named Misty. She was a water-type specialist, and that was about all I knew about her. It was enough to infer that I wouldn’t have nearly as much of an advantage as I did against Brock. That meant training, and maybe even poking around for some new Pokémon to catch. I needed to diversify my team, and the greater Cerulean area had plenty of different habitats to find Pokémon in.

    I checked the date on my watch. It was the third of September. I did some quick calculations in my head. After I graduated and turned sixteen, I had signed a contract with the Pokémon League to sponsor my journey. The contract basically says that the League will give me a starter Pokémon, a Pokédex, and monthly allowance of cash to go on a journey. In return, I have to travel and challenge the badge circuit. I’m allowed seven weeks between badges before the money stops coming and I’m forced to go work for the Pokémon League for at least two years. Not a bad deal, especially for a kid from a not so well off family like me. Not to mention, if you win eight badges from either Kanto or Johto, challenge the Elite Four and the Champion and win, the contract terminates completely.

    So that left me until the middle of October, which would be more than enough time, even if Tim was slow, which was likely. Either way, he was sure to have a much easier time coming through Mt. Moon than I had.

    The prospect of having that much time to do nothing but prepare left me with little motivation to do any preparing, but I managed to convince myself to begin by standing up and discarding my breakfast tray. I shouldered my pack and headed out the door. Rainer diligently followed close behind. It was a beautiful day, especially for September. Sunny skies and not a cloud to be seen. I took a seat on a bench on the side of the road a block or so down from the Center, across from a small park.

    Rainer and I sat in silence. In the park across the street, the girl with the Pikachu I had seen in the center battled with a boy and his Hoothoot. As we watched the battle play out, I thought wistfully about my journey.

    I was really looking forward to Tim showing up. It would be much more fun travelling with him than travelling alone. I looked at Rainer.

    “I wonder what kind of Pokémon Tim will have,” I said, both to myself and the Squirtle.

    Rainer looked up at me curiously.

    “He said he’d choose Charmander as his first Pokémon. I wonder if he went through with that.”

    Rainer huffed.

    “Maybe you two could be friends.”

    Rainer huffed again and punched the back of the bench with its tiny little turtle fist.

    “Or you could fight it. That’s cool too.”

    *****

    A burly ranger nodded at me as she walked by. A mean looking Sandslash followed close behind.

    I smiled and nodded hello in return as she continued on down the path towards Mt. Moon. As she disappeared into the forest that lined the grassy field on Route Four where Rainer and I were training, I looked back at my Pokémon.

    “That was the third ranger to go by today. They must be increasing patrols after the whole Mt. Moon fiasco.”

    Rainer didn’t respond, just continued entertaining itself by shooting another burst of water from its mouth up into the air and letting it rain back down. The little Squirtle been doing that pretty much constantly since that morning, when it had actually rained and I had explained to it what “Rainer” meant. Apparently it took making it rain as some kind of personal responsibility. It was kind of cute at first, but I hoped it was a habit it would eventually get over, since I was starting to get sick of being splashed.

    It had been just over a week since we had arrived in Cerulean. Besides exploring the city and attempting to figure out what exactly training Pokémon for battle was all about, I spent a lot of time flipping through my Pokédex.

    Professor Oak claimed the Pokédex he had given me had belonged to my dad, though I’d never actually seen him use it. It was a little outdated and a special researcher’s model to boot, so it had some features that I had no idea how to use and lacked some of the conveniences that came with the most recent versions given out by the League. That said, it was immensely useful. There was a lot to learn: the techniques my Pokémon knew, what they could eventually evolve into, and of course the massive amount of information there was on every single Pokémon native to Kanto. I often spent time flipping through entries on random species, trying my best to memorize their capabilities as well. Hopefully that would give me an edge in future battles.

    An edge I’d probably need.

    “Alright Lord of the Storm, let’s get to finding a new Pokémon to catch,” I gestured towards a taller patch of grass where I had seen a Sandshrew disappear earlier.

    Rainer looked at me indignantly. I was getting better at identifying its emotions, but it wasn’t easy.

    “Oh hush, I’m not replacing you. Remember catching Baron and Locustod? You’ll have to beat it in a fight before I can even catch it, so you get to establish dominance early. That cool?”

    Rainer headed confidently towards the tall grass at the word “fight.”

    We beat around in the tall grass for at least an hour until the sun began to dip behind the trees, but all we discovered was that I had not, in fact, outgrown my grass pollen allergies.

    So, sneezing and sniffling, I decided to head back to the city for the night. I walked slowly so that Rainer’s stubby little legs could keep up.

    We had been training about a mile out on Route 4, near the base of Mt. Moon. The walk wasn’t bad, just a flat trail beside a road through the wheat and corn fields surrounding the city. I’d been taking Rainer and Baron and even Locustod out here to train for the past few days ever since Criss had left. To say it was successful would be a little optimistic, but I was comfortable with how it was all coming along.

    “Man, I’d love to catch a new Pokémon though,” I muttered through my stuffed up nose.

    Rainer didn’t respond.

    “Something that would really give me an advantage over Misty. A grass-type or something. But all we’ve seen is stuff like Sandshrew and Rattata. And we don’t really need another Pidgey, but don’t tell Baron I said that.”

    I fell silent and looked south. On clearer days you could see the skyscrapers of Saffron City off in the distance. On this particular evening it was relatively warm, but clouds hung over the forested hills, obscuring any view of the city.

    We got back to the center well before dark and ate a light dinner. Rainer’s feet were starting to drag, but I was feeling a little too antsy to spend another evening reading my Pokédex, so I headed out again with my starter back in its ball.

    I had yet to visit the fields east of the city, so I decided to go explore. Similar to the western side of the city, the big commercial buildings gave way to typical suburbia for several blocks before opening out into hundreds of acres of farmland.

    Part of me wanted to let out Locustod for the sake of company, but that damn Butterfree still hadn’t caught on to the whole “stay close to me and don’t bother other people” thing. I was beginning to regret ever catching it, even if it had done a pretty good job in the battle against Brock.

    I followed a straight asphalt road out through the cornfields as the sky began to darken. It was a quiet stroll. Nothing but the light wind and the occasional scampering Pokémon disturbed the silence. In all honesty, it was a kind of boring walk. The road stretched on in a straight line for as far as I could see.

    If I remembered my map correctly, the road met up with the Cerulean River at some point, which it followed through the hills to Kanto’s lone hydroelectric power plant. Supposedly the road went through a complex of tunnels and could be taken all of the way to Lavender, but I had no interest in going that far. I turned around so that I would be back in the city by the time it got too dark to see.

    I was looking at the ground as I walked, thinking of strategies to use against Misty when I heard the sound of power lines buzzing join the sounds of the wind and the bugs. Except… I wasn’t walking underneath a power line.

    I stopped and looked around for the source of the sound. In the field down to my left, something was rustling through the corn, heading slowly towards the road. And buzzing. I lowered a cautious hand to Rainer’s Poké Ball at my belt and tried not to imagine myself running away from an angry Beedrill.

    I squinted at the plants, trying to make out the shape of whatever it was. A silvery flash reflecting the dying sunlight caught my eye, and then a metal ball with horseshoe magnets attached to its sides emerged from the corn stalks.

    A Magnemite! Now this was a rare occurrence. It must have gotten lost and drifted away from the nearby power plant. I couldn’t let a chance like this get away, I had to catch this Pokémon.

    Magnemites are curious creatures. This one’s orb was about eight inches in diameter, smooth and metallic besides the large white spot on the front with a single black dot in the middle that made it look like the Magnemite had a single large eye. What exactly the biological purpose was of that or its magnets or the three screws driven into it, I had no idea.

    It stared at me with that emotionless eye. I stared right back, keenly aware that all of my Pokémon were weak to electric-types.

    Before I could think of something to do, the Pokémon jerked to the right, its magnets suddenly spinning wildly. A flash of white electricity lanced towards the ground, seemingly randomly. But the provoker of the attack soon showed itself. A little brownish-yellow Sandshrew, much like the one I had seen earlier that day, clambered out of a hole just off the side of the road. It growled menacingly at Magnemite, not noticing me yet. The Magnemite sent another bolt of electricity at it, making a loud snap crack through the air, but it appeared to have no effect. The Magnemite caught onto this immediately. With a blast like a cannon, the Magnemite appeared to kick back, as if by recoil. The road shook slightly and I took a step backwards. That was nothing compared to the effect the attack had on Sandshrew. The little ground-type flipped over backwards onto the road, where it lay for a moment with a soft groan.

    Slowly, the Sandshrew stood up and shook itself off. Before the Magnemite could launch another attack, the Sandshrew lunged at its assailant, grabbing on to one of the screws underneath the eye. The Magnemite spun around, trying to shake off the mouse, but it held on tight and continued to scratch and bite. I took a few more steps backwards to give them some room and continued watching in interest. The Magnemite was dragged all of the way down to the ground before it finally managed to get the Sandshrew in front of it and used another one of those concussive attacks, blasting the Sandshrew into the rows of corn.

    I racked my brain for a second before deciding that the attack had to be a sonic boom. It was probably one of the few non electricity based attacks the Magnemite could do.

    Having either been knocked out or scared away, the Sandshrew did not emerge from the corn.

    The Magnemite turned back to me. I quickly pulled Rainer’s ball from my belt and dropped it. Tired or not, Rainer appeared on the road, ready to battle. The Magnemite floated not far from the ground, scuffed and beaten from its short fight with the Sandshrew.

    “Tackle,” I said confidently.

    The Magnemite didn’t even attempt to dodge as Rainer leaped towards it, slamming into it shell first.

    The Magnemite dropped like the hunk of metal it was. Rainer quickly regained its footing and prepared to attack again, but I stopped it.

    “Hold on,” I said, looking at the fallen Magnemite. It was unmoving. “It must be too tired to fight.”

    I couldn’t tell if Rainer found this news to be promising or disappointing.

    I slid down the short dirt bank and walked over to the Magnemite’s body. Rainer came forward timidly and poked it. The tiny turtle clearly got an electric shock, because it jumped about a foot backwards with a panicked squeal. Even then, the Magnemite didn’t move.

    Well that was easy.

    I grabbed one of the empty Poké Balls that I kept on my belt and pulled it off. “This seems kinda like cheating, but…” I went ahead and dropped the ball on the Magnemite. There was pop and a flash of red light that enveloped the Magnemite. An instant later, only a wobbling Poké Ball sat in the dirt. I watched its shaking and quivering slowly die down until it was totally still.

    I reached down and picked the ball up. The metal was warm, indicating the presence of a Pokémon inside of it. I looked between the ball and Rainer, not entirely sure how to respond to this rather anti-climactic capture.

    “Well not everything can be an exciting duel to the death, right?”

    Rainer looked unconvinced.

    “You can train with it later.”

    The Squirtle seemed to find that a bit more encouraging. I looked back at the ball again and thought for a moment.

    “Tesla. Yeah. I like that.”

    Rainer huffed.

    “Well I think it’s a cool name.”

    Rainer huffed again.

    “Look, learn to speak English and I’ll let you name the next one. Deal?”

    Rainer head-butted me hard in the leg, knocking me into the dirt. I couldn’t help but laugh as I rubbed my sore shin. Rainer gave me the turtle equivalent of a smirk.

    It was getting dark, so I pushed myself back to my feet and headed back into town, one Pokémon richer.

    *****

    NEXT: What happened to the man with the Flygon? AND Keith has some realizations.
     
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    Chapters 3.5 & 4 - Forest near Celadon & Nugget Bridge
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (Journey Fic)

    Woohoo double whammy! but the first chapter is pretty short so it hardly counts. I have plans for a few edits to help the fic's curb appeal. Not that I really care how many people read it, I just want more feedback! The edits should be online in the next week or so.

    Anyways, this time, Sir Flygon's story continues (he'll be named soon enough, just give me time), albeit briefly. Then, Keith goes out to practice with his newest Pokemon on Nugget Bridge, where he meets a relatively hostile young woman. Several journey fic cliches are explained in the process and you get some back story on Keith.

    Chapter 3.5

    In a dense forest just north of Celadon City, a man lay broken and bleeding among the twigs and pinecones littering the ground. His eyes flickered open some time after he had fallen. Had it been minutes or hours, he couldn’t tell. The bullet still stuck in his left shoulder had miraculously avoided hitting anything vital. The wound itself had clotted, making his torn gray shirt stick to him.

    He rolled onto his back and attempted to push himself upright. His left arm felt broken, as did at least one rib. It was hard to differentiate exact sources of that kind of pain. He could feel bruises around his eyes where his flight goggles had cut into his face. He tore them off, shoved them into his jacket pocket, and took stock of the situation.

    Flygon had clearly been able to slow their fall enough to prevent death, but had worsened her wounds in the process. She lay in a heap not far away, blood dripping slowly from dozens of wounds.

    Gingerly, the man eased his backpack off of his injured shoulder and pulled out a water bottle. Ground-types had no fondness for water being poured on their faces, but it would wake her up.

    Sure enough, Flygon’s eyes flickered open behind their goggle-like encasings. She gave a mournful groan, painfully weak.

    “Easy, girl. I know. Just let me get you back into your Poké Ball and we can get to the nearest center. I’m pretty sure we’re close to Celadon. We’ll be there in no time.” He forced a smile, but Flygon didn’t seem to share his optimism.

    The man reached for his belt, but the dragon’s ball was not there. Panicking slightly, he looked around where he had fallen. He found the ball in pieces, halfway hidden by an old tree branch. It was irreparably broken. The man let out a groan of his own.

    “I guess we should have brought the others after all, huh?” he said to Flygon.

    He got no response besides some pained breathing.

    “Travelling light, my ass” he muttered, resigning himself to his fate. “Might as well get started then.”

    With a grunt, he grabbed Flygon’s arm and pulled her mostly upright. He shifted her weight onto his mostly uninjured side and took a step forward. Then another. Like this, he haltingly made his way towards the city.

    (--o--)​

    Chapter 4

    Not a day goes by that I don’t miss my dad, but some days from when I wake up to when I go to bed he’s all I can think about. Two days after catching Tesla, I had one of those days.

    My dad was exactly who I wanted to be when I grew up. Sure, I wasn’t exactly on the same career path, but if I could emulate him in every other way I would be more than happy. He was a great listener, always quiet when there was nothing to say, but witty and charming when there was a real conversation to be had. He was damn smart, a hard worker, and irreconcilably curious.

    Nothing had been the same since he died. This journey had become everything. The only thing.

    I felt lost and empty. I had been thrown down this path without the one person who could help me the most. There was so much I still wanted to ask him, so many questions I still had. But the opportunity had passed. I was left to answer those questions myself.

    That’s what’s so painful about death. It’s the only really permanent thing in life. There’s no way to undo it, no way to make amends and try again, no way to go back and tell yourself to please, please make the most of what little time you have left. Because you didn’t know how little time that was. And then, before you know it, it’s passed.

    I was sitting on a ragged leather couch in the Cerulean Pokémon Center’s lobby, turning my Pokédex over in my hands and clenching my jaw. No Pokémon was out to keep me company. Honestly, I just didn’t really feel like dealing with any of them at the moment.

    Was that okay? It didn’t seem like the kind of thought that a good trainer would have.

    With that thought came a sudden, unexpected deluge of doubt.

    What did my Pokémon really think of me? Who was I to them? Did they listen to me out of respect, or fear? Were either of those feelings justified?

    What kind of trainer was I?

    My thoughts drifted back to my dad. He hadn’t been a trainer, but had an intense love for and fascination with all living things.

    I hated to admit it, but I was lonely and homesick, and it was getting to me.

    I looked around the lobby, but I was completely alone. Even the girl with the Pikachu, who I had never really had a conversation with, had left for Saffron a couple days prior. It was a sight I knew I’d have to get used to, but not one that was particularly reassuring. Pokémon battling was pretty common, but running the full gym circuit and the League sanctioned journey was at an all-time low in popularity. We hadn’t seen a new champion in a full decade. Redd McMahon, the current champion, wasn’t even that cool.

    The journey was many a child’s dream, but almost no one’s reality.

    It was my reality, but not one I felt I was fully prepared to take ownership of.

    I glanced over at the pair of videophones sitting by the entrance to the cafeteria. They were dark and silent, with the exception of a single blinking green standby light. With a groan that would have been quieter if anyone else had been around to hear it, I sidled over to the machines and sat down. I pulled the receiver off of the hook and dialed a number that already made me feel more at home.

    My house back in Pallet Town didn’t have any cameras set up. Hell, we only had one computer and a bad internet connection. I leaned forward over the little desk and rubbed my eyes with the hand not holding the receiver.

    It rang once. Twice.

    “Hello?”

    “Hey Mom, it’s Keith.”

    “Keith! Oh it’s so good to hear your voice! How are you doing? Where are you calling from?”

    “I’m fine. I’m hanging out in Cerulean for a few weeks while Tim catches up.”

    “Well, he left earlier this morning. I didn’t get the chance to see him off, but I’m sure he’s eager to catch up with you.”

    I had nearly forgotten that today was Tim’s birthday. Pretty soon he’d be going through all of the same stuff I had been through. Or maybe not. Hopefully not.

    “Yeah, I’m looking forward to seeing him too.”

    “Have you met anyone else so far? Other trainers?”

    “Yeah…” How much did I tell her? I didn’t want her to worry. I didn’t want her to think I wasn’t ready for this. “I met a girl in Pewter and we went through Mt. Moon together.”

    “A girl? You’re actually talking to girls now? Your father would be proud.”

    I laughed lightly. “Mom, I’ve talked to girls before.”

    “That’s news to me,” she teased. “Was she cute?”

    “I… yeah, I guess. But she left after we got here.”

    “I heard the Rangers caught a poaching operation or something in Mt. Moon recently. Team Rocket, I think. Did that affect your travel plans at all?”

    I paused. “Actually…” I paused again, awkwardly long this time. The words were caught in my throat, refusing to come out. The panicky, self-preservation part of me didn’t want to talk about it. At all. Especially not to my mom, who’d certainly freak out.

    “No,” I said finally. “It happened the day after we came into Cerulean.”

    It was her turn to pause. “Was there a reason you called?”

    “I just… I’ve been having a kind of bad day. I miss home. I’m having some doubts. And I’ve just been thinking about Dad.”

    “He’d be very proud of you right now.”

    “Yeah,” I said softly. It was all I could say.

    “Keith, it’s okay to be worried and afraid. You’re on your own for the first time. There’s a lot of responsibility that comes with the freedom, but I know you’ll be fine. I know you, you’re a hard worker and you’re persistent. Just tackle your problems one at a time and before you know it, you’ll be a whole new person. A stronger person.”

    “I guess I didn’t think that growing up would be such a pain in the butt,” I said.

    “Oh it is. And it’s a pain in the butt that everyone has to go through at some point. You’ve chosen a very challenging path, but a very rewarding one. Would you rather be out on one of the fishing boats?”

    I sighed. “No…”

    “Because I know for a fact that’s what some of your old classmates are doing right now.”

    “I know.” That did help put some of this in a better perspective.

    Mom paused again. “Well, I appreciate you calling me. If you ever need to talk, I’m here.”

    “Thanks.”

    "That said, this journey is about you. Don’t feel like you need to call me regularly. I miss you and your brother terribly, but I know you need to learn to be on your own.”

    “Thanks,” I said again.

    “I love you, Keith.”

    “I love you too, Mom.”

    *****

    I spent most of the rest of the day trying to get Tesla better acquainted with the rest of the team. It wasn’t imperative as far as battling goes, but my Pokémon getting along would make traveling a lot easier.

    Sitting in the damp grass in the park near the Pokémon Center, I watched my team interact with each other. Or rather, mostly just Rainer and Tesla playing around. They had hit it off quite well, and had taken to playing a game where Rainer attempted to climb on top of Tesla, who would try its best to be totally unclimbable as it hovered about a foot off the ground. Baron sat at my side, eyes closed, probably sleeping. Locustod fluttered above, unsure of if or how it wanted to join in.

    I had four Pokémon now, which was pretty cool. Six was the maximum allowed in League sanctioned battles, and I only had that many slots on my belt, but nothing was stopping me from catching more. I honestly wasn’t sure if I would. From my research over the past couple days, I had discovered that there were two schools of thought. One held that it was best to find six Pokémon that you worked really well with, and focus on training them. The other believed that if you had a wide variety of Pokémon at your disposal, you could out-diversify your opponents by always being able to exploit their weaknesses through type advantages and different synergies. The latter was pretty common in the professional competitive circuit, but journeying trainers liked to stick with the former, since it was hard to find the resources to care for more than about six Pokémon anyway. My plan at this point was to catch a full and varied team as soon as possible so that we could get used to each other and be a part of the same journey from the very beginning. I was off to a good start.

    While I mused, Rainer had finally been able to clamber atop Tesla, wedging its little turtle feet between Tesla’s magnets and body and holding on to the screw on top of its head like some kind of weird alien cowboy. Tesla responded by humming calmly and rolling forward, sending Rainer face first into the grass.

    I laughed at them. “Look, if you guys have all of this energy then let’s go out and channel it into some training.”

    At the word “training,” Rainer scrambled upright and looked at me eagerly. Tesla followed suit, albeit with the only emotionless blank stare that its species was capable of.

    I put a hand on Baron’s head to wake the bird up, and looked up for Locustod.

    The damn bug was gone.

    I swore out loud and stood up, looking around the field. A spot of purple flicking between the leaves of a nearby maple tree caught my attention. I swore again and strode towards the base of the tree, my other three Pokémon in tow.

    “Locustod, get down here. We’re leaving,” I called up the tree.

    The Butterfree was barely visible through the thick branches and oversized maple leaves. I heard a defiant chirping from above.

    My swearing growing ever more colorful, I plucked Locustod’s ball from my belt, but it would be impossible to recall the mischievous bug through the foliage. “Baron, do me a favor and get it down from there. Do whatever it takes. I really don’t have time for this.”

    I was planning on crossing Nugget Bridge to the other side of the river, where there was supposed to be a whole new array of Pokémon to see. It wasn’t a short walk, and given that it was the afternoon already, I’d want to leave right away if I was planning on getting back by dinner time.

    Not that I had a scheduled dinner time or anything. I was simply just as much at the mercy of my appetite as I was back at home. Turns out that a decline in the quality of food doesn’t make you any less hungry.

    Baron obediently flew up into the tree. There was a brief commotion, followed by a gust of wind that sent leaves flying out across the field. Not far behind them came a tumbling Butterfree. I quickly recalled Locustod before it could right itself.

    Baron dove out of the tree and alighted neatly on the grass.

    “Thanks, buddy. Let’s go.”

    I had to recall Rainer about halfway to the bridge, as Squirtle legs had a hard time keeping up with the rest of us.

    Nugget Bridge was a popular tourist destination as far as Cerulean City landmarks go and was locally famous for its amazing views of the sunset behind Mt. Moon as well as its excellent fishing. The wooden bridge spanned the entire considerable width of the Cerulean River, and was wide enough that the few dozen people on it didn’t make it seem crowded at all.

    Hands in my jacket pockets and shoulders hunched to escape the cool breeze coming off of the river, I walked beside one of the wooden railings. Baron, now far too big to ride on my shoulder, hopped beside me to my right. Tesla bobbed along to my left, absentmindedly dragging a magnet along the chain-link siding of the bridge with a repetitive tickatickatickaticka.

    I looked wistfully out at Mt. Moon’s looming green and brown mass, miles to the west. I sighed and stopped walking to lean against the railing. My two Pokémon rested beside me.

    The mountain seemed so harmless from here, like it couldn’t pose more of a problem than simply a hard day’s hike.

    I shook my head. I had made it through those trials, and come out stronger. I couldn’t let fear of something similar happening in the future force me to hesitate. If it did, I would make it through again.

    Part of me missed Criss. I wasn’t sure if I’d ever see her again, but I wanted to. She was something between a curiosity and an inspiration.

    My reverie was interrupted by a girl a few years older than me with a Pidgey perched on her shoulder.

    “That’s a cool Magnemite,” she said, brushing strands of bushy brown hair out of her face as she leaned in to get a look at Tesla. Tesla turned to stare back at her with what could have been rapt fascination, abject terror, or literally any other kind of reaction. I really needed to learn how to read Magnemite body language.

    “Thanks,” I said. “Just caught it.”

    “Magnemite will wander over from the power plant sometimes,” she said. “They usually stick to the eastern fields though, so people don’t really see them and catch them.”

    “Yeah, that’s where I caught this one.”

    She looked at me cynically. “What were you doing over on the east side? There’s nothing over there.”

    I was a little taken aback. “Just… walking. I’m not from here, so I felt like exploring.”

    “Where are you from?”

    “Pallet,” I said before adding, “I’m on a League journey.”

    She leaned back as if she might catch some kind of disease from me and looked me up and down. “Oh… you’re one of… those people.”

    I took a deep breath. “Yes. I am.”

    She gave a mocking laugh that made Baron bristle. “You do realize no one actually does that anymore.”

    She wasn’t wrong. Most people these days went straight to college and got a regular job. Accepting the League challenge is seen as the poor man’s way out. On top of that, people rarely win. That’s an established fact. I was aware that there existed a stigma among some that people like me, who actually think they have a chance at winning, are immature and a little crazy.

    Despite all of that, Tim, David, and I had all promised each other that we would take the challenge and try our hardest to become champions. For me, it hadn’t really been a choice. I’m sure if I had actually said no then my mom would have found a way to pay for me to get through college, but I didn’t want to put that burden on her. Uninvited, an image of my dad once again appeared in my mind’s eye.

    I clenched my teeth and look at Baron, whose angry eyes were glancing between me and this girl.

    Anger and pride squashed any reservations I’d been having. “What makes you think I won’t make it? I doubt you could beat me.”

    I almost regretted it as soon as I said it. Maybe calling this girl’s dignity into question was that great of an idea.

    The regret didn’t last long. She was being a jerk, and we had the perfect way to bring her down a peg.

    “Oh yeah? I’ll accept that challenge,” she said with an arrogant smirk.

    “Right here?”

    “Yeah right here. People battle on the bridge all the time.”

    I accepted. We walked down a little farther anyways to avoid the crowds. Baron seemed pleased with my reactions. “Here’s good,” she said, “Three on three?”

    “I’ll win with two.” I said confidently. This made her even angrier.

    She sent out her first Pokémon, an angry little ball of brown fur that I recognized as a Mankey. I had read about these. They were fighting-types that specialized in fast, hard punches and kicks.

    I looked at Tesla and nodded. It hovered in front of me with an excited buzz. It would be at a type disadvantage, but I had a plan.

    “Mankey! Focus energy!” cried the girl.

    “Break that focus with a screech,” I commanded calmly.

    Tesla’s magnets spun, letting out a high pitched squeal of metal scraping on metal. I tried hard not to let even a slight wince of annoyance cross my face, but I doubt my opponent would have noticed. She was covering her ears. The Mankey had followed suit, any possible effects of its previous technique was gone. “Sonic boom,” I said through gritted teeth.

    The blast sent the Mankey skidding off across the bridge’s thick wooden planks. The girl was outraged.

    Tesla was good at powerful attacks from a distance. All I had to do was make sure that the Mankey couldn’t get close, and the type advantage would be irrelevant.

    A rush of excitement pumped through me. This is what it was all about. The payoff of hours of training for both myself and my Pokémon. The spur of the moment strategies. I could never regret leaving to go on this journey. It may not have been exactly what I had expected, but it was more than I had hoped for.

    “Get up! Use karate chop!” the girl ordered.

    But it was too far away, Tesla’s thundershock hit the pig monkey as it leaped through the air. Its slightly singed body rolled almost up to my feet. I wrinkled my nose, it smelled horrible. I resisted the urge to nudge it away with my toe.

    The girl silently recalled Mankey and sent out a cute little pale blue female Nidoran. This was going to be even easier.

    I called Tesla back to my side and threw out Rainer’s Poké Ball. At the sight of a battle, Rainer lit up with excitement for a second before gaining a deadly seriousness.

    There was something to be said for having a Pokémon that loved battling even more than I did.

    The two battling Pokémon slowly stepped around each other, waiting for their trainers’ commands. Rainer looked over its shoulder at me. I thought for a moment.

    “This one’s all yours,” I whispered. Rainer nodded.

    “Nidoran, tackle!” cried the girl. It jumped forward. Rainer braced its feet on the edge of one of the planks making up the bridge’s deck and stuck out its arms. My Squirtle was clearly at a much higher level than the Nidoran. The little blue Pokémon tackled with its whole body, but Rainer stood steady, pushing against its head. Tesla bounced excitedly beside me and floated low to the ground, as if to get a better view. Baron ruffled its feathers contentedly.

    Then Rainer pulled a surprise move. It rolled forward, over the Nidoran, landing on its own back. This caused the Nidoran to do a flip of its own as Rainer had grabbed a hold on its ears. Without hesitation, the tiny turtle Pokémon tossed the Nidoran at one of the bridge handrails. It collapsed, with a whimper.

    My Squirtle got up and looked at me smugly. “Wow, Rainer that was awesome,” I commented. Tesla buzzed loudly and spun around in what could only be happiness.

    I looked at Rainer. “Let’s do this next one together.”

    The girl had withdrawn her Nidoran. She was staring at me and pouting slightly. Then she looked at the Pidgey on her shoulder and nodded. The bird jumped off its perched and dived at Rainer with a cry. Inspired by my starter’s stunning solo performance, I began to call out commands.

    “Bubble!” A stream of silvery bubbles jetted from Rainer’s mouth. They did little but make the Pidgey blink and slow its dive. It was enough for Rainer to easily roll out of the way, forcing the Pidgey to pull up sharply to avoid crashing into the ground.

    “Now hit it with a water gun before it turns around!” I commanded. The blast of water sent the Pidgey flying, fast.

    “Pidgey, grab the handrail and use gust.” The bird clawed at the board and got a grip before the water torrent launched it out into the river. It beat its wings furiously and a powerful gust of air began to push the blast of water back, inch by inch, dissipating it into a spray. We were at a stalemate.

    I looked at Pidgey. The rapid flapping of its wings was quickly drying them. If only it were raining, then it wouldn’t be able to fly well at all. Raining…

    Duh.

    I put up the hood on my jacket. “Rainer, dig in and do what you do best!”

    Rainer gave a cry of excitement and dug its feet into the planks once more to avoid getting blasted backwards by Pidgey’s gust, and sprayed water straight up into the air.

    Pidgey’s wings slowed their frantic pace as it looked at Rainer in confusion. Without as ideal of an angle, the spray of water covered the whole bridge, raining down in fat, cold droplets.

    Seeing that gust was having little damaging effect at that distance, the girl ordered Pidgey to charge Rainer once more.

    Pidgey jumped off of the handrail and attempted to fly forward, but its wings were getting soaked in the downpour. Slowed, it didn’t get far.

    “Finish it.”

    A single water gun directed straight at the soaked, defenseless bird was all it took to seal the deal.

    I pulled my hood down as the last drops fell. “Nice job, buddy!”

    Rainer didn’t respond, just hunched forward slightly.

    “Rainer? Are you okay?”

    As a soft white shine began to show from the inside of Rainer’s shell, I realized what was happening.

    The evolution was even faster than Baron’s had been. Long white ears almost like feathers sprouted from Rainer’s head, its tail split, and it grew almost a foot taller over the course of a few seconds. As the glow faded, I could see that Rainer’s tail was now a brilliant white, and its shell and skin were considerably darker shades of red and blue.

    Finally, Rainer looked at me with a wide grin that revealed some impressive fangs. Tesla chattered in what I assumed was surprise or amazement.

    The girl withdrew her Pokémon and sneered at me. “Whoop de doo, you beat an amateur trainer and your Squirtle evolved. Do you want a medal?”

    Even her shitty attitude couldn’t dampen my spirits now. “I’ll settle for a Cascade Badge from Misty.”

    She just gave a big, “humph” and walked by me with her arms crossed.

    Rainer and Tesla chattered in laughter and gave each other an awkward sort of Pokémon high five. Even Baron seemed to be excited by the win. I looked down at my new Wartortle and smiled.

    I was on my journey now. Regardless of my own doubts or the doubts of others, I was actually doing it. I was on my journey now. Nothing else mattered.

    *****

    NEXT: Keith challenges Misty! Or I might throw in another half chapter. We'll see how it works out. Oh the suspense!
     
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    Chapter 5 - Battle vs Misty
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (Journey Fic)

    Like I said, that wasn't a very well written chapter (#3). I originally had a later scene where that other trainer became relevant, but I ended up scrapping it. I should have gone back and took him out. I have actually read your fic before but I was too lazy to write a response, which I have just gone back and done.

    This next chapter will be the last one for a little while. The main reason for this: chapter 6 is HORRIBLE. I have decided to rewrite it completely, which will take some time. Other reasons: I want to take some time to go back and change some previous chapters as well as edit the first post to see if I can attract some potential reviewers. I also want to continue the actual writing, where I am on to chapter 18. I probably won't catch up for a while anyways, but if I keep editing rather than writing I will eventually. As soon as I get through with writing the next action scene I will continue posting.

    Anyways, on to the chapter. Keith battles Misty... yeah.

    Chapter 5


    Two days after the battle on Nugget Bridge, I strode down Cerulean’s main thoroughfare towards the Cerulean City Gym. I was almost shaking with nervousness and excitement. I didn’t have a lot of experience battling against Pokémon that used their special abilities rather than physical attacks. Misty’s water-types could be a challenge, but I was ready. I ran my thumb along the four Poké Balls at my belt, feeling their warmth. They were ready too.

    The gym was a relatively innocuous concrete building, unremarkable but for the red and white Poké Ball logo of the Pokémon League that hung above its doors. I had walked by it several times, but this time I would be going inside for my second gym badge.

    As I hauled open the door, a warm breeze smelling strongly of chlorine hit me in the face. I found myself in a small lobby with a blue tiled floor and an array of kitschy beach themed decorations. Besides the grinning water-types painted on the walls, I was alone.

    “Hello?” I called out, edging my way around a reception desk to look through a glass door on the far side of the room. The main room of the gym lay on the other side: an Olympic-sized pool with a collection of brightly colored platforms floating on its gently rippling surface. I pushed open the door in search of the faintly echoing voices I could hear on the other side.

    My shoes squished quietly on the wet cement around the pool. Metal bleachers sat on the far side of the pool, completely empty. A man in a gray t-shirt and jeans was messing around with a nest of cables attached to microphones and cameras that I could see mounted around the room.

    The voices I had heard came from a woman in a red shirt that looked like a League referee and a girl no more than a few years older than me that had to be Misty. She had vivid orange hair that was plastered to her head by water, indicating she’d recently gotten out of the pool. She noticed me before I could call out.

    “Hi! Are you a challenger?” Her bubbly voice echoed around the room.

    “Yeah,” I called back. “Is this a good time?”

    “Yes! Yes it is!” She immediately made her way over with the awkward, jumpy speed-walk of someone who wants to run, but doesn’t want to slip and get a concussion. Her bare feet slapped on the cement. When she reached me, she excitedly stuck out her hand and introduced herself. “I’m Misty! I’m the leader of this Gym!”

    Trying my best not to admire her shapely swimmer’s legs – a difficult prospect, given that she wasn’t wearing any more than a t-shirt over a swimsuit – I shook her hand. “Keith. I’m journeying from Pallet.”

    “Really? That’s awesome!”

    Damn. You’d think this was her first time meeting a fellow trainer. “What’s up with the… stuff?” I gestured to the camera equipment that the man was still toiling over.

    “Oh! He’s from PBN. They’re filming battles here for a couple days for some TV show.” She leaned in a bit closer and continued in a whisper, “Between you and me, they’re aching for content, and aren’t really finding it here. Not a lot of challengers recently.”

    “Oh, okay.” I was going to be on TV!

    After a round of introductions, filling out forms, and deciding on rules, I finally stood in the white rectangle on the far side of the pool from Misty. I would not be allowed to leave until the battle was over.

    It was to be a two versus two battle again, with both sides being allowed substitutions. Upon hearing that I had only beaten Brock, Misty picked out a pair of Poké Balls from her collection of about a dozen. The pool would be our battlefield, with the platforms providing a surface for Pokémon that couldn’t swim.

    Before I had a chance to calm my nerves, the referee began the battle.

    Misty sent a Poké Ball lazily arcing towards one of the platforms. It burst open to reveal the golden, star shaped Staryu. I’d seen tons of these things clinging to rocks in the tide pools along Pallet’s beach. They’d never seemed like very good fighters, but I couldn’t underestimate anything that Misty put out.

    I plucked Tesla’s Poké Ball from my belt and threw it forward.

    "Staryu! Swift!” cried Misty.

    “Do the same,” I commanded.

    A barrage of flashes shot-gunned from both Pokémon, slapping into the water, peppering the platforms, and not doing much damage at all.

    I decided to avoid pretense and go straight for the kill, if only to see what Misty had up her sleeve. “Thundershock,” I told Tesla.

    The Magnemite’s magnets spun around, crackling with bright white electricity that lanced towards Staryu.

    “Dodge and use minimize!” Misty cried.

    With surprising deftness, the Staryu leaped to another platform. The thundershock did nothing more than leave a smoking black mark on the platform where Staryu had previously been. Before I could order another attack, Staryu’s arms began to contract into its body. The whole Pokémon was shrinking. It was only going to get harder to hit. Obviously, it wasn’t going to go into the water of its own accord. Misty was smarter than that.

    I looked at Staryu, then at Tesla, then at the water, a simple plan forming in my head.

    “Tesla, drop underwater and use sonic boom.” Getting wet might mess with Tesla’s magnetism, making it harder for it to stay in the air, but I wasn’t confident enough in my physics knowledge to be sure.

    With a soft “sploosh!” my Pokémon disappeared underwater. A moment later, there was an explosion. A huge wave overturned nearly all of the platforms, unceremoniously dunking Staryu and splashing Misty.

    “Come on…” I clenched my fists.

    “Staryu! Out of the water!” Misty cried.

    But Tesla rose from the now rough surf first, upside down and staring at me in… something.

    “Thundershock the water!”

    There was a flash, a loud crackle, and a second later Staryu was bobbing gently on the surface.

    “Staryu is unable to battle. Misty, send out your next Pokémon!” called the referee. I tried not to look at any of the cameras. This was going very well.

    “Go, Starmie!” A bigger, purple version of Staryu with twice as many arms appeared on one of the platforms. Tesla backed up to me and gave what sounded like a groan. I had seen less of these in Pallet’s tide pools, and they were not very nice. Mostly because of psychic attacks.

    “I know, Tesla. Hang in there. I just need you to get a couple of attacks off, then you’re coming out. Stay strong.”

    Misty and Starmie were silent, watching and waiting for me to make the first move. It was clearly a trap. I took the bait, “Tesla, thundershock.”

    “Light screen!”

    A panel of light appeared in front of the purple starfish and dissipated the oncoming energy bolts. Nearly no damage could get through it. “Follow up with a confusion!” commanded Misty.

    “Well that’s great,” I muttered, stumbling for a response. “Uhh… thunder wave!”

    Tesla released the wave right before the confusion got a grip on him. The low power attack passed straight through the light screen and crackled around Starmie. It appeared to have no effect but I knew that Starmie would be moving considerably slower after that, if it decided to move at all. The starfish ignored the attack and strengthened its psychic hold on Tesla. A red aura flickered around my Pokémon like ghostly fire. Tesla was shuddering. I hoped that its partial steel typing at least helped some.

    “Try to break free,” I told my Magnemite. “Use swift.”

    It struggled for a second, and the eerie glow surrounding it softened almost unnoticeably. It was enough for the Magnemite to shoot out only a few blasts of energy. They splattered harmlessly across the light screen but broke the Starmie’s concentration enough for Tesla to have some reprieve from the psychic grip.

    “Let’s do the same thing as before. It worked, so why not? You’re doing great!”

    The steel ball dropped towards the water, but was suddenly frozen by another confusion.

    “Fight it, Tesla!” I shouted encouragement to my Pokémon as it slowly inched downwards. As soon as the waves still rocking from its last sonic boom wave began to lick the bottom of Tesla’s orb, I decided that was enough. “Just fire a sonic boom into the water now!”

    The blast sent a weaker wave rocking across the pool, but it was enough to topple Starmie.

    Another flash, another crackle, and then…

    Starmie leaped from the water, hurt but still ready to go.

    "Okay, again!” I commanded.

    “Recover!” Misty told her Pokémon. The burns and marks on Starmie’s flesh glowed with psychic power as they healed themselves.

    I groaned. There went all that work. I ordered another thunder shock.

    “Rapid spin!”

    Starmie dodged the electricity easily and came spinning across the pool towards Tesla. The poor Magnemite was too tired to defend itself. It was launched up into the air with the attack and came slamming back down on one of the platforms. This was looking painful.

    “That’s enough,” I said waving at the referee. I recalled Tesla, considering my next options.

    “Magnemite has been declared unable to battle. Keith, send out your next Pokémon.”

    My fingers traced over the rest of the balls on my belt. Baron was powerful, but couldn’t do much if Starmie went underwater. Locustod was the same, and was at even more of a disadvantage if it got wet.

    I smiled inwardly as I took Rainer’s ball from my belt. It wasn’t the best option, but it would have to do. As my Wartortle appeared in front of me, I looked across at Misty. She was smiling brightly, either glad to be battling, happy to have finally taken down Tesla, or both.

    "Rainer,” I whispered to my Pokémon, “dive under the water and come up into a tackle.”

    Misty was waiting for me to make the first move again. She was clearly expecting another special attack as a light screen began glittering in front of her Starmie. But as soon as Rainer dived, she realized her mistake. She called for Starmie to dodge the attack, but as the saying goes: “Wartortles swim damn fast.”

    It’s not much of a saying and I did just make it up, but it is, at least, true. Still slowed by Tesla’s thunder wave, Starmie was completely vulnerable when my Pokémon came rocketing out of the water at it.They collided with a crunch and my Wartortle dragged Misty’s Starmie down into the deep water of the pool. They were beyond our reach. It was all about how strong our Pokémon were. There was no more that neither I nor Misty could do. Honestly, Misty’s Starmie was probably better trained, but after witnessing my then Squirtle’s stunning performance on Nugget Bridge, I was confident that the little damage that Tesla had done would be more than enough to give us the victory. And indeed, not two minutes later, Rainer came blasting out of the water with Starmie held high above its head and tossed its body onto a platform before landing on its feet, facing the cameraman with that crooked, turtle grin.

    “Starmie is unable to battle. Misty is out of useable Pokémon. Keith wins the battle!”

    “Starmie, return.” said Misty, sounding slightly disappointed.

    Unable to contain my smile, I looked at one of the cameras, then at Rainer. And as the realization that I had just won my second badge washed over me, I laughed.

    *****

    NEXT: A new old friend returns for the first time!
     
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    Chapter 6 - The Wilderness Around Cerulean
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Okey dokey I'm back now. I'm not quite as far as I want with my writing but I have the next three chapters all proofread and ready to be posted. It's finals week for me starting Tuesday so this is it until next weekend.

    I completely rewrote this chapter from the ground up but I'm still not entirely satisfied. Nevertheless I don't really know how to make it better so here it is. It's incredibly important to the whole overall plot line in about a million ways so its not like I could skip it.

    This time: something "unpredictable" happens to Keith, Tim finally catches up, and Keith goes for a new Pokemon. The way Keith and Tim act around each other is largely based off how me and my friends act minus the inside jokes and most of the sexual innuendos (but I couldn't keep all of those out, wheres the fun in that?). Feedback is much appreciated and encouraged. I am seriously considering murdering the grammar and spelling in the first chapter just to get people's attention and to get them to comment . But I digress:

    Chapter 6

    I took a deep breath as I jogged along the trail. It burned my lungs wonderfully. The days were getting colder.

    About a week after I beat Misty, I had developed a routine of training my Pokémon at the Cerulean Gym and going for a run in the evening just before sundown. Today I was on my usual path along the river north of the city.

    It felt good to get out without my Pokémon after spending all day training with them. I still brought my Pokédex along in case I came across anything interesting that I might want to come back and catch, but it was mostly time for me to relax and think. Not to mention the sunset on the river was gorgeous.

    I slowed to a walk as I emerged from the trees onto the banks of the river. The orange light of the setting sun reflected beautifully off the water. There was something so peaceful and simple about the river. I was used to the ocean, which was constantly beating and crashing with a semi-regular pulse. But the river was smooth, the current a constant and gentle flow. You wouldn’t realize it was moving at all if it wasn’t for the occasional leaf bobbing along or the light ripples around the boulder halfway across.

    I watched the water while my breath returned. Something caught my eye. About a hundred yards down on the far side of the river stood a figure. It looked like it could be a person, but it was hard to tell in the lengthening shadows of the trees. It had… a tail? I pulled my ratty old Pokédex from my pocket and moved closer. It didn’t flinch at all. Maybe it didn’t see me? As soon as I was within range I pointed the device at the creature.

    “SCANNING…”

    There was something odd about it. It wasn’t like any Pokémon I had ever seen. It was clearly bipedal, but way too tall to be a human and way too sleek to be any of the humanoid Pokémon I knew of. Suddenly, my Pokédex made an odd error sound that I had never heard before.

    “PERSONAL ENTRY: PROJECT TITAN. PLEASE ENTER PASSWORD:”

    Project Titan? Password? What the hell was this? On a whim, I typed in ‘12345’ but it kicked me back to the home screen. Frustrated, I tried scanning again.

    “NO SUBJECT IN RANGE”

    “What?” I looked up, but the creature was nowhere to be seen. I scoured the tree line at the far shore, but there was nothing. With a disappointed sigh, I turned around.

    And everything went dark.

    The next thing I knew I was face down in the sand. With a groan, I pushed myself back to my feet. A faint headache made my ears ring. After wiping the sand off my face, I looked around. The sun had almost completely set. I shivered in the cool evening air.

    “What just happened?” I recalled vague warnings of the hypnosis abilities of powerful psychic-types. Had I just been attacked by a Kadabra or something? Fuck, this was weird. I needed to get back to town as soon as possible.

    Laying on the ground for a while wasn’t good for your body temperature apparently, because I was getting quite cold. I found my Pokédex in the sand next to me and began jogging back up the trail towards Cerulean. My head was still spinning when I hit the main road.

    In the darkness ahead I saw a person. They had a backpack on and were walking at a slows, methodical pace. Probably a trainer. Still uneasy, I slowed down. He must have heard my footsteps though, because he looked over his shoulder at me. I recognized him.

    “Tim? Hey!” I ran up to my friend. A burst of excitement drove all my distress away.

    “Keith? What the hell are you doing out here?”

    “I’m on a run. What the hell are you doing out here? What took you so long, man?”

    “I got held up in Mt Moon,” he responded, scratching his head.

    “You got lost?!?” I laughed.

    “No! I just… well… yeah.” He laughed too.

    Tim Skeevich had been my best friend for as long as I could remember. We had spent the last sixteen years of our lives dreaming of the day that we would finally be allowed to leave home. Tim was short by my standards, so probably about average height for the usual person. He had shaggy tawny hair that he often had to shake out of his eyes. Tim wasn’t exactly the smartest kid around, but he kept me laughing while I kept him out of trouble.

    “So how’d you do against Brock?” I asked him as we began heading into town.

    “I beat him first try, but only after quite a bit of training. I didn’t have the type advantage you did, but I caught a couple of strong Pokémon to help.”

    “Nice. What do you got now?”

    “I think Charmander’s close to evolving, and I’ve got a great Beedrill, a Raticate, and I just caught a Zubat.”

    “Well I can tell you one thing,” I said, “my journey so far has been a lot more exciting than yours.”

    Tim laughed. “You messed up that many times?”

    “Not exactly,” I responded. “There was just quite a bit of… unexpected stuff. If you know what I mean.”

    We spent the rest of the way back to the Pokémon Center swapping stories. Apparently, his experience on Mt. Moon had been like my experience in Viridian Forest. He had spent all day wandering the trails. I told him all about Criss and Team Rocket, trying to downplay the violence and the danger. I wasn’t sure how he’d react.

    “Wow.”

    “Yeah,” I said sheepishly.

    “That’s… impressive.”

    “I guess.”

    “You went to the police though, right?”

    “Criss did. Apparently she has some kind of arrangement with them. They’ve increased ranger patrols in the area since,” I said.

    “Huh. So this Criss girl…”

    “She’s kinda scary, but she has good intentions.”

    “Is she hot?”

    There’s the Tim I know and love. “Uh… sort of? I don’t know, I was a little preoccupied.”

    “You gotta sort out your priorities, man.”

    We both laughed.

    *****

    The next morning after breakfast, we decided to head out of the city to do some training and maybe catch a new Pokémon. I’d heard there were colonies of Abra in the rocky plains across Nugget Bridge.

    “I saw you on TV, you know,” Tim said as we clonked down the bridge, “the morning before I left Pewter.”

    “You saw it? Awesome!”

    “Yeah, that was a great battle. I don’t know how I’m going to beat Misty though. I don’t have anything effective against water types.”

    “Why don’t you catch a Bellsprout or an Oddish?” I suggested, “There are tons over here.”

    “That’s a good idea,” he said.

    On the far side of the bridge, the road headed off to the east. We went off the beaten path into the massive field of tall grass, boulders, and some scarce trees that stretched from the river to the mountain range up north. We poked around in the tall grass for a while before deciding to split up. We agreed on a time to meet back at the bridge and went our separate ways.

    I crept along a game trail for about twenty minutes, trying my best to keep quiet and low. I clenched the Ultra Ball my brother had given me in one hand. With luck, I’d be able to catch an Abra before it could teleport away.

    In the near distance, I saw something that looked promising. A large, somewhat hunched-over rock formation that would make for great cover against the wind and whatever wandering predators a Pokémon like Abra would fear. As I came close to it, I slipped my backpack off my shoulders and gently lowered it to the ground before moving forward, trying to stay as quiet as possible.

    I crawled up behind a boulder about thirty feet away from the rock formation and slowly peered over it. Sure enough, six or seven Abra were sitting cross-legged, apparently sleeping, in a clear patch of dirt sheltered by the stone.

    I slumped back behind the boulder and took a deep breath. I closed my eyes and tried to picture exactly where the Abra were sitting. I picked one that was a bit off to the side. I’d have one shot at this. I’d read in my Pokédex that they could reflexively teleport in their sleep. They wouldn’t go far, but I doubt I’d be able to sneak up on them a second time.

    I clenched my teeth and slowly rose from behind the boulder. It was now or never.

    Before they could notice me, I hurled the Ultra Ball at the Abra I had chosen.

    I don’t know if it was the sound of my motion, or the ball whirling through the air, or some psychic thing, but suddenly there was a series of flashes and some popping noises. They were gone. My Ultra Ball landed uselessly in the dirt with a metallic ‘thud’.

    I swore violently and went to retrieve it.

    So much for that. I could go looking for the colony again, but I had doubts I’d find them. My time would probably be better spent training Tesla, or maybe trying to work on keeping Locustod under control.

    I picked up my Ultra Ball and dusted it off. It was still usable. I turned around to go retrieve my backpack, then froze.

    Sitting on top of the boulder I had been hiding behind was an Abra. It was facing away from me, probably still asleep. I don’t know if maybe it messed up its teleport or was maybe just confused, but I wasn’t going to question my good luck.

    This Abra was mine.

    I squared myself and threw the Ultra Ball again, careful to keep the motion as quiet as possible.

    I hit my mark.

    A flash, a click.

    The ball clattered off the rock, the capture light blinking.

    Then… the wonderful, wonderful click-hiss of the capture lock engaging.

    I did a little dance.

    “Keith Anders! Pro trainer!” I was now the proud owner of a psychic-type Pokémon. This guy was going to be an integral part of my team. I picked up the Ultra Ball and secured it to my belt.

    “Psyke. You shall be Psyke.”

    *****

    I met up with Tim again at our prearranged time. He had successfully caught a Bellsprout. Excited at our prospects, we spent the rest of the day training. His Charmander even evolved into Charmeleon during a fight against Locustod. It wasn’t enough. I still managed to put Tim’s starter to sleep and secure the win.

    Tim stayed out in the park battling various trainers for most of the evening. Eventually I got tired and headed back to the Pokémon Center to go to sleep.

    I was in a brilliant mood as I got ready for bed. Tim was here, I had a new member on my team, I had two badges, and a bright future ahead.

    When I fell asleep that feeling didn’t last.

    My dreams were dark.

    I was alone. Voices whispered to me. I had no idea what they were saying, but I know I had to listen.

    Someone was in great pain. Was it me?

    End the pain. Kill it. End this. You must.

    *****

    NEXT: The mysterious Flygon trainer gets a name, a personality, and a little background.

    Also, I added a prologue to the OP. Check it out.
     
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    Chapter 6.5 - Celadon City
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Yay, finals are over! Now I can get back to writing... Big thanks to everyone who has reviewed, you have been a tremendous help.

    This chapter was interesting to write. I had some trouble figuring out the best ways to convey emotion and give subtle hints as to the personality of the character himself. My apologies for any possible lack of realism in the hospital scene, I've been smart fortunate enough to stay out of hospitals and avoid major injuries (for the most part).

    Time to step back into the shoes of the Flygon trainer. He gets a name this time, I don't know why I've been holding it back. You'll get a lot of background on his character. For those of you worried about Flygon, this is the chapter to look to. No action here, by the way, just character development, deal with it.

    Chapter 6.5

    The Flygon trainer caused quite a stir when he finally stumbled into the streets of Celadon. He was drenched in blood, both his and his Pokémon’s, despite the fact that he had done his best to bandage their wounds with scraps of clothing. He had no energy to ask for help, all he could do was collapse on the sidewalk. Exhaustion and blood loss tugged at his consciousness, but he refused to give in. He had to save Flygon. Only when several good Samaritans carried him and his Pokémon to their respective medical centers did he finally allow himself to lapse into unconsciousness.

    He awoke days later in a hospital bed. His arm was in a cast and sling. “What’s going on?” he asked, delusional, as he opened his eyes.

    Then the memories rushed back in a deluge.

    “Flygon!” he called out loud, sitting up quickly. This was a bad idea. Pain shot through his entire body, especially his ribs. It was complete and utter agony. The man cried out in pain as he fell back onto his pillow.

    The noise caught the attention of a nurse outside in the hallway, who hurried to his side. “Mr. Weiss, you’re awake! This is good. You probably shouldn’t be moving around much yet.”

    Damn, thought the man, they must have found my ID card. I guess there’s no way of hiding my name now. Hopefully they’re discrete.

    “Thanks for the heads up,” he groaned. “and please, call me Nolan.”

    “All right then Nolan, how do you feel?”

    “Like I just fell hundreds of feet out of the sky,” Nolan replied, smiling sardonically.

    The nurse clearly didn’t catch the implied irony of the statement. “May I ask what exactly happened?”

    He almost laughed, but stopped himself when he realized how much it would hurt his ribs. “You did look at my ID card right?”

    “Yes, I….”

    “Then you shouldn’t be surprised to know that I’m not going to answer that question.”

    She just shut her mouth and nodded. She had seen the symbol of the International Police Corps emblazoned upon the man’s identification card.

    Nolan was satisfied; it had been worth the trouble to get that symbol imprinted on his ID. Even if he technically wasn’t a member of the IPC, he fancied that since he fought for many of the same ideals, he didn’t have to feel guilty for the forged seal.

    “What about my Flygon? Is she alright?”

    She looked at him quizzically for a second before saying, “Oh, that’s right. They said you were found with a Flygon.”

    Nolan began to get edgy. “Was she taken to the Pokémon Center? Is she okay?”

    “I don’t actually know, but I could go check if you want.”

    “Yes!” he practically yelled, before taking a deep yet painful breath to calm himself down. “Could you please do that for me?”

    The nurse, a little taken aback from his outburst, nodded. “Of course.”

    She left the room and Nolan stared at the ceiling. He didn’t know what he would do if Flygon died. He closed his eyes to stem the inevitable tears.

    This had all been his fault. He should have known that the helicopter was armed. He should have brought his other Pokémon with him. He should have gotten to the city faster. He should have had some sort of first aid kit with him to treat her wounds.

    There were so many memories of Flygon. When he fell into the then Trapinch’s trap in the desert and was almost eaten alive before his Grovyle finally managed to knock her into submission for his Poké Ball…. When she evolved into a Vibrava in the middle of his gym battle against Norman…. When she broke out of his Poké Ball and finally evolved into a Flygon in order to subdue the legendary Pokémon Rayquaza, even after it had defeated Sceptile…. The first time he flew with her, high above the foggy peak of Mt. Pyre and the beautifully endless ocean around Hoenn.

    The mere thought of Flygon being dead sent an intense pang of guilt through his heart. It was like a weight that held him onto the bed. An empty spot, devoid of any feeling but sadness.

    Nolan had to keep reminding himself that no, Flygon was not dead. Whenever he told himself this, a tiny part of his brain whispered back, “not yet.”

    Before long, exhaustion pulled him out of his misery and into a nightmare filled sleep.

    *****

    The nurse’s return woke Nolan not much later and he sat up, more slowly this time, eager for news. “Well?”

    “I talked to a doctor at the Pokémon Center and he said that your Flygon was on the mend…”

    Nolan let out a whoop.

    “…it had to undergo fairly drastic surgery and won’t be able to get up and around for another couple weeks, but it’s okay.”

    “Can I go visit?”

    “You aren’t allowed to get up at all until your own wounds heal more…”

    Nolan interrupted again, “and how long will that take?”

    “Another day or so until you can walk, but you shouldn’t be leaving the hospital for another week at least.”

    Nolan shook his head. “I’ll be out of here in four days tops. Do what you need to do, but get it done by then.” Without waiting for a reply, he lay back down and closed his eyes. A total giddiness enveloped his body, almost making him visibly shiver. Flygon was alive!

    *****

    Nolan pushed his lunch tray away from him. The hospital’s food wasn’t that bad, but it left a slight aftertaste in his mouth like he had just thrown up.

    It was three days after he had originally woken up, and his doctor had said he was making a remarkable recovery. Currently, the man was out of the room examining some x-rays and test results from earlier that day.

    Nolan decided to lay down to stare at the ceiling, a pastime he found rather entertaining in situations such as this.

    About ten minutes later, the short bald doctor finally walked into the room. “Well Nolan,” he said, “it looks like you are doing amazingly well. Your arm and ribs are healing nicely. The… ahh… wounds in your shoulder don’t seem to be infected, so we will probably be able to remove the bandages in another day or so. And of course you seem to have recovered from the shock and exhaustion you were originally diagnosed with.”

    “Soooo….” Nolan looked at him expectantly, his eyes again asking the question he had been pestering the doctor with over and over for the past three days.

    “Yes, you can go. But come back tomorrow so we can have another look at those bandages. We’ll discuss when the cast can be removed then as well.”

    “Excellent,” Nolan pushed his sheets off him and climbed out of his bed. He was already fully dressed in anticipation of the doctor’s news. He pulled his backpack out from under his bed and swept from the room, thanking the doctor profusely.

    Nolan blinked in the sunlight as he stepped outside the Celadon Hospital and brushed a blond hair out of his eye. The sun felt good on his normally tan skin, which was now slightly paler due to being cooped up inside. With his backpack on a single uninjured shoulder, he began quickly walking to the Pokémon Center.

    Rather than wait for a nurse to come help him at the currently empty front desk, Nolan walked straight back into the medical rooms. Almost immediately he was accosted by a doctor.

    “Hey, you! You’re not supposed to be back here,” said the man as he strode over to Nolan.

    The trainer ignored the statement. “Where’s my Flygon?”

    “Oh of course, you’re the Flygon’s trainer.” The Pokémon doctor looked Nolan up and down, examining his cast and bandages. “I’m sorry but your Flygon is resting right now. I’m afraid I can’t permit visiting until later today.”

    Nolan nodded, “Alright I’ll be back in two hours.” He desperately wanted to see his friend, but knew that her health was more important.

    The doctor seemed surprised at the lack of argument but said nothing more.

    Back in the lobby of the center, Nolan walked over to the transfer machine. He punched a few numbers on the keypad and waited as the comm-screen showed a “connecting” animation. A few seconds later, the big joyful face of Littleroot Town’s professor filled the screen.

    “NOLAN! How’re ya doin m’boy?” Birch shouted with a grin, which faded upon his noticing Nolan’s injuries. “What the hell happened t’you? You all right? Where’s Flygon?”

    The trainer smiled slightly before saying, “I’d rather not talk about it right now. Could you please send over my other five Pokémon?”

    “Absolutely kid, the normal crew?”

    Nolan rolled his eyes. “No, a Sandshrew and the four Zigzagoon I caught on my way to Petalburg. Yes, the normal crew.”

    The professor laughed heartily. “Alrighty then, just let me get ‘em rounded up.” He disappeared off screen for a minute, in which Nolan heard him yell “HEY! NOLAN’S BOYS! YOUR TRAINER WANTS YA!”

    Professor Birch had nobly agreed to watch over Nolan’s Pokémon whenever he was on a mission. Birch had been one of the few people he had confided in as to what he was actually doing in Kanto and Johto.

    Immediately after the shout, Nolan’s Gardevoir teleported on-screen with a flash. Seconds later the giant, evil, grinning face of his Banette took up the entire screen as it materialized in front of Gardevoir.

    Nolan laughed as Professor Birch brushed it aside. “Now now, get back in yer Poké Balls. Alright Nolan, transfer’s ready from my end.”

    Nolan hit a few more buttons. “Okay, ready to receive.”

    He watched as one Poké Ball dropped, then another, into the basket next to the monitor from a large chute that went in to the wall overhead. He had never really done any research on how these things worked, but he had been told that it operated using the same system as a Poké Ball. The energy that Pokémon were converted into when they go inside the ball could be transported over long distances near instantaneously to another Poké Ball at another machine.

    “Professor, why do you insist on calling my Pokémon “boys”? Most of them are actually female. Flygon’s female, as is Gardevoir, Sceptile’s a boy but I’m pretty sure Banette’s a girl…”

    “Aww quit yer nitpickin’. Besides, it looks like you’d make a pretty shoddy professor, Banette’s about the manliest ghost-type I’ve ever seen!”

    “Alright fine, you win. Banette is my newest Pokémon after all, I’ve only had it for a few months.”

    “Y’know, any trainer but yourself would say a few months was enough t’ completely bond with a Pokémon.”

    “That’s ridiculous,” Nolan replied as the fifth ball dropped into the basket, “a year at least, probably more. Anyway, I’m set here. See you around, Professor.”

    “You’re one of a kind m’boy, one of kind. Keep out of trouble.” With that he signed off.

    Until Nolan clipped the five new balls on to his belt, he had forgotten about the smashed one. To make matters worse, he currently had no money to buy a new ball for Flygon. “I guess we’re going to have to keep one out at all times. This is going to be a long few months….”

    *****

    NEXT: Tim challenges Misty!
     
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    Ah i found it!
    I wondered where this fic had dissapeared to... lol
    Another great chapter! Nice to get a bit of a backstory on the mysterious Flygon trainer, and his 'flashback' sequence was good as well.
    I can't wait to see how all these characters come together in the greater plot. ooo I'm getting giddy just thinking about it.

    Yeah really, nothing stays on the front page for long anymore besides the popular fics. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Despite how much I like the X.5 chapters, I think I made a mistake in writing them. Don't get your hopes up, he won't make anything beyond a cameo appearance for a while yet. But I'm working hard to make the cameos extra badass. By the way, I don't think I answered your question from your first post here. Yes, all trainers are welcome to take the gym challenge, they just won't be "sponsored" by the Pokemon League. That's the point I was trying to convey.

    Anyway, on to this chapter. I'm going to be updating more often now, as I have several chapters queued up and ready to go (up to ch 10 is edited and I just finished writing ch 21). Plus, I would prefer that this stay on the front page as much as possible to attract more viewers.

    Back when I started writing I was torn between Keith catching a Magnemite or a Bellsprout. I decided on Magnemite (obviously), but Bellsprout got a new life with Tim. This chapter will showcase the battle strategy I was originally going to have Keith use with Bellsprout. Besides that, this chapter is relatively useless. Sooo... the next one will be up soon (tomorrow).

    This time: Tim battles Misty!

    Chapter 7

    After a few days of training, Tim was ready to take on Misty. We had a quick breakfast, then Tim and I walked down the street towards Misty’s gym. His Weepinbell, newly evolved, hopped with us, beside Tim. Psyke sat on my shoulders, resting its chin on my head, fast asleep.

    We hadn’t talked at all since breakfast. Eventually Tim broke the silence.

    “How do you do it?”

    “Do what?” I asked, looking at him quizzically.

    “Kick so much ass in battles? You steamrolled Misty, and you’ve been demolishing me in training. I can only imagine what you did with Brock.”

    “Actually, beating Brock was a close call. I didn’t have any experience then.” I paused for a second, thinking. I hadn’t really thought about it, but he was right. The raw strength of my Pokémon had carried me through the battle with Misty, but since then I’d gotten rapidly better. It’s like something just clicked. Skirmishing with Tim had been cake, even when I was at a type disadvantage. “I dunno. Strategy, I guess. Strategy and practice. When you train with your Pokémon for a while, eventually you just get it. You understand what orders to give and how to handle the situation at hand. It’s kind of improvisation, but at the same time it’s also about knowing your opponent.”

    “And you know me pretty well,” Tim interjected.

    “Exactly. Gym leaders are just as predictable, everybody knows what type the local gym leader prefers. Plan your team and strategies accordingly.”

    “What about when you don’t know anything about who you’re facing?” asked my friend.

    “Then I just rely on training and improvisation. You can think up of tactics on the spot if you work at it. Just try to think outside of the box and trust your Pokémon. Sometimes they know what to do better than you do.”

    “Hmm…” Tim scratched his chin, deep in thought.

    When we finally walked into the gym, Misty was swimming around in the pool with her Starmie. She looked up as we came in and crawled out of the pool to greet us.

    “Hey Keith! Nice hat.” She grinned up at Psyke.

    I took the Abra off of my head, waking it, “Shh… You won’t be making fun of him when he evolves. I got big plans for this little guy.” Psyke looked around, bemused. I continued, “This is my friend Tim, the one I was telling you about. He’s come to challenge you, if he can pay attention long enough.”

    Tim was silent. He gazed from his Weepinbell to the pool to Starmie, muttering under his breath.

    I nudged him, “Dude…”

    He looked up, “Oh, sorry. Hey Misty, I’m Tim.”

    She smiled sweetly, “Nice to meet you, Tim. You ready to go? I’ll go grab my referee real quick.

    Tim nodded solemnly, “Alright, I need to talk to my Weepinbell real quick anyway.”

    Misty nodded slowly, “Okay.” She looked at me, quizzically, then strode off towards an adjacent room.

    I just smiled slyly and sat down on a bench beside the pool, setting my Abra next to me. I watched Tim crouch next to his Weepinbell, whispering. When Misty returned with her referee, he straightened.

    “You ready?” called Misty, from the far side of the pool.

    “Of course, let’s go,” responded Tim.

    “Go! Staryu!”

    “Weepinbell!” Tim’s grass-type hopped onto the nearest platform. Flecks of a golden colored powder fell from its body. I smirked to myself. It was underhanded, but nothing in the rule-book said that you had to call out your Pokémon’s moves. The spores continued to fall from Weepinbell as it crept forward to the edge of the platform. Misty clearly couldn’t see it. The spores were saturating the water around Weepinbell’s platform.

    Misty wasn’t going to bide her time as she had against me. “Staryu, go underwater and come up under Weepinbell,” she commanded.

    I smiled again. Tim was following my advice. He had taken what he knew and planned accordingly. It wasn’t exactly the same strategy I would have used, but it worked.

    Staryu spun through the water and exploded up from underneath Weepinbell. But at the last second, Weepinbell had used its vine whip to launch itself to another platform. Staryu leaped onto Weepinbell’s original platform in front of Tim.

    “Bubblebeam!” Misty shouted.

    But nothing happened. Staryu had been effectively paralyzed.

    “Vine whip.”

    Tim’s Weepinbell was strong. It only had to use one slap of its vine to send Staryu spinning off out of the pool where it slapped loudly against the cement. The referee declared it unable to battle.

    “Staryu, return. Go Starmie!” Misty was stoic, she clearly did not want to lose.

    Before Tim and Weepinbell could do anything, Misty cried “Psybeam!”

    A beam of psychic energy shot from Starmie’s jewel. It caught Weepinbell full on. If it wasn’t for the plant Pokémon’s partial poison typing, it may have survived the hit. As it was, Weepinbell flew across the pool and landed, floating, in the water at Tim’s feet. He recalled it silently.

    I was stumped. What was Tim going to do? Charmeleon would be destroyed, Zubat would be even weaker than Weepinbell, and I didn’t know how strong Tim’s Raticate was. Maybe…

    “Go! Beedrill!”

    “Psybeam!”

    With a buzz, Beedrill deftly dodged the beam of light.

    “Launch a pin missile barrage, then use fury attack.”

    Beedrill’s speed astounded me. It was clearly Tim’s best Pokémon.

    Misty had no time to call out commands. Starmie launched off psybeams blindly. It was being overcome with needle-like projectiles being fired rapidly by Beedrill. The water-type frantically threw up a light screen as Beedrill came nearer but it did nothing. Beedrill’s needles flashed left and right. Finally, Starmie succumbed to the attack.

    Misty recalled her Pokémon glumly. “That’s two losses in a row, and one of them was televised. This is embarrassing.”

    She gave Tim a Cascade Badge before she silently slid back into the water and released one of her Poké Balls, it was a Poliwag. She began to play with it in the water. “See you guys around,” she said gloomily.

    Tim talked animatedly about the battle all the way back to the center. I nodded and smiled but wasn’t really paying attention. My brother Spencer had had a Poliwag the last time he had come by to visit. I remembered playing with it in the ocean. I made a mental note to send him an email thanking him for the Ultra Ball and letting him know how I was doing.

    When we reached the center, we sat down at one of the tables and began discussing leaving the next morning. “Well, we should probably cut through Saffron City and go to the port of Vermillion. That’s where we can face Lieutenant Surge. Unless you want to try facing Sabrina, but I heard she’s tough.”

    I sighed and ran a hand through my hair. I gazed for a second at Psyke, sitting on the table and munching some Pokémon food, before telling Tim my plan. “Actually….” I paused.

    “Actually what? Do you want to go another way?”

    I hesitated before letting Tim know what Criss had told me before leaving.

    “Teach you about battling? You’re amazing! You don’t need training.”

    “It couldn’t hurt. I want to check it out at least. It’s up to you whether you hang around in Saffron and wait for me or if you go on ahead to Vermillion.”

    He sighed. “I’ll give it some thought.”

    *****

    NEXT: Saffron City? Things get interesting.
     
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    Great story. Very intresting that you gave him a Magnemite as I've never read a Bulbagarden story where it's one of the main characters Pokemon.

    Really? I've always though it was popular for some reason... Thanks for reading, I'm surprised you took the time to go through the whole thing. :-D

    Not utterly convinced by tim's character yet but I think it needs more time to develop and you battle's seem a bit quick and could do with more description.having said this its still a good fic and I cant wait for wepinbell to evolve cause I love victreebell

    If you think Tim's character is dry now, you should have seen my first draft. Admittedly, I'm using him as a sidekick character so he won't get too much development, but I need to work on that. Besides being a dumb goof-off, I don't really have a direction for him to go in. And thanks for reminding me; at the point where I am with writing the story, I gave Tim a leaf stone but he still hasn't used it. Thanks for the continued readership!

    Hokey dokey. It's chapter time. When I first came up with the idea for this chapter (and the next couple), I thought I was being pretty original. But at the same time I felt like people would get all pissy and say that it was a stupid plot device. But now that I've been reading more and more fics around here and watching more episodes of the anime, this isn't entirely uncommon and is in fact fairly well received.Hopefully it will be the same for my fic, but we'll see. I desperately need to work on descriptions. You probably have no idea what I'm talking about but it'll make sense when you read the chapter. I'll shut up now.

    Chapter 8

    Saffron isn’t that far from Cerulean. Only a few miles walk along a straight road. I was still carrying Psyke as we strolled along. Tim didn’t have any of his Pokémon out. He had decided to come with me into Saffron for at least a little while.

    Up ahead, the gatehouse loomed. Saffron City was fenced off, it always had been. I wasn’t sure why but that’s just the way it worked. We pushed open the doors of the small building and proceeded through.

    “Hey! Wait!”

    Tim and I looked up. The guard had gotten up from his desk in the side of the room.

    “What’d we do?” I asked.

    “The way is closed.”

    “So how do we get into the city?” asked Tim.

    “You don’t, it’s off limits,” said the guard, crossing his arms and standing in front of us, staring down his nose.

    “You can’t close off an entire city!” I exclaimed.

    “Well it looks like I just did,” said the guard, pompously.

    Tim looked at him, “you mean you closed it off just now? Sounds to me like you’re just making stuff up.”

    “I don’t have time to explain things to a stupid kid! If you go through, you’ll be in trouble!”

    I grabbed Tim’s arm, “Let’s go. We’re not getting in.”

    My friend glared at the guard, but complied.

    “If you just want to get around the city, there’s an underground tunnel to Vermillion just outside,” said the man behind us.

    Outside, we gathered our thoughts.

    “That… was weird” said Tim.

    “I’m more concerned about how I’m going to get to Sabrina than why it’s blocked off now. “ I responded.

    “I suppose you could just come with me, and go to Vermillion. Sabrina can wait until we find a way in.” he suggested.

    “No,” I said, “I don’t know why, but I feel like I need to get in there as soon as possible.”

    “Alright then,” Tim conceded, “I’ll try to come in later, if not, meet me in Vermillion City or Celadon.”

    “You bet.” I replied.

    Tim walked off towards the building leading to the tunnels. I stood for a minute and watched him go. He seemed more than a little angry that we were separated again already. Nevertheless, I knew for some reason, I had to do this. But how?

    I looked down at Psyke. But of course… My Pokémon looked at me quizzically.

    “Psyke,” I started, “We need to get to the other side of that fence.” I pointed towards the city. “Both of us. Can you even do that?”

    Abra cocked its head, nodded, tensed, and then we were inside. Teleportation was nothing like I had suspected. There was no odd sensation or feeling beyond a slight prickling numbness in my limbs. There was no flash or bang, it just happened.

    Blinking away my surprise, I looked around at the huge buildings that now surrounded Abra and me. I began walking slowly through the streets, looking for the gym. I glanced around for someone to ask for directions, but no one was there. That was peculiar…

    Saffron City was easily the largest city I had ever been in, although that wasn’t saying much. Apartment complexes, businesses, and skyscrapers towered around me.

    As I wandered through the streets I thought about Tim. I was a little worried for him, as he hadn’t been through the things that I had. If Team Rocket showed up, he would be in big trouble. Of course, there was a good chance that they wouldn’t. It was hard to make a generalization of what the world was really like.

    I had grown up in such a protective environment. They didn’t teach us much at all about the outside world back at school. Or maybe they did, I could hardly remember any of my schooling despite the fact that it hadn’t even ended six months ago.

    I had spent so much time daydreaming about Pokémon and my future adventures with them that I hadn’t paid any attention in class. Final exams had been hell, but they hadn’t mattered to me. As long as I graduated, I figured, I would be fine. Tim had a similar point of view. David had been the intellectual one.

    David had actually gotten a scholarship to go study at a college somewhere in Hoenn but decided to journey instead. It had taken him a while to convince his parents that this was a good idea, but it had finally paid off.

    I wondered about David. He had left a while before me, so he was probably ahead somewhere, despite turning around to visit home after Cerulean. I doubted Tim and I would catch up to him, he had been better than the both of us at practically everything. I didn’t think Pokémon were an exception.

    Suddenly, I saw a pair of men in dark clothes exit a building and begin walking down the road away from me. I almost called out to them but stopped when something clicked in my brain. Those couldn’t be…

    My train of thought was interrupted by someone grabbing my arm and pulling me into an alley. I nearly dropped Psyke in my attempt to break free of my assailant’s grip.

    “Easy, kid. You don’t want to get caught by those Rockets do you?”

    I stopped struggling and looked at the man. He was short, shorter than me at least, and relatively pudgy. Beside him stood a Drowzee, whom he bore a striking resemblance to.

    “Those were Rockets? What are they doing here? Where is everybody? Who are you?”

    The man just shook off my explosion of questions.

    “Not now,” he said, “just follow me.” He began walking down the alleyway.

    I was skeptical. “Where am I following you to?”

    “The only safe place in the city for trainers, the Saffron City Gym,” the man responded.

    Satisfied, but still wary, I followed him for a couple minutes. We stopped at every turn and looked around the corner, presumably for Rockets. Eventually we came to the giant building labeled as the Saffron City Gym.

    The man pulled a key out of his pocket and fumbled with the door for a second before unlocking it and going inside, gesturing for me to follow.

    I slipped inside after him, clutching Psyke tightly. This gym, rather than being laid out as one huge room, looked more like an office complex. It even smelled like leather. I stood in what appeared to be a stark lobby. There was poor lighting and no furniture.

    Then almost out of nowhere appeared a tall woman, probably in her late 20s. She had long dark hair and cold eyes. I recognized her as Sabrina, the Saffron City Gym Leader. She was glaring down at the man.

    “Evan, I told you not to leave the building under any circumstances. Any and all training you need to do can be done here,” scorned Sabrina.

    The man cowered slightly. “I’m sorry ma’am, I was just trying to go catch a new Pokémon.” His Drowzee nodded in agreement.

    The tall woman sighed. “Just remember that you need to follow rules as long as you seek refuge here. Now get along, I want to speak with the newcomer.”

    Evan scuttled off and Sabrina turned to me. “You say Criss sent you?” she asked me.

    I was startled. “I didn’t… but yes. How’d you know? What’d you mean by using this gym as refuge? Where is everyone? Why is the city closed off?”

    She ignored me and looked into my eyes for a second before saying, “Follow. No questions now.”

    I followed her off down the hallway to the left. We stopped at the door to a small room.

    “Enter,”

    The room was empty except for a single chair against the wall.

    “Sit,” commanded Sabrina. I sat. At that moment, Psyke awoke and looked around the room confusedly. “Now close your eyes and empty your mind.”

    What was she talking about? What was going on? I hesitantly shut my eyes.

    “No questions now. Empty your mind.”

    Did she just read my mind?

    “No I didn’t, not exactly. Empty your mind, now.”

    I was intimidated to say the least. I tried my best to think of nothing, I cast aside my worries and musings but still found it hard to think of nothing. Was that even possible?

    “No, it’s not. Good so far, now think of your Abra. Only your Abra and nothing more. Think of memories, ideas, think entirely of Abra.”

    I was still confused. But I obeyed. I let my mind wander through memories of the psychic type, thoughts, even dreams. Suddenly, something happened. My eyes were open, I was… shorter? I had no control over my body. My head turned and looked up. There I saw myself, eyes screwed shut and a look of surprise on my face. Then I realized it, I was Psyke!

    My eyes jumped open and I was staring straight at Sabrina. “What the hell just happened?”

    Again she said, “No questions. Close your eyes again and empty your mind. I’m going to try something.”

    I was even more hesitant this time but did as she ordered. I nervously anticipated something happening like before, but nothing did.

    “Very good, open your eyes and come with me. I will answer your questions now.”

    I got up and followed her out of the room. We continued down the dimly lit hallway. I tried hard to wrap my head around what had happened in the last 10 minutes. After a few seconds, I figured out the questions I needed answered immediately and what could wait. Sabrina didn’t seem like the kind of person to be pestering for information. Sort of like Criss but even sterner, if that was possible.

    “What was it that I just experienced back there?”

    “You witnessed your first psychic connection,” she answered, “You seem to be one of the few people who have the ability to expand your mind beyond your body and into the souls of others. This enables you to connect with Pokémon. Psychic types will be rather easy because of their own aura, and other types can be connected to with some training.”

    I was completely and utterly blown away. “Psychic powers? What? That’s not even…”

    “Possible? Isn’t it? Psychic Pokémon can do it so why not humans? It’s just rarer for us. You have the gift, as does Criss, and to some extent Evan, who you met earlier. I have the power as well, but on a much higher level.”

    “So I can read minds?” I asked skeptically.

    “No. With training, you may be able to detect the emotions of others but I doubt it. I have that ability, and combined with some experience and observation, it can be incredibly similar to reading minds.”

    “What exactly did you do, that second time I closed my eyes?”

    “I looked into your mind. At your aura. I did it to determine the level of your gift. You seem exceptional, a little better than Criss, but only some. Training you will be interesting. Training is what you want, isn’t it? And I don’t believe I asked your name?

    “I’m Keith. And yes, I do want training. Criss said you could teach me to be a better Pokémon trainer. She didn’t say anything about being a psychic though…”

    “I wouldn’t think so,” said Sabrina, smiling grimly, “it’s not something you really tell other people. On another note, I noticed something when I was inspecting your mind. You’ve been tampered with, a psychic being has altered your mind somehow. I don’t know exactly but I would think something to do with emotional reactions.”

    I knew what this was about. I knew exactly what this was about. That Pokémon I saw. The terror was rising in me again. I looked at Sabrina and she looked back into my eyes. I was sure she could sense my fear but I tried to play it cool.

    “Hmm, that’s weird” I said, nonchalantly.

    We then turned a corner into a large room that was undoubtedly the main battle stadium. It was almost identical to Brock’s, except slightly larger, cleaner, and more brightly lit. I squinted my eyes as they adjusted to the new light.

    “This is where a majority of your training will take place.”

    “How long does the training last?” I asked.

    “It depends on your competence, your work ethic, and how much you are willing to learn. It’s all up to you. You could stay here years and still be learning. Or you could stay here only a few days but still be that much more prepared for what lies ahead.”

    “Well let’s get started then.”

    *****

    See what I mean? I definitely know I need to work on my descriptions of the psychic connections, they're awfully vague. Next chapter will be up tomorrow or the next day. I'll try to keep this on the front page.

    NEXT: Keith learns to kick ass and take names, Evan's resemblance to his Drowzee is briefly reiterated, and, what's this? A little background on Criss?
     
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    Chapter 9 - Sabrina's Gym
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    Trying to finish all the chapters you have out so I can execute my FORUM-WIDE REVIEWING ATTACK...

    I'm trying out this new style of reviewing, since I can never shut up when I read something. Tell me what you think?

    Excellent. Have I ever told you that your reviews are as entertaining to read as the actual stories (sometimes)? You sir, are hilarious. I'm excited that you noticed my originally unintended rhyming skillz in the first line. I noticed that when I went back to read and edit but decided to leave it like that for teh lulz.

    On to business:

    "This isn't something you can just montage your way through."
    -Old Man​
    Yes. Every hero needs a montage. This is the literary equivalent of the cliche epic training montage. Oh, and I threw in some dialogue, character development, and foreshadowing (including some red herrings :dodgy:).

    So, put on some Eye of the Tiger because Mr. Main Character is about to get a lot more badass.

    Chapter 9

    Sabrina turned out to be much the same person as I had originally taken her for. Over the next month I didn’t learn anything about her or her past. She lived very much in the present, and was very straightforward. She expected a constant diligence. Questions were frowned upon as they showed a misunderstanding of the topic. In her words: “Most of the time, your question has already been answered, you may have noticed had you been paying more attention.” Being unobservant seemed a crime that I was constantly reprimanded for.

    Despite Sabrina’s strictness, she proved to be an able teacher. Her stern ways made me much more adept at battling and training Pokémon overall. My skills and those of my Pokémon were rising day by day.

    After several days passed, I asked Sabrina a question that had been burning in my mind since I had arrived. ”What happened to the city? Where is everyone?”

    Sabrina paused before answering. We stood at the side of the gym’s stadium watching Sabrina’s Venomoth battle with my Butterfree.

    “Team Rocket happened. Several weeks ago, they invaded. The police force was disabled instantly, a curfew was installed, and many trainers were taken prisoner. The Rockets took over and set up base in the Silph Company headquarters. That leads me to believe that they are after advanced Pokémon technology.”

    “Strange,” I replied, watching Locustod whirlwind a poison powder back at Venomoth, “I’ve never heard of them doing anything this big before.”

    “I don’t think they have,” agreed Sabrina, “I would head into Silph HQ myself and sort this all out but I would be alone. If I didn’t make it out, no one would be able to provide refuge to rogue trainers in the area.”

    “I could go with you,” I suggested. I had already told her about me and Criss’ exploits in Mt Moon.

    She didn’t reply for a minute or so. She often did this, testing my patience by not responding. I didn’t bat an eyelash, but instead watched our bug Pokémon slam into each other in repetitive tackle attacks.

    Finally, she said, “No. That would be unwise. You are strong, but not ready.”

    I didn’t argue, instead watching Venomoth latch onto Locustod’s stomach in a leech life attack. Locustod retaliated with a devastating Confusion. Both Pokémon flew apart and fluttered slowly to the floor.

    “Good,” commented Sabrina at my side, “That will be sufficient.” We both recalled our Pokémon.

    *****

    The Saffron Gym became my home during my stay there. It became apparent that Sabrina did much more there than just accept challenges and fight battles. It turned out that trainers did have to use the place as a refuge, but none stayed for long. Many of them, like me, had sneaked into the city secretly to find out what was going on. Some were actually residents trying to escape the Rocket occupation.

    My lessons were very diverse. We started by learning things that didn’t have anything to do with psychic communication. The very first lessons involved developing hand signals that my Pokémon would recognize instead of calling out attacks. I recalled Criss using the same strategy during her battle against the boy’s Zubat in Pewter City.

    “Calling out the name of the technique you are using lets the opponent have time to find a way to counter it,” explained Sabrina, “in battle, every second counts.”

    “But what if my Pokémon can’t see my hand signs, or misinterprets them?” I asked.

    “Calling out the name of the attack is a surefire way to direct your Pokémon but hand signs or psychic contact are preferable when possible.”

    As we progressed, my lessons moved into strategy.

    “Techniques are unlimited. Names for moves like water gun or flamethrower are only our descriptions of them. Techniques can be combined and altered to make new and unexpected attacks and strategies. The more you train with your Pokémon and the more experience you both have, the better these new techniques can become.”

    It turns out that I was already using that strategy. Water gun jump was a common example of this tactic, and I had used it against the girl’s Pidgey on Nugget Bridge.

    As training went on, I developed more new techniques for each of my Pokémon. For example, I trained Locustod to use whirlwind on its own powder attacks in order to control their scattering and even delay them if necessary.

    She also taught me how to use some attacks to disguise others. I learned this the hard way when during a training battle, Sabrina’s Slowbro laced a water gun attack with a psywave that decimated my unsuspecting Tesla.

    Eventually, Sabrina allowed our lessons to move on into developing my psychic powers. I learned to give my Pokémon minute mental nudges that told them to use certain attacks or strategies. This worked much the same way as hand signals but there was even more to learn with psychic powers. As I gained the ability to have longer and longer connections with my Pokémon, many new strategies opened up.

    “You must learn to use the power of the speed of thought,” said Sabrina, “with experience, you will be able to assess an opponent’s weak points, how best to exploit them, and be able to give that information to your Pokémon immediately at the beginning of the battle. You should be able to defeat an inexperienced trainer in a single command.”

    *****

    Evan, the trainer who had found me in the streets of Saffron, turned out to be a nice enough man. Apparently he had only taken up Pokémon several months ago. When Team Rocket attacked the city, he was accosted. Sabrina happened to be passing by and helped him out. This left him in debt to Sabrina, causing him to be incredibly loyal. To a point, he was doing much the same thing that I was at the gym, although lessons seemed rare occasions for him. He instead spent his time doing the housework with his Drowzee.

    One day, when the two of us were alone together in the gym’s kitchen after a training session, I asked him about Sabrina.

    He laughed at me and squinted his beady eyes. “You ask me like I would know.”

    “Well, you did grow up here didn’t you?” I said.

    “The only thing I know about her is how she became a gym leader.”

    I pulled up a chair and took a seat. “I’m intrigued.”

    Evan sat his considerable weight down on a chair across from me while Drowzee used its psychic powers to put on a pot of coffee.

    “It was about eight years ago, I think,” he started, scratching his bald head. “She graduated from the Pokémon University here in the city with top marks. Her original plan was to get eight badges and challenge the Elite Four, much like yourself.”

    “Her ‘original’ plan?” I asked.

    “Yes. She saved the Fighting Dojo here in Saffron for last. Sabrina has a lot of hometown pride, so when she swept every gym trainer and the leader without losing a single Pokémon she was very disappointed.”

    “Rather than going to the Pokémon league, she recruited some psychic trainers in the area and started up her own unofficial gym. It got a lot of attention, and when its fame finally outgrew that of the Dojo next door, the Pokémon League said enough. The Dojo was discredited and Sabrina became the region’s most powerful gym leader.”

    After hearing that story, I held my teacher in an even higher regard than before. Over the next couple days I had lingering fancies of setting up my own gym in Pallet Town. Eventually though, I disregarded the idea as ludicrous.

    *****

    A couple weeks in, Sabrina pulled me aside before I went to bed.

    “Have you been giving any thought to the mental tampering I mentioned when we first met?”

    Immediately, the fear started to rise. I bit my lip, “No, not really.”

    “Did you happen across anyone that seemed to mean you a great deal of harm in your journey so far?”

    I smirked. “Just the Rockets. And I doubt any of them are psychics.”

    She nodded, “You are right. That is highly unlikely. What about Pokémon? Did you see many psychic types?”

    The fear intensified even more. I began to sweat, but Sabrina didn’t seem to notice. “Just some Drowzees during my stay in Cerulean, and a Kadabra or two that I didn’t fight.”

    “No, they couldn’t do that. Are you sure you didn’t see any Alakazams? Or maybe even a high leveled Hypno?”

    I bit my lip. “Nope, none of those.”

    She sighed and stared at the wall, “Alright then, tell me if you remember something.” With that, she walked away.

    I stepped into the room where I was sleeping and leaned against the doorway. This was not natural. I had to tell her. I wanted to tell her. But I couldn’t. Just thinking of telling Sabrina what I had seen made me break into a cold sweat. I had a fitful sleep that night.

    *****

    About three and a half weeks in was what I considered to be the epitome of my lessons. I was in the process of battling another trainer, a boy about my age who was trying to get out of the city but had been locked in his home. He had escaped and come to the gym to recover and hide from the Rockets. It was a two Pokémon battle with no premature withdrawals allowed.

    It started with Baron against his Raticate; I came out on top in a matter of seconds due to my training. But the other trainer’s second Pokémon, a Graveler, was a Rock type. Even with my new skills I was not able to pull out a second win in a row. I recalled my beaten Pidgeotto and prepared to send out Rainer, knowing he would end the battle in one, maybe two moves, tops. But before I could pull the ball from my belt, Psyke, who I was still carrying around everywhere, leaped in front of me.

    Knowing the rules of battling stated that once a Pokémon entered the field, it was the official selected Pokémon, I prepared myself for a tough battle. As far as I knew, Psyke only knew how to teleport, but I could find a way to twist that to my advantage. I was spared the trouble however, as before either of us ordered out an attack, Psyke began to evolve.

    It grew to almost my own height, and sprouted a long, bulky tail. A red star formed on its forehead. Its ears grew longer and a long mustached developed below its nose. It held a spoon in one clawed hand.

    “Ka-dabra!”

    “Confusion,” I said calmly, not having developed hand signs for Psyke quite yet.

    The golden Pokémon pointed a clawed finger at Graveler. It rose, shuddered, and fell back to the floor. The battle was over. I shook hands with the other trainer, who withdrew his Pokémon and left the room. I glanced over at Sabrina, who had been watching. She was looking at my new Kadabra.

    “He is strong, even for a Kadabra,” she said, “you are lucky.”

    I smiled and looked at it too. It blinked at me.

    “I know.”

    *****

    Now that I had a truly psychic Pokémon to work with, my training took a new turn entirely. We began to focus more and more on my psychic abilities and how to accentuate them using Psyke. By channeling my commands through the psychic-type, much more complicated messages could be sent to my Pokémon on the battlefield. I have to admit though; it must have been unsettling at first for them to receive commands in their own minds rather than from my mouth.

    Surprisingly enough, Sabrina was even more open to questions during the few rests we had between training sessions. I took the chance to find out more about Criss.

    “I really don’t know much about her actually,” answered Sabrina as we handed out food to our tired Pokémon. “She came to me a few months ago, before the city was invaded. She was in the area to find more leads on Team Rocket but decided to challenge me to a gym battle for fun.

    “I was blown away by her skills,” continued my teacher, “she even managed to teach me a few things. On a hunch, I convinced her to let me test her psychic abilities. I was correct in assuming that she did in fact possess them. She took me up on my offer to train her and help her hone her skills. She only stayed for a short time, however. Before long, she was off again, looking for more Team Rocket heads to crack. As far as her past… I only know her brother was killed by Team Rocket. And I noticed she seemed to have all of the badges from the Johto region.”

    The Johto region? Now we were getting somewhere. “I don’t mean to be nosy,” I explained, “she just never told me much about herself.”

    “I understand. She is a rather mysterious person.”

    We sat quietly for several minutes, watching our Pokémon eat, before I asked another question. “Where should I go after this?” I asked, “What comes next after this training?”

    As usual, she didn’t answer right away. I waited patiently. Then, “As I said before, your training continues however long you want. Even when you leave here, you must diligently practice each day and discover new tactics, abilities. Learn from your surroundings, your mistakes, the mistakes of others. As far as formal training goes, I would suggest Fuchsia City.”

    “Koga,” I said.

    “Yes, if you tell him I sent you, he will teach you as well. But in a very different way.”

    I didn’t question further. I knew I would find out what Koga would be teaching me in time.

    *****

    NEXT: It's been a month or so since we last saw Nolan. What's he up to?
     
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    Chapter 9.5 - Forest near Celadon
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    So, earlier than I had originally planned, Chapter 9.5. It's been a while since the last decent action scene so I just had to throw this in here. Flygon and Nolan have healed up over the past month or so (awfully convenient for the plot, I know) and are ready to get back to business. Yes, this is what Nolan does for a living.

    Chapter 9.5

    The convoy of Rockets moved slowly, quietly through the woods. Their orders were clear: deliver the weapons to the encampment and do not get caught.

    A total of eight grunts marched in formation around the supply truck as it drove down the narrow dirt road. Two or three of them had handguns hidden on their person, and all of them carried knives. No Pokémon were being used as they were deemed “untrustworthy”.

    Suddenly, the lead grunt threw up a hand, and the convoy halted.

    One of the grunt’s comrades stepped over to him, “what is it?”

    “I saw something on the road ahead,” the man replied, squinting at the shadowed path.

    Sure enough, there was a flicker of motion, and a small black figure appeared in the middle of the trail about twenty yards ahead. It was short, perhaps three feet tall.

    “Stay here,” the lead grunt said, “I’m going to check this out.”

    His comrade nodded and the man cautiously approached the shadowy figure. The second grunt reached into a pocket and withdrew a pistol. He aimed it steadily at whatever it was that had stopped the convoy.

    “I’ve got a bad feeling about this,” he whispered to his companions.

    The driver of the truck rolled down the window, “what is that thing?”

    One of the younger members of the patrol spoke up, “I think it’s a Pokémon….”

    The lead grunt had finally reached the figure. It hadn’t moved at all. It looked almost childlike, a small shadow swaying gently in the breeze. Then it twitched.

    Eyelids opened on its face revealing two giant red eyes. Ghostly lips peeled back to show an evil, grinning, mouth, like a zipper across the thing’s face. It was the most frightening countenance the inexperienced man had ever seen.

    “Baaaanetttte…” it said, smiling widely.

    Before the grunt could react, the Pokémon had launched a shadow ball into his stomach. The attack blasted the man backwards, kicking up dirt in its wake and finally slamming him into the truck, which slid backward a foot or two.

    The grunt with his gun already out opened fire on the ghost-type, but it was too late. The figure had already disappeared. Small puffs of dirt exploded where his bullets hit the ground on which the Pokémon had been standing milliseconds before.

    The few armed Rockets pulled out their own guns and looked wildly around them. There was stunned silence for a few seconds in which only the rustle of the wind in the trees could be heard.

    Then there was a rumble, and a crack. Out of the ground behind the truck exploded a giant armored Pokémon.

    “Maallldooo” it cried, stabbing its claw like hands into the back of the truck. Effortlessly, it lifted the truck into the air and flipped it over sideways into the ditch beside the road. The driver screamed as the vehicle came crashing down on two of his comrades.

    The grunts immediately opened fire on the new threat, but their bullets bounced off of the armor, causing little to no damage at all.

    All of a sudden, there was a spray of blood across the road. The grunts not preoccupied with shooting the monstrosity that had attacked them turned to see one of their compatriots gurgling, with a glowing green blade sticking through his chest. The blade unsheathed itself from the man’s torso and the body fell, revealing a rather angry looking Sceptile. Chaos ensued.

    Nolan Weiss stepped out from his hiding place behind a tree beside the road and walked into the battle, watching each of the grunts get either smashed or stabbed, one by one.

    The last surviving grunt attempted to run away down the road, away from the ambushers.

    “Gardevoir,” Nolan said calmly.

    The psychic-type immediately teleported next to him.

    “Reflect,” its trainer commanded.

    A shimmering barrier appeared abruptly in front of the runaway criminal, causing him to slam into it headfirst. He collapsed to the ground, swearing.

    Nolan, flanked by Gardevoir, Sceptile, Armaldo, and now Banette, who had just appeared by his side, approached the fallen grunt.

    The man turned to look at his assailants and let out a whimper of fear. He began fumbling in his uniform jacket. “Stay where you are!” he yelled, his voice cracking in fright.

    Nolan ignored him, and took a step towards the man.

    “I said don’t come any closer!” cried the grunt a little less shakily. He finally drew a gun from his jacket pocket and aimed it at Nolan. “Stop! I have a gun!”

    Nolan and his entourage halted. “Do you?” he said calmly, “I have a dragon.”

    And then, with speed seen in few other Pokémon, Flygon dove from the heavens and slammed into the man, slashing him with its claws. The man gave a scream that was cut short when Flygon hurled him into a tree.

    Nolan smiled, satisfied, “well done, everyone.”

    Each of his Pokémon cheered. Nolan walked over to Flygon and ran a hand down her neck and chest, feeling her heartbeat and the scar tissue that the bullets had left. A tear came to his eye as he remembered the injuries she had sustained.

    He looked up into her goggled eyes. “I love you.”

    The dragon crowed soothingly and nuzzled his forehead.

    “Flaah….”

    Their silent reverie was shattered by the familiar thumping of a helicopter overhead. Nolan looked up. The copter was dark colored but he couldn’t see a symbol from that distance. He turned to the rest of his Pokémon.

    “Sorry everyone, but it’s time to get back in your Poké Balls. I’ll let you out again back at the hotel.” He recalled each of his Pokémon except Flygon, whose back he clambered on to.

    “Okay, girl, let’s do this right this time,” he said into the dragon’s ear as she beat her wings to take off. “Approach from the bottom rear. If it’s a Rocket copter, use dragon claw under the cockpit.”

    They picked up speed as the helicopter grew closer. Sure enough, a red R was emblazoned on the side. Once again, there was a circle around it. “What do you know,” Nolan said, his voice lost in the wind, “we might get lucky this time.”

    In a few beats of Flygon’s powerful wings, they had reached the craft. With a high pitched battle cry, the dragon latched on to the bottom of the transparent bubble cockpit. Its claws blazing, it tore open the panel beneath the co-pilot’s seat and the box containing the starboard machine gun. Nolan held on to his Pokémon’s neck for dear life.

    Grabbing on to the helicopter with all four limbs, leaving Nolan hanging upside down, Flygon ripped away half of the cockpit’s flooring. With it came a chair, pilot and all. The man cried out in terror as he fell through the air into the forest below, but the roar of the helicopter’s blades drowned him out.

    Looking around Flygon’s sinewy neck, Nolan saw the other pilot grasping at his side where he had a holster.

    No, thought Nolan, no guns, not this time. “Flamethrower!” he yelled at the top of his lungs.

    The dragon’s mouth opened and out poured seething hot flames. The pilot was incinerated in a quick, yet incredibly painful death.

    The flames billowed throughout the helicopter and back into the cargo hold. Nolan put his head back behind Flygon’s neck at the withering heat, he could feel slight burns developing on his face already.

    Instinctively, Flygon pulled its head out of the shattered cockpit and pushed off of the burning craft. With a graceful swoop that made Nolan’s stomach churn, the dragon righted itself.

    The pair stared at the falling ball of flames. It hit the forest a few seconds later and exploded with a resounding bang.

    “The boss wasn’t in there, was he?”

    The dragon shook its head slowly.

    “So much for that then. Revenge sure feels good though, doesn’t it?”

    “Goooon…”

    They sat there for a minute, bobbing slowly up and down. The only sound was the wind and the steady beating of Flygon’s wings.

    Nolan reached down with one hand and adjusted the crotch of his pants.

    “We need to get you some sort of saddle. This gets seriously uncomfortable.”

    “Flah. Flahgooooon.”

    *****

    NEXT: Keith wraps it up in Saffron.
     
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    Chapter 10 - Sabrina's Gym, final training
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Well, it's been a week so I figure it's time for a new chapter. Nothing special to say about this one, besides that it's kind of boring (yet important).

    This time: Keith finishes his training in Saffron.

    Chapter 10

    My final two formal lessons proved to be the most interesting, useful, and strange of them all.

    “You must completely access the minds of your Pokémon,” said Sabrina, “looking into the past and memories of new Pokémon will allow you to learn about them and their personalities, and allow you to plan how you will train them.”

    It took several days of intense concentration and meditation, but eventually I was able to look completely into the minds and memories of my Pokémon. It was an odd feeling. Their lives flashed before my very eyes, all of the way up until that exact moment. If an event was life changing, or something of the sort, it was in crystal clear detail and went by at normal speed, otherwise the memories just flew by. The first one I connected with was Psyke. I saw some flashes of the field north of Cerulean, but nothing really stood out. Most of the memories seemed to include me. I asked Sabrina about this.

    “You are not looking into every detail of every memory that your Pokémon has ever had,” my teacher explained, “You will only see the most important events, the things that are constantly on the Pokémon’s mind and have shaped its character.”’

    Both Baron’s and Rainer’s memories comprised almost entirely of me, although I caught some interesting glimpses of the Pokémon league HQ in the latter. Locustod apparently was several years old, and had seen a lot of things around Viridian Forest, but nothing incredibly memorable.

    Tesla’s memory was also interesting to see. There was quite a lot of the old Kanto Power Plant, and I could have sworn I saw something more as well, but I thought I surely imagined it. Why would a Zapdos be living in an abandoned power plant?

    But directly accessing the minds of my Pokémon didn’t stop there.

    “Through your Kadabra, you will be able to merge your mind with that of your Pokémon. You will be able to control them entirely and completely for a short amount of time. With training, you will be able to do it longer and longer.”

    The things that I could do with my psychic powers had ceased to surprise me. I was unfazed by this new revelation. “I can see that doing that would eliminate the delay between command and action entirely but it would be at the sacrifice of the extra pair of eyes I provide to my Pokémon.”

    “Astutely observed Keith, and that is why you should only use this ability under certain circumstances. I’m sure that you will be a good enough judge of what these circumstances are.”

    A few days later, I finally achieved the connection. I freaked out and broke it almost immediately. Rainer, who I had connected to, fell to its knees in a coughing fit for some reason, and I almost collapsed from shock. The feeling of putting one’s mind into another’s body was indescribable. The world itself looked different, the colors, the proportions, everything. Smells and sounds changed. Even though it was still my mind, it became infested instantaneously with the basic wants and needs of a Wartortle’s body. I had become a different being entirely for an instant.

    I blinked stars out of my eyes and looked up at Sabrina, who was watching me, emotionless.

    “You get used to it,” was all she had to say.

    Over time, I did. Eventually, I managed to concentrate enough to actually use the connection and move “my” new body. The control gave me an undeniable, almost frightening feeling of power. Pokémon had the ability to do so many things humans couldn’t. It was addicting, but I limited myself as my Pokémon seemed apprehensive at the idea. In a way, I was apprehensive too. I shuddered at the thought of what it would be like for someone else to control my body. I promised myself to only use the ability in emergency situations.

    *****

    I entered training with Sabrina thinking I would only pick up a new skill or two, maybe a strategy here and there. I ended up learning more than I ever thought possible. Sabrina’s teachings had changed my life, but after over a month, I was ready to move on.

    And that was why I was extremely glad when an all too familiar face walked in on a battle between me and Evan. Upon realizing who it was, I stopped playing around and knocked out Drowzee with a powerful wing attack from Baron.

    Deftly recalling my Pokémon and ignoring the groans of Evan, I turned around to look at the newcomer.

    “Tim,” I smiled at him, “It’s been a while.”

    He smiled back, “Glad to see you’re still in one piece. I wasn’t sure you had even gotten in alright.”

    I led him out into the hallway, “You shouldn’t underestimate me. How’d you get into the city?”

    He imitated the guard’s gruff voice, “You can’t come through here, it’s off limits,” then he mimed flipping a coin, “no it’s not.”

    “You bribed him?” I laughed, “Nice!”

    “Hopefully this training of yours pays off,” my friend said, looking around, “you missed quite a bit.”

    “I’ll bet, tell me what you’ve been up to.”

    It turned out that he had in fact been quite busy. Days after we had parted, he had challenged Lt. Surge in Vermillion City and won on the first try. From there, he traveled up the coast line to Lavender Town where he caught a Gastly in Pokémon Tower and spent a while working for a kind old man called Mr. Fuji. Apparently, Mr. Fuji used to be a Pokémon researcher but now had converted his house into a safe house for abandoned and orphaned Pokémon. Tim worked there for quite a while. Afterwards, he tried again to get into Saffron but took the underground tunnel once more upon finding the city still closed.

    The very day that he arrived in Celadon City, he challenged Erika but was beaten.

    “I’m telling you, this girl was insane!” he explained, “I managed to get past her Victreebel easily enough with Charmeleon, and then her Vileplume took him out as well as Gastly. Finally, Beedrill helped me pull out another win, but it was all over when she sent out a Tangela. That Pokémon did things that I didn’t even know were possible. It was so fast, vines were going every which way! I couldn’t figure it out!”

    There was a slight laugh from the doorway of the room we were in. We both looked up to see Sabrina standing there. “I guess Erika has not lost any of her talent.”

    Both Tim and I gave her questioning looks. She explained, “Erika was also one of my students, she was quite adept when it came to strategies,” she looked at me, “but she didn’t quite have the… ability you have.”

    I smirked, but Tim was confused.

    Sabrina continued, “I am assuming that our training has finally drawn to a close, Keith?”

    I nodded, wordlessly.

    “It has been a very fulfilling experience for us both. I am sure that you will be able to go far with what you know now. Remember what I told you about Koga. Goodbye, Keith.”

    “Goodbye, Sabrina” I responded.

    She left the room without a backward glance.

    Tim looked at me, “she doesn’t talk a lot, does she?”

    I gathered up my already packed backpack and Poké Balls “No, not really.”

    “I don’t know how you managed to put up with it.”

    We left the gym in the mid-afternoon so a few people were out and about. Luckily, we didn’t see any Rockets. When we passed through the gateway, the guard almost stood up to stop us but, taking a leaf from Tim’s book, I tossed some money onto his desk to keep him happy.

    *****

    NEXT: Keith puts his new skills to the test against Lt. Surge!
     
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    Chapter 11 - Battle vs. Lt. Surge
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Okay I've read it and It's really good but you really will have to be careful with the mind merging thing as you have built it up quite a bit now and you cant just use it willy nilly but I have faith that you will so good chapter

    Thank you for pointing this out. I have my doubts about how this will work out and its good to know that you have the same concern. In all honesty, the ability won't get much exposition as far as the story goes for a long time. I'll work hard to keep it relevant and important. Thanks for keeping up!

    Right. Finaaaaaally I've managed to catch up, and I'm impressed. I'll try to keep up with it now haha.
    Some of the ideas in this are very close to my ideas for Seasons! (Flygon saddle, and being able to connect with pokémon)....
    My reasons for it though are much, much different to yours though, but I guess its true what they say, great minds think alike!
    My only issue is sometimes this lacks in description, but the story telling is very well presented which kinda makes up for it, so even though I just read like 4 chapters, it didn't feel strenuous, I actually enjoyed reading them :D
    At any rate, I'm looking forward to see Keith's new training in action!

    I'm pretty sure there are also similarities between this and Rival's Story if I'm not mistaken. But it wasn't on purpose! The connection has been in my head as an idea since I started writing. And the saddle idea was kind of an afterthought after Italics pointed out how tough it would be to hold on during flight. I'm working on my descriptions, hopefully this next chapter is better. Thanks for reading!

    Aether! :3 You've been so kind as to review my story, so when I saw you had one posted here as well I naturally felt inclined to do the same. I'm glad I did so; this is quite the interesting read. I've gone through your Prologue and Chapter One and I'm posting my reviews of those two pieces. Seeing as how I'm quite strapped for time at the moment, later on I'll continue reading the rest of your chapters and post individual reviews for those as well (if that's alright with you). Anyways, here goes nothing. :D

    I'm absolutely loving your story. Kanto's never been my favorite region, but it's definitely the most nostalgic one, that's for sure. I look forward to seeing you make the other locations come to life as well as you have Viridian "Hellhole" forest and Pewter City. :p Kudos, Aether, and definitely an excellent read. It's refreshing to see new, unique characters and an original plot. Congrats.

    I'll likely be making those changes as soon as I get around to it. Chapter by chapter reviews are great. I'm glad you think my characters are unique, I'm surprised that Keith hasn't been accused of Marty-Sueism yet. The locations are actually something I'm trying to focus on. I love hiking and looking at landscapes, cityscapes, etc, so setting description is really important to me. I want to build settings that you could put any sort of character in and they would have an adventure. I'm glad you like it!

    And now, here's my first try at a "high-quality" chapter. I really like how it turned out, hopefully you all will too.

    This time: Keith fights Lt. Surge!

    Chapter 11

    Vermillion City, “the Port of Exquisite Sunsets,” or so proclaimed the sign on the wall of the first building we passed. It was certainly a smaller town than Saffron, but much more active. Currently, however, the sun was high in the sky.

    The salty smell of sea air and the cool breeze in my face reminded me of Pallet Town. I closed my eyes and smiled at the nostalgia as we walked down the cobblestone streets.

    I followed Tim to where the gym was apparently located, in the marina. We walked through a crowded marketplace full of fish vendors and people trying to pawn off bits of sea-polished glass and odd looking pieces of driftwood. This was definitely a lot like home, but bigger.

    In all honesty, I expected Tim to stop to get something to eat at one of the stalls but he plowed on ahead. I guess he was just eager to get a move on.

    I was lost in thought as we maneuvered through the crowd when I bumped into a very tall man.

    “Sorry,” I said, not looking at him. I kept walking; Tim had stopped to let me catch up.

    “Hey!” yelled the man in a loud, gruff voice. “Well, look at that. The pussy has a boyfriend.”

    “Great,” Tim muttered to me, “you found Surge.”

    I turned to look at the intimidating figure which had approached us. The lieutenant was tall, very tall. He was probably about a foot and a half taller than me, and that’s saying something. And he wasn’t skinny either. Massive muscles bulged out of each arm; veins even showed in his thick neck. He was wearing a sleeveless green shirt and grey cargo pants. His hair was a short, blond, crew cut.

    “What the hell do you think you’re doing back here?” the gym leader yelled at my friend, “did you want to get your little ass beat around by me? Or maybe you brought your little fag friend here for a romantic getaway!”

    His loud insults were beginning to attract attention. “I thought you beat him,” I whispered to Tim.

    “I did,” my friend replied, swallowing.

    “Beat me?” said Surge, as loud as ever, “It was a fluke! Just because I lost doesn’t mean you beat me. HA! As if!”

    This guy was really starting to piss me off. I stood up straight and looked him in the eye as best as I could.

    “Actually,” I said, angrily, “yeah, that’s exactly what it means. Don’t be a bitch.”

    The last sentence just slipped out. It proved to be a mistake. Surge raised one large hand and planted it on my chest. He pushed me backwards, hard, into Tim, causing both of us to fall over.

    Untangling our limbs, I stood up and glared at Surge. He was just standing there with his arms crossed, laughing. Rage and hatred flowed through my body. I clenched my fists so hard that my fingernails cut into my palm. I was about to jump at the gym leader and plant a fist in his pompous, laughing face when I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Tim.

    “It’s not worth it, dude. Don’t stoop to his level. Stay classy.” He grinned at me.

    Stay classy. It had been our graduating class’ motto. Tim’s reference to our life in Pallet Town helped me control my anger. I turned back to the lieutenant, who had stopped laughing. Now he just stood with a big, stupid grin on his wide face. People all around had stopped to watch the confrontation.

    This time, I stood at a safe distance when I insulted him.

    “All right you ass-licking cunt,” I said. “I’m challenging you to a gym battle. Three on three, right?”

    The military man ignored my remark, “Yeah, but I doubt I’ll need that many to wipe the floor with you.”

    “I’ll beat you with one,” I replied, “and I won’t say a single command. See you at the marina, asshole. Come on, Tim.” Without waiting for a response, I grabbed Tim’s arm and turned away to push through the crowds of people now surrounding us. They parted to let me and my friend by.

    Before we turned the corner at the end of the street, I looked back over my shoulder. Lt. Surge was still standing there, the grin wiped from his face. My confidence had clearly put him off somewhat. I had no doubt that I was the one who would be doing the floor wiping. No one insults my friend and gets away with it.

    *****

    About an hour later, Tim and I stood at the docks. The “gym” consisted of only a battlefield.

    The battlefield was a part of the docks, a rectangular, wooden raft. About three feet of open water separated it from the pier on all sides. It was the smallest field I had been on, but left enough room in the middle for battling. A tall, mustached League referee stood on one of the long sides of the raft.

    Surge stood on the short end of the raft opposite us.

    “Hahaha! Let’s get this over with you little fag!” he yelled at me.

    I didn’t respond, instead handing my backpack to Tim and jumping on to my end of the raft. I drew a single Poké Ball from my belt.

    The gym leader seemed to have recovered from his shock earlier. Confidently, he cried out, “Voltorb! Kick some ass!” and threw his first Poké Ball forward.

    Again, I didn’t say anything. Casually, I tossed out my own Poké Ball.

    “Ka-dabra!”

    Sailors, dockworkers, and tourists walking by on the pier began to stop to watch. Some of them cheered for Surge, some of them for “the Kadabra kid.”

    I took a deep breath. My Pokémon’s large tail twitched ever so slightly as I made psychic contact with it.

    “Tackle!” called out my opponent.

    This was going to be very easy. Barrier, I told Psyke.

    The red and white ball rolled forward quickly, only to roll straight into our invisible barrier. It pushed through, but was slowed down to an entirely non-threatening pace. Psyke coolly stopped the ball with its foot before blasting it backwards with a psybeam. I don’t think the poor electric-type even realized what was going on.

    It spun around to slow itself to a halt at the feet of its furious trainer.

    “That’s it. Get in close and use self-destruct!” Surge yelled.

    Had this guy really been in the army? He knew nothing about keeping strategy a secret.

    Voltorb once again rolled forward, but this time it began to glow in a similar fashion to evolution.

    Psychic, I told my Pokémon.

    The ball was glowing brighter as Psyke’s telekinetic powers lifted it into the air. Nonchalantly, the psy Pokémon tossed it over the heads of the spectators into the water on the far side of the pier.

    “No!” shouted my opponent in dismay, but it was too late.

    From behind the crowd a muffled explosion was heard, and a large column of water shot up into the air. Surge, red with anger, jumped off our raft onto the main pier in pursuit of his Pokémon. Shoving people out of the way, he cleared a path. I could see his Voltorb floating bottom up in the water, bobbing in the waves like a fishing lure.

    “Voltorb is unable to battle, Kadabra wins,” stated the referee, bluntly.

    The gym leader recalled his Pokémon and jumped back into his position on the far side of the raft.

    “Your next Pokémon?” asked the referee. He seemed unfazed by Surge’s anger. I guess you got used to this kind of stuff.

    “You’re dead, kid. Go Pikachu!” cried out my opponent.

    I almost laughed out loud. The cute little electric mouse was definitely not one of the Pokémon I had imagined the tough-guy Lt. Surge to have. Cuteness aside, its power was not on par with the kind of Pokémon that were usually sent out in accompaniment with death threats.

    My opponent focused on his Pokémon’s speed abilities, using agility and quick attack to get in close. It didn’t work very well, as Psyke teleported around the raft every second or so and put up barriers, but eventually a single quick attack made contact.

    Surge laughed in victory but got arrogant. He ordered an iron tail, despite the fact that my Kadabra was now the whole length of the raft away from Pikachu. His Pokémon obeyed this folly and leaped into the air with what was actually an incredible amount of height for such a small Pokémon.

    I knew iron tail would be a powerful attack, so I had Psyke take a step backwards and put up as many barriers in the way of Pikachu as possible.

    As I had planned, the metallic glow in Pikachu’s tail died ever so slightly with each barrier it passed through. In a possibly risky attempt to humiliate Surge, I had Psyke reach out with a bare hand and grab the mouse’s tail in mid air.

    I felt my Kadabra grimace as a painful shock wave shivered up and down its arm at the contact, but it held on. The pain traveled through our connection into my own arm, which I grasped with a sharp intake of breath. We were temporarily disconnected, but I dove right back in.

    The crowd gasped collectively and Surge swore, but no one was more shocked than Pikachu, who didn’t even know to react while it dangled upside down from Psyke’s hand, dazed.

    Psyke flicked it casually on the nose with its spoon, and blasted it away with a psybeam before it recovered its senses.

    “Pikachu is unable to battle. Kadabra wins.”

    Surge didn’t even say anything this time. I couldn’t tell what was going through his head, but the veins bulging in his neck made it clear that he was more furious than ever.

    I only had to take out one more Pokémon. I was sure it would be the hardest of the three, but Psyke wasn’t even breathing hard yet. I sent it some reassuring support through our psychic connection.

    In all honesty, taking out all three of his Pokémon with just Psyke wasn’t a complete necessity. But, for the sake of both my dignity and Tim’s, I had to do it.

    My opponent’s third and final Pokémon came out attacking.

    “Rai-CHUUU!” it cried, in a much more gravelly voice than its pre-evolution.

    A powerful thunderbolt near instantaneously bridged the gap between our two Pokémon. I ordered a light screen, but it did little.

    The electricity crackled through my Kadabra’s muscles, causing them to tense and spasm uncontrollably. Our connection blurred, and almost failed.

    Confusion, I sent hastily.

    Psyke’s psychic nudge spun Raichu around, causing the electricity to break off.

    “Body slam!” ordered Surge, before I could even recover.

    That’s it! Teleport, then recover, I told Psyke.

    The electric mouse leaped at my Pokémon, seeking to flatten it beneath its mass. At the last second, Psyke disappeared and reappeared at the far side of the raft, near to Surge. It glowed, sparkling slightly as it recovered energy.

    Now that we were back at square one, with both Pokémon at full health, the battle really began.

    Raichu was strong, there was no doubt about that. I did have doubts, however, about its trainer. His constant calling out of techniques was so incredibly easy to manipulate that I almost felt sorry for his Pokémon. Raichu’s sheer power, though, made it difficult to turn my evasions and parries into genuinely powerful counterattacks. I only managed to land a couple confusions here and there.

    Soon enough I found my chance. Raichu had just knocked Psyke’s feet out from under it with an iron tail. Expecting another teleport out of harm’s way, Raichu jumped backwards, rather than following up on its attack. I took the opportunity to grab hold of it with a psychic attack from my Kadabra. Before the electric type could wrestle free, like it had several times before, I had Psyke launch as powerful of a psybeam as it could manage.

    The bright beam of energy struck Raichu square in the chest, eliciting cheers and groans from the crowd. The Pokémon flew backward at the impact, crashing into its trainer.

    Surge took a step backward to steady himself, only to find that there was nowhere to step behind him. He lost his balanced and fell into the water between the raft and the pier, swearing loudly. A majority of the crowd burst out laughing at his spluttering in the water.

    Raichu collapsed on the deck.

    “Raichu is unable to battle, Kadabra wins. This battle goes to Keith!” cried the referee to a cheering of the small crowd. I guess Surge was not very well liked, even in his own town.

    I recalled a spent Psyke and watched Surge attempt to climb back aboard the raft. The referee walked up to me and held out his hand. In it was the Thunder Badge.

    “The League doesn’t trust him to actually hand these out, so this is for you,” said the man.

    I took the pin from his hand and examined it. It was yellow, in the shape of an eight pointed star, with an orange octagon in the middle.

    “You should probably get out of here,” suggested the referee, “Surge is known to strangle competitors who beat him.”

    “Point taken,” I replied, pinning the badge to my fabric piece on my belt.

    I turned and jumped back onto the pier. Tim handed me my backpack and gave me a high five.

    “That was awesome, you kicked his ass! I guess Sabrina’s training really paid off,” said my friend.

    I just nodded, adrenaline from the battle still in my veins. We started off down the pier, ignoring the shouts behind us of “where is that cheating little fuck?!”

    *****

    I wanted to write a gym battle where Keith totally kicked ass, but without it getting boring because of the lack of suspense. I'm satisfied with the result. What do you think?

    NEXT: To Lavender Town! Action scene time!
     
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    Good chapter and I loved how you portrayed surge with his attitude towards Tim's 'victory'. The one touch I didnt like was the fact he didnt give out badges as I always got the impression that the gym leader was the only one who could but thats pretty minor. Other than that good chapter and I've got an update on Erika in my thread if your interested

    Yeah I get where you're coming from, I just had trouble envisioning a scene where Keith confronts a furious Surge after the battle.

    Well my loyal followers, here is chapter the twelfth. It's a little earlier than I had originally planned, but when it's done, it's done. I'll save most of my normal long-winded author's commentary for after the chapter, to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!

    This time: Keith and Tim take a detour through Lavender Town to meet Mr. Fuji.

    Chapter 12

    Lavender Town was a good few days’ hike from Vermillion City and it may have been faster to go straight to Celadon instead, but Tim insisted that we go see Mr. Fuji. We arrived late into the night of the second day, after many miles and two nights on the road. Rather than go straight to Mr. Fuji’s house, we stayed at the Pokémon Center that night.

    We got up early the next morning and I followed Tim to the old man’s house. Even during the day, the town had a lingering… feeling. I couldn’t describe it well, like sadness but with stale sort of resignation. I had sensed it the night before when we first came into town, but had attributed it to my tiredness. Now however, I was sure that my limited psychic abilities were picking something up.

    Mr. Fuji’s house was a small little cottage, with a big garden. Several small Pokémon wandered around the grounds, but we didn’t see the owner of the house.

    I stood next to Rainer, absentmindedly watching an Oddish putter through the flower beds as Tim knocked on the door. It was answered by a scrawny looking kid, our age, with greasy black hair and wire-framed glasses.

    “Hi Tim! Back already?” he said.

    “Hey, Gavin,” replied my friend, “I’m just looking for Mr. Fuji, is he around?”

    “Nope,” said Gavin. “He went for a walk up to Pokémon Tower about an hour ago and isn’t back yet.”

    Tim sighed and looked behind him, over the neighboring houses, towards the tower on the skyline. “Ugh, that place gives me the creeps.”

    Rainer and I walked up behind him. Pokémon Tower, the graveyard of Pokémon. Maybe that was the source of the weird energy I was feeling. I tugged on my friend’s sleeve. “Let’s go check it out. Maybe we can find him there.”

    Tim conceded, although warily, and said goodbye to Gavin, who shut the door after giving me a strange look. I winked at him. There’s nothing like a good wink to make a situation awkward for somebody.

    Once again, I followed Tim along the dreary streets of “The Noble Purple Town.” Gray clouds gathered overhead and a light rain began to fall. I zipped up my jacket, but Rainer seemed to acquire a skip in its step.

    “You think this weather will get any worse?” I asked my friend in front of me.

    He slowed his pace and sniffed the air slightly, looking up at the clouds. “I doubt it,” he replied.

    For whatever reason, Tim had always been really good at predicting the weather. It was one of those odd talents that people sometimes have, like psychic powers. I smiled slightly.

    Eventually we came to the base of the Tower. It wasn’t as tall as some of the skyscrapers in Saffron, but it was the biggest building in the small town at about seven stories. Tim led me around a big moving truck parked on the side of the street and through the revolving doors into the lobby of the tower.

    I could easily feel the energy emanating from the building as we stepped inside. An eternal sadness that couldn’t be ignored.

    “It’s a wonder anyone lives in a town this depressing.” I said quietly.

    “I know, it feels strange.” Tim responded, also in a low voice. The building’s aura had that effect. It felt like if you were to talk loudly, you might wake up the deceased Pokémon.

    The main room was massive. A sign said that there were seven floors, with wild Pokémon present on all but the first two. The first floor was just a lobby, with some downtrodden looking people standing around and a miserable receptionist. The floor was covered in white tile and the whole place was dimly lit by silver chandeliers hanging from the ceiling. A wooden spiral staircase led up to the second floor on the right side of the room. The sheer sorrow of the place was almost enough to bring a tear to your eye.

    Tim walked across to the stairs to the second floor. I recalled Rainer and followed.

    This floor had less people but hundreds of stone tombs formed a maze that led across to the next stairwell. The white tile was the same as on the first floor, but the chandeliers were replaced by lamps placed methodically throughout the building. Windows covered a majority of the walls around us.

    Tim and I made our way across, looking around for Mr. Fuji, and were almost to the stairs when we were accosted by a frantic old lady wearing gray robes. A Haunter, presumably hers, floated at her side.

    “You,” she said eerily, pointing at us, “You must save them.”

    “Okay then creepy lady…” Tim said, raising an eyebrow at me but continuing up the stairs. I stopped him.

    “Wait, what are you talking about?” I asked the lady.

    “The Cubone, they are in danger. The old man tried to protect them, but he is in danger too.”

    “Old man? You mean Mr. Fuji?” asked Tim.

    She continued as if he had not spoken, “You must save the Cubone, their mother has been slain. The Rockets are ruthless.”

    “Keith, wait!” shouted Tim. I had run up the stairs the second the lady mentioned Team Rocket. I managed to cross two more of the identical huge rooms and go up more flights of stairs until I was stopped by a wild Gastly.

    “I don’t have time for this,” I reached for a Poké Ball, “Psyke, use confusion”

    The psychic Pokémon appeared in front of me with its spoon pointed at the ghost type. A red aura formed around the Gastly’s black body as a psychic pressure intensified upon it. Finally, the ghost Pokémon disappeared in a puff of smoke. I could hear Tim running up behind me, out of breath.

    “Keith, slow down.”

    I ignored him and kept running, Psyke teleported along beside me every few steps. A few minutes later I was dashing up the last staircase. The seventh floor was smaller than the rest. A short hallway led from the stairs to the south-facing side of the room. I could hear shouts and cries coming from the part of the room I couldn’t see. All I could see from the top of the stairs was more white tile and a floor to ceiling window looking out over the town. Faintly, I detected a sickening yet unidentifiable smell. I stopped before rounding the corner into the room and waited for Tim to catch up.

    It took me a few seconds to catch my breath. All that running had knocked the wind out of me. I had clearly gotten out of shape in the past couple months.

    As Tim staggered up the stairs, I gestured him over and put my finger to my lips. Before I said anything, I took a look around the corner.

    At the far end of the room was what looked like a nest, made entirely out of bouquets of flowers, many of them dead. Six Cubone sat in the colorful bed; scared, tearful eyes looked out from behind their skull masks. A metal cage had been placed around the nest. It struck me that those flowers must have come from mourners in the tower. They would have been the only thing the mother Marowak could have gathered for nesting materials. Behind the nest was a stone statue of some bird Pokémon that I didn’t take the time to identify.

    Four Rockets lined the room, and another two stood by the cage. Tied to the metal bars of the cage was an old man that had the tired yet angry look of someone who had shouted himself hoarse. The two Rockets were laughing at something that lay at the foot of the man. All I could see was a dark red pool of blood.

    Then one of the Rockets shifted to the side and I saw it. A Marowak, presumably the mother of the Cubone, lay on the tile. A single cut ran straight down the middle of its pale belly. Blood flowed freely from the fatal wound. I gagged slightly when I realized that some of its entrails were hanging out. The smell I had detected seemed to get stronger. The bone that the mother had used as a weapon lay next to it, shattered into several pieces. A tear, not of sadness, but of anger, came to my eye.

    I pulled my head back before they saw me. Tim looked incredibly confused. I told him what I had seen, my voice shaking with emotion and rage. It took all of the willpower I had to stop from rushing in there right away and killing all of them.

    “They’re holding him hostage? What’re we gonna do?” My friend exclaimed.

    “We help him out.” I responded.

    “What? How? Shouldn’t we call the police or something?”

    “There’s no time, they’ll be gone before we got back. Our only choice is to have all our Pokémon out and go in there with guns blazing.” This wasn’t necessarily true, but I didn’t want to let go of a perfectly good ass kicking opportunity.

    “Guns?”

    “Figure of speech, dumbass.”

    As silently as possible, we let out each of our Pokémon, one by one. I explained the situation to Psyke through a flurry of thoughts and had him relay it to the rest of the team. It quickly grew cramped in our small hiding place without going down the stairs but I managed to get Tesla and Rainer in front. I hoped that their high defense would help protect us when we ambushed the criminals.

    “Alright Psyke, untie Mr. Fuji’s ropes with confusion. Then we go in.” I turned to Tim’s Gastly, “It’ll be your job to free the Cubone.”

    They each nodded in turn.

    “What do I do?” Tim looked a little frightened, much like I had felt at Mt. Moon.

    “Just go in behind the Pokémon. If a Rocket comes close, beat the shit out of him. Give in to your instincts, use your adrenaline. No problem, they’re all stupid.”

    My friend nodded slowly.

    “Here we go.”

    As soon as our band of freedom fighters burst into the room, pandemonium ensued. Tesla electrocuted the two Rockets by the cage in a single thunderbolt before they could even reach for their Poké Balls.

    Nevertheless, the Rockets reacted faster than I had expected. Seconds later, their Zubats, Raticates, and various other Pokémon joined the fray. To avoid confusion, I saw Tim recall his own Zubat. Over by the far wall I could see Rainer fighting both a Raticate and a Rattata at the same time. I pushed my way across the room and punched their dark haired trainer in the side of the head. It hurt my knuckles incredibly but the adrenaline helped.

    I saw Baron and Tim’s Beedrill fighting with a Golbat. Tim himself was not far away, calling out orders to his Charmeleon, which was locked in combat with a Raticate. Psyke and Tesla were causing general havoc in the middle of the room.

    Meanwhile, the Rocket had recovered from my blow. He punched me in the stomach and kicked my legs out from under me before I could react. My head slammed into the hard floor and my vision blurred. I blinked and saw the Rocket aiming a kick at my face. I rolled over and took it instead in the back of the head, which didn’t help much.

    From my position on the floor, I noticed six pairs of little brown feet scampering across the floor. One of the freed Cubone jumped over my prone body at the grunt behind me. Groggily, I pushed myself up, which only made my head spin even more. The Cubone was now latched to the grunt’s face and beating him wildly with its bone club.
    Before I could do anything else, I was tackled again to the ground by a Zubat. I slapped it hard in the head and it fell to the floor. I turned to see the Rocket grab the Cubone and toss it at the far wall. Tim dove to stop it from slamming against the hard stone. I struggled to get up yet again but couldn’t. Two more Zubat had were tearing at my legs with their teeth. Gasping in pain, I started kicking at them.

    “Wartortle!”

    I glanced at Rainer. It was locked in combat with the same grunt that had knocked me down. Shoving my Pokémon away, the Rocket pulled an object out of his pocket. I heard a crackle and saw a small burst of light. A stun gun. The next time Rainer leaped forward, the Rocket jabbed the device under its chin. My Pokémon flailed wildly as the Rocket pushed it to the ground, and then went limp. The electric shock must have completely paralyzed the water-type. Without hesitating, the Rocket grabbed Rainer from under its shell and heaved it onto his shoulder.

    “NO!” I finally rid myself of the Zubats and struggled to my shaky, injured feet. I saw Tim’s Raticate bound across the floor and tackled the Rocket that had stolen my Pokémon. He staggered against the wall, almost dropping Rainer, but reached into his pocket and pulled out a knife which he plunged deep into Raticate’s side. Blood spilled from the wound and the rat Pokémon fell to the floor. Seconds later, a bolt of energy lanced across the room from Tesla and just missed the Rocket.

    “Let’s get out of here!” shouted the man as he ran down the stairs. His own Raticate followed him, as did two of the other grunts.

    “Stop!” I yelled and ran after them. It was difficult, with blood running down my legs, and the bite marks pulsing with pain. I still hadn’t recovered from my earlier concussion, so I struggled to keep my vision clear.

    I sprinted across each floor and leaped down every step, but with my injuries I was still losing ground. I was nearly blinded with pain as we ran across the second floor and down the final flight of stairs. People stopped and watched us go by. One man jumped in front of the Rockets but they shoved him out of the way and kept running.

    I burst outside into the sunlight, just in time to see them leap into the truck in front of the tower and speed off down the street, towards Saffron City. “The Rockets took over and set up base in the Silph Company headquarters.” Sabrina said. I heard sirens approaching.

    “No…” I dropped to my knees, finally succumbing to my pain and weakness. “This can’t be happening…” I fell onto my side. “This must be a dream…” Time flew by. Mr. Fuji ran out of the Tower, blood streaming from a cut on his forehead and carrying Tim’s bleeding Raticate over his shoulders. I hadn’t seen at all what he had been doing during our rescue. Tim was at his side, holding the Cubone and sporting a black eye and bloody nose. All of our Pokémon were behind them. I blinked, and I was being loaded onto a stretcher. I blinked again and I was in a clean white room, in a bed. I slept, and I dreamt of my very first Pokémon.

    *****

    NEXT: Sorrow and remorse for our hero, some foreshadowing occurs, and then they get the hell out of this dreary little place.

    P.S. 100th post!
     
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    Man, poor Keith good battle scene and I liked the idea of nest of mourner flowers. To be honest it seemed a bit odd that the channellers hadn't stopped the rockets from getting up the tower but apart from that really good

    Glad you liked it. It took me a while to think of something that the Marowak could build her nest out of and I think the result is very symbolic in a way.

    Keith there, his pokémon handling themselves but he gets his ass handed to him. haha.
    Still a very good chapter, and you did a good job of successfully getting key points in the sort of carnage that would have ensued when all those pokémon collided.
    At the beginning though, you wrote:

    Forgive me if I'm wrong, but had they not just come from Vermillion?

    Oh shi-
    Fixed! I'm glad you appreciated the battle description, it took me a couple of rewrites to get right.

    It looks like there will be a snow day for me tomorrow so I'm celebrating by spending yet another day putting off this essay that was originally due a week ago but I got an extension on. But I digress, on to the chapter. This makes three in a row that I am very proud of, hopefully you all will like it. I tried to give some insight into Keith's character and emotions. Losing Rainer is the first of four big events that force Keith to recognize and correct his flaws. Enjoy!

    This time: Keith mourns the loss of Rainer and the duo leaves Lavender Town.

    Chapter 13

    I awoke in the dark. A glance at my watch assured me that I had been out for several hours. It was now one in the morning.

    Slowly sitting up, I looked around. The room was empty. I lifted the clean white sheets to look at my legs. They had been bandaged and felt numb.

    Damn, I’m on painkillers, I thought. Drugs were not something I needed slowing me down right now. My knuckles had been bandaged as well, as was a cut on my cheek that I had not noticed. I was not wearing my normal clothes, just a uniform hospital gown.

    I looked around the room. Lavender Town was too small to have a hospital. Maybe this town’s Pokémon Center treated humans as well. I noticed my clothes on the nightstand next to my bed. On top was the fabric piece that I had pinned my three badges on. It was then that I noticed the Cascade Badge had been broken. It was cracked into two pieces held together only by the metal backing of the pin. The Cascade Badge… I thought back to my battle with Misty. I thought back to Rainer’s amazing victory, so soon after his evolution. Tears filled my eyes as the events in the Tower came into my mind and pulled me back to reality.

    I wiped a bandaged hand over my eyes and shut them, laying back down. How could I have been so stupid? Who was I to think I could take on Team Rocket without someone like Criss at my side? A small part of my mind grabbed at this idea and tried to pin the blame on Tim. No, that wasn’t fair. He had never wanted to go to the tower in the first place.

    What had been my motives for attacking them in the first place? To save Mr. Fuji? To save the Cubone? To avenge Dad?

    No, I had already taken the lives of two Rockets to get my revenge. To guiltlessly take any more wouldn’t make sense.

    Had I done it to avenge the slain Marowak then? I halfheartedly tried to convince myself that this was the case, but failed. I hadn’t been angry that the Rockets had killed a mother trying to protect its babies, I had been angry that the Rockets were doing anything at all. My unconditional hatred for Team Rocket confused me when I finally made this connection.

    Who am I kidding? I thought. I was being selfish. I had attacked the Rockets for to show off and Rainer was taken because of my own egocentric arrogance.

    My thoughts wandered about in such a manner for the next several hours. If I got any sleep that night, I didn’t notice. I gave up on my tossing and turning when the sun began to rise and got up out of bed.

    At the foot of my bed lay my backpack, someone had obviously brought it in from the dorm rooms where Tim and I had stayed the previous night.

    Slowly and painfully, I changed back into clean clothes. I wasn’t going to waste time sitting around. In my heart, I knew that Rainer was gone, maybe forever. But I still felt that I had to be doing something.

    When I pulled a clean shirt out of my backpack, a flash of red and white fell from it and rolled onto the floor. Hesitantly, I knelt down and picked up the Poké Ball. It must have been Locustod. It was only then that I realized I had left the Butterfree in my backpack since I had left Saffron, without even thinking about it. I felt a little guilty, but not much.

    I almost slapped myself. Here it was again, another one of my ridiculous grudges. Sure, Locustod was a troublemaker, but it hardly deserved to be ignored. With a heavy sigh I clipped the ball to my belt, next to its companions, and finally put my shirt on.

    Luckily, the door was open. I doubted that my bandaged hands could work doorknobs very well. Stepping out into the hallway, my earlier theory was confirmed. I was definitely in the Pokémon Center. In the room next to mine lay Tim’s Raticate. It was sleeping, with heavy gauze wrapped around its side. Hopefully it would be okay, the bandage was bloodstained.

    I kept walking down the hall and passed a floor-to-ceiling window looking out on the center’s courtyard. On a stone bench sat Tim, holding the Cubone from yesterday. His black eye appeared to be getting better. He was talking to Mr. Fuji, who had a dressing of his own wrapped around his head. Tim noticed me and stood up. I turned my head away and kept walking.

    I limped out into the lobby. The nurse’s back was turned; otherwise I’m sure she would have stopped me. I made my way out the front door and down the street, towards the Tower. I knew Tim was following me, but I never looked back.

    I went up to the second level of the cemetery building and sat down at the foot of a particularly large tomb. I leaned my back against the cold stone and closed my eyes. I sensed several people walking by, but no one interrupted my solitude.

    After a minute, I felt someone come up and sit down beside me. I knew it was Tim. I didn’t open my eyes and he didn’t say anything. We sat together in silence for quite a while.

    Finally he spoke, “There’s nothing I can say that will make this better. There’s no word that can fix this. But I am sorry, however much that means to you.”

    I opened my eyes and looked at him. “Thanks Tim. But there’s no need to be sorry. This wasn’t your fault.” I paused before asking, “Will Raticate be okay?”

    My friend let out a long sigh. “Yes, but the nurse said he may never be able to battle or do anything very strenuous again.”

    “So what will you do?”

    “I’m going to leave him here with Mr. Fuji. Cubone will be taking his place.”

    I looked at my hands, “How bad are my injuries? Did the nurse say when we could leave?”

    “One more night is what she told me.”

    I stood up, “Then we leave tomorrow morning.”

    “Sounds like a plan,” replied Tim, standing up as well.

    I turned to take a look at the tomb we had been leaning against before we left. Inscribed upon it was “Dragonair – Your life could have been much fuller, but you helped complete mine.”

    Dragonair. My hands closed into fists. I needed a new Pokémon.

    *****

    The next morning, the bandages on my hands were removed, as were most of the ones on my legs. I thanked the nurse profusely before Tim and I made our way out of town, accompanied by Mr. Fuji, who had come to see us off.

    “Keith,” the old man said to me, “You saved my life, and the lives of those Cubone. I don’t know how I could ever thank you enough.”

    “Even if you hadn’t been in danger,” I responded after a pause, “fighting Team Rocket is what I do.”

    “And that is a noble quest if I ever saw one. I would feel guilty if I let you leave without a parting gift, though. Why don’t we stop by my house real quick? I’ll let you have one of my evolutionary stones.”

    So we changed our course slightly and arrived at his house a few minutes later.

    He spread out his collection of stones across his kitchen table.

    “Wow,” I exclaimed, “how’d you get all of these?” I picked up a fire stone and examined it. It was a bright orange jewel, with a crystalline structure that looked like a flame burning at its center.

    “They accumulated over time,” the old man replied, “I used to be a scientist you know, I traveled a lot and found these stones everywhere.”

    Tim decided upon a leaf stone for his Weepinbell. I kept the fire stone. I had no idea what I would use it on, but I was planning on eventually catching a fire type.

    We both thanked the old man and began to leave. Before we did, I noticed a stone plaque above his door. It was an ancient carving of some sort of Pokémon. Almost like an Abra, but it stood on its feet, which Abra rarely do. And this one had a long tail, big eyes, and longer feet. I blinked. The tail, the head shape, it was so similar, yet so different.

    “Mr. Fuji, what kind of Pokémon is that?” I asked the old man. The fear slowly began to rise, but I fought it. It meant I was on the right track.

    “That, my boy, is a Mew. And that is a story for another time.”

    “Mew…” I followed Tim out the door, lost in thought.

    *****

    NEXT: Route 8 action scene, and more!
     
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    Chapter 14 - Routes 8 and 7
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Welp, time to keep myself on the front page. I tried to write a slightly more upbeat action scene here. It sort of worked, but the chapter turned out to be as moody as the previous two. I guess I don't have any control over my characters :p

    This time: Action scene on Route 8, a fan favorite returns ;)

    Chapter 14

    The underground tunnel that would take us through Saffron City was a good three or four miles from Lavender Town. Tim and I walked in silence, neither of us had any Pokémon out. The trail was wide and well beaten, through a shady forest. As far as weather went, it was a fairly dull day, mostly cloudy with the occasional sun break.

    But as was now the norm with me, not a day went by without something “exciting” happening.

    We were about halfway to the tunnel entrance when I heard rustling in the bushes. Tim didn’t appear to notice and never broke stride, but I closed my eyes and tried to pinpoint the source of the sound. This was a mistake.

    Suddenly I was grabbed from behind. My eyes flew open in time to see a Team Rocket grunt pulling the Poké Balls from Tim’s belt. I was released, and didn’t have to check in order to know that my Pokémon had been taken as well. I spun around. We were surrounded. No less than eight grunts circled us. Most of them had their Pokémon at their side. I noticed several Raticates, some Zubat, a Golbat, an Ekans, and a single Hypno, who stood by the one closest to me. He appeared to be the leader, as the two men who had grabbed us had given him our Poké Balls.

    “I’m feeling merciful today so we’ll let you children go in exchange for this lovely haul of Pokémon,” said the leader.

    This couldn’t be happening. Not now, not ever. I immediately tried to formulate a plan, but couldn’t think of anything. Tim yelled at them, “Give us back our Pokémon!”

    “Now I’m hardly likely to do that, am I? I’d be fired, and we can’t have that,” replied the man, sneering.

    I couldn’t believe what was going on. I was practically a Rocket magnet. They seemed to show up everywhere.

    “Now get out of here, kids!” said the man.

    Suddenly, a voice shouted from behind him.

    “Double kick!”

    “Horn attack!”

    “Fire spin!”

    All of the Rockets’ heads turned. A Nidorino appeared out of nowhere and gored one of the grunts through the stomach with his horn. A Nidorina appeared right behind it, breaking the ribs of another Rocket with a bone-shattering double kick. A wall of fire sprung up around the two Rockets closest to Tim.

    I didn’t hesitate, but took immediate advantage of the distraction. I punched the Rocket leader in the stomach and kicked his legs out from under him in a similar fashion to the way I had been debilitated in the Tower. I snatched the bag of Poké Balls out of his hands and reached inside, identifying the first one with a small ruby on the front.

    “Tim, catch!” I yelled as I tossed it to him.

    My friend immediately caught it and threw it up in the air “Charmeleon! Join the fray!” Tim’s fire lizard sprang from its ball and slashed at one of the Rockets, snarling viciously in anger.

    Suddenly a shadow loomed over me. I crouched and prepared to spring up at the Rocket, but he was grabbed from behind in a headlock. I punched the man hard in the face, which hurt my still healing knuckles terribly, but was well worth it. My rescuer threw the Rocket aside. My suspicions were confirmed. Who else would attack the people before the Pokémon? She brushed a strand of black hair off of her face.

    “Nice to see you again Criss,” I said, with a smile.

    “Get out your Pokémon, I’ll get your back.”

    I released each and every one of the balls. Baron leapt up and began to engage the Golbat. Beedrill took on two Zubat at once. Psyke locked itself psychic combat with the Hypno. Tim’s Zubat carried his Weepinbell high in the air where it began throwing razor leaves everywhere. Gastly joined the fight against Hypno, where it almost instantaneously evolved into a Haunter. I smiled to myself, nothing like a stressful situation to bring out the best in a Pokémon.

    Locustod and Tesla began fighting the three Raticate. Tim’s baby Cubone instead attacked the people, beating its bone club against the shins of the Rockets.

    Criss and I stood back to back. She landed a kick in the side of one of the Rockets; I locked hands with another and pushed him backwards before hitting him hard on the side of the head. Pent up rage at Rainer’s loss spilled into my muscles in the form of adrenaline. The man fell to the ground with a groan. I looked over to see Tim calling out commands to his Charmeleon, who was still fighting off a Rocket.

    “Even with your help, this will be difficult.” I said to Criss.

    She shoved a grunt backwards over his already fallen opponent before responding, “Don’t worry, I’ve still got an ace up my sleeve.”

    As if on cue, from the ground on either side of us burst Criss’s two other Pokémon. In front of me was her massive Onix, it gave a savage roar. Behind me I could hear Arbok’s poison sting spraying the unsuspecting Rockets.

    Team Rocket and their Pokémon began to flee into the woods, most of them at least. The two that had suffered burns from Flareon lay on the ground moaning. The one that had been stabbed by Nidorino also lay on the ground but was much more still. I had difficulty feeling any sympathy for the gang members. Criss clearly felt the same, as she walked over to one of the burned grunts and kicked him in the head, silencing his lamentations.

    “Thanks for that, Criss,” I said as we withdrew our Pokémon, “we would’ve been screwed without you.”

    Criss glanced at me for a second as she recalled her Nidorino and Nidorina, frowning. “I knew I shouldn’t have taken you to Mt. Moon,” she said shakily, not looking at me. She started down the trail again, walking quickly, with Flareon at her heels. I looked at Tim, he shrugged, and we followed.

    The two of us rushed to catch up with her. I strode up to her left, while Tim walked to her right. “What do you mean?” I asked.

    She glared at me, her deep blue eyes piercing into mine. “You think you’re some kind of hero, don’t you?” She didn’t raise her voice, but her displeasure was clear. “Trying to live the life you seem to think I lead. It isn’t some glorious adventure, gallivanting around Kanto after Team Rocket. You’re not ready; you don’t know what it’s like.” Her ultimatum paused momentarily as she took in a breath. Her face was flushed with anger.

    I took advantage of the cessation by interrupting, “What the hell are you talking about? Those Rockets jumped us back there! It’s not like I was following them!”

    This time she shouted. “And it’s a good thing I was! You think I don’t know about your little escapade in Pokémon Tower? Lavender Town’s is one of the police forces I work closely with. They told me all about what happened.”

    I began to get angry too. “I had no choice! We did what we had to in order to save Mr. Fuji and those Cubone!”

    “Don’t kid me,” she replied, rolling her eyes. “There was nothing urgent about that situation. You could have gone to the police and not gotten involved.”

    “Not gotten involved? You’re one to talk!”

    She yelled again, “I know what I’m doing! I’ve been through that kind of stuff before, but not you. If you keep this up, one of these days you’ll get killed or have one of your Pokémon stolen!”

    It took every ounce of will I had in my body to stop from punching her square in the jaw. She would have deserved it. I turned away, clenching my teeth. A tear formed in my eye and each step I took shook it ever so slightly, until it finally fell down my cheek. Criss didn’t notice.

    She was voicing the exact same things that I had realized the night after Rainer was stolen. It was my fault, all my fault. I was stupid to have ever made the mistake of rushing in there.

    Tim, who had been silent this whole time, leaned towards Criss. She glared at him and raised a hand to push him away, but he grabbed her wrist and whispered something in her ear. Her face softened instantly.

    “Oh,” she said. “I didn’t… maybe they didn’t tell me everything. I shouldn’t have been so harsh, I’m sorry.”

    Tim must have told her about Rainer. I wiped the tear from my cheek and said shakily, “No you’re not. You’re right. It was my fault.”

    She bit her lip and looked at the ground, but didn’t say anything.

    Not ten minutes later, we descended the covered cement staircase to the underground path. The dim lighting and echoes of our footsteps almost encouraged us to maintain our silence. I breathed a sigh of relief when we finally emerged into the sun on Route 7.

    It was Tim who broke our unspoken vow of silence. “Keith,” he said, “I vote we don’t have any adventures for at least another week. You think we can do that?”

    I smiled and conceded, “I agree, Celadon City sounds like a good place to rest.”

    It was much easier to talk after that. I introduced Tim and Criss to each other and pleasant conversation proceeded.

    “So Criss, those Nidos new?” I asked.

    “Yeah, I’ve been training them since about the time we last parted. Once I think they’re ready, I’ll put those moon stones I appropriated to good use.”

    “That should be a force to be reckoned with.”

    “You bet.” Criss nodded.

    Tim entertained us the rest of the day by telling Criss about his various adventures that had occurred while I had been training with Sabrina.

    The sun was beginning to set by the time we had gone the rest of the way to Celadon City. I gazed up at the buildings as we walked through the streets. It was certainly smaller than Saffron, but still fairly big. Criss stopped at an intersection.

    “I have to go this way,” she gestured behind her, “The Pokémon Center’s straight along this road. See you around!”

    We waved goodbye and made our way to the Pokémon Center where we both turned in our Pokémon and went immediately to the bunk room. Sitting down on bunks across from each other, we looked into each other’s eyes.

    “You look damn tired,” Tim said to me.

    “You look damn tired too,” I responded.

    “Well,” he said, “You were right about Criss. She was pretty hot.”

    My face met my palm. “She’s way out of your league.”

    “Yeah, her and every other girl.”

    We both laughed and lay back into our respective bunks. Although it was about three hours before I usually even considered going to bed, I fell asleep almost instantly.

    *****

    NEXT: Two action chapters in a row? Shit goes down while training for Erika.

    Hold up! The crew is in Celadon now, right? Let's think, who ELSE is in Celadon? :eek:
     
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    Chapter 15 - Forest North of Celadon
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Hopefully you guys appreciate this, I took time off from my valuable White version playing time to finish it. Yes, it was a little rushed. Yes, its short. Yes, I do think the quality of my writing is starting to go downhill again. But we will prevail! Chapter 17 is where it becomes naturally well written, and will require less editing. Quick note: the next few chapters will be pretty short (except maybe 16.5, I wouldn't know, I haven't written it yet :p), but it's all for a good reason. I wanted to to fit the entire gym battle with Erika into one chapter without it getting too long due to an introduction scene and whatnot.

    This time: Keith trains with Baron for the battle against Erika!

    Chapter 15

    We both woke up about the same time the next morning. Over breakfast, Tim looked at me, “No adventures.”

    “No adventures,” I agreed.

    And so began our stay in Celadon City. Deciding to wait a couple days before challenging Erika, we instead spent the time walking about the city. I looked for Criss but saw no sign of her.

    The evening before Tim planned to challenge Erika (we had decided to do it on consecutive days, with Tim going first), the two of us sat out behind the Pokémon Center, in the practice field. We each had released all of our Pokémon and were now watching them play together.

    “Why do you hate your Butterfree so much?” Tim asked me.

    The question caught me by surprise. Immediately, my mind flashed back to when I had woken up in Lavender Town. Maybe Locustod didn’t deserve the derision I directed towards it. “I don’t hate it. I just harbor a significant dislike for it.” I finally replied.

    “Sounds like hate to me, but why?”

    “Well, it screwed me over pretty badly before I caught it in Viridian Forest. It is pretty powerful but I guess I just haven’t gotten rid of that first impression. Plus, that damn chittering gets really annoying.” Even to my own ears, this sounded like a hurried rationalization.

    Tim just laughed, “Whatever you say. So are you gonna watch me battle tomorrow or go train?”

    “Train, probably,” I responded, “Baron needs some work, and he will be my main force against Erika’s grass-types.” Tim had said that Erika did three on three battles. So far, I was planning on using Psyke, Locustod, and Baron.

    “Well good luck with that then,”

    “Good luck yourself, you’ll probably need it.”

    “I’ll definitely need it,” my friend agreed, “most definitely.”

    *****

    I awoke early the next morning, earlier even than Tim, and headed out of the center after only a quick breakfast, leaving my pack behind. Only Baron would be coming with me. I had decided to head up into the forest north of Celadon. If I kept walking I would reach the southern face of Mt. Moon, but I wasn’t planning on heading that far, instead stopping at the top of a large hill overlooking the city. On the other side of the hill was a large and densely forested valley. Far away to the east, the sun rose over Lavender Town, lighting up an empty, dull blue sky. Baron landed beside me and hopped forward before letting out a loud cry.

    I bent down and picked up a small handful of rocks. “Okay Baron, here’s the plan,” I instructed my Pokémon, “This is going to be a tough exercise. I’ll run down the hill, and you’re going to follow me. I’ll periodically throw a rock behind me, back up the hill. Whenever I do that, you need to turn, fly back, catch the rock, and bring it back to me. You got it?”

    Baron looked at me and cocked its head, as if a little skeptical.

    “It’s going to be difficult, but it will work on your speed, agility, and accuracy.”

    The Pidgeotto nodded slowly.

    “Good,” I said.

    I shifted the rocks so I held one in my right hand and prepared to run down the hill. Baron oriented himself and spread its wings wide, ready to take flight. And then we were off.

    I ran down the steep hill as fast as I could, feet pounding on the dirt before me. Baron glided beside me. “Now,” I cried. “Go!” and I threw a rock up into the air behind me. Baron cut a sharp turn in front of me and flapped ferociously back up the hill. I turned my head in time to see it execute a perfect catch. The bird Pokémon glided back down to me and dropped the stone; I caught it deftly.

    The hill was rather long so we repeated this exercise several times before reaching the bottom. Baron never missed one. On the last throw, I threw three rocks into the air. It seemed to catch the Pidgeotto by surprise, but the reflex training we had practiced with Sabrina paid off. It caught one in its beak, another in a foot, and snagged the last with its other foot right before the rock hit the ground. I skidded to a stop at the bottom of the hill. “Perfect!” I called out to my Pokémon. Baron glided down to me again and dropped the three rocks.

    “That was awesome!” I praised.

    After a short rest for the both of us, I briefed Baron on its next training exercise. “Tim says that Erika’s Tangela relies on a strategy using multiple vine whips. The best way I can think of to practice dodging this is to have you fly at a high speed through this thick forest. So when I tell you to go, fly high back up the hill and then dive down so you reach the forest at high speeds. I’ll walk a little ways into the forest, so when you reach me you can stop.”

    My Pokémon nodded confidently this time. At my word, Baron flew quickly back up the hill while I dashed into the forest. When I felt I was a comfortable distance in, I stopped and turned around. In front of me was the trail I had followed, which didn’t really provide much space between trees, just slightly less underbrush.

    For a couple minutes, I didn’t hear anything besides the chirping of some wild Pidgey, the rustle of the wind in the tall pine trees, and my own breathing. For I was quite out of breath, keeping up with a flying Pokémon was a tough workout.

    But before long, I heard a familiar cry.

    “Pidgeote-to!”

    There, barreling between the trunks was my Pidgeotto. It swerved left and right, rolling to avoid the tightly clustered pines. I smiled in pride as the Pokémon sped past me before banking hard back around. Baron landed at my feet and gave a triumphant caw.

    “That was great!” I told it, “You look like you need a good rest, let’s walk through these woods for a while. We can battle some wild Pokémon when you’re ready.”

    So we walked through the forest. Or rather, I walked and Baron hopped and flew along. After a time we battled some Bellsprout, Venonat, and one wild Pidgeotto. Baron took care of each one with no real problem.

    We were about halfway across the valley when Baron suddenly stopped and cocked its head.

    “What is it, Baron?” I asked the bird Pokémon.

    But the Pidgeotto just hopped once before taking off. It flapped high into the air and appeared to look around. When it seemed to have seen what it was looking for, the flying-type dived back down in front of me, cawing wildly.

    “What did you see?” I asked again.

    Baron stopped its clearly failed attempts at getting its message across and just gestured for me to follow with its wing before flapping off into the foliage.

    “Baron! Wait up!” I called, dashing after it.

    Whatever it was wasn’t far away. Baron hovered at the edge of a steep, grassy decline, looking down it. I ran up beside the Pokémon and followed its gaze.

    At the bottom of the hill was a small clearing. At the center of the clearing was a group of about six Growlithe, all tethered to a pole. They appeared to be wearing muzzles of some sort, and were pulling at their restraints. It didn’t take long to see why. A man in a Team Rocket uniform stepped towards the fire-types and cracked a whip at them. Another Rocket stepped forward from the other side and kicked one of the puppy Pokémon, it collapsed with a painful shudder. The men looked to be talking but I couldn’t hear what they were saying. I scanned the rest of the field and saw only one other Rocket. He stood at the far end of the clearing, looking down on what appeared to be an unconscious figure tied to a tree. The figure was wearing a police uniform. Suddenly I realized what I was seeing, the officer must have taken the Growlithe out for a training exercise (Growlithe are the main Pokémon used by the police squads) when he had been attacked by the Rockets.

    Baron let out a soft coo of sympathy. I looked at my Pokémon; it was staring straight into my eyes. In them I saw what the Pokémon was thinking, almost like I was reading his mind, which might very well have been what I was doing. What I saw was enlightening. I had always wondered why Pokémon were so loyal to their trainers, why my Pokémon were so loyal to me. I didn’t have any special powers, nor did I give them anything they otherwise wouldn’t have. So why be attached to a trainer? In Baron’s eyes I saw the answer to that question. I saw trust. I saw a plea for help. I saw a firm belief that no matter what, I would be able to fix the situation, solve any problem.

    But I couldn’t. “I’m sorry Baron,” I said as I looked away, “I… I don’t know what to do. I want to help those Growlithe but… but without Tim… or Criss… or my other Pokémon… I… I don’t know…” I looked back at the Pidgeotto, it was staring back down at the abused Pokémon.

    And just like that, Baron began to evolve. It may have been premature. It may have been forced. But near instantaneously, Baron grew to my height and half again, his wingspan almost tripled, and his hair-like head feathers turned a vivid yellow and grew all the way down his back. The Pidgeot turned its head to me, in its eyes I saw again what it was thinking. Those big, dark eyes that seemed to hold so much emotion.

    If you cannot help them, then I will. And you will come with me, the eyes told me. Baron extended a wing. Without a word, I nodded and clambered on to the bird’s back, gripping it around the neck and nestling my knees at the crook of its tail feathers. Without hesitation, the bird Pokémon leapt off of the cliff and raced down to the clearing.

    Pidgeot are widely recognized as some of the fastest Pokémon in the world, maybe not the fastest, but among them. This was definitely to our advantage. With a savage cry, Baron slashed at the bindings of the Growlithe, freeing a couple, before slamming in to the Rocket that guarded the cop. I leapt off of his back and attempted to wrestle the whip away from one of the other men. Despite having the element of surprise, the man was still much stronger than me.

    Everything seemed to move in slow motion. I heard a bark behind me, and a weight pressed down on my shoulder. I saw an orange shape, a Growlithe, push off of me and tackle the Rocket full on. Leaving the startled poacher to be bitten and scratched by the obviously well trained puppy Pokémon, I turned to survey our rescue.

    Baron’s quick attack must have knocked out the other Rocket, for he now lay, unmoving, on the ground. Baron was currently whipping up a powerful gust attack that blinded the third man, and put him off balance. One of the rescued Growlithe launched a tackle attack at the criminal. Leaving the situation to the two Pokémon, I rushed forward to the remaining captives. Pulling my penknife from my pocket, I cut the bindings and released the Growlithe from their muzzles. I was somewhat afraid that the frantic fire-types would attack me, but they were smarter than that. One of them jumped up and began licking my face while the others walked over to their fallen trainer.

    Gently pushing the grateful puppy off of me, I moved to the second Rocket. The Growlithe still had him preoccupied, rolling around in the grass. Taking careful aim, I kicked him hard in the face. He yelled and scrambled even more frantically, with blood gushing from his nose. His assailant Pokémon bit him hard in the shoulder while I kicked him again, this time in the temple. His convulsions ceased.

    From the battle behind me, I heard a scream of pain. I whipped around in time to see the final Rocket fall over with two massive gashes across his chest. Baron floated to the ground, its bloodstained talons soaking the grass.

    Trying hard not to gag on the thick, metallic smell of the Rocket’s blood, I checked for a pulse. Nothing. I then walked to the other two Rockets, and found them to still be alive. Grabbing the Growlithe’s bindings, I tied the two of them to a nearby tree.

    I then moved over to the fallen cop, Baron and the Growlithe were gathered around him. He still looked unconscious. I unbound him and checked for wounds. I was no genius at first aid, let alone waking someone up from something like this, but then I noticed the blood dripping from the back of the cop’s head. I doubt the Rockets had meant to hurt him that badly, but once again, their strength was far outweighed by their stupidity.

    Despite my limited knowledge of first aid, I knew that head wounds were bad. I tore a strip of cloth off the bottom of my shirt and tied it around the man’s head, but the blood still seeped through it. Panicking slightly, I then took off my shirt entirely and shoved it under the wrap. The makeshift bandage wouldn’t work for long, but it should help some.

    I looked around at the Pokémon surrounding me. The Growlithe looked worried, to say the least. Baron stared confidently into my eyes. “Baron,” I said, “This man needs help. I want you to fly him back to Celadon. Take him to a human hospital, this city should have one. But don’t spend time looking for one, if you can’t find it, go to the Pokémon Center. Don’t worry about me; I’ll walk back with these Growlithe.”

    I didn’t really need to say that last sentence. Baron was loyal and ready to help; there was no worry in his eyes. I lifted the man onto Baron’s back. “Now fly fast, but don’t let him fall.” With a confident cry, the giant bird flapped twice to get into the air, and sped off over the trees.

    *****

    NEXT: *cough*filler*cough* No, but really, it's the closest thing to filler I have ever written. I was originally gonna stick it on the end of this one, but like I said above, it wouldn't fit with the rest of the chapters.
     
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    Chapter 16 - Celadon Hospital and the City
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Another rushed, kinda crappy chapter. Hopefully it will get better from here. I have next week off for spring break so I should be able to spend plenty of time on 16.5. From there, it goes on to the gym battle with Erika, which is actually pretty good in my own humble opinion.

    Also, this fic has been nominated for best journey fic for the spring awards and Criss as best supporting character. Voting closes tomorrow, but whatever, go vote if you haven't. Thanks for all of the support you guys!

    This time: I suppose this isn't filler as much as just tying stuff together. It's kinda boring anyway. New Pokemon, though.

    Chapter 16

    I watched Baron go for a second before I turned to the Growlithe, “Let’s go, just follow me and we’ll get back to the city all right.”

    On the way out, I gave each of the cursing Rocket grunts a hard kick in the face. Let them sit here and stew in the sun, the police would come out to fetch them when they were ready.

    It was a hot day, probably the last one of this year, as fall came into full bore. The sun beat down on me, making the already long walk seem like a marathon. Especially now that it was uphill, and I was exhausted, I did my best to take it one step at a time. The Growlithe fared much better in the heat; as fire-types, this was their kind of weather. Still, they loyally stuck close to me.

    Finally, after hours of walking, I trudged back into town. Needless to say, I attracted some attention. A sweaty, dirty, shirtless kid trailed by a troupe of Growlithe tends to do that. I turned to my band of followers, “Do you think you could smell your way from here or something? I really don’t know where Baron took your trainer.”

    The head Growlithe nodded with a bark and began sniffing, with its nose in the air. The other puppy Pokémon followed suit. After a moment, they strode off down the street at a brisk pace. I hurried to follow them.

    I felt like I had just run a marathon. On one hand, I was about ready to keel over from exhaustion, but on the other hand, my endorphins were furiously pushing me onwards. I had that strange, giddy feeling you get after a hard workout.

    We rushed past the Pokémon Center, which was a relief, as Medical help specializing in humans was preferred. Moments later we arrived at the entrance to a tall building marked as a hospital. I hurried inside, followed by the Growlithe.

    Several police officers stood in the main lobby and I noticed Baron standing in a corner, looking sullen. I was stopped before I could call to it.

    “Sir, We’re going to have to ask you to put away your… er… Pokémon… in this building.” The young nurse looked rather taken aback by my sudden appearance.

    “I can’t, these aren’t mine. Can you tell me anything about a cop that was just brought in...” I was interrupted by an enthusiastic cry from Baron as he hopped across the room to greet me, brushing people out of the way with his large wings. I hugged the bird Pokémon.

    “What’s going on here?” asked the nurse. The scene was beginning to attract the attention of the police officers. One of them walked up to me.

    “Is that your Pidgeot?” The tall officer asked.

    “Of course,” I responded, letting Baron go. It turned to look up at the cop.

    “Would you care to explain why it showed up an hour ago with a badly injured police officer?”

    Recalling my Pidgeot, I told the man the whole story rather hurriedly, but without skipping anything important.

    “You fought against three Rockets all by yourself? That’s quite impressive at such a young age.”
    A sudden surge of pride overwhelmed me; I interrupted him with a laugh. “Hardly, that’s nothing. You know about that fiasco in Pokémon Tower a few days ago?”

    The officer squinted at me suspiciously and nodded.

    “That was me.”

    He continued to squint. “I may have to bring you to the attention of my captain. No, don’t worry, not for anything bad…”

    Wondering what the officer could possibly be considering, I looked back to the nurse. “How is the man that Baron brought in?”

    It was the cop that responded. “Why don’t we go check up on him?”

    I agreed and followed the two of them up several flights of stairs with the Growlithe padding along behind us. A few floors up, we stopped at a hallway that didn’t look any different to me than the ones we had passed. Quietly, we walked to a door about halfway down the hall and looked in the window at the figure lying prone on a hospital bed.

    “He hasn’t woken up, but his condition is improving. He wouldn’t have lasted too much longer out there,” the officer explained to me. I looked at the Growlithe. They were staring, concerned, into the room with their trainer. The nurse gently pushed open the door. We watched the Growlithe trot in quietly, where they lay around their trainer’s bed, one of them looked at me with forlorn eyes.

    The nurse turned to me, “You’re suffering from heat exhaustion!” she exclaimed.

    I grinned. “Spectacular. What’s that?”

    The nurse grabbed my arm and pulled me into one of the other wards. “it’s like an advanced form of dehydration but not as bad as heat stroke.” She pushed me onto one of the beds and handed me several bottles of water that she appeared to have pulled from nowhere. “Drink these.” She said.

    It wasn’t until about ten minutes later, after I had drank a few liters of water and the nurse had laid me down with a cold, wet cloth on my forehead that I finally had time to rest. I closed my eyes tiredly. My problem was that my life was just too damned exciting.

    I didn’t wake up until early the next morning. Apparently, heat exhaustion isn’t really that big of a deal. The nurse must have just been trying to keep me around for a while. That’s what I told myself, anyway. Surprisingly, I met up with Tim in the hospital’s lobby. He stared at me and shook his head.

    I said to take it easy. I said no adventures. But you had to go beat up Team Rocket and save some guy’s life. Is it really that hard to relax once in a while?”

    I laughed at him, and then sighed. “You’d be surprised.”

    We walked out of the hospital and down the street towards the Pokémon center.

    “The police came by,” Tim said. “They told me to tell you that they want to talk to you. You should go down to the station when you get a chance.”

    “Really? I wonder why…”

    “Well, you did save the life of one of their officers.”

    “I suppose so.” I nodded. “How did the battle against Erika go?”

    My friend grinned widely. “I won. Charmeleon just barely managed to take out Tangela before he collapsed from exhaustion. It was a pretty intense fight. Check it out.” He showed me his new Rainbow Badge.

    “Nice! I’m psyched for the battle. I don’t think I’ll do it today though. I’m too tired, and I bet Baron is too.”

    “I would think so.”

    “Erika couldn’t be too hard though. Especially if you beat her,” I teased.

    He just smacked me in the back of the head.

    We arrived at the Pokémon Center not much later and ate breakfast while our Pokémon were being healed. I told Tim exactly what had happened, he was awestruck.

    “Wow. Criss would be impressed.”

    “Have you seen her around at all?” I asked my friend.

    “No, but I’ve been looking.” He winked
    .
    I shook my head wearily, “I’ll bet you have.”

    *****

    A Growlithe. They were giving me a Growlithe. I could hardly believe it.

    Later that day I had gone into the police station. From the way it sounded, they had wanted to offer me a job, but I was too young. So instead, they had pretty much unofficially inducted me into the police force. I had contacts now, people to call, but most importantly, I had a Growlithe. I was giddy, to say the least, as I finally had the fire-type that I had been looking for.

    Proudly walking back to the center with my new Growlithe prancing by my side, I reflected on the rest of my team. A sudden and sad thought struck me. If I still had Rainer I would have the basic trio of electric, water, and fire all represented. As it was, I didn’t even really have a powerhouse. Rainer had always been my fallback, my unbeatable, invincible companion. I needed another one of those. My mind wandered back to the tombstone in Pokémon tower. Dragonair… a dragon type… the dragon type, but better yet, its evolution…

    “Woah, dude is that yours?” Tim’s voice snapped me out of my reverie.

    My friend was sitting into the lobby feeding his Pokémon. “Of course, they made me an unofficial member of the police squad. Now I can arrest you for being an idiot.” I said.

    “Sounds like more trouble than it’s worth, I’m not gonna lie” he said, rolling his eyes at me.

    “You’re just jealous.”

    He paused. “Yeah I am.” We both laughed.

    *****

    Roughly three hours later, I stood once again in the woods north of Celadon, training my Pokémon. This time it was Growlithe. I still hadn’t thought of a name for it yet.

    I had my new fire-type practicing its agility with Psyke. The psychic-type was teleporting from place to place while Growlithe sprinted around after it. The puppy Pokémon was clearly already incredibly well trained.

    I turned up my collar against the increasing wind. The weather had been changing rapidly in the last hour or so and now dark storm clouds blanketed the sky, covering the land in a premature night. Slowly, rain began to fall. I pulled up the hood on my jacket and took out my Pokédex.

    “Is it safe for fire Pokémon to be out in the rain?” I asked the computer.

    “Fire Pokémon with open flame on their body should be kept out in the rain if possible. Other fire types, though able to stand the water, often prefer to stay dry.”

    I wiped the raindrops off the now damp device and turned it off. “Hey Growlithe, you cool with a little rain?”

    My new Pokémon stopped in its training and vigorously shook itself. It looked at me and barked eagerly. “Alright, let’s keep going then. Psyke return!” I put the psychic type back in its Poké Ball.

    “Okay Growlithe, flamethrower time.” I picked up a bunch of sticks that I had collected earlier. “Let’s do some target practice.”

    “Grrrrrrowlithe!”

    *****

    Hopefully that didn't suck too badly. Be sure to let me know what you think. You all are what keeps me going.

    NEXT: Nolan reappears. The two stories begin to intertwine (slightly). Probably an action scene, I haven't decided yet. It is Nolan though. Action scenes tend to happen a lot where he's involved.

    PS: I edited the first chapter pretty extensively because of the awards. It's a lot better now, but nothing changed story-wise. Check it out if you've got time and let me know what you think.
     
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    Chapter 16.5 - Celadon City Again
  • Re: "Unpredictable" (PG-13)

    Time to keep on trucking. HUGE thanks to those of you who voted for me in the awards. This fic tied for first (through fourth) in the best journey fic category, which is more than I had hoped for. I get an honorary mention apparently, which is pretty cool. What I had really wanted was for the awards to bring this fic some more attention, but that didn't really work. Oh well, I love the two or three of you that read and respond to this all the more. Bro-hugs all around!

    Business time. This chapter is pretty long and much better than the previous ones. At least, in my opinion. Hopefully it makes up for the kind of crappy 15th and 16th chapters.

    My goal here is to make Nolan as likeable of a character as Criss. I doubt that's going to happen, but whatever. He's my favorite, probably because he's kind of a Sue and I did a playthrough of Ruby as him. Seriously, if you have something worth trading in Gen IV I'll give you a lv 60-some Flygon with earthquake, dragon claw, flamethrower, and fly with an OT of Nolan. I'm considering doing the same with Criss on Fire Red. Or perhaps instead on *cough*spoilers*cough* so that it fits her actual background. I'm getting off topic now. Slap me next time that happens.

    Business time for real now. Keep in mind that this chapter begins at the same time as Chapter 16. Enjoy!

    This time: Nolan's chillin' like a villain in Celadon City. Shit happens, and the rest of the Celadon arc of the story is set up.

    Chapter 16.5

    Nolan fiddled absentmindedly with the paper plate, tearing it into smaller and smaller pieces. He sat at a table outside a small fast- food restaurant, the only one in the city that let its customers have their Pokémon outside of their Poké Balls while on the premises. Flygon sat on the ground next to him, her long neck reaching over his shoulder as she ate the last of his french fries.

    The trainer sighed deeply. It had been weeks since he had destroyed the Rocket supply convoy and he hadn’t picked up any sign of Rocket activity since then. He knew of the Rocket occupation of Saffron, but doubted he could take it out himself. As far as this bustling city went, however, he knew he was missing something. Criss had shown up about a week before, after all, and she was good at this stuff, at least according to the files.

    Having torn the paper plate into infinitesimally small pieces, he scooped them into his hand and picked up the other remnants of his lunch to go throw them away. As he pushed the trash into the garbage bin, he heard Flygon make an inquisitive noise behind him.

    “Goon?”

    “Huh?” Nolan turned around.

    Following his Pokémon’s curious gaze to the road, he saw a rather strange sight. A litter of Growlithe trotted along, leading an absolutely filthy, shirtless boy who was none other than the one who Nolan had seen with Criss at Mt. Moon. The brigade of weirdness turned a corner a second later and disappeared. Nolan looked back to Flygon and shrugged. “Now that’s a story I’d like to hear,” he said with a shrug. Flygon nodded in agreement.

    The two of them left the restaurant and began walking back to the hotel they were staying at. Bored out of his mind , Nolan took the long, roundabout way, traversing almost the entire city. He was on a street leading towards the entertainment district when he finally took a turn into an alleyway towards the hotel.

    Nolan didn’t notice the Machamp and Rhydon blocking the path until Flygon’s growls snapped him out of his wandering thoughts and back to reality. He stood, stunned.

    “What the hell?”

    The two giant Pokémon in front of him stepped apart slightly, leaving room for a man, apparently their trainer, to walk forward.

    “So you thought you could follow me to our secret base, huh?” the broad shouldered man said with a smirk. His deep voice reverberated ominously off of the brick walls to their sides.

    Nolan blinked and instinctively reached for the Poké Balls on his belt. “What’re you talking about?”

    The man’s smirk turned to a frown. “Don’t play dumb with me, you’re that vigilante Flygon trainer that everyone’s talking about, aren’t you? Well you won’t be able to fool me into leading you to our underground base.”

    Slowly, the pieces all began to come together in Nolan’s head. This man must have been walking along the same path as he had and had assumed that Nolan was following him. Furthermore, he was a Rocket, and had just revealed the existence of a secret base. Not only that, but the base was underground. Interesting, but that would have to wait until later.

    Flygon stepped in front of Nolan and growled a challenge. Her trainer grabbed the only other Poké Ball on his belt. The rest of his Pokémon were at the hotel.

    A Machamp and a Rhydon, these were awfully powerful Pokémon for an ordinary grunt. He must be an officer, thought Nolan. But he certainly didn’t get the position for his intelligence, the information that he had just revealed was incredibly important.

    “You’re not getting out of this!” the man cried and stepped back behind his Pokémon.

    “Sceptile,” said Nolan, “let’s kick some ass.”

    The grass-type exploded out of its Poké Ball and landed in a battle stance next to Flygon. The blades on its arms glowed green and appeared to elongate. A second later, the battle was on.

    It was obvious to Nolan from the beginning that he had the upper hand. Not only were his Pokémon stronger and better trained, but Nolan was much better at double battles. Having completed the Hoenn League Gym Challenge, he had participated in his fair share of them. The Rocket was obviously from Kanto and therefore had little to no experience in commanding more than one Pokémon at a time. He fought double battles like all the other inexperienced Kanto trainers did, by treating it like two different single battles going on at once. That was a deadly mistake. Nolan knew, as did any other self respecting Hoenn native, that the key to double battles was using combinations and having your Pokémon work together.

    Unfortunately, Flygon’s ability to maneuver and use sand-based attacks was limited in the cramped, paved alleyway. Nolan had to stick with ordering a dragonbreath attack to keep their opponents at bay while Sceptile charged a solar beam. Given that it was a sunny day, the attack didn’t take long. The beam of solar energy made short work of the rock and ground-type Rhydon. The giant gray Pokémon fell to the ground seconds later.

    Finally leaping through the pink and yellow flames of Flygon’s attack, the Machamp managed to land a karate chop on Sceptile. He winced under the blow, but countered with a leaf blade. With a quick beat of its wings, Flygon rushed to his aid, slashing with a dragon claw.

    Nolan heard his opponent give a command. “Rock blast!” the Rocket cried.

    Rock blast? Nolan thought. That Machamp couldn’t possibly know rock blast. Then he realized, Rhydon wasn’t down!

    “Sceptile, focus on Rhydon!” Nolan commanded, but it was too late. Pushing itself up on a knee, the drill Pokémon tore a piece of asphalt out of the ground and hurled it straight at him. Nolan had made a fatal mistake. He had forgotten that trainers were targets too. Even after all these years of battling illegal organizations, he still made amateur mistakes. He managed to duck the first projectile before glancing over at his Pokémon. Both of them were still occupied with the Machamp’s four muscular arms. The last thing Nolan remembered was a splitting pain in his skull as another piece of asphalt smashed into his head and sent him reeling into unconsciousness.

    *****

    It was dark when Nolan finally awoke. His face was pressed hard against the rough ground. It smelled like cigarettes. A dull weight pressing on his back held him to the ground. He slowly opened his eyes, but almost immediately was blinded by a throb of pain from the injury on the side of his head. Slowly, he reached up and touched the wound gingerly with his hand. The slight contact sent another blast of pain through his skull.

    The second his hand moved, the weight was lifted off of his back. Blinking away the pain, Nolan rolled over and sat up.

    “Flahgoooon!”

    The dragon, who had been lying next to him, probably with her head on his back, crooned and nuzzled him in the face.

    He smiled at his Pokémon and stroked her head. “Hey girl, thanks for waiting for me. You beat the shit out of that Machamp and Rhydon? Probably let the Rocket get away though…”

    Flygon growled and nodded in response.

    “Whatever, no problem. Where’s Sceptile?”

    The dragon crooned again, much more sadly this time, and gestured with its head towards the opposite wall. Nolan looked and saw his starter sitting against it. Bruises and lacerations covered the Pokémon’s face and torso. Nolan rushed over.

    “Sceptile! You okay buddy?” Nolan looked over the rest of the grass-type’s body for further injuries.

    Sceptile just coughed in reply

    “Don’t get too sentimental on me,” Nolan said sarcastically. It didn’t look like Sceptile had any broken bones, but the leaf blade on his left arm was slightly crumpled and he was bleeding in multiple places.

    “I should have been more careful. Let’s get you to a Pokémon center,” Nolan said, pulling Sceptile to his feet. “Both of you.”

    *****

    Nolan recalled Flygon back into her new black and gold Luxury Ball moments after they touched down in front of the Pokémon center. The ball had been a gift from a teacher at the local elementary school after he shown his Pokémon to the kids there about a week before. The memory cheered him up slightly as he rushed into the almost empty Pokémon center.

    He ran up to the nurse, who just stared at him, surprised, as he put the Poké Ball and Luxury Ball containing his two Pokémon on the counter.

    Nolan pulled his flight goggles from his face and let them hang around his neck. “This is my Flygon and Sceptile. They’re both pretty badly injured, especially Sceptile. Do what you can, please, I’ll be back later to check up on them.”

    “Umm… okay,” the startled nurse replied, taking the balls from the counter.

    Without saying anything else, Nolan turned around and dashed out the doors again. He had to get a message to Criss as soon as possible. If the Rocket that had attacked him was smart, the underground base, wherever it may be, would be on high alert and might even move out soon. He couldn’t let that happen. If Criss was looking for it too, things would go by a lot faster.

    He had promised himself that he would never be caught in public without any useable Pokémon, but here he was, dashing through the streets of Celadon without any sort of protection. Luckily, his hotel was in sight within minutes. As always, the fake IPC badge had proved its worth. Even a minor Interpol officer gets a free room at whatever hotel he wanted. Nolan hated staying at Pokémon centers, they never let you have all of your Pokémon out at once.

    Minutes later, Nolan opened the door to his hotel room. Armaldo and Crawdaunt were sleeping on the brown carpeted floor, the trainer gently stepped over and around them to get to the small desk at the other side of the room. Gardevoir, who had been staring out the lone window when he entered, smiled sweetly at him, and then frowned when it saw the bump on his head.

    “Gaaarrdevoir?” The psychic-type floated over to him and raised a pale green hand to his wound.

    “No, I’m fine. Don’t…” He almost pushed her hand away, but stopped when a soothing sound, no, feeling emanated from the tips of Gardevoir’s fingers. The pain in his skull went away almost instantly and he could feel the swelling subside slightly.

    “Heal pulse, right. I keep forgetting you know how to do that.” Nolan sat down at the desk and pulled a sheet off of the notepad that sat on top of it. After a second of digging through the drawers for a pen, he began to scribble a note.

    Then something struck him. He stopped and looked up at Gardevoir, who was peering over his shoulder, the red horn on her chest poking into his back. “That’s it! I just realized, the base must be under one of the casinos. The Rockets own a bunch of them, it’s their only “legit” enterprise. I ran into the Rocket on the road to the entertainment district. It all fits!”

    A feeling of confusion drifted psychically from Gardevoir.

    “Never mind, I’ll explain later.” Nolan tore up the note and began writing another one. Once he was done, he stood up.

    “You’re coming with me. I’ll let Crawdaunt and Armaldo sleep. Where’s Banette? Room 113 again?”

    Gardevoir nodded. Room 113 in this hotel was supposedly “haunted”. Actually, it was just where all the ghost-types liked to hang out. Every hotel has one.

    “Never mind, then. Just you. Whoops!” Nolan almost tripped over the bundle of leather and rags that were his failed attempts at making a saddle for Flygon. They sold custom ones at the Department Store, but he was forced to work on a budget.

    “I need to just get rid of that thing and withdraw some of my savings. Here, take this note and teleport to room… 717 I think. Leave it on the bed or something, then come back here.” Nolan handed the paper to the psychic-type, who disappeared with a slight pop of air replacing the space she had just occupied.

    Nolan felt almost… perverted, for knowing Criss’ room number. He felt like some kind of stalker. Well, he was. In a way. But he had to follow her; he had to know if she was ready. Willing, even.

    A second later, Gardevoir teleported back in front of him with another dull pop and they left the hotel. About half way back to the center, Nolan realized that he didn’t even know what time it was. He looked at his watch. “Six in the morning!” he exclaimed.

    Almost as if on cue, the first rays of sunlight began poking over the horizon.

    *****

    At the center, the nurse had said that both Pokémon were undergoing extensive treatment, but they would be ready sometime in the next day or so. Stubbornly, Nolan and Gardevoir sat down in the lobby to wait.

    And wait.

    Nolan recalled Gardevoir to her Poké Ball a couple hours later, after she fell asleep on his shoulder. He ended up taking a several hour long nap himself. He spent most of the rest of the time people-watching.

    Criss’ companion walked by a few times, but Nolan tried not to catch his attention. There was no sign of what he had been doing with that litter of Growlithe. However, he walked in with one of his own about halfway through the day. He was excited, and showed the Pokémon to his dark haired friend. Nolan had trouble hearing what he was saying, but it sounded like the police had given him the Pokémon for some reason.

    Perhaps it would be useful to find out what his name was, especially if he helped Criss at Mt. Moon. Nolan decided to look him up whenever he got time.

    The day wore on, with Nolan asking the nurse for updates every couple hours. She was very patient with him, actually, always giving the same response, “I’ll let you know as soon as they’re ready.” She seemed to admire his devotion to his Pokémon. Like Birch had said, he was unrivaled when it came to bonding with his companions.

    The sun traveled across the sky as clouds gathered. It got dark quickly, and rain began to fall. Nolan sighed at the water rushing down the windows in the front of the center. A giggling girl and boy rushed in out of the rain and found a place in the corner to devour each other’s faces. Nolan let out another long sigh and grabbed one of the free magazines on the coffee table in front of him in an attempt to ignore the couple.

    Nolan smiled slightly, he would even bear situations as awkward as this for his Pokémon. Life always found new ways to test his devotion.

    *****

    Hope y'all liked it. I liked writing it. It's always more fun to write than edit. Hopefully this expanded on Nolan's character properly and just plain expanded my Pokéworld in general.

    NEXT: Short chapter is short. Gym battle against Erika gets set up. The cliffhanger ending is guaranteed to piss you off, but it leads into what I consider to be my best battle yet.
     
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